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[b]Hello to everbody I'll just Post a Song Written by me and arrange by my Group BTW our band name is [color=blue]"Delaying Monday"[/color] Hope you like this guys the Song is Titled [color=#FF0000

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[b]Hello to everbody I'll just Post a Song Written by me and arrange by my Group BTW our band name is [color=blue]"Delaying Monday"[/color] Hope you like this guys the Song is Titled [color=#FF0000

[b]Hello to everbody I'll just Post a Song Written by me and arrange by my Group BTW our band name is [color=blue]"Delaying Monday"[/color] Hope you like this guys the Song is Titled [color=#FF0000]"Being Here"[/color] Give me your honest opinion and reaction I'll be appreciating it, BTW I'm the one Who's singing the Song[/b] :rolleyes: :paranoid: [youtube]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZKA0fsbBnmw[/youtube] [b]"Being Here"[/b] [i]I Each Passing day, I see you pass by I turn away Coz my words out of rhyme, it feels so incomplete now I'm less Satisfied Everytime I cry, tears fall down my eyes on my face i feel lie, all lie.... Bridge: I feel the Love that you've given me Even though I know that I, I don't deserve it There are a couple of times that I've said The Words I regret that I shouldn't Haven't said And I won't feel strained if you tell me that I'm weird sometimes and you know I look stupid Chorus: Coz I feel Strange, sometimes when I do I don't know all the words that I haven't Shown But I do appreciate you Being here by my side II I walk towards the door, you stop me from where i stand and you told me all the words, that I never knew it sounded so beautiful, that I wanted so much more so much more ohh.. REPEAT BRIDGE REPEAT CHORUS[/i]

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nanix84
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Re: [b]Hello to everbody I'll just Post a Song Written by me and arrange by my Group BTW our band name is [color=blue]"Delaying Monday"[/color] Hope you like this guys the Song is Titled [color=#FF0000

Great!! you finally uploaded it :D nice nice :eh: The intro is cool... who did make it? :eh: BTW, is that guy a lead or base? it seems to me that he is doing the intro... but on the later part... he plays like base... Nice song :thumbsup: Now I really want my band back :wallbash: hope I could create a new band of mine :wallbash:

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jieduck
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Re: [b]Hello to everbody I'll just Post a Song Written by me and arrange by my Group BTW our band name is [color=blue]"Delaying Monday"[/color] Hope you like this guys the Song is Titled [color=#FF0000

Wow! Great! I tried listening without watching the video, and it sounded like a foreign band :thumbsup::thumbsup:
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Re: [b]Hello to everbody I'll just Post a Song Written by me and arrange by my Group BTW our band name is [color=blue]"Delaying Monday"[/color] Hope you like this guys the Song is Titled [color=#FF0000

wow bwizett nice song. the lyrics? :lol:
BwizetT
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[b]thanks jie orio and losher for the splendid comment, I made this song for my girlfriend a long time ago[/b] :eh: [b]I'll Post the Lyrics later...[/b] :lol:
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wow kuya jar... great song, great melody, lyrics as well and of course the voice.. two :thumbsup::thumbsup: hope this will be recognized :thumbsup:
Iloveyouforever14344!
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WOW!! This is great!!.. =):wow: If I can only discover u and put you into records.. I've already done it.. ^^ Heheh.. But I can't :| Heheh.. good job!!.. just keep it up kuya!
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[b]cool[/b]:wow::wow: [b]i like the song^^ i waiting for teh lyric~[/b]
BwizetT
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[b]thank you guys for the warm comment, BTW Lyrics updated[/b] :cool:
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dude this is really great ^_^ hope u guys make it big someday! :D
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[b]Kuya Jar, very nice! i lurve the lyrics and the melody! naah, this reminds me of my former band! hmmm[/b]
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[b]^^ thanks russel, hope you can form a new one soon :rolleyes:[/b]
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Re: [b]Hello to everbody I'll just Post a Song Written by me and arrange by my Group BTW our band name is [color=blue]"Delaying Monday"[/color] Hope you like this guys the Song is Titled [color=#FF0000

whoa. a very cool song kuya Jar.. :P i love it.. :P especially the intro.. =) and the singer has a very nice voice.. in short.. a great band.. :D:thumbsup: waaaa.. i even listened to it for like 2-3 times.. :lol: because i can't concentrate to listen to it.. because i was staring at kuya jar's drummer.. =D but..too bad.. i am not sure if that one is my so called crush.. :lol:
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[b]Here's my review:[/b] The song was excellent to the fact that, it has good lyrical content and rhythm. The only downside was the mic feedback.... Fortunately the music was recorded fair enough, giving the sound quality a boost. The instrumental accompaniment could have been better if there's no lack of resources [i](I Gotta admit, configuring mixers and renting/buying for a production is kinda tiring and expensive)[/i]. Anyway, the out come was quite excellent. The voice of the singer sounded like a foreigner. The drums were heard well enough, even with limited resources. The guitars sounded fine too... But due to the mic feedback, the sound lacked bass somewhat. I gotta admit, I like the upbeat intro and the sudden change of rhythm in some parts of the song... For the video itself. I wish it was clearer. Anyway... [b]My Rate:[/b] Lyrical Content: 10/10 Instrumental Accompaniment: 10/10 Sound Feedback: 8.2/10 Visual Presentation: 8.9/10 Overall: 9.8/10

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ah finally. u made it great dude. like i said, u got a nice voice. and i like the accoustic part, the most clear part that i cud enjoy. u shud record it well, then i can enjoy the whole part of the song. i'm sure that the well recorded version will be great. arranging a song is easy. but arranging a nice and an "[i]ear delicious[/i]" song like u did, is not an easy work. now, i'm waiting for the album, the clear version. u promised me ryt ? may your band get the chance for success. and keep up the great work dude. Overall Rating [img]http://img55.imageshack.us/img55/774/111nc8.png[/img][img]http://img55.imageshack.us/img55/774/111nc8.png[/img][img]http://img55.imageshack.us/img55/774/111nc8.png[/img][img]http://img55.imageshack.us/img55/774/111nc8.png[/img][img]http://img354.imageshack.us/img354/5396/133nz5.png[/img]

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Re: [b]Hello to everbody I'll just Post a Song Written by me and arrange by my Group BTW our band name is [color=blue]"Delaying Monday"[/color] Hope you like this guys the Song is Titled [color=#FF0000

Woooooo. Kewl composition. :D:thumbsup:
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[quote][b]eney wrote:[/b] whoa. a very cool song kuya Jar.. :P i love it.. :P especially the intro.. =) and the singer has a very nice voice.. in short.. a great band.. :D:thumbsup: waaaa.. i even listened to it for like 2-3 times.. :lol: because i can't concentrate to listen to it.. because i was staring at kuya jar's drummer.. =D but..too bad.. i am not sure if that one is my so called crush.. :lol:[/quote] [b]hehehe eney have a lots of crushes, thank you eney that you've like my song =)[/b] [quote][b]Ephemeral wrote:[/b] Here's my review: The song was excellent to the fact that, it has good lyrical content and rhythm. The only downside was the mic feedback.... Fortunately the music was recorded fair enough, giving the sound quality a boost. The instrumental accompaniment could have been better if there's no lack of resources (I Gotta admit, configuring mixers and renting/buying for a production is kinda tiring and expensive). Anyway, the out come was quite excellent. The voice of the singer sounded like a foreigner. The drums were heard well enough, even with limited resources. The guitars sounded fine too... But due to the mic feedback, the sound lacked bass somewhat. I gotta admit, I like the upbeat intro and the sudden change of rhythm in some parts of the song... For the video itself. I wish it was clearer. Anyway... My Rate: Lyrical Content: 10/10 Instrumental Accompaniment: 10/10 Sound Feedback: 8.2/10 Visual Presentation: 8.9/10 Overall: 9.8/10[/quote] [b]woahh :o an eccelent rating from sir Ephemeral, Thanks for the honest opinion Vito :eh:[/b] [quote][b]andHa wrote:[/b] ah finally. u made it great dude. like i said, u got a nice voice. and i like the accoustic part, the most clear part that i cud enjoy. u shud record it well, then i can enjoy the whole part of the song. i'm sure that the well recorded version will be great. arranging a song is easy. but arranging a nice and an "ear delicious" song like u did, is not an easy work. now, i'm waiting for the album, the clear version. u promised me ryt ? may your band get the chance for success. and keep up the great work dude.[/quote] [b]Thank you Bro andHa, well a promise is a promise, I'll ship you the CD demo as soon as it finished recording, BTW thanks for the nice Rating bro :eh:[/b] [quote][b]jamesssb wrote:[/b] Woooooo. Kewl composition. :D:thumbsup:[/quote] [b]thanks james, surely appreciate it :D[/b]

Last edited by BwizetT (2008-11-29 22:35:06)

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Re: [b]Hello to everbody I'll just Post a Song Written by me and arrange by my Group BTW our band name is [color=blue]"Delaying Monday"[/color] Hope you like this guys the Song is Titled [color=#FF0000

whoa bro! nice song! very cool! dang! a star is recognize!!!! i bet u will be on the industry sooner or later with your band, ur voice is cool so cool rock-coustic :D !!! the lyrics of the song - awesome! :thumbsup::thumbsup::thumbsup:
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Re: [b]Hello to everbody I'll just Post a Song Written by me and arrange by my Group BTW our band name is [color=blue]"Delaying Monday"[/color] Hope you like this guys the Song is Titled [color=#FF0000

[spoiler]Introduction - It frikin rules Lyrics - They rule like the intro Rhythm - They rule like the lyrics and intro Beat - They rule like the rhythm and lyrics and intro Everything else - They rule like the beat, rhythm, lyrics and intro[/spoiler] [b]Dude, this song is sweet!! It's awesome!! You should make a CD along with other sweet songs, I'd totally buy it!![/b]
BwizetT
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Re: [b]Hello to everbody I'll just Post a Song Written by me and arrange by my Group BTW our band name is [color=blue]"Delaying Monday"[/color] Hope you like this guys the Song is Titled [color=#FF0000

[quote][b]ubenchx wrote:[/b] whoa bro! nice song! very cool! dang! a star is recognize!!!! i bet u will be on the industry sooner or later with your band, ur voice is cool so cool rock-coustic :D !!! the lyrics of the song - awesome! :thumbsup::thumbsup::thumbsup:[/quote] [b]aheheh thanks for that bro, we start recording hopefully next year :D[/b] [quote][b]oOpunkrockeranimeOo wrote:[/b] Dude, this song is sweet!! It's awesome!! You should make a CD along with other sweet songs, I'd totally buy it!![/quote] [b]no need to buy a CD hayley I'll send you one, when the recording is done =D[/b]
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