[i]wooH. so saD .... ahmfff ehehehe pwd sakin nlng c josh... nyahaha juZ kidd'n ahmmff nice intro... eheheh may next pa?[/i]

here's the next part..baka kasi makalimutan ko na yung plot kaya tinatapos ko na..hehe CHAPTER 2 Nakita ni Melody ang sarili sa isang maliit na eskinita. She tried to remember what happened and what is she doing on that place. Oo nga pala, she made an agreement with Him. Naglakad sya paalis ng eskinita na yon which lead to a road. Now, all she have to do is to find him pero hindi nya alam kung saan, she don’t even know his face. She tried walking around the city. Medyo madilim na nun, mga 9 or 10 na siguro. Naputol yung pag-iisip nya ng may bigla na lang may nag salita sa likod nya. “Hi, Miss.”sabi ng isang lalaking halatang lasing. ”Anong ginagawa ng isang magandang katulad mo sa lugar na to?” tanong ng lalaki habang nakangisi. “uhm..wala. I`m looking for someone.” Sabi ni Melody. “Baka matulungan kita.” Sabi nito at inakbayan siya. “Ano ba! Let me go!” “Ang OA mo naman, Miss, akbay lang eh. Gusto mo tulungan kitang mawala yang problema mo? ♥----♥-----♥-----♥----♥----♥ “D**n! Bakit ngayon pa ako nasiraan?” Sabi ni Josh sa sarili. Nasa isang madilim na lugar sya somewhere in Manila. Naisipan niya kasing mag-shortcut dahil pagod na talaga sya from his meeting with his business partner at gusting gusto na niyang umuwi agad. Ngayon pa sya nasiraan. Agad niyang kinuha ang phone niya. “Hello…nasiraan kasi ako eh. Kaylangan ko nang mag aayos nito and a service car. Make it quick,okay? Bye” He was waiting for the mechanic when he heard a scream of a woman. Nakita nya si Melody, struggling to get out of the grip of the maniac until she fainted. Sinuntok niya yung lalaki at bago pa ito makaganti may police car na dumating at tinulungan sya sa taong lasing. He looked at the girl in his arms and he was surprised when he looked at her face. The face that always haunted his dreams…the face of his dead ex-girlfriend. ♥----♥-----♥-----♥----♥----♥

Last edited by sasha008 (2008-05-05 05:16:13)

whoah.. i lyk the plot of this story... each chapter is short and not so "wordy" but it is full of message... nadadagdagan ang magagaling na authors d2 s ftalk ah... keep it up girl!

[i][b]CHAPTER 4[/b][/i] “Alam mo hindi talaga ako makapaniwala na hindi ka ang ex ni Josh. Kamukhang kamukha mo talaga sya.” Sambit ni yaya Marcy habang kausap si Melody. “Ganon po ba?” “Oo, baka naman kakambal mo si Jasmine.” “Hindi po pwedeng mang-yari yun” “Eh bakit naman? Di ba nga nakalimutan mo yung nakakaraan mo. Malay mo naman, malaking posibilidad yun kasi mag kamukha talaga kayo.” Hindi nalang sinagot ni Melody ang sinabi ni yaya Marcy, ayaw na niyang makipagtalo pa dito dahil baka masabi pa niya ang tunay niyang pagkatao… ♥----♥-----♥-----♥----♥----♥ Lumipas ang ilang araw, unti-unting nagiging close sila Melody and Joshua sa isa`t isa. Napaka bait nito sa kanya at napaka maalalahanin pa. Minsan pinapasyal sya ni Josh sa Manila. Minsan naman they went to the movies pero ang mas Masaya nun ay kasama niya si Josh even though hindi niya alam kung bakit. Isang araw habang nasa opisina si Josh, naisipan ni Melody na libutin ang buong bahay. Napunta sya sa attic kung saan maraming bagay ang nakatambak doon. May nakita syang isang mantel na tinatakpan ang isang bagay. Out of curiosity, she removed the mantel and there stood a painting of a girl, a girl who really looked like her. “Wow!”mang hangang sabi ni Melody. Hindi sya makapaniwala na ganun kaganda mag paint si Joshua. Parang buhay na buhay yung painting and the eyes, they look expressive. Parang syang nakatingin sa kanyang sariling portrait. “So this is Joshua`s Jasmine. Magkamukhang magkamukha nga kami.” Sabi ni Melody sa sarili. “Oo, you were like twins.” Sabi ng isang boses sa likod niya. ♥----♥-----♥-----♥----♥----♥

[quote]here is the fourth or third to the last chapter. Nagloloko talaga yung MS word namin eh so I tried rewriting it. Take note, writing as in handwriting kaya medyo nakakapagod...hehe.. [u][b]enjoy and comment po[/b][/u][/quote] [u][b]CHAPTER 5[/b][/u] "Josh? Anong ginagawa mo dito? I mean, di ba dapat nasa office ka pa ngayon?" gulat na tanong ni Melody. "Maagang natapos yung meeting eh. What are you doing here?" "Naisipan ko kasing maglibot. Anyway, sinabi mo naman na.." Hindi na niya tinapos ang pagpapaliwanag. Nanibago sya sa kilos ni Josh, his eyes showed sadness habang tinitingnan ang painting na kanyang hawak. Alam niyang naapektuhan ito sa pagkakakita sa portrait ni Jasmine. "Kamukhang-kamukha mo siya. You should have known her. Mabait sya, maalalahanin at laging nakangiti. I`m sure magkakasundo kayo. Kaya lang patay na siya. And it`s all because of me." punung-puno ng guilt na sabi ni Josh. His eyes is still locked on the portrait. "uhmm...magaling ka pala na painter." she said to change the topic. Ayaw niyang mag-self pity ito lalo na sa harapan niya. "Bata palang ako hilig ko na ang mag-pinta, And besides, it`s in the genes. My lolo is a great painter. He was the one who taught me how to paint." sabi nito na nakatingin na sa kanya. Buti na lang at nagawa niyang mabago yung topic. She tried to focus herself. This is it, nakakuha na siya ng tiyempo para magawa yung misyon niya. And she can`t afford to loose this chance. Now, all she had to do is to think of a way para makumbinsi itong mag pinta ulit. The something popped on her mind. Pero will that work? Who knows, she`ll just try eventhough maliit lang yung chances. "Pwede bang i-paint mo ako?" she said, trying to act normal. Kahit hindi niya alam kung ano magiging reaction nito, and if he`ll agree...or not. ----------------------------------- [b]Josh`s POV[/b] Maagang natapos ang meeting niya with his client. Babalik pa sana siya sa kanyang office pero naisip niyang mag-relax na lang sa bahay. A cold tub and a bottle of wine will do the trick. Pagka-uwi nya sa bahay, he was surprised because Melody isn`t with yaya Marcy. But he didn`t bother to find her. Sabi naman niya dito na she could do whatever she want on the house. Pupunta na sana sya sa kwarto niya when he saw the attic door open. '[i]So dun pala nagpunta si Melody. Pero ano kayang ginagawa niya doon. Oh well, I`ll just mind my own business[/i]'He said to himself. Pero hindi niya alam kung bakit dinala sya ng mga paa niya paakyat ng attic. Anyway, she wouldn`t mind at all. Bahay naman nya yun eh. Nakita niya si Melody na may hawak na frame ng isang painting or something else. Magsasalita na sana siya when he saw Jasmine`s portrait. "...magkamukhang-magkamukha nga kami." Melody said. "Oo, you were like twins." Nagulat si Melody nung nakita sya. She looked pale na parang batang nahuling may ginagawang kalokohan. Pero hindi niya pinansin iyon. He was looking at the portrait. Naalala pa niya when he was painting it, inspired na inspired siyang gumawa. It was his obra maestra. Binuhos niya lahat ng pawis niya doon, even his love. "Josh? Anong ginagawa mo dito? I mean, di ba dapat nasa office ka pa ngayon?" gulat na tanong ni Melody. "Maagang natapos yung meeting eh. What are you doing here?" "Naisipan ko kasing maglibot. Anyway, sinabi mo naman na.." Napansin siguro ni Melody na wala ang attention niya sa kanya kundi nasa painting kaya natigilan ito. "Kamukhang-kamukha mo siya. You should have known her. Mabait sya, maalalahanin at laging nakangiti. I`m sure magkakasundo kayo. Kaya lang patay na siya. And it`s all because of me." he said. Naaalala na naman niyang yung accident which caused Jasmine`s death. Kung nakinig lang sana siya kay Jasmine na bagalan yung pagpapaandar ng kotse eh di sana she`s still with him. "uhmm...magaling ka pala na painter." Siguro gusto nitong i-change yung topic para hindi ko na isipan pa si Jasmine. He hate to accept it pero alam niyang naaawa sa kanya si Melody and he hate it. Ayaw niyang kinakaawaan siya. Fine, if that`s what she like then I`ll let her change the topic. "Bata palang ako hilig ko na ang mag-pinta, And besides, it`s in the genes. My lolo is a great painter. He was the one who taught me how to paint." "Pwede bang i-paint mo ako?" Melody said. Ganun na ganon din ang sabi ni Jasmine noon. And without second thoughts, he gladly agreed with Jasmine. Pero iba na ang situation, hindi na si Jasmine ang nag-rerequest. And besides, wla na syang hilih sa pa pipinta, nalibing na ito kasama ng bangkay ni Jasmine. "Sige" he said. Huli na para bawiin iyon. Why did he said that gayung "hindi" ang dapat na sasabihin niya. He tried searching for an answer, then found out who said yes, it was his heart.

[quote]@angel_in_tears08 - wow naman talagang sinusubaybayan hehe .. BTW thank you here`s chapter 6 .. sana lang hindi mawala yung iniisip kong gawin dito kasi i`m writing two story .. Gosh .. sana lang makaya ko hehe[/quote] [u][b]CHAPTER 6[/b][/u] Josh agreed? Hindi sya makapaniwal. Akala pa naman niya he`ll say no. pero teka, bakit ba niya kaylangang kontrahin pa yon. Yun na yung pagkakataon niya, no need to ask questions. [i]"Itulog mo na lang yan, Melody. Maaga ka pang gigising bukas."[/i] sabi niya sa sarili. She tried to put herself to sleep pero hindi pa din sya makatulog. She can`t sleep because she`s excited for tomorrow. After an hour, sumuko na din yung katawan niya at nakatulog din sya. Then she dream of something. She dream about Josh, nag pipicnic silang dalawa sa labas ng bahay ni Josh sa tabi ng isang matandang puno. Napakasaya nila nun. Then she woke up. [i]"Ano ka ba, Melody, it`s only a dream[/i]."sabi niya. But somehow a part of her says it looked so real. -------------------------------- "You`ll stand up while you`re gazing at the sky." turo sa kanyang pose ni Josh. "Medyo nakakangalay sa una pero you`ll get used to it." At tama nga ito. Nakakangalay nga pero masaya naman. And dahil dun, naging mas lalo pa silang close ni Josh. They were chatting while his painting. Many sort of topics. At syempre kapag napupunta kay Jasmine ang usapan, iniiwas niya agad ito. Until, weeks had passed. Malapit nang matapos yung painting. Just a few retouches and then it`s done. "Patingin na kasi ng painting. Eversince na nag start ka hindi ko man lang nakita yan eh kahit isang sulyap man lang." "Papakita ko na sayo, later. It`s almost done. Wag kang magalaw." "Okay." she said. Pero bigla syang natigilan when a raindrop touched her forehead. Oh no "Wag ka sinabing magalaw eh." He said. Pero bigla nang umulan ng malakas. Josh is under a tree kaya hindi sya naulanan. While Melody, ayun basang-basa. "Punta ka dito para makasilong ka." But instead of listening to Josh tumakbo pa siya sa damuhan. Her arms are wide spread. Ang sarap sa pakiramdam ng ulan. Nakakatanggal ng stress. "Halika. Join me" aya niya kay Josh. "No way. Baka magka sakit pa tayo." he said. But she grabbed his arm paalis ng puno hanggang sa totally mabasa na si Josh. Nagulat sya nang hindi umimik ito. Naku, nagalit yata. "Sino nagsabi sayo na dalhin ako dito?" sabi ni Josh, his head is lowered kaya hindi niya makita ang mukha nito. "Sorry" yun na lang ang nasabi niya. "Ah ganon ha." sabi ni Josh na tumingin sa kanya. His face is smiling at her. Hinabol sya nito. Then they played in the rain. Para silang mga bata nun. -------------------------------- After nilang magpa ulan, nagpunta sila sa kani-kanilang kwarto. She`s so tired but happy. Hindi niya namalayan na nakatulog na pala sya. Then again, she dream. A really weird dream na nag sabi sa tunay niyang pagkatao. [i]"Miss, nahulog yung panyo mo." sabi sa kanya ng isang lalaki na tumakbo pa yata para habulin sya. Nasa gilid sya ng isang kalye sa Makati nun. She`s waiting for a bus para makauwi na sya. "Thank you." sabi niya, smiling. Deep inside kinikiliga sya. Bakit ba hindi, this man is a hunk. May taglay ito charisma that could make every girl fall for his charms. "I`m Joshua Harris" pakilala nito. Magsasalita pa sana siya ng biglang may humintong bus. Wrong timing naman oh. "Nice meeting you, Joshua. Sige, I got to go." she said saka tumalikod kay Joshua at nagpunta na sa pintuan ng bus. "Miss." tawag ni Joshua. "May I know your name? Please" Lumingon sya, then smiled. "I`m Jasmine"[/i]

[quote]wow .. salamat po sa lahat ng nagbabasa ng story ko .. hope you enjoy it .. anyway .. here`s the next chap, the second to the last chap ..[/quote] [u][b]CHAPTER 7[/b][/u] [u]Josh`s POV[/u] Malamig ang hangin na umiihip sa kwarto ni Josh. Para bang inaaya syang matulolg kahit sandali. He wanted to sleep but his mind resists it. He can`t stop himself from thinking about what happened a while ago. Napakasaya nila kanina habang naghahabulan sa ulan. And for the second time, he had fun with a girl. Nakita niya yung painting na ginagawa niya. The picture showed Melody looking at the clouds. Her eye`s glistened like the sun`s rays. And her face looked so innocent. Isang hill naman ang background nito, na para bang dalawa lang ang kulay, blue and green. Konti na lang at matatapos na niya ito. Hmmm ... bakit nga ba hindi na niya tapusin ngayon? Anyway, wala naman siyang gagawin and he could still picture out every single detail. He started to continue his work. Habang na-pipinta, nakita nya yung picture ni Jasmine na nakalagay sa bedside table. It was taken on their first date. Unlike ordinary deates, pinili niyang gawin itong picnic. Dinala niya si Jasmine sa bahay niya and then nag-picnic sila sa tabi ng matandang puno. That`s one of the most unforgettable moments they had. He can still remember the first time they met. The first time he laid out his eyes on Jasmine, he knew it was love at first sight. Nagtatrabaho ito sa isang call center na pag-aari ng family nila. [i]He saw her leaving the building. Gusto niya sana itong lapitan pero nahihiya siya. Hindi niya alam kung ano ang sasabihin dito. And he`s afraid that he`ll be speechless infront of a girl. To think na kilala syang bilang playboy. Mukhang nagmamadali ito kaya hinabol niya. He tried calling her pero hindi siya nito natitinig. Pagkatapos ng mahaba-habang paghahabol nia, tumigil din ito sa isang bus stop. "Mis nahulog ang panyo mo." he said "Thank you." sabi naman nito then smiled at him. Yun na yata ang pinka sweet na smile na nakita niya. And it looked so natural. "Im Joshu Harris" he introduced himself. Her mouth was about to say something ng biglang may humintong bus. "Nice meeting you. Sige, I got to go" Pumikit na lang siya sa pagka-inis. He can`t let this pass. "Miss, may i know your name? Please?" tanong niya. 'please let her tell me her name' "I`m Jasmine" sabi nito then flashed her so sweet smile.[/i] After his first meeting with Jasmine hinanap niya ito sa office na pinag tatrabahuan nito. He courted her, and after 8 months he got his well deserved prize. He stopped what he was doing then came near to Jasmine`s picture. Kinuha niya yun and looked at the girl who taught him that love is real. "Jasmine, when you were burried, I thought nasama na dun yung puso ko. And now I know that wherever you are, I know you`ll be happy for me. I`m letting you go, Jazz. And it`s because I`m falling inlove with someone, with someone who looks like you."

nice story ive read it from chapter 1-8 nakakatouch............

^i`ve already made another story here`s the link [url=http://theftalk.com/t30587-Leaving-Me.html]Leaving Me[/url] thanks for reading

wow...nice work...