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This is my first story. Hope you'll enjoy this. Comment and suggestions are highly appreciated! :D [quote][b]INTRODUCTION:[/b] I'm Louisse Marie De la Cruz, 16 years old. Im currently studying in St

[quote=iceman11]:D Nice Am reading this Thinking :retard: Good[/quote] thnx sis! :D [quote=_berii.^ü]OO na! wahaha! =d =d sbay kiss sa cheeks! tapos mamatay ka na! =d =d akin na yang si vince. XDD update na po! :lol:[/quote] =D..uu nga Louisse, amin na yang si Vince! lolz [quote=leziiaaa01]OMG! i love your story!! hahaha :) anyways.im a new reader here XD update na po :penguin::penguin::penguin::penguin:[/quote] wehehe.. thnx po! [quote=*nicz.love]oh my golli! shiyeeet! whahaha! kung c ROBi yan.:wow: aku pa hahhalik. :o =D=D=D keep posting! happy new year!;][/quote] hahah danun sis? lolz,, happy new year din! [b]CHAPTER 4[/b] "Ms. De la Cruz, pwede ba?" he's staring at me.. GOD! "Huh? Ah eh, sure! :D" [i]Lord pls naman, hwag na yung kiss sa cheek huh? baka mahimatay pa'ko nito.. :D[/i] "Another a round of applause please.. =)" palakpakan na nmn.. "Vince, why are you doing this? Nahihiya na'ko! =(" "Sshhh, chill! :D" [i]Vince whispered to my ears, it gave me goosebumps huh.. :D [/i] "I will be singing Louisse's favorite song, ok lang ba na alisin ko na yung formality Ms Louisse? :D" [i]waahh kinikilig na'ko, kaya tigilan mo na pagpacute Vince huh.. :D [/i] "Mas ok yung Louie na lang! Anything you want Vince! :D=D"[i] pakapalan na'to noh..[/i] "Ow great! :D Everyone, listen! Ok lng bang mag.a.acapella ako? :D" "OK LANG!!! =D" "Again, this song is dedicated to our very own LOUIE! :D" [i]Ano bang kakantahin nito? Dami kaya akong favorites! :D Basta dapat kapalan ko na mukha ko.. This might be the first and last chance that he'll dedicate a song for me.. Sabi nga nila, opportunity knocks only once.. tama bah? =D Go Louie! kapalan mong mukha mo.. :D:D [/i] [b]continuation in chapter 5[/b] :) [b]Vince's POV[/b] [spoiler]"Oh ayan na pala ang prinsesa ko. Halika na anak!" "Hi!:D" [b]I can't stop but stare at her in a way that she won't notice.. Even in a simple HI she already got my attention[/b] "Hello Ms. De la Cruz!" bati sa kanya ng ibang myembro ng banda.. "Hoie bessy! Bigay mo na yang notebook mo! :D:D" [b]that's the time I noticed na may dala pala xiang notebook.. [/b] "Oo naman anak, pa.autograph ka na! :D Maiwan ko na kayo rito, kayo na ang bahala sa kanila Louie. Magpeperform na sila mamaya.:)" "Sige dad.. =)" "Magpapa.autograph sana ako sa'yo Vince! Ok lang?:D" [i]HELL. She's so pretty, panu ko ba to matatanggihan? :D[/i] "Sure. Bakit naman hindi? Akina!=) Pero may kondisyon huh! :D:D" [i]Man, what are you thinking? Kelan ka pa nanghinge ng kondisyon? =)[/i] "Eh, ano naman yung kondisyon?" "Ibigay mo lang number mu, friendster at YM." [i]wow! baduy mo pare, ano bang iniisip mo?[/i] "Sure, sure, sure! :D yun lang naman pala eh." [i]Woaahh.. thanks God di xia nagreklamo! =D[/i] "And lastly, introduce yourself now! :cool:" Although alam ko na name nya kasi nabanggit na yun ng daddy nya.. I just want to stare at her a bit longer.. :D "Whaaatt??" "Good evening guys! Before I'll introduce myself, I want to thank you first for coming here. :D I really didn't expect that my dad would give me this wonderful surprise. I'm really an avid f..." "You just need to introduce your self Ms De la Cruz! You don't need to have a speech." [i]I interrupted here, I know maoofend xia, I just want to see anong magiging reaksyon niya.. peace! :D[/i] "Ooopss sorry! :D ok, I'm Louisse Marie De la Cruz, you can call me Louie, Louisse or Marie. I'm 16 years old and a 4th yr student in St. Xavier university! Ok na ba yun Mr. Vince Lawrence Zaragosa?" [i]I didn't expect her to react in this way, bakit parang iiyak yata xia? Then she walked out![/i] "Louisse!" [i]sinundan ko siya sa room niya, I felt guilty.. Ewan ko why I care for her, ngayon pa lang naman kami nagkita,,[/i] [b]PARTY[/b] "Nag-enjoy ba kayo?" [i]ang gusto ko lang marinig eh kay Louisse, I dont know why.. Guilty lang siguro ako sa ginawa ko kanina,.:)[/i] "YESSSS!" "Since alam naman nating walang magaganap na party dito kung di dahil kay Ms. De la Cruz, why don't we give her a round of applause?" [i]nagpapansin ba'ko? bakit ba gusto ko sa'kin siya nakatingin na sa'kin lng atensyon nia?[/i] "Tapos na kami sa sampung kanta diba? Do you want more?" "YESSSSSSSSSSSS!" "Ok lang ba if this song would be for Ms. Louisse Marie De la Cruz??" [i]Why would I dedicate a song for her? Gusto ko sanang bawiin sinabi ko pero baka may masbi siya.. [/i] "SURRREEEE!" "So, this song that I'll be singing is dedicated to our princess tonight! Ms. De la Cruz, pwede bang maupo ka dito sa tabi ko?" [i]Why am I doing this?[/i] "Ms. De la Cruz, pwede ba?" I stared at her.. "Huh? Ah eh, sure! :D" [i]I feel sorry for making her nervous..[/i] "Another a round of applause please.. =)" I feel different with her presence by my side.. "Vince, why are you doing this? Nahihiya na'ko! =(" [i]I felt so guilty again, I made her nervous..[/i] "Sshhh, chill! :D" "I will be singing Louisse's favorite song, ok lang ba na alisin ko na yung formality Ms Louisse? :D" "Mas ok yung Louie na lang! Anything you want Vince! :D=D" "Ow great! :D Everyone, listen! Ok lng bang mag.a.acapella ako? :D"[i] this is what my heart says, I want to sing her favorite song na sinabi sa'kin ng daddy nya, her dad didn't told me that I'll dedicate a song for her.. I can't figure out why I'm doing this.. [/i] "OK LANG!!! =D" "Again, this song is dedicated to our very own LOUIE! :D" [i]ngayon lang ako kinakabahan ng ganito, maski sa mga concerts di naman ganito ang kaba ko..[/i][/spoiler]

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