@thunder_sorceress: thanks @lady_end: hahahah thanks uyy. i dont like to update na. ill post it nya next time. if i know what happens [me has writing block thingy]

haha. good job gi patay2x mode kaau ka gaghan kaau ug mode

^i guess lahat ng readers galit kay cam...grabe nman yan....may lahi yatang demonyo at aswang yan eh...haha

itss sssooo cool=)

waaaaaaaaaaa.. i thought 'tong story na 'to is like the other ones.. yung mga lab story bah. nakakatakot pala. . toinks.. pero na-eexcite na ko. luls hahaha.. saya naman neto. first time ko magbasa ng scary love story..

woots.but the "fragile" lady said somethin about dun sa mga dreams ni kay...pero pwedeng may kinalaman din si cam.wee...wait ko nlang.haha.

[quote=---mad4u---]@ching: ngee. good job lage. xD kaluod lng ana ching! xD yes. patay2 mode slash love2 mode. haahahahahha[/quote] whatever! waaaaa! kuyaw ah.

wa..katakot ko ung story.. peo i like it.. sana mamatay na yang Cam Schamus.. next chapter na po

[quote][quote=wakawakafeeling]whatever! waaaaa! kuyaw ah.[/quote] whatever2 pa ka ha. hahaha [quote=kylagrace]grabe..so scary nman to ate mads..:)oo nga may bad spirit cguro ito c Cam.hahaha.anyways.next chapter.[/quote] nyahaha here it is. [quote=myyrkhaztic]wa..katakot ko ung story.. peo i like it.. sana mamatay na yang Cam Schamus.. next chapter na po[/quote] hmm. lets see if he'll die. xD [quote=ncarmz]soooo nice siszy!!! another one to follow... nkakatakot!!! hihi... btw, can u join me n d nxt chappie??? but f not, it wud b stil fine... but f ever u wud let me in... jzt name me nina... ambixoza tlga aqw noh?? haha.... keep up d good work... GODBLESS!!! [/quote] aww thanks. i added you there na.. haaha ur name will appear again. on the next chappie. because. hahahaha god bless you too [/quote] [b]Chapter 7[/b] "kay, you ok? wee. it rhymes. i rock! lol" pshh. "no." haay. for once. nakakainis si Josh. for once pa. "sorry na gud.. pikon kaau ka! haha. nganu man ka?" [sorry na gud. ur so pikon. whats wrong with you?] "wala.... did you see what the woman mouthed? she said car.stairs. park... death" "it means another thing. dont worry. it wont happen. trust me." Sir Jay told us to climb the bus again. as we were going back to the hotel.. "Who wants to go shopping " Sir Jay said. Himala ha? xD YEAAAAAAAAAA! everybody put their fists into the air triumphantly. but as for me.. i wasnt quite happy. no it wasnt because of the woman. it was because i had no money. [Harbour City, Kowloon. 1:10 pm] "kay... lets go na.. i promise you.., u can utang " tempting. "no thanks. ill just go with you. hahaha" "suit yourself" and you know. it took like 5 hours for my classmates & batchmates to finish. 0_o i couldnt resist it,. & Den realized it so she bought me the things i wanted. but of course utang lang yan. xD we were just paying when suddenly.. "Kayllie, i need to talk to you... no,, i need to talk to Denise, Matt, Josh & You" Sir Jay said.. us again. since i couldnt let Sir Jay wait.. i told denise about it. the five of us went into a coffee shop. "What would you like sir, mam?" 0_o "uhm. just coffee shakes for all of us" "sir. but.." "its on the house kayllie" phew. lol. "whats going on?" Josh asked. "Yea.. we're creeped out now. i mean... a while ago. this woman went to us & told us that... we were going to die." Matt whispered not to let the other customers hear. "Guys... Mark's awake. & he wants to talk to the four of you." "about what?" Den was curious "not a what. but a who." he answered automatically. yet hesitantly. "about who?" i asked. "Cameron Schamus." "C-cam?" Josh said. he was shocked. no. everyone [i]was[/i] shocked. "why?" "we'll go to Mark later... but please dont tell. you know who" we didnt need to ride a taxi or a bus going back to the hotel since it was just connected. that night after dinner. Sir Jay was afraid to leave the other students alone.. so he assigned Ate Nina to take care of the other students.. and we were off. [b] Kowloon Hospital;Room 108; 8:10 pm [/b] "Mark!" we all ran towards him. he was smiling. but didnt look at us.... Spongebob was on.. "Shhhh!" was all he said. and of course. all of us loves Spongebob. so we waited till it ended. Sir Jay kept laughing. hahaha then serious mode. "tell them." "guys. i am very fortunate that i didnt die... or all of your heads will be spinning around for answers.." "do you know who stabbed you?" i asked. "actually. he was wearing a mask.. & i saw that mask before that..... event happened." "where did you see it?" Matt asked. "i-in. Cam's room." everyone was shocked. Cam?! "guys... be careful with him." "are you sure its cam?" Josh wanted to be sure. of course. he was his best friend. "woah. im not saying anything like that.. but that day.. when Anica & Fred died... i saw him. " "you mean cam?" "yes. he was going out of the room.. he was smiling. he looked perfectly normal. but.. his hands. was stained with blood" & he bursted into tears. "Are you sure it was Cameron?" Sir Jay said "Positive. after he went down to go to the lobby.. i ran towards the room.. there. Anica was still alive. i asked her who did it. the words i only heard was -ron" "omg. thats why he kept laughing... every murder that happens. he smiles or laughs.." i said,. "Sir.. Visiting Hours is done. please leave now." The young nurse told us. we said goodbye to mark & wished him well. going back to the hotel, everyone was quiet. Matt was whispering Cam's name over & over. Denise was crying. Josh was fidgeting with his fingers. Sir Josh sighed. & me. i just looked ahead.. "Sh*t. oh im sorry" the driver said. it was traffic. every move we made was just a meter... per 10 minutes. 0_o we rode a big taxi going back. so all of us could talk at the back. "guys. you heard mark. you HAVE to be careful." "no sir. WE should be careful.." i corrected him. "Sir. if he's planning to kill us. u maybe... in trouble" "you have a point the--" "cant you see?! we're going to die. thats it. we cant do anything about it!" Den was afraid. it was clear. all of us were. "Calm Down den! Cam's not going to kill us..." Josh said. The driver stopped for the 30th time.. gawd. its already 9:31. "Sir if its ok. can we just stop here? i dont feel so good" Denise really looked like she was going to barf.. Sir Jay agreed then quickly payed the driver. then we went out. Denise ran towards a trash can.. then [???????; 9:49] "J-j-josh..." "what?" "the s-s-tairs..." it was the stairs that lead towards the park. i checked the time.. it was. 9:50. the same time when i first came here. "its not going to hap--" "b-b-ut.. why is.. Cam... there.?" everybody heared. & saw who & what was i pointing at. Cam was sitting on the bench.. "we have to get out of here." Sir Jay said. eveybody ran.. Cam didnt notice that we were there. we took another taxi going back. and we arrived at 10:30... everybody was asleep. "guys.. the four of you SLEEP together." Sir Jay said. "but sir? how bout you?" "dont worry.ill bunk in with Nina & Ed." "keep safe. the three of you. please." & we went to sleep. by the time it was 1:30... .........."what was that?"

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^ wahaha. yuhp. i dont know when will be the next. i cant think of any scene na. [quote]note: the dream was real. i've had that dream when i was like in 3rd grade. after a few months was my first visit to HK. & i saw the stairs and stuff. but no cars thankfully. hahah & i saw it at night time. the second time ive been there was like last last year. & it was morning. but no cars or deaths. this got me inspired. hahaha if you wanna see some pics of the park.. here you go. http://flickr.com/photos/vasta/49576387/ - stairs. http://flickr.com/photos/hanneorla/175777779/ - art walk. http://flickr.com/photos/yenney/2036982587/ - fountain. http://flickr.com/photos/nwsk/310148950/ - benches.[/quote]