hi everyone, this is my very first time writing a story.. criticisms, suggestions, comments are highly appreciated! im hoping you'll enjoy reading my story! [align=center][u][b]someday you'll be mine
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Re: hi everyone, this is my very first time writing a story.. criticisms, suggestions, comments are highly appreciated! im hoping you'll enjoy reading my story! [align=center][u][b]someday you'll be mine
[quote=znelc27]"Babe, ang sweet ng music, let's dance!" yakag ni Jane kay Renz..
"Sure babe, why not!" yun nga tumayo na yung dalawa para sumayaw sa hindi ko sinadya, naout of balance si Jane kasi nblock ko pla dadaanan niya! 
d ko talga sinadya ah.. promise![/quote]
wawa nmn c jane wahahah...
dpat d lng nadapa...
sama q nmn weheheh,,,
cguro nagpre2tend lng 2ng c renz at jane..
hMmM... to make trix jealous ??
weheheh... la lng...
i cant wait 4 the update....
d ko talga sinadya ah.. promise![/quote]
wawa nmn c jane wahahah...
dpat d lng nadapa...
sama q nmn weheheh,,,
cguro nagpre2tend lng 2ng c renz at jane..
hMmM... to make trix jealous ??
weheheh... la lng...
i cant wait 4 the update....
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