ahw, kakainggit naman... ajaja... baka nga... ajiji.. next chaper na puh

cguro yung kmbal gmawa nun bka c melvin..

okay ateh babols!, we will w8 4 d nxt chappie!,, jiji:D

awww i loove the story ate. weee. cant wait for the next update but its ok. just take ur time ^^

wahh my twins n nman oh... ahehe, nice job on your first story... i think this will be good too

grabe. napaiyak talaga ako ng lalakeng to. I mean, yung parang.. gaaahh.. hirap i-explain oo tama siya, ang daming stars, tapos ang lamig pa. all i can see is shadow kinakabahan ako. the guy put down my guitar and started walking towards me. "b-bakit -" the guy suddenly hugged me . he was crying. tumutulo yung luha niya sa blouse ko "i-im.. so sorry tyna.. " he hugged me tight. we're both crying. i just let him hug me, although i don't know him. I heard his heartbeat. i know it's him. i know. "i-i understand now " he whispered "w-what do you mean? i don't even see a reason melvin " "b-basta.. " i looked at him. and, laughed while crying. "hahaha.. ang cute mo pala pag-umiiyak " though we're both crying, ayun to da max ang pagtawa namin. i don't want to see him crying. im happy if he's happy. im sad if he's sad too. "*singot* sorry pala if my voice isn't that effin good. " "aw, don't be sorry. That's my favorite song ya know? " "wow. haha. " dunno what's this effin feeling, but, wew, i don't want to think about this yet. happy happy muna. well, i hope this would never last. "so.. uhh.. sabay na tayong umuwi??" he asked me what the hell "s-sure. kala ko kasi, ano eh.." "weh.." we were both walking in the aisle. i saw jam and marvin. i did bother to ask melvin about it. "how about jam? melvin? You can't just leave her like that. right? " he scratched his head. i saw the sadness in his face. "dunno. revenge, i think. i gave up on her. tapos, siya pa ang babalik sakin. what a noob right?" i did not answer. somehow, nalungkot rin ako. i just continued walking. i know kung ano ang tingin niya sakin. friend ha ha ha i know that. napaka-plastic naman, sasabihin pa niya yun sa akin. fvck. pero sana, hindi ganun yun [hr] "oh sh*t, gabing-gabi na.." i said while looking at my effin watch. "aw, malapit na bahay ko dito eh. hatid mo an ako. " "asa ka naman pogi. alam mo ba nung nagdota tayo, pinagalitan na nga ako tapos-" "akong bahala " "tseh napagalitan na nga ako nun eh " "akong bahala sabi. " ayun, nilakad ko siya papunta sa bahay nila. their house was pure blue. i mean, pure talaga grabe. napa-nganga na nga lang ako nung nalaman kong ito an yung bahay nila. ayun, we entered na nga "what the heck... " "oops. bawal ang ganyan dito meet my sisters. " i saw his sisters. omaygas! triplets?! "waaaah!!! X3 ang cute nila pogi!!! X3" i hugged them three. X3 "this is marielle, marilane, mary.." i stood up "tae ka pogi, puro kayo mar. " i whispered "haha. wala ka na roon. " "kuya bin!! asan si kuya vin?? " his sister asked. "ah yun.." he looked at his watch, "andiyan na.." and poof! what a nice. andiyan na nga sila. he brought jamjam. wew. shocked ata sila kung bakit nandito ako. "uh.. hello.." i waved. and yun, naghello rin sila. eto nanaman ako. kinakabahan ako "pogi, kailangan ko na talaga umuwi " "eto na eto na,," may tinawagan ata siya sa telephone. naks. ano na kayang pakana nito. i saw him dialed 321-.... teka.. number namin yun sa bahay ah i hurriedly grabbed the phone. "huy!! bat mo tinatawagan mama ko?? im dead. " "ako nga sabi bahala eh " hinila niya yung phone. naghilaan kami then narinig ko boses ni papa. omg. "ai tito, good eve po.. uhm si tyna po.. opo.. opo.. ok po.." anung opo?! naman!! im dead na talaga. humanda ka bukas melvin ta3na! "tara na..! " he grabbed my hand and pumunta sa garage. "sakay na dali " ano to? pinapasayak ako sa bike? "hoy! nakapalda kaya ako! tanga ka ba?! " "carry yan!! hawak ka lang sakin.. dali-" "bro, yung bike?" aroy. si marvin "gagamitin ko. bye " nilapit niya muka niya sakin. "hoy tyna sakay na dali " he whispered ayun, sumakay na kami.. and what the hell! "ano ka ba naman pogi!? lasing ka ba?! " "aba, kala ko bang nagmamadali ka?! haha!! hold on!! " ayun, i hugged his belly. ang hangin, ang lamig "hayy naman, ang bagal mo magbike melvin!! deads na talaga ako niyan!! bilisan mo naman! " kinabahan ako grabe, binilisan nga niya. naka labas na kami ng subdivision nila. we were at the front gate of San Villencio when.. he.. he stopped. nu kaya dahilan.. "huy bat tumigil ka?" i pushed him. "oo na, malapit na nga eh .. babagalan ko muna para naman, tumagal pa yung paghawak mo sakin mamimiss kita bespren.. " bestfriend. bestfriend. bestfriend. aray naman.. bat dinugtungan pa niya ng bestfriend hayy. i heard him, crying. "o-ok ka lang?" "haha . ayus lang ako ah. sige, eto na hatid na kita " I'm really confused. What's the effin reason? gaah. ang gulo ng mundo. i suddenly held his belly that tight, very tight I just.. *sigh* I don't want to lose him.. I don't want to lose my.. [b]bestfriend[/b]. "psst. ayan na oh.." "ayoko pa " i held him very tight. really. "huh? " i heard my mom's effin voice, calling me "just go on.. magbike ka dali na " "oh. ok. pasaway " and yeah. he continued. the very cold wind blew my tears off. i quietly cried. i can't scream, too quiet. i can hide this. i really can. kaya yan tyna. kaya yan "hey.." he stopped. "why did you-" "i mean, we've been biking here for almost 2 hours. aren't you getting sick of it?" i shook my head. "no i'm not. continue." "what's wrong with you ba?" tumayo kaming dalawa. "nothing. I'm just *sigh* dunno what's this feeling.. " I said silently. "huh?" "nothing." "can you repeat it?" "repeat what? " "the one with the feeling-thingy" "oh that." "yeah. what is it again? " "lol. don't mind that pogi. " "c'mon cutie, sabihin mo na.." "hell. no way " "di mo sasabihin? " i can tell that he's disappointed by looking straight at his eyes. "n-no.. i can't. " "really?" "i'm afraid. " "hold you breath.." he grabbed my arm at pinaupo ako doon sa bike niya. he was disappointed. but why? i didn't do anything wrong right? i'm just.. urgh. telling the truth . I'm afraid to tell him, that i love him I'm afraid.. so afraid that our friendship might end. i know that. Kung sinabi ko, malay ko ba, baka tanggihan niya ako. And he'll start avoiding me or something like that. I can''t take that. bahala na muna ng ganito. I still don't have the right decision. "hoy tyna tumingin ka.." I realized na bumalik uli kami sa village niya. I mean, di ko napansin. eh kasi, nakapikit yung mga mata ko. hayy ewan. ang ganda nung place. It's a beach. I can hear the sound of the waves. So smooth. So caressing. "i'm hoping na ganito nalang talaga.." i just said to myself. "yeah." what?! "huh?" "i always go here.." "ah ok. " Nilibot namin yun gamit yung bike. The wind brought my long hair from right to left. I want to take a picture of this place. memorable eh. hinawakan ko yung bulsa ko. damn. wala yung cellpone ko what the hell. "darn it.." i kept on saying this phrase. urgh! nakakbadtrip naman! "huh?" "sayang. asar talaga. wala pa yung cell ko. tae naman oh " "haha. shut up." "shut up your face." "baba nga tayo " "ok." bumaba kami nung bike. ayun, naglakad-lakad. It's really dark. lol. I'm not afraid though. hehe "tynaa!!" i turned around "what? " i saw a very bright light "*click!* yan. ang cute mo. " what the fvck melvin "gaah!! letse ka!!" i went straight to him and looked at his camera.. "patingin patingin!! erase na yan!! " I saw my face. lol. Shocked i guess. with open mouth. parang baboy "nahh. wag mo buburahin yan " "hate you. " I started walking away from him. kabadtrip. "uy tyna!! wait lng!!" sumunod siya sakin. he kept on calling me, pero di ako tumitingin. "naman. sorry na tyna.. " he lowered his voice. naku. "i don't care." binilisan ko yung paglalakad ko.. "madalang lang ako magdala ng friend ko dito eh-" "who cares " "a friend that [b]I truly love[/b] kaya please??"

Last edited by xxBUBBLiExx (2008-10-21 02:08:11)

bka mgkadevelopan yung dalawa dhil s closeness nila

weee kilig nnman,, bka mgkatuluyuan dn cla.. (cguro) ang sweet ni melvin.. kapangalan ng classm8 ko.. hahahah nex na siz..

ahahahayyyy nikikilig aq d2 haha nxt nxt nxt tyna and melvin... y not?

[i]Melvin's Point Of View - Flashback[/i] It was a night full of stars when I saw a girl sleeping on the bench. Lumapit ako. I'm expecting na siya si Jam. But no, it's tyna. I wonder why she's here. And yeah, I denied her request. I still have a company, si Jam. I was shocked when she suddenly held my arm. I mean, first time lang yun, first time sa isang babaeng hindi ko naman ganoon ka-close. My heart suddenly beat fast. I got nervous. I even perspired. I think she noticed me and removed her hands. My heart kept on beating, but I forced her to held it again. And she did. She got irritated at my iPOD's earphones. I placed the earphone in her ears. I avoided looking at her sparkling marble-like eyes. But i can't help it, i had an eye-to-eye contact with her when I put the earphone. I walked away, i felt relieved. I looked at my cellphone. Jam text's is [i]melvin, catch me [/i] My heart supposed to beat faster, but.. argh. I'm wrong again. It didn't beat. I didn't feel the worry or smoewhat like that. We entered the room. I saw my bro & jam, embracing at each other. I held tyna's hands tight. Full of Anger. But something caught my attention. WTF. Jam is crying . My bro promised me na di niya papaiyakin si Jam. Pero now?! ai naman! My plan is to punched marvin.. but tyna held me I shouted at her, "shut up, wala ka na dito.." After a minute, I calmed down. realized what I just did to her. gaah. I treated her as my bestfriend. nu ba yan I even heard her cry nung tumalikod siya sakin at yun, pumunta siya nung math park. Ewan ko ba, anyhow, my heart ached when I heard her cry. It hurts. gaaaah. I went to the Comfort Room para ayusin yung buhok ko. Though hindi ko pa masyadong kilala si tyna, i know na, love niya ang music. She's engaged to Music. hehe. I went to the Math Park. My Plan is to sing at her and apologize. But.. urgh.. she's nowhere to be found I suddenly saw a girl walking towards me. I know siya yun. Malakas kutob ko. My heart, gaah, ayun nanaman yung sakit. I just felt those warm teardrops streaming down my face. I can't stop it. I can't. damn. I looked at the landscape. tama. harana. harana. I'm Really Nervous. ewan ko ba, maski na sintonado ako, go pa rin ako. go go go Until yun, nagkaharap kami. I apologized for what had happened. And yeah, hinatid ko na siya pauwi. but before that, ewan ko ba sakanya, ayaw pa niya umuwi eh. I showed her my special Place. ** "i don't care." binilisan ko yung paglalakad ko.. "madalang lang ako magdala ng friend ko dito eh-" "who cares " "a friend that I truly love : kaya please??" yeah. totoo naman yun, I love her. She's my [i]friend[/i]. I mean, my bestfriend. Yeah. I love her. I love her. gaaah. bat ba umuulit tong mga words na to sa utak ko?! darn it. Please no. Ayoko na magmahal. nasaktan na ako ng todo. ayaw ko na. I'm tired. I need a rest. A rest. An Everlasting rest. She came closer to me.. and hugged me. I hugged her back. Friendly hug lang to. tsk. kayo talaga oh. "oo na pogi. tsk. kaw pa.." "anong ako?" "matitiis ba kita? " she pinched my nose. urgh. "di naman ako nakikipag-biro " "oops. sorry." "let's go tyna.. pagod na ako .. wag mo naman akong pagtripan-" she held my hand "hindi naman eh " i pulled her hand and started walking... "stop playing around.. maging seryoso ka naman, kahit once lang.. kasi seryoso naman ako sa [b]sinabi kong yun[/b] eh " oo totoo naman yun i can't lie. i can't. "fine. umuwi na nga tayo. ," that's her last words for the night. I'm worried. I really do. [i]The Next Day - No Classes- 9:30am[/i] I woke up. Late The only thing in my mind is that . That night A very special night . *sigh* She's like my endless nightmare, a devil's lair. A place that I can't forget. I can't escape. Her eyes that first held me captivated than Jam's. urgh. Jam again. "hey! we broke up last night " marvs said while we're eating. i'm not shocked. i know that Jam has many boys, chickgirl? i guess "oh, it's a great thing that you didn't emote or somewhat like that.." i said while eating the BBQ. "yeah. i'm planning to court a new girl." "wow. ur ready?? i mean, that fast?? wow. last night." "of course tyna " "not her!" i-i throwed the place. oh no "what the f*ck?! " "s-sorry bro.." i picked up the pieces of the broken plate. thank god mom's not here "ok. what's with tyna?? hmm?" "basta. you can court any girl in the campus, except tyna. please." "shut up bro you're weird. o_O" I got offended on what he said, that's why I walked straight to the door. I knew what's the tactics of Marvin. He's just playing around and now?? si tyna? hell. I'll not let him this time. [b]Never[/b] She'll be mine. just look Marvin. Just look. [i]11:46am - School[/i] Nica txted me. naman. wala ngang klase. time for dota. pero hinde. school nanaman. ai naman . "o, andito ka na pala melvin " "oo. san ba tayo pupunta?" "bast basta.." And ayun, while we are riding a jeep, i txted tyna. i do expect that she'll reply. but no. no no no. i sent 10 messages and even flooded. I stopped. My thumb got exhausted. "hoy pare, magkakakalyo ka niyan. sino ba yang tinetex mo?" "wala" "asus.. patago kapa pare.." he grabbed my cellphone. whattheffin-tooooot. "fvck you!! give it back!!" "si tyna pala ah.. siya pa wallpaper mo.. " "tanga. akina yan ta*na mo " i'm getting hot-tempered at this guy. that's why I held his shirt. "ano ka ba bryan!! ibigay mo na!!" nica screamed. "eto na pare. " lumapit ako sa kanya "ta*na mo.." "hoy hoy. tama na yan.." I felt embarrassed. Niladlad niya kasi mga nakasulat na messages ni tyna. sh*t. That's why i erased all of her messages. naman. sayang yun kung di mo lang to kinuha bryan arghh.. Bumaba na kami ng jeep. Nica lead the way to her house ata. I dunno. The place was very familiar. aba ewan ko ba. "pasok." "ok ok.." pumasok na sina franz, shane, etc. I was very thirsty kaya nagpaalam muna ako. "veronica, uy.." "o bakit tyna?" "shut up " "o ano nga?" "bili lang ako coke. san ba tindahan dito?" "doon" she pointed a small house. "san? " "ayun, yung may sexing babae." lumingon ako. "ok ok. " I came closer to the girl. she's bringing an umbrella. she has a very long hair, pero curly. ewan. di ko kasi nadala glasses ko kaya medyo blurred. naman lumingon ata siya the girl that I saw is sexy. yes =she's over all pink . Moreover, prettier than a cute Barbie doll. She has a very long hair, at the end, curly. I'm trying to look at the other direction but, she held my eyes so tight . Actually, she looked like tyna. But, well, I know tyna don't do dress ups like mini shorts and those make-ups. I finally turned around and bought a drink. My heart, pounding as hard as a Chickasaw drum when the girl looked at me [i]Concentrate. Concentrate. Sparkle. Sparkle.[/i] "my gosh Melvin!" uh-oh. who's this girl anyway? why does my heart pounds this fast? "uh. who're you?" the girl tapped me "can't remember? haha." I looked at her. "Ria? " "haha. thank god you still remember " "oh yeah. anyway, let's talk later ok? I still have something to do." "ok, " [b]Tyna's POV[/b] Gawd. It happened Unbelievable. I'm just a little bit shocked about that phrase. "seryoso ako.." hell. Is that true? *sigh* I hope he's.. he's.. not. I'm doomed. What will I do? gaah.. [i]Shut up tyna. Shut up[/i] [i]Playing Harana by PNE[/i] uh-oh. my cellphone rang. wonder who's calling.. "hello? who's callin'?" "tyna??" "yes?? melbs or marbs?" oh my, i hope it's melvin "marbs here.. hehe.. " aww. tsk. I wonder what he wants from me "hmm why? do we have a practice?" "umm. no. i just want to ask if you're free today " "oh yeah. I am. Always. hmm. why?" "can we have dinner outside" hmmm.. "oh okay. where?" "secret. please prepare, I'll be there in no time. " "b-but.." -end nah. I think- no. This isn't a date. No tyna, this is. No it's not. It is. It's not. DAMN WHATEVER! fvckin dates. I hate them. Dates are so corny. In the middle of the Blue moon, they'll smile at each other. then, *tanan!* climaxed. They kissed. Kisses are meant to be bitter. That's why I hate them "hey rhae.." it's mom. "y-yes mom? is there anything wrong? " "oh nothing. what's with the ironing of the hair?" "nah. I have a [i]date[/i]." "whom?" "a friend. Just a friendly date mom. " "oh ok. i'll be back at 10pm. make sure you're inside the house by the time I come back. deal?" "oh yes mom. thanks. " I continued curling my hair. It reminds me of my prom last year. I was wearing a blue gown. And my hair so curly. And it's so great to know that I was the chosen Star of the night last year. Anyway, I can hear the clock, ticking and ticking. I glanced. It's already 6pm Oh my heavenly cupcakes. I ran straight to the closet. And picked a nice dress to wear. gaah. I can't decide. So many. I'm hypnotized. *Door Bells* This isn't great. Five doorbells. I think this is marvin. And yeah. I opened. It. what the heck. Why are they arguing?? and the worst is, they're in front of my house "what in the earth are you doing here?! " "shut up fool, mind you're own business.." uh-oh. damn. this is not good. not good. I can see the pretty girl, stopping them. "why do you keep on following at the girl??" "so she's just a girl to you??" "huh? yeah. " I'm getting irritated!! "fvck off bro. She's not just a girl. She's the girl-" "shut up you fvcking mouths!!!!! " I covered my ears.. "i-I love..." While screaming that time and looking at Marvin, I dunno, but my heart suddenly, urghh, beating fast?. Fast like a drum roll. I didn't actually heard what he said, coz i think, I screamed to loud, but I saw the 'movement' of his mouth. I think he said.. my gad?? my fog?? err. whatever it is, I don't really care. I saw the girl a-and.. Melvin. What a numb. "urgh! what planet did you came from?!! such a loud voice!! so annoying!! " hell, who's this? "stop-" "i know, stop it. let's go honey." "honey?! " I was shocked. He didn't tell me that he has a girlfriend. Nah. Effin uber weird feling again. what the fvck. I felt my heart. torn into pieces. err. I heard them whispering at each other. until his girlfriend said... "come on honey!! we still have to visit granny!! " Looking straight at Melvin's eyes, beyond those disappointed eyes, I saw confusion. The non-stop movement of his eyes from left to right. I guess I'm right. He's confused. But why?? What's the reason?? I suddenly felt the cold air that embraced my whole body. "so they left.." marvin's voice echoed. "yeah." silence held the place. I can't say anything. My mind is empty after that shocking scene. I felt tired. "can we go now?" "I-im sorry. I-I cant.. " "it's ok. don't feel sorry. hehe. una na ako. " "sure. take care. thanks again Marvin." he hugged me. So warm, showing me that I'm alright. The feeling of being cared. *sigh* I want it to be this way.. forever. I can't face it anymore. "M-marvin.." "fine I'll leave now. Take care. Goodnight. " He smiled at me and I smiled back. *sigh* I felt I was carrying a big box. The feeling, so heavy. I returned my dress in the closet. And I changed. I went in the rooftop to think, to forget, I guess. I can see many stars. I also saw a heart. and my zodiac. I saw a flock of birds flying, they're like papers. "oh yeah.." I snapped. I remembered something. The letters. I went to my room and grabbed the letters from the cabinet. And, I went back to the rooftop and started reading. As I was reading the letter, I dunno, my mood began to change. It made me happy. It made my heart beat like a hiphop music. I even imagined me and that guy. LOL. I smiled and laughed at myself. My cellphone began to vibrate. A group message from Melvin. nmn. nkkbdtrip. anywy, ttxt na. -pogi_RIA. there goes the name of her girlfriend. Why is that, I dunno, i feel mad about it. T.T There, since unli ako, I texted him. saying, hi or hello. whatever it is. [i]tyna, sino gusto mo sa mga lalake??[/i] -he asked. Eto nanaman ang letseng puso. Of course I will not say na siya. err. that's mafeeling. [i]wala eh.. kaw ba??[/i] -i held my cellphone very tight. I also turned it on and off. I can feel there's something bad will happen. [i]ah.. ket wala?? aq? kaw. ako?? talaga?? oo. wala nang iba. hell. may gf ka diba? di ko gf un. promise. [/i] -tae. nagsmiley face pa. kung alam lang niya. T-T bat ba niya ako pinagtritripan. pwede naman nyang deretsuhin na iba gusto niya diba?? [i]that's enough pogi.. anong tama na?? i'm serious. [/i] -my heart suddenly stood still. I don't know how to explain it. weird. weird. weird. [i]I was the one who left the blue paper in your locker. didn't you noticed? [/i]

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