Don't get offended on my comment dude. Just saying my honest opinion. -- Sometimes the beat goes faster. Sometimes the drummer loses his beat. The music sometimes overpower the vocals, I mean its hard to hear the vocal especially on the bridge part. The all-instrument pause part, it didn't stop on the same time. Just relax and don't get tense You guys are playing a very impressive piece. I really like the lyrics and you have a great voice. Once you can't hear the voice and the music overpowers you, you should tell them to lower it down. They play really good but without the lyrics, the audience will not like it. Damn I miss my bandmates back in phils. We used to jam almost everyday. I envy you guys for having the chance to jam with your friends. Keep it up. Good luck.