[quote][b]anne.24 wrote:[/b]
[quote]The meaning - freaking deep, i love it.
The tunes - original

The beat - Cool, awesome :3
The way you sing - really english!

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I love them all, just one thing,
i cannot hear your voice well,
it is covered by other instruments

if you could fix that, this song is rated 5 stars.
another one, sometimes I feel the lyrics do not fit,
it's like you're forcing it.
for now, 4.9/5.0

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[b]A very good observer, thanks for reminding me that I have to have emotions on the way I interpret it...
thanks for the nice gesture :rose:
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[quote][b]mama0114 wrote:[/b]
hmmm... very nice nice lyrics... original composition... you are so inspired huh by your x gf
nwei just some...
like others says the drummer seems like really excited while playing and your singing was overcome by the other instruments
i think it is better if you sing while standing so you can express more feelings to the lyrics. i dont know how you will manage to sing while playing the guitar in a standing position

but over all, i like it too just like them.[/quote]
[b]just what you suggest, next time I'll be standing

, thanks for the feedback

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