[quote][b]anne.24 wrote:[/b] [quote]The meaning - freaking deep, i love it. The tunes - original The beat - Cool, awesome :3 The way you sing - really english! [/quote] I love them all, just one thing, i cannot hear your voice well, it is covered by other instruments if you could fix that, this song is rated 5 stars. another one, sometimes I feel the lyrics do not fit, it's like you're forcing it. for now, 4.9/5.0 [/quote] [b]A very good observer, thanks for reminding me that I have to have emotions on the way I interpret it... thanks for the nice gesture :rose: [/b] [quote][b]mama0114 wrote:[/b] hmmm... very nice nice lyrics... original composition... you are so inspired huh by your x gf nwei just some... like others says the drummer seems like really excited while playing and your singing was overcome by the other instruments i think it is better if you sing while standing so you can express more feelings to the lyrics. i dont know how you will manage to sing while playing the guitar in a standing position but over all, i like it too just like them.[/quote] [b]just what you suggest, next time I'll be standing , thanks for the feedback [/b]