The beat - Cool, awesome :3
The way you sing - really english!
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I love them all, just one thing,
[i]i cannot hear your voice well,[/i]
it is covered by other instruments
if you could fix that, this song is rated 5 stars.
another one, sometimes I feel the lyrics do not fit,
it's like you're forcing it.
for now, 4.9/5.0
Last edited by anne.24 (2008-12-08 00:01:54)
but over all, i like it too just like them.
The beat - Cool, awesome :3
The way you sing - really english!
[/quote]
I love them all, just one thing,
i cannot hear your voice well,
it is covered by other instruments
if you could fix that, this song is rated 5 stars.
another one, sometimes I feel the lyrics do not fit,
it's like you're forcing it.
for now, 4.9/5.0
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[b]A very good observer, thanks for reminding me that I have to have emotions on the way I interpret it...
thanks for the nice gesture :rose:
[/b]
[quote][b]mama0114 wrote:[/b]
hmmm... very nice nice lyrics... original composition... you are so inspired huh by your x gf
nwei just some...
like others says the drummer seems like really excited while playing and your singing was overcome by the other instruments
i think it is better if you sing while standing so you can express more feelings to the lyrics. i dont know how you will manage to sing while playing the guitar in a standing position
but over all, i like it too just like them.[/quote]
[b]just what you suggest, next time I'll be standing
, thanks for the feedback
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i'm so proud of my brother!!!!
good job....
nice.. it's a mixture of rock, emo, and punk with a kick of pop..
tnx for including the lyrics.. hehehe.. i couldn't help to sing along...
suggestion/comment:
the drummer, is he using a clapper..?? maybe he should control the cymbals a bit...
are you using an acoustic guitar bro? i can hardly see it.. hehhe..
soooppppperrr coooll music.. good!! nice and clean..
but id still recommend you doing it on acoustic bro .. mind giving a version?
overall rating : 10 .. 
but i wanna give you some advice... hope this helps...
Always play like there's no tomorrow... whatever the number of crowd listening...
and whoever or what type of crowd there is... always make it your moment not them...
so that if ever you'll make it on the mainstream or not... you'll have no regrets...
just play what you like and let them eat your $@*% not the other way around...
Last edited by Refresh/Reload (2008-12-12 20:28:03)
i'm so proud of my brother!!!!
good job....
nice.. it's a mixture of rock, emo, and punk with a kick of pop..
tnx for including the lyrics.. hehehe.. i couldn't help to sing along...
suggestion/comment:
the drummer, is he using a clapper..?? maybe he should control the cymbals a bit...
are you using an acoustic guitar bro? i can hardly see it.. hehhe..
soooppppperrr coooll music.. good!! nice and clean..[/quote]
[b]ahehe thanks jay, yes he is using a clapper, sorry for his anxiety.. Oh you didn't quite see my acoustic guitar???
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[quote][b]darylldelfin wrote:[/b]
tahaha .. cool song you got bro .. XD
the intro and the verses got me .
but id still recommend you doing it on acoustic bro .. mind giving a version?
overall rating : 10 .. 
[/b]
[quote][b]Refresh/Reload wrote:[/b]
sorry for my late reply bro... my ISP was down again...
btw... about the song... uhmmm what can i say... heheh
I'm not a big fan of MYX, MTV like song...(youll know what i mean when
u watch our Ytube videos), one of them is on my page(Kapitbahay). and
the 2nd song on my mp3flashplayer(Salamin) is our slowest song...
so i guess you've asked the wrong person hahah... coz on my younger days
when i write and sing about those heartbreak stuff... it's full of verbal abuse..
coz for me that's reality not those good melody and lyrics... but anyways...
It do sounds good...and got commercial potential too bro... that's just me
being honest...
but i wanna give you some advice... hope this helps...
Always play like there's no tomorrow... whatever the number of crowd listening...
and whoever or what type of crowd there is... always make it your moment not them...
so that if ever you'll make it on the mainstream or not... you'll have no regrets...
just play what you like and let them eat your $@*% not the other way around...
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[b]Bro Ah pretty nice suggestion indeed
[/b]
the rendition is really good!
i so love the lyrics!keep it up pare coh!
hope i can jam wif you guys someday!
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Last edited by BwizetT (2008-12-23 02:11:46)
"[i]Mana ka talaga sakin![/i]
"
Create more pare coh!
Keep it up!
i didnt know you can promote ur band here at fstalk
anyway nice arrangement of the songs keep it up..
post more songs
your genre is Alternative Rock ayt?
Last edited by moonrays00 (2008-12-23 09:28:02)
nice arrangement,
but your voice overcome by the instruments..
and over all sooooooooo good!
5/5
Last edited by neil01 (2008-12-26 01:59:56)