[youtube]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZKA0fsbBnmw[/youtube]
[b]"Being Here"[/b]
[i]I
Each Passing day, I see you pass by I turn away
Coz my words out of rhyme, it feels so incomplete now I'm less Satisfied
Everytime I cry, tears fall down my eyes
on my face i feel lie, all lie....
Bridge:
I feel the Love that you've given me
Even though I know that I, I don't deserve it
There are a couple of times that I've said
The Words I regret that I shouldn't Haven't said
And I won't feel strained if you tell me
that I'm weird sometimes and you know I look stupid
Chorus:
Coz I feel Strange, sometimes
when I do I don't know
all the words that I haven't Shown
But I do appreciate you
Being here by my side
II
I walk towards the door, you stop me from where i stand
and you told me all the words, that I never knew
it sounded so beautiful, that I wanted so much more
so much more ohh..
REPEAT BRIDGE
REPEAT CHORUS[/i]
Last edited by BwizetT (2008-12-23 10:56:47)
nice nice
The intro is cool... who did make it?
BTW, is that guy a lead or base?
it seems to me that he is doing the intro...
but on the later part... he plays like base...
Nice song
hope I could create a new band of mine
Last edited by nanix84 (2008-11-27 06:08:00)
[b]I'll Post the Lyrics later...[/b]

If I can only discover u and put you into records..
I've already done it.. ^^
Heheh.. But I can't
Heheh.. good job!!.. just keep it up kuya!

[b]i like the song^^
i waiting for teh lyric~[/b]
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i love it..
especially the intro..
and the singer has a very nice voice.. in short.. a great band.. 
because i can't concentrate to listen to it.. because i was staring at kuya jar's drummer..
but..too bad.. i am not sure if that one is my so called crush..
Last edited by Ephemeral (2008-11-29 10:08:41)
Last edited by andHa (2008-11-29 10:36:44)

i love it..
especially the intro..
and the singer has a very nice voice.. in short.. a great band.. 
because i can't concentrate to listen to it.. because i was staring at kuya jar's drummer..
but..too bad.. i am not sure if that one is my so called crush..
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[b]hehehe eney have a lots of crushes, thank you eney that you've like my song
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[quote][b]Ephemeral wrote:[/b]
Here's my review:
The song was excellent to the fact that, it has good lyrical content and rhythm. The only downside was the mic feedback.... Fortunately the music was recorded fair enough, giving the sound quality a boost. The instrumental accompaniment could have been better if there's no lack of resources (I Gotta admit, configuring mixers and renting/buying for a production is kinda tiring and expensive). Anyway, the out come was quite excellent. The voice of the singer sounded like a foreigner. The drums were heard well enough, even with limited resources. The guitars sounded fine too... But due to the mic feedback, the sound lacked bass somewhat. I gotta admit, I like the upbeat intro and the sudden change of rhythm in some parts of the song... For the video itself. I wish it was clearer. Anyway...
My Rate:
Lyrical Content: 10/10
Instrumental Accompaniment: 10/10
Sound Feedback: 8.2/10
Visual Presentation: 8.9/10
Overall: 9.8/10[/quote]
[b]woahh
an eccelent rating from sir Ephemeral, Thanks for the honest opinion Vito
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[quote][b]andHa wrote:[/b]
ah finally.
u made it great dude.
like i said, u got a nice voice.
and i like the accoustic part, the most clear part that i cud enjoy.
u shud record it well, then i can enjoy the whole part of the song.
i'm sure that the well recorded version will be great.
arranging a song is easy.
but arranging a nice and an "ear delicious" song like u did, is not an easy work.
now, i'm waiting for the album, the clear version.
u promised me ryt ?
may your band get the chance for success.
and keep up the great work dude.[/quote]
[b]Thank you Bro andHa, well a promise is a promise, I'll ship you the CD demo as soon as it finished recording, BTW thanks for the nice Rating bro
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[quote][b]jamesssb wrote:[/b]
Woooooo. Kewl composition. 
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Last edited by BwizetT (2008-11-29 22:35:06)
!!!
the lyrics of the song - awesome!
!!!
the lyrics of the song - awesome!
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[quote][b]oOpunkrockeranimeOo wrote:[/b]
Dude, this song is sweet!! It's awesome!!
You should make a CD along with other sweet songs, I'd totally buy it!![/quote]
[b]no need to buy a CD hayley I'll send you one, when the recording is done
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