Hi! My name is Rachel M. Chak I'd like to be your friend! Anyways Good job! I love your story you have a great story anyways pls check mine: http://theftalk.com/t38614-%26%239829%3BTogether-Forever%21%21%21%26%239829%3B-%5BCurrently-Chapter-17%5D-Super-exciting%21%21%21%21.html Well good luck!

wow.. long but nice.. i like it.. thnxx

wow nice story ehh i love to read this...

[quote=mhedge]wow.. long but nice.. i like it.. thnxx[/quote] thnx medge.. yeah it's kinda long nga eh.. heheh[quote=candid_lady]i agree wit mhedge.. it's long but supre nice! updateee!![/quote] ..uhmm thnx sis! dnt wori il update it asap! [quote=wenna04]wow nice story ehh i love to read this...[/quote] salamat nmn at may bumabasa pa pala nito! heheh:D [quote=_berii.^ü]waa. next na sis! kkbitin! [/quote] sorry sis! bka bukas ko pa maipost ung next chappie nito eh.. anyways, thnx so very many!

sorry if mataas na nmn ang chappie na'to! enjoy reading! [b] CHAPTER 4[/b] I don't want him to notice that I'm avoiding him so i decided to answer his call.. "Yes??" "Hey trixie! what's wrong with you?? whay aren't you answering our texts? you even turned off your phone! What the he--" "Shut up! renz, will you please stop nagging at me? My business is none of your business! you get that?" somehow i get irritated na rin.. "okay, im sorry! 'm just worried, so sorry!" whee, he's orried? goodness! kinilig nmn ako.. "I'm sorry too Renz! I'm not feeling well kasi!" "sana mn lng trix, nagtext ka. Wala kasing nakakaalam why you're absent eh. Di mo man lng sinabi nung magkita tayosa canteen kanina." "sorry Renz if I made you all worried about me!" concern din pala ang mukong na'tyo.. hehhe lalo tuloy akong naiinlab! haha "ok, so papa--" hindi na nya natapos ang sasabihin sana niya.. "babe, sino na ba yang kausap mo sa phone? nagseselos na'ko huh!" i heard a girl talking to him! GAWD he must be withnhis GF?? ouchh! "I'm talking to a friend sweety! wag ka na magselos! ok??" sabi nya dun sa ksama niya! sakit nmn! dinig na dinig ko kasi! "Trix, ano nga ba yung sinabi ko kanina Trix?? sorry kasi may tinanong si Jane eh, my girlf--" "Your girlfriend! am I right Renz??? bye! go to hell!" kung nkakabingi mn ung pagbagsak ko ng phone, maybe bukas bingi na yun! i walking towards my room when my tears begun to fall. It's really painful to be inlove with someone when you know he's inlove with somebody else! [u][b]At the school[/b][/u] "hi girls! did you miss me??" bati ko dun sa mga bruha! "loka ka huh ba't di ka nagreply kahapon?" wow! Q&A portion na,sinimulan pa ni Cath! tsk.tsj "ba't umabsent ka?" di pa nga ako nakasagot kay Cath tinanong na ako ni Mitch.. talga nmn oh! "Girls, ano bah! paupuin nyo na kaya muna yan!" thnx to Mel, she's my saviour! "Trix, ok ka na ba?" tanong sa'kin ni Mel, she knew everything kasi! "Yes Mel, I'm now ok! Thanks friend!" then i give her a bear hug. lolz "Hey girls, what's that drama thingy?? do we need to know something?" tanong ni Cath na medyo nakasense! "yeah, i think you need to spill it out Trix and Mel! or else, wala lng.. " 2nd the motion mn ni Mitch! "Ok dun tau sa likod maupo! I'll tell you everything, promise! " sabi ko dun sa dalawa! yun nga I told them everything.. After that revelation, I appreciate them more kasi I got all their concerns and of course they gave me advices!! Eksakto nmn na tapos na'kong magstory telling nang dumating si Renz together with our professor! After 2 hours the class ended! I thought i'd be spending my lunch alone but to my surprise my girlfriends stay with me coz I'm emotionally hurt daw, grabeh kakatouch talaga! Kanina sa klase, Renz kept on looking at me but I don't really have a nerve to meet his eyes! I don't wanna see him that Im on pain! So after we ate our lunch, I lied to them that I have a headache para iwan na nila ako. Alam ko kasi may date pa ang mga yun! hehehe.. [b][u]9:30 pm same day[/u] [/b] My girls went to our house just to fetch me kasi daw may gimik daw.. saya ko naman! kasi mga 1 month na ding di kami nakapaggimik! Since pinayagan ako ni kuya, ayun sumama na'ku! [u]Juliana Disco bar[/u] the place is still great and of course the music! ayun sayawa to the max kami nina Mitch and Cath!. Si Mel kasi is with Gino (her bf) na andun d pa sumasayaw nandun pa sa table namin.. Nung pagod na kami sa kakaindak, if I'm not mistaken, the one that's beside Gino is renz with a girl! Oh my, he's with his GF?? shocks! Mukhang nakuha nmn ni cath ang reaction ko so she whispred " kaya mo yan! pakita mo na mas maganda ka sa babaeng yan! lolz" "Hi girls! Galing nyu sumayaw ah! By the way, nakishare pala kmi ni Jane.. Ok lng ba?" sabi pa ni Renz "Ok lng" wala kming choice eh.. gusto ko sanang idagdag kaso pinili kong wag na lang! "Cath, Mitch, Trix this is Jane my girlfriend!" pakilala nya sa GF nya.. d kami plastic so yun, tango lang ang sinagot namin! "Babe, ang sweet ng music, let's dance!" yakag ni Jane kay Renz.. "Sure babe, why not!" yun nga tumayo na yung dalawa para sumayaw sa hindi ko sinadya, naout of balance si Jane kasi nblock ko pla dadaanan niya! d ko talga sinadya ah.. promise! [b]to be continued..[/b]

Last edited by znelc27 (2008-10-16 08:21:02)

ahaha. patay si trix. lolengs next naa.

[quote=znelc27]hahahha oo nga sis! patay c trixie! heheh[/quote] baka akalaing sinadya. haha. next chappie na sis.

[quote=_berii.^ü]baka akalaing sinadya. haha. next chappie na sis. [/quote] hahah 0o nga! tuesday ko pa cguro maupdate to sis! busy kasi talga eh.. [quote=dess29]nyc story po ateh. update update nah.. hehehe[/quote] heheheh.. mamatz sis!

nice sis.. i think ndpa xe jane den nphiya.. haha.. sma nang ugali ko ih.. xempz dapat kampi tayo sa bida dba haha.. update nah sis..

..i liked the story !! .. good job... ..update nah hehehe