[quote]^aww.. thanks sis for reading my story here.. btw, I'm gonna have a new story soon.. It'll be pure english.. i hope you'll like that too once i posted it here. thanks. [/quote] now, the update is here. [b]CHAPTER 9:[/b] birthday surprise [quote]After taking a bath, I�ve chosen the newest pink dress I have and dress up. Nagmamadali na ako kasi may naghihintay sakin eh. As I walk down the stairs, he stared at me. I�m blushing �coz it�s the first time he ever looked at me that way. �Nice dress, can we go now?� he said �Thanks. Sure, tara na.� I smiled at him and held his arm. We rode at his car, sitting at the back. Susyal siya eh, may driver pa. I keep on asking him kung saan niya ako dadalhin, pero I always get the same answers, kaya tinigil ko nalang. After an hour, I�ve seen a familiar place. P-parang, eto ung vacation house namin? Although familiar talaga, I didn�t bother asking him kung saan ba yung lugar na toh. I�d rather wait for him to say, baka aksi mapahiya pa ako. We rode off the car and walked around. Familiar talaga. I�m waiting him to speak up pero his silence makes me deaf. Still, I did not speak. I know he�s taking a glance at me, and I can sense that he feels that I�m feeling something. Pero, go. Lakad parin kami. Until we arrived exactly infront of the house. I could hear noises inside, and that made me talk to him. �Anu ung ingay sa loob?Tsaka�� He didn�t let me finish my statement. Errr. �Let�s find out.� Nakakairita sagot niya ah. But there, he opened the door, and� �HAPPY BIRTHDAY TRISSY..!!!!� Woah. What�s this? Mom, Dad, Sis ko, si Gell, some close relatives, and� Migs? Surprise ba itetch? Kaninong idea nman kaya toh? �Happy Birthday Triss�, Carl said while giving me a bouquet of flowers. �Thanks Carl, is this a..?� I noticed Migs staring at us. �Yeah, yeah, a surprise for you. � �W-who prepared this?� I asked �all of us here prepared for this, just for you. � Oohhh, But I think only one person is behind this. I need to find out. I left Carl to go to my parents. I asked mom whose idea is this, and oh my� �You�re asking whose idea is this?Why would I tell you dear?� �Please mom, I�m begging you. I need to punch and give a lot of thanks to the one who has thought of this. I really felt that this day isn�t my day since the time I woke up. But this thing here? It changed my thoughts and my feelings.So c�mon mom, tell me..� �Fine dear. A week ago, Carl called me and asked if me and your dad could have a dinner with him. He made a nice approach, and so, we accepted his invitation. He told us about what he�s planning and asked us what place is memorable to you. And here.� My mom gave me a teasing smile. �Errrr. Really mom? OMG, I though at first he forgot my bday, coz he didn�t even greet me when he fetch me at our house. I�m touched, please inform him.� I winked at her and turned around. Sitting on the couch with Gell, I�ve seen Migs and Carl talking. I tried to listen to their conversation. �Nice idea dude,� Migs told Carl. �Thanks, � Carl answered. �From where did you get this huh? From the trashes you�ve thrown?� Migs spoke in a disgusting manner. �I don�t want a fight here bro, it�s Trissy�s special day.� Awwww. He really cares a lot. I talked to Gell so that I�d stop listening at their conversation. �Happy bday sis, btw, it�s good to see your two guys here� Gell laughed. �Err, Gell stop it. I don�t wanna talk about it for now.� I stared at her for few seconds, giving her a strange face. Few minutes later, Migs approached us and said that he�d better leave now. He told us that he can�t take Carl�s arrogance towards him and that he can�t stand seeing me with Carl. I just let him leave immediately, coz I hated how much he lied. I�ve heard few of their conversations and Carl didn�t even speak up arrogant words towards him, and besides, the only time I was with Carl before he left is when we arrived there. The day almost ended, and even though Migs didn�t appear the same Migs I knew few days ago, it didn�t bother me much. I don�t know why. �Your ex is nice, isn�t he? He even liked the idea of this party for you��[/quote]

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