This is my first story. Hope you'll enjoy this. Comment and suggestions are highly appreciated!

[quote][b]INTRODUCTION:[/b]
I'm Louisse Marie De la Cruz, 16 years old. Im currently studying in St. Xavier University as a graduating highschool student! Im the only daughter of Mr. Patrick De la Cruz, a businessman.. I'm 5'4", unbelievable? I got this height from my father.. lol, I'm maputi, maganda daw like my mom! My mother died when she's giving birth to me and since that day my father didn't plan to marry again.. I'm little bit spoiled. I'm really hook with the DANGEROUS ROCKSTARS band! whoah, they're absolutely amazing.. I really heart their vocalist his name is Vince Lawrence Zaragosa:) I'm his number one fan, in fact I joined his fan club.. I don't care whether they call me CHEAP!

Nobody can stop me from my craziness even my dad..
AUTHOR: here's a bit description on Vince Lawrence Zaragosa:
[spoiler]He's the vocalist of the famous DANGEROUS ROCKSTARS. He's 18 years old and a 2nd year college student in Holy Cross University. He's taking up business administration. He had no plans to study actually but his father insisted that he should get a college degree or else he'll quit to the band. He's labeled as "chxboi ng bayan!". HE's 5'7", gwapo, malakas ang sex appeal kahit sa mga bakla!

.. He's the ultimate hearthrob actually! He has a supportive mother, a strict & disciplinarian but a caring father and they're wealthy even before they have a band. Marami na siyang nakadate but sad to say walang pumasa sa kanya. He hated spoiled brats so much. He was once having a serious affair nang nagsisimula pa lang a career niya, nawala un nang pinili nya ang career nya kesa sa babaeng pinakamamahal niya. When he changed his mind, when he's ready to sacrifice his career, the girl flew to Canada. That happened way back 2 years.[/spoiler]
CHAPTER 1
"Good evening Dad! I missed you!" I hug him so tight, I didn't see him for a week coz of business trip..
"I missed you too baby!"
"Dad, how was your trip? May pasalubong ka ba dyan?

"
"Wala eh. Sorry baby, I forgot!" I know he's just joking..
"Ah, so nakalimutan nyo na'ko?

"
"Im just kidding! Bukas ko na lang ibibigay huh?? pagod si daddy eh.. ok ba yun?

"
"Sure dad, kain muna tayo!"
"ok sure.. Since Saturday bukas at wala kayong pasok, invite your friends, schoolmates at kahit sinong gusto mo. We'll be having a party."
"

and why is that?"
"That's Daddy's secret.. Tomorrow you'll know! I think open pa ang mga malls ngayon, if you want to shop bilisan mong kumain..

"
"

sure, sure, sure! I love you so much much much dad..

"
"Cge, tapusin mo na yan. Start calling your friends and go shopping! I want you to be the prettiest tomorrow..

"
"ok dad! thank you talaga.."
[b]It's party time[/b]
"Best, you are so pretty.." sabi sa'kin ng bestfriend kong si Katrina
"Asus.. Alam ko na yan!

Baba na tayo! Excited na'ko kung ano nasa labas.. "
"Sorry, pero sabi ni Tito tatawagin na lang daw nila tayo para bumaba.."
"alam mu best? I smell something fishy! Si daddy talaga ang hilig sa surprises.."
'knnoocccccccccckkkkk"
"Senyorita, bumaba na daw kayo!"
"Ok manang! OI Katrina halika na.."
"Louisse Marie! Nakikita mo ba ang nakikita ko??

" ganito talaga bessy ko if she's in shock..
"Bakit Katrina Angelie? OMG.. is this real??


" tilian to the max kami,.[/quote]
Last edited by candid_lady (2009-03-14 11:00:18)