wow ! update n po !

[i]*new reader here*[/i] aww, her dad is so nice.. nice update ate. i'll wait for the next chapter

[align=right]Chapter Twenty.[/align] "good morning, sleepyhead!" "what the-- oh hey! daddy!!"..i said and gave him a bear hug "come on now, take a shower, i'll take care of everything in your school"..he said and flipped his car keys oh. i love daddy much, but he's cranky sometimes. and TOO over-protective, good thing he havent heard about those psychos trying to kill me and me being nauseated like, MILLION times. i took a shower, changed into my uniform and put everything in order. when i looked at my watch, it's still 7:10, whoa, daddy is an early bird. i went downstairs and saw that the 2 cars are missing. i looked at that and stared "what?? i didnt sell them, you lady. Shey used the fortuner and my driver fetched your Aunt Elizabeth and Shirley." he said oh great. the brat Shirley, good thing she's still 5 years old. or else i could've throwed her in the bin "then who's gonna drive us to school??" "of course, me. ur driver sent Shey to school using the fortuner. we're going to use the volvo." oh. daddy knows how to drive, silly me kuya used his motorcycle, FOR SURE! "so?, they left for school already??!"..i shouted "hey. im not that old, i still can hear, yes they left already"..he said tsk. early birds "where's Sis Shine?" "oh. she went to the mall with your mother. they said theyre going to buy something for your competition this Saturday"..daddy said oh great. more audience "hey. wont you eat your pie? ur mommy baked that" "oh. i will"..i said and sat on the table i ate it and drank my carton of milk "so, are you ready to go??"..dad asked and i nodded we went inside his car and i shivered "hey, here's a thing for you" and then... i was like a child who received her christmas present. my dad gave a pink feathery jacket. that was like, the first product of Fashion Company. and dad bought it?! girls drooled over this at the web gee!! [spoiler][img]http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2234/2328254019_d714bfeb4d.jpg[/img] P.S. The girl in the pic is her, buying her snacks in the vending machine and that was the jacket. ohw cool! and she wore that outfit going to school, dont you remember when she said she hated her school shoes cause it's too high?..and btw, her dad took the pic above ((tsar))[/spoiler] it's like a million pesos! gosh im wearing it now "hey, why so silent?..dont you like it?" "no! it's super"..i said wanna know what i looked like when i was a young kid?? [spoiler][img]http://fc00.deviantart.net/fs47/i/2009/203/6/c/Young_Girl_VI_by_Wonderdyke_Stock.jpg[/img][/spoiler] [spoiler][img]http://fc01.deviantart.net/fs30/f/2008/144/2/f/Small____young_girl_by_serzdziurami.jpg[/img][/spoiler] if u want to know how she changed her hair color, it's just in their blood. ows? basta yun! wag na kasi maraming tanung here's me when i was pre teen [spoiler][img]http://fc01.deviantart.net/files/f/2007/120/b/1/Tsutsumu__Our_Hidden_Child__by_kayleigh.jpg[/img][/spoiler] and here's me now [spoiler][img]http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2537/3951793200_4827c23ca5.jpg[/img] im going to change the banner soon guys![/spoiler] "good. i thought u wont like it" "silly. who wouldnt??"..i asked "i dont know. im not a girl, kid."..he said and we laughed together we arrived at my school at 7:30, dad's a fast driver all of the girls drooled over my new jacket like i said. and some of the students were murmuring. i kept tugging my dad he wont listen!! "dad!!"..i shouted "oh sorry dear, what is it??" "the info room is 2 rooms away"..i said "dont worry. we'll fix this ASAP" he said and opened his wallet i hung my mouth open gosh. his wallet is full "daddy?? arent you going to keep those??" "no worries. i left some money in our house,bank, office--" i cut him out, i know i know. when it comes to money. he brags! "dad. here's the room" we entered it and saw the red-haired lady yesterday "so, sir, what do you need??"..she said and gulped i smirked "i need you to transfer my daughter to another class. i'll pay! and listen, cant you see? she's part of the VIP in this school, i order you to do whatever she wants"...my dad said and took 1/3 of his money the lady was so shocked and typed something in her computer. "okay sir, everything's fine now"..she said hmm. good she gave me my new schedule and i snobbed at her we went to the principal's office next and daddy paid the principal and said "i want this school to respect my daughter, is that okay??" "yy---yes sir"..the principal said and smiled "so, sweetie, is everything fine now??"..daddy asked "yes daddy" we went out of the room and the students stared daddy dressed like he's going to work "dad, who's going to fetch me??".. i said and pouted "i think me and your mom, we'll fetch your brother too, tell him that his driver got his motorcycle. listen: the two of you should be together waiting for us. i am not that good at patience, understand??" "yes dad"..my kuya said whoa. he heard that? of course maybe kuya heard that daddy is here news scatter very fast. im having goosebumps "bye sweetheart and be a man, kid"...daddy said to me and to kuya after daddy left, kuya glared at me "what??" "u shouldnt brought dad here. now, u act like a spoiled one, sister"..he said "so?? i dont care what the others think!"..i shouted at him and he almost slapped me, but i got his hand "be careful bro, u dont know what i can do"...i said and let go of his hand "ure such a stupid sister" "no, no i am not. maybe youre a fool! dont u remember?? when we were in States u always make fun of the others, play with girls and protect me, now ure the opposite, u hate me already. u dont love me kuya!!"..i shouted and cried i cant hold my tears. i cant believe kuya changed.. his phone rang and he ran... i cant believe it... i ran to him but-- i slipped and the students laughed "STOP!!!"..i heard some lady said i looked at the back and saw our principal with Mhae, Eunice, Patrick, Jersome, Louie, Yohan and Shey hmm.. they reported to the principal that i was laughed at?? silly! they wont do that. especially Shey. i wiped my tears and Eunice helped me up. "a deal's a deal"..the principal said and helped me clean my tears i smiled and the students were like, watching a horror movie. hate it! i received a message saying that my kuya really is sorry. i deleted it and didnt reply. after all those. i cant believe i feel like im the one who lose the fight. the changed schedule was worst! my new classmates are like-- insane! they throw papers at each other, dont care if there is a teacher and run inside the room when it's recess god. it's like hell! at Biology they spilled the experiment and the Biology class was suspended it's lunch time now and-- "hello?? Earth to Janice, what's happening??"..Mhae asked "i dont know!! it's worst than ever. everything!!"..i shouted "shush it out"..Patrick said "hah! look at the spoiled girl. too bad she have no time to spend with Yohan and Louie"..Ayen said ((remember her?? haha, we almost forgot about her.)) "u know what, here's a thing"..i said and threw her a can of cola everybody in the cafeteria laughed at her cause she got wet "hey girl. nice jacket"..Yanna said "thanks"..i said and smiled..Mhae just winked at her sister "were not yet through, ugly duckling"..Ayen said "as if ure a swan"..i said i saw Louie and Yohan ((and of course Shey)) getting inside the cafeteria, Shey looked so disappointed... hmm. AHA! i remembered. i went to their table and said "hey Shey, what's up??"..i said "like u dont know"..she said "oh yeah! u were kicked out in our house. u were transferred to a hotel"...i said "shut up.. your mom said im still going back there as soon as your aunt Elizabeth will go home" "yeah. and it's like 2-3 days??"..i said and laughed i bid goodbye to my lunchmates ((wee)) and went to the field i checked my phone and saw 30 missed calls. from Louie, Kuya and...[i]Yohan[/i]

Last edited by sweet11 (2010-06-02 05:55:03)

Yehey! Shey is out of the picture, well, for a while O Gosh! Yohan? Yehey! He is joining the picture next

aw, kawawa naman po pala si yohan noon.. nice update po ate.. wait ko po next.

[align=right]Chapter Twenty-second[/align] Janice's POV after that silly thing. i consider that SILLY it's dismissal already. i waited for my dad on the bench, i saw kuya on the other side of the bench he keeps on texting me but i wont bother to read *honks* "daddy!!"...i shouted "oh princess, how's school??" i lowered my head and said "fine!"...i shouted happily though my heart is aching "good. now, we'll go to this classy hotel. okay?? we'll go home first to get you dressed, i'll give u 2 an hour, okay??" daddy asked me and kuya "yes dad"..kuya said we went inside the LIMO and went silent daddy and mommy is sitting with each other, while im stucked with kuya when we arrived, i went upstairs and dressed [spoiler][img]http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3590/3769307234_c81fb04bfb.jpg[/img] the girl in the pic is Lee Soa, and she's playing Janice's role. if u really looked our new banner, you'll see that it's the same girl and Chapter 20's pic is her too[/spoiler] my Aunt Elizabeth is korean. for sure she'll love my dress and about meeting my bratty cousin, Shirley today?? im not sure if this'll be good "hey looking good baby"..my mom said "huh?? are u sure this is okay? wont u shout at me or something??" "of course not. btw, if u r done, go to the limo ryt away, ur aunt is already waiting in d hotel" "k sure" --------------------------------- "omy. is this my niece? and nephew?? theyre so good looking"..aunt Elizabeth said when she saw me and kuya "of course."..mom said i smiled then saw Shirley at her side great. after all those talkings and eatingS we were contented and went home i opened my bag and did my homework and i remembered that Shey will be back on Friday. the day of my competition FAST FORWARD: Thursday EVENING what happened in the morning was my usual routine, but of course, Yohan was still making fun of me. and guess what im doing now?? im bidding good bye to my aunt and my cousin is going to stay with me. oh great!! we went home after that and Shirley was already asleep. dad carried her to her bedroom and i opened my bag. i stuffed my ice skating uniform in my bag and prayed that tomorrow's practice will go right. "morning!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"....somebody shouted "agjdjhahd" "good morning!!!!!!!!!"..somebody shrieked hell! it was Shirley. she's my personal alarm clock ugh! well. kuya and i are not in good terms yet and im not happy about it. i dressed into my uniform and wore a jacket [spoiler][img]http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3514/3951034635_10a855393a.jpg[/img][/spoiler] my mom allowed me to wear sneakers today because i'll fave my practice for tomorrow's competition i'll practice in our school's skating rink i drove my BMW and went to school early well. i went to the field where player's practice. i sat on a bench and stared at the sun with my sunglasses on "hey, i didnt notice your hair turns red when hit by the sun"..somebody said "i know. mom said maybe it's because it's just in our family's blood? when i was young i used to have black hair and now, i got these brown hair"..i explained why am i even explaining?? who the hell is this GUY?? i removed my glasses and saw Yohan making a salute sign good. the person i least expected. "Janice, is ur, by any chance, ur lips, received it's first kiss?"... what the hell! i saw Yohan murmuring to his self why not make friends with him? "no... not yet" "then-- am i allowed to do this??" he said and kissed me on my lips... "what the hell were u thinking u moron??!!"...i shouted "well"..he said shyly "i was thinking that it'll be good if u receive your firsts"..he said no! my lips! i touched it i was ready to break his jaw, but his hand caught me and then, i felt a sudden spark. we were both silenced and he let go of my hand.. his hands-- it's so hot like his body ERASE!

update na poh ! ang cute ni Janice !

[quote=sweet11;#3614286;1275544403]haha. meant to be--?[/quote] haha. medyo po? heheh. cute po kc ng mga scenes nila eh atska po kpg iniicp mo ung ggwin ni yohan kay janice, nkaka-excite. ahehe

Crazy Yohan! Ang bilis niya ha! next na po ulit

[align=right]Chapter Twenty-Third.[/align] ugh! the day ended and i went to the school's practice area i saw the rink and saw Yohan i glared at him and then i saw Louie by his side. aww am i dreaming or what? Louie's winking at me i clicked my tongue and went to the rink already i wore my attire and glided i practiced and practiced and im tired... it's not past 5 yet. im not doing so well. i decided to follow my heart and i, myself, didnt believe what happened i jumped. spinned and glided wonderfully it's one of my tricks in America and i couldnt believe i did it! i saw my brother smiling and joining me in the rink well, i actually didnt forgive him yet but i smiled back he held my hand and taught me some tricks he's a good skater, i admit. and here's the part. he held my hips and i got ready. i concentrated, kuya spinned, spinned and spinned he threw me to the air and managed to spin and glide i knew i was sweating even though it's cold here. i continued to follow the rythm of my heart until i heard mommy's voice. "time to go sweetheart, u will not feel good if you will have eyebugs on tomorrow's competition" my brother and i chuckled and held each others hand like kids i like my kuya he's the sweetest kuya! i knew we had fights. but those fights are just normal for us. were growing up, we cant play like children 3 years of age "so, how's the practice?"..mom asked "so far, so good"..i said i heard that there will be 2 parts of the competition Saturday and Sunday i hope i'll win this is my biggest dream i cant lose hope now i won 20 awards in States and if i lose here, it'll be a badluck. we arrived at home early whew. i started changing my clothes and saw my outfit for Saturday's and Sunday's competition here's for Saturday: [spoiler][img]http://www.iceexcellence.com/files/1873823/uploaded/DSCN3795.jpg[/img][/spoiler] and for Sunday: [spoiler][img]http://www.iceexcellence.com/files/1873823/uploaded/DSCN6470.jpg[/img][/spoiler] i inhaled and exhaled then went downstairs "do you like it??"..mom asked im not dumb to not to notice that she's asking about my outfit "yep"..i said and followed her in the dining room "im hungry".. dad moaned while putting his suitcase on the sofa and sitting on the dining chair "so are we"..mom said and the maids appeared i saw the food and i was like, EEW it was fish hmm. the one [i]tinola[/i] i couldnt believe it before i could say anything "come on, it's good for your body, eat it"..mom said i followed her i grabbed my bowl, got the chopsticks, grabbed some greens, and got fish pieces i ate and it tasted good. i poured some soup and my kuya stared at me i took a glance at my plate and rice bowl i got steak,soup, macaroni, fried fish, and the tinola "well, i think she likes her food"..kuya said and immediately continued eating [i]i asked my food what's wrong with you??[/i] ahh. i drank the cola Sis Shine gave me and asked "isnt Shey coming home today??"..i asked "yes. she'll be here within 2 hours, she's having a dinner date" i was like, going to vomit. after Sis Shine said that, Shirley giggled EVIL cousin "oww. cutie babie"..mommy said, while cooing her i shivered and kuya smirked when we were finished, Shey arrived great! i locked myself in the room and read some books BORING! i signed in at YM and nobody is even online i buzzed Louie but he didnt reply. ugh! i decided to go get some sleep and i suceeded. "good morning!!" "what the--- WHATTHEHELLAREYOUDOINGHERE??"..i asked my brother i immediately went to the bathroom "im just waking you up. the competition will start today, dont you remember??"...i heard him and i took a shower with my clothes on. BAD SIGN i shouldnt have done that "okay okay, i'll get outta here, continue taking a shower"..my brother said and went out i did what he said and got myself dried up i applied make up and used the blower ahh. my wavy brown hair i wore my outfit and felt impressed i dont even know why i wore an outer outfit so that i'll not look stupid, it's a stripey one. [spoiler][img]http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3495/3951014551_bdb12ab23d.jpg[/img][/spoiler] inside, i wore the blue outfit my mom bought me. i wore sandals and kept my skating shoes in a paper bag i went downstairs and saw Shey she was going to watch my competition? "dont get me wrong. im going to have a date with the Lims" does he mean, Yohan and Louie both? flirt is always a flirt my mom saw me and said "arent you going to wear your outfit?" "im wearing it"..i said and pointed my tummy "hah!"..kuya mocked i glared i saw daddy getting dressed yey! dad's going to watch we went to the mall fast, and early! i lined up and saw two girls smirking "what do you want??" "Im Jullivi." hmm. she looks Filipina, but looks like she grew up in America here's her: [spoiler][img]http://www.worldfigureskatewear.com/images/jerrys/329_large5.jpg[/img][/spoiler] and the girl beside her said "and Im Kresha" here's her: [spoiler][img]http://www.twizzlepicks.ca/Quickstart/ImageLib/47_large5.jpeg[/img][/spoiler] oh great! bullies "i said, what do you want?"..i asked "well, get ready to lose, we, sisters, will win the competition"..Jullivi said so theyre siblings?? not bad i saw 8 competitors. we'll split up. the boy ((who is in charge)) said we'll go by four(s) what?? why the hell will that happen? i thought figure skating is only performed one by one?! i asked why and he said tomorrow, we'll go one by one, but not now and only four girls will make it on Sunday based on their scores, of course. the competition will start 5 minutes later and im on the 2nd batch and guess what? im with Jullivi and Kresha, and the girl named Syenna oh great! the girl, Syenna looked good and great "Now, let's welcome, the 1st batch.! Yoona, Ren Ren, Princess and Fiona!"..the announcer said everybody clapped and they began... they bumped into each other i tsked, stomped and groaned why would they do that? "that was great girls! now, let's see your scores, Yoona made 50, Ren Ren made 80, Princess got a 150 and Fiona got 120..leading now is Princess, will the second batch beat her score??" "we'll beat her"..Kresha said we waited for 3 minutes and... "let's all welcome, Kresha, Jullivi, Syenna and the girl of your dreams, Janice!! from Batch 2"..did i hear it right? Jullivi glared and i smirked we glided one by one and Syenna tripped because Kresha blocked her. goodie "My My, Syenna oh Syenna, what happened??"..the announcer asked she stood up and glided again i prepared for my impact i was going in circles, i know what im doing, i am going to the middle now, i saw my brother and he looked confused ugh! im not doing well i turned, swirled and jumped i reached high enough to do some tricks i thinked and re thinked and when i was almost on the rink i did some tumbling and glided everybody clapped, but still, my kuya tsked i cant understand him im confused now i did some tricks by swirling. i watched the wrong direction, i believe i was getting dizzy for sure. i saw Shey kissing Yohan's cheek and Louie's after Yohan's after that, this is what happened. [url]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jmar_F2cBow&feature=related[/url] ((guys, imagine that as her)) good thing. that was the last part. believe me! "OH MY!! pretty janice, what's wrong??"..the announcer said i swam through the surface i saw Kresha and Jullivi laughed Syenna helped me up with eyes full of pity im wet "well, show must go on, Janice made a 199, Jullivi got 200, Kresha got 160 and Syenna with 130..Janice, Princess, Jullivi and Kresha will go on to the next round, TOMORROW! have a nice day everybody" i pity myself i shouldt have been jealous WELL, im not!! stop it Janice, im humiliated now. my brother looked at me and hit his head "what's wrong??"...he asked "i felt funny" "well, should be. youre making a mistake, you kept on making circles."..my brother said i shivered "go change your clothes"..dad said i followed and saw Yohan, Louie and Shey((grinning!)) outside the dressing room instead of my brother and parents, where'd they go?? "what happened, girl?"..Shey asked obviously. she knows what happened! she did it on purpose i clicked my tongue "you were great, but, the fall"..Louie said i just smiled. i didnt win. i got a hundred ninetynine "yeah. bad"..i said i saw my parents and quickly waved i went to them and said im hungry, we ate at KFC and went home i cried. i dont know why. this is such a shame the next day.... we are early, like yesterday. and i saw Shey, Louie and Yohan, again! what's wrong with them? i removed my jacket and the announcer announced that the competition will start first to present is Princess, then Jullivi, Kresha and Me Princess got 2 mistakes, Jullivi got 3, Kresha got 2 and here's me [url]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MTVKPqNI-TU&feature=related[/url] ((try to watch it guys, all of it!)) i got one mistake, i fell!