[quote][b]As cicatrizes wrote:[/b] 10/10 for the beautiful content of the lyrics. 10/10 for the vocalist. (wow.,didnt know you have great voice major jar) 5/10 for the sounds. i didnt hear it very clearly.,soweee. i think,it would be very nice if this could be recorded in a real studio., very nice composition greater archon., i hope you will be inspired again to make another song. keep up your great talent![/quote] [b]thanks that you've like the melody and lyrics mabel, well for the other songs you gonna hear them soon, I have 8 songs for the independent album, and a whole bunch stuck on my head [/b]

hmm... the music is not really HQ thats why i cant determine if its really good or not.. but i liked the lyrics.. i would love to hear this in an acoustic version

It reminds me of my former band. damn, I miss the gig we had. Sorry I'm bad on giving comments but Anyways, regarding the song, The song was meaningful and a great composition indeed. Nice tune also. nice band, I like how you guys started it with a slow intro and a perfect song after all, The problem only was the sounds quality. . I wanna hear it in High Quality version. Looking forward to it. Well I hope you guys will continue making songs and I'm looking forward to your band and more of your compositions in the near future. Keep it up.

My opinion, i think you guys deserve a studio. The rhythm is soo catchy but i think it would sound a lot better without the distortion that is being picked up by the cam. BTW kuya bwizett, deym! not only thumbs, haha 2 toes up!

Very impressive Just a little more improvement to sound quality but all in all, its very cool \m/. thanks for sharing here. Hope to hear another song in your band. keep it up

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dude its so nice!!! hope your band will be famous!!!

[quote=BwizetT]The Words I regret that I [b]shouldn't Haven't [/b]said[/quote] ^ please edit that part. its should-not and have-not. Anyway, nice song and nice lyrics! Godbless.

whooo!! nice song!!

[quote][b]sugarstyx_x wrote:[/b] My opinion, i think you guys deserve a studio. The rhythm is soo catchy but i think it would sound a lot better without the distortion that is being picked up by the cam. BTW kuya bwizett, deym! not only thumbs, haha 2 toes up! [/quote] [b]Thanks so much that you've like it, ok I'll lessen the distortion.. [/b] [quote][b]bobcbar wrote:[/b] Excellent my friend...like others have said Only downside is the sound quality I am sure it would be super if none ina studio [/quote] [b]Thanks to you too my friend, hopefully that we will finished recording it next year [/b] [quote][b]dondon wrote:[/b] Very impressive Just a little more improvement to sound quality but all in all, its very cool \m/. thanks for sharing here. Hope to hear another song in your band. keep it up [/quote] [b]hope that the song inspired you [/b] [quote][b]EyyoNaLuvBil wrote:[/b] Wah~! I love d song~ d Lyrics~ Ur songs cool, dude~! U make it with flying color~! U'r a real Rockstar~! :rose::rose:[/quote] [b]thanks fellow rockmate [/b] [quote][b]Dynasty-tweaker wrote:[/b] dude its so nice!!! hope your band will be famous!!![/quote] [quote][b]viruz84 wrote:[/b] ... nice22222xx song.. uhuhuhuh.. great.. i lurvee it..[/quote] [quote][b]rikodlaya11 wrote:[/b] whooo!! nice song!![/quote] [b]thanks for the warm comments guys[/b] [quote][b]regiehiozn wrote:[/b] nice song bro! i also love the lyrics.. they were right, the voice sounded foreign.. nice job!! 10/10 for mee[/quote] [b]thanks regie for the nice rating [/b] [quote][b]karuro72002 wrote:[/b] nice song, nice voice, just put a little adjustment in ur s0ng & the way you deliver it! [/quote] [b]thanks that you've like it, next year I'll post the studio recorded version [/b] [quote][b]MiNEKOARCH wrote:[/b] [quote][b]BwizetT wrote:[/b] The Words I regret that I [b]shouldn't Haven't[/b] said[/quote] ^ please edit that part. its should-not and have-not. Anyway, nice song and nice lyrics! Godbless.[/quote] [b]oh thank you for noticing, that I have written a wrong grammar on the lyrics , I'll adjust the contents.. when I'm singing it the word "not" is always a silent word... [/b]

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[quote][b]eehjhay wrote:[/b] Don't get offended on my comment dude. Just saying my honest opinion. -- Sometimes the beat goes faster. Sometimes the drummer loses his beat. The music sometimes overpower the vocals, I mean its hard to hear the vocal especially on the bridge part. The all-instrument pause part, it didn't stop on the same time. Just relax and don't get tense You guys are playing a very impressive piece. I really like the lyrics and you have a great voice. Once you can't hear the voice and the music overpowers you, you should tell them to lower it down. They play really good but without the lyrics, the audience will not like it. Damn I miss my bandmates back in phils. We used to jam almost everyday. I envy you guys for having the chance to jam with your friends. Keep it up. Good luck.[/quote] [b]none taken eehjhay, I'm open for all kinds of opinion, well it's hard for me to scold my drummer, BTW his my student, coz he's on his early stage of drumming and his anxiety of the song overpower him.. but I always tell him that he need's an approach on drumming and his dynamics is low.. but I am confident that we can do it better on the recording thanks for the feedback and compliment eehjhay highly appreciated [/b]

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