Jar, nice song you have there. I know you have a talent ever since. I’m fortunate to hear your voice live, way way wayyyyy back. I bet you don’t remember. Hopefully, you’ll be more inspired in writing/singing songs. And I agree on some of the comments, some parts aren't much crystallize. But over all, twas an excellent song. - - - Congrats to you and to the band. Great great great talent. And good luck on you recording.