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[quote]**i got inspired by ate kim kaya i had my story here... wala lang just to share...**[/quote] [align=center][b]"Night Walks"[/b][/align] [i]it's funny how everything started. i didn't even had
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[quote]**i got inspired by ate kim kaya i had my story here... wala lang just to share...**[/quote] [align=center][b]"Night Walks"[/b][/align] [i]it's funny how everything started. i didn't even had
[quote]**i got inspired by ate kim kaya i had my story here... wala lang just to share...**[/quote]
[align=center][b]"Night Walks"[/b][/align]
[i]it's funny how everything started. i didn't even had the slightest idea that i'd fall for someone like him. he was just so... not my type. hindi ko rin sure kung kailan ko siya sinimulang magustuhan. lalong hindi ko sure kung saan yung patutunguhan namin.[/i]
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[u][i][b]Chapter 1[/b][/i][/u]
"Bermillez, labanan mo yan. Natutulog ka na naman!" a sudden segue of our Biology teacher.
Hay, eto na naman. Natutulog na naman tong si Lem. Kailan ba to hindi inantok sa klase? I don’t understand bakit inaantok siya tuwing bio eh magaling naman magturo yung teacher namin, she’s not boring.
“Jaelyn, kindly answer the monohybrid and dihybrid cross on the board.”
I immediately stood up and answered. Biology was my forte, and genetics was my favorite topic. Sisiw lang sakin to.
“Mr. Bermillez, can you explain the crosses that Jaelyn made on the board.”
“Uhmm… si Jaelyn naman po yung sumagot, might as well let her explain.”
“In short, MR. LEM BERMILLEZ, you don’t know how to answer it. I hope this would be the last time I’ll catch you sleeping in my class”
“Yes Miss.”
Same. Same. Same. Lagi naman niayng sinasabi na hindi na siya matutulog sa klase pero natutulog pa rin siya. Ano ba naman yan.
*Riiing*
“I’ll see you, class, tomorrow. Don’t forget your assignment on Non-Mendelian genetics. Class Dismissed.”
Last period of the day. Home Room na lang, uuwi na kami. I stood up to go to my locker. Apparently, nandun din si Lem. Lem Bermillez, certified heartthrob. He’s actually nice, occasionally nag-uusap kami pero we’re not close. We live in the same village, actually magkalapit lang yung street namin pero ewan, I just don’t hang out with him that much. Plus the fact na barkada niya yung “first love” ko na nag-end tragically, the more reason na hindi ako nakikipag-close sa kanya. Hmm, cute siya, mabait and definitely mysterious type.
“Kainis naman. Hindi ko talaga makuha yang genetics na yan eh.” Akala ko kung sinong kausap niya, but noticing na kami lang palang dalawa yung nasa lockers, I responded.
“Kasi naman Lem, natutulog ka kaya hindi mo makuha.”
“Siguro nga kasi natutulog ako.”
“Try mong makinig para hindi ka antukin. Biology isn’t that boring you know."
“I’ll try. Nga pala, Jaelyn…”
“Yup?”
“Sabay na tayo umuwi mamaya?”
“Uhmm… may meeting ako ngayon eh. Baka gabihin ako.”
“Ah ganun ba. Di bale, okay lang. I'll --
“JAELYN SHEN!!! WE NEED YOU!!!”
“Tinatawag na ako, I better get going. Bye!”
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Around 7:30p.m na nung natapos yung meeting. I was walking home when something familiar…
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- maree12
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Re: [quote]**i got inspired by ate kim kaya i had my story here... wala lang just to share...**[/quote] [align=center][b]"Night Walks"[/b][/align] [i]it's funny how everything started. i didn't even had
when something familiar. . . what? 
next please. i got hooked.
next please. i got hooked.
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- *kim-a-holic
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Re: [quote]**i got inspired by ate kim kaya i had my story here... wala lang just to share...**[/quote] [align=center][b]"Night Walks"[/b][/align] [i]it's funny how everything started. i didn't even had
Nice story ! What happens next?
[i]something familiar standing outside and waiting for me? 
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Please.. sana ganyan nga. XD Ang cute ni Lem.
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Please.. sana ganyan nga. XD Ang cute ni Lem.
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- pinkblack08
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Re: [quote]**i got inspired by ate kim kaya i had my story here... wala lang just to share...**[/quote] [align=center][b]"Night Walks"[/b][/align] [i]it's funny how everything started. i didn't even had
^haha..sana nga
@topic:when u read it,talgang nafeel ko na gawa to ni ate kim,di ng threadstarter..haha..ewan ko ba kung bkit...PEACE!!
nice story..catchy.
nice story..catchy.
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- eclipse_twins
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Re: [quote]**i got inspired by ate kim kaya i had my story here... wala lang just to share...**[/quote] [align=center][b]"Night Walks"[/b][/align] [i]it's funny how everything started. i didn't even had
[quote]@maree12: aww, u got ho0ked. i'm flattered hehe...
@ate kim: wee, tnx. i'm going to borrow your words for my story.
@pinkblack08: ok lng un. i'd take ur comment as a compliment
---here's the continuation kahit na hindi ko pa sure anung isusunod. i'll just let my fingers do all the talking for this story haha.. tnx nga pla s mga bmasa, i appreciate it--[/quote]
[u][b][i]Chapter 2[/i][/b][/u]
I was walking home when something familiar caught my eyes. Something? Or I should probably say, someone familiar standing outside and seem to be waiting for me. I squinted my eyes to see who it was. There, si Lem yun. Napaisip ako. Contradicting statements flooded my mind.
Sinong hinihintay ni Lem? Probably some girl or barkada.
Teka, ako yung huling lumabas after ng meeting. Ako na lang yung student. Ako ba yung hinihintay niya?
Pwedeng ako pero… hindi eh. Sabi nila may nililgawan siya currently.
Whaat? Kung sinusundo niya ako tapos may nililigawan siya, so chick boy siya?
OMG! 2-timer si Lem? My gosh I didn’t…
“Jaelyn. Nandito ka pa pala?”
“Uhm… yeah obviously. Nabanggit ko kanina na gagabihin ako di ba? Gabi na ah, ikaw, bakit nandito ka pa?”
“Wala, napadaan lang, pauwi na kasi ako kakatapos lang naming magDOTA ng mga kaibigan ko.”
“DOTA?”
“Yup. DOTA, It’s a computer game.”
As expected, computer games. Mga lalaki talaga, whatever the age, they like these computer games. However, mas madalas students yung mahilig sa ganyan. At as expected din, hindi ko alam anong DOTA na naman to. Kawawa naman ako, walang alam sa makabagong teknolohiya at sa kasalukuyang henerasyon. These things sometimes makes me feel dumb, you know?
“Jae, Sabay na tayo umuwi.”
“Sure.”
Walking distance lang from our school to our village. Sabay kaming naglakad ni Lem. Let me get things straight. I DON”T LIKE LEM. That’s it and besides, may niligawan siya.
“Lagi ka bang ginagabi?”
“Di naman lagi pero madalas. Student Government meetings, it’s a must. Ayoko ng ginagabi ako eh but I can’t help it.”
“Sa bagay, Student Government officer, what do you expect. Pero babae ka, delikado pag gabi. Got any curfew?”
“Wala. Wala akong curfew pero ayoko ng ginagabi. I just don’t think girls should stay outside the house on late nights.”
“Wow, ang bait mo naman. No curfew and yet you don’t stay out at nights.”
“Go ahead. Make fun of me. Alam ko namang makaluma ako. I’m probably too conservative. I mean, girls today, kahit inuumaga na sa kung saan, ok lang but me, I am someone you’d consider as “goody-goody.” Kaya fine, tawanan mo ako.”
Smile. Lem smiled. Ano yun? Bakit siya ngumiti? What the hell. I don’t even like his smile, parang may hidden agenda.
“Why are you smiling?”
“Wala naman. You’re conservative and I think that’s cute.”
“Cute? Ewan ko sa’yo.”
“Eto na.”
“Ha?”
“Eto yung bahay ninyo di ba?”
“Ah oo. Thanks for walking me home.”
“Wala yun. I enjoyed it.”
“Ingat pauwi.”
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I’m in my room and I can’t sleep. That’s odd. Usually dahil sa pagod mabilis akong nakakatulog.
Lem Bermillez. Did you purposely wait for me? Why did you walk me home? Is that a way para makipagkaibigan sakin o may iba pang meaning? I’m cute. What do you mean cute? Are you flirting with me?
“Aaahhhh!” I shouted with my pillow covering my face. Mamaya marinig pa ako nina Mama, lagot ako.
Moreover, alam kong iisa lang yung village natin, magkalapit yung street natin, pero hindi tayo close…
“So paano mo nalaman yung exact location ng bahay namin?”
---here's the continuation kahit na hindi ko pa sure anung isusunod. i'll just let my fingers do all the talking for this story haha.. tnx nga pla s mga bmasa, i appreciate it--[/quote]
[u][b][i]Chapter 2[/i][/b][/u]
I was walking home when something familiar caught my eyes. Something? Or I should probably say, someone familiar standing outside and seem to be waiting for me. I squinted my eyes to see who it was. There, si Lem yun. Napaisip ako. Contradicting statements flooded my mind.
Sinong hinihintay ni Lem? Probably some girl or barkada.
Teka, ako yung huling lumabas after ng meeting. Ako na lang yung student. Ako ba yung hinihintay niya?
Pwedeng ako pero… hindi eh. Sabi nila may nililgawan siya currently.
Whaat? Kung sinusundo niya ako tapos may nililigawan siya, so chick boy siya?
OMG! 2-timer si Lem? My gosh I didn’t…
“Jaelyn. Nandito ka pa pala?”
“Uhm… yeah obviously. Nabanggit ko kanina na gagabihin ako di ba? Gabi na ah, ikaw, bakit nandito ka pa?”
“Wala, napadaan lang, pauwi na kasi ako kakatapos lang naming magDOTA ng mga kaibigan ko.”
“DOTA?”
“Yup. DOTA, It’s a computer game.”
As expected, computer games. Mga lalaki talaga, whatever the age, they like these computer games. However, mas madalas students yung mahilig sa ganyan. At as expected din, hindi ko alam anong DOTA na naman to. Kawawa naman ako, walang alam sa makabagong teknolohiya at sa kasalukuyang henerasyon. These things sometimes makes me feel dumb, you know?
“Jae, Sabay na tayo umuwi.”
“Sure.”
Walking distance lang from our school to our village. Sabay kaming naglakad ni Lem. Let me get things straight. I DON”T LIKE LEM. That’s it and besides, may niligawan siya.
“Lagi ka bang ginagabi?”
“Di naman lagi pero madalas. Student Government meetings, it’s a must. Ayoko ng ginagabi ako eh but I can’t help it.”
“Sa bagay, Student Government officer, what do you expect. Pero babae ka, delikado pag gabi. Got any curfew?”
“Wala. Wala akong curfew pero ayoko ng ginagabi. I just don’t think girls should stay outside the house on late nights.”
“Wow, ang bait mo naman. No curfew and yet you don’t stay out at nights.”
“Go ahead. Make fun of me. Alam ko namang makaluma ako. I’m probably too conservative. I mean, girls today, kahit inuumaga na sa kung saan, ok lang but me, I am someone you’d consider as “goody-goody.” Kaya fine, tawanan mo ako.”
Smile. Lem smiled. Ano yun? Bakit siya ngumiti? What the hell. I don’t even like his smile, parang may hidden agenda.
“Why are you smiling?”
“Wala naman. You’re conservative and I think that’s cute.”
“Cute? Ewan ko sa’yo.”
“Eto na.”
“Ha?”
“Eto yung bahay ninyo di ba?”
“Ah oo. Thanks for walking me home.”
“Wala yun. I enjoyed it.”
“Ingat pauwi.”
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I’m in my room and I can’t sleep. That’s odd. Usually dahil sa pagod mabilis akong nakakatulog.
Lem Bermillez. Did you purposely wait for me? Why did you walk me home? Is that a way para makipagkaibigan sakin o may iba pang meaning? I’m cute. What do you mean cute? Are you flirting with me?
“Aaahhhh!” I shouted with my pillow covering my face. Mamaya marinig pa ako nina Mama, lagot ako.
Moreover, alam kong iisa lang yung village natin, magkalapit yung street natin, pero hindi tayo close…
“So paano mo nalaman yung exact location ng bahay namin?”
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- *kim-a-holic
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Re: [quote]**i got inspired by ate kim kaya i had my story here... wala lang just to share...**[/quote] [align=center][b]"Night Walks"[/b][/align] [i]it's funny how everything started. i didn't even had
There's something going on! Hahahaha. Ang sweet. Lem walked her home. You should try "Walk Me Home" by Mandy Moore to be its OST.
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- pinkblack08
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Re: [quote]**i got inspired by ate kim kaya i had my story here... wala lang just to share...**[/quote] [align=center][b]"Night Walks"[/b][/align] [i]it's funny how everything started. i didn't even had
^haha yeah agree..
@eclipsetwins:but it is a compliment!haha..
wow grabe naadik nako d2 hehe
@eclipsetwins:but it is a compliment!haha..
wow grabe naadik nako d2 hehe
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- `mizeL
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Re: [quote]**i got inspired by ate kim kaya i had my story here... wala lang just to share...**[/quote] [align=center][b]"Night Walks"[/b][/align] [i]it's funny how everything started. i didn't even had
si Lem?? Stalker mo ata xa e! hahaha. hidden agendas and all. hihihihi. tas biglang nagparamdam lol..
wow. sana pagpatuloy mo ito. hihihihi. i also like ur story .gif)
ni-review ko yung title ng story, night walks.. rawrrrr! hahahahahahaha ang kilig kaya 
LoooooL
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- eclipse_twins
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Re: [quote]**i got inspired by ate kim kaya i had my story here... wala lang just to share...**[/quote] [align=center][b]"Night Walks"[/b][/align] [i]it's funny how everything started. i didn't even had
[quote]@ate kim: that's a great song. OST siya ng a walk to remember, ryt?
@pinkblack08: waah, na-h0ok eh n0h? well, i'll do my best for this one.
@ate mizel: tnx po. actually may sisz said na i had a creepy title. night walks para daw pang horror movie na zombie... haha, at some point i agree with her but i really love my title eh so i'm glad u do 2...
---aun... auq pa sna masundan 2 so that i could leave u hanging in there but i can't sleep and i can't do anything so i'm giving out the next episode hope you enjoy this one---[/quote]
[u][i][b]Chapter 3[/b][/i][/u]
Time Check: 9:30 P.M
My goodness, hindi ako makatulog. Pati MP3, hindi ako mapatulog. Buti na lang walang pasok bukas. Sanay ako sa puyatan pero this night, I am dying to get some sleep, which I can’t get. Anu ba yan tunog ng tunog tong cp na to. Oo nga pala, Friday, kaya maraming super text. Na-flood na ako ng mga GM.
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“Ma, labas lang po ako.”
“San ka pupunta anak?”
“Papaload lang po kina Kuya Edward.”
Walking. I was walking lost with my thoughts. I don’t even exactly know what I’m thinking. Basta ang daming pumapasok sa isip ko. Ai, nandito na pala ako kina Kuya Edward.
“Good evening Kuya.”
“Ui Jaelyn. Good evening din. Gabi na lumabas ka pa ng bahay.”
“Oo nga po eh. Pa-load naman po.”
“Mukhang inutusan ka na naman ng ate mo na magpa-load ah. Sa number ba ni Ate Faye mo?”
“Ai hindi po Kuya, sa number ko po, yung Globe. 25. Pang-unli lang ngayong gabi”
“Himala yan. Kailan ka pa natutong gamitin ang cellphone mong maganda? MP3 lang ginagamit mo sa cellphone mo di ba? haha…”
“Hindi po kasi ako makatulog, eh maraming nagtetext kaya magpapaload na lang ako. text na lang muna”
“Ganun ba. O ayan, na-send ko na.”
“Salamat Kuya Edward.”
“Walang problema. Ikaw pa. Ingat ka pauwi ha. Ayan na sundo mo, hinihintay ka.”
“Hindi Kuya, ako lang uuwi mag-isa. Sino pong sundo yung sinasabi ninyo? Ikaw Kuya ha, niloloko mo ako”
“Ayan kaya sa may kanto. Yung kapareho mo ng T-shirt. Sige na, umuwi ka na.”
Paglingon ko, meron nga akong kapareho ng T-shirt. Naka-Team Building T-shirt din siya. It means ka-batch ko siya.
“Sino bang…”
Naputol. Yeah. Medyo na-tameme nga ako. Because the guy that’s wearing the same T-shirt as mine smiled. So ano naman kung nag-smile siya. No big deal naman. Not. It was a big deal because I know exactly whose smile that belongs to, and that’s the person I least expected to see. Lem.
[quote]---May kasunod na to eh pero pinutol ko muna para medyo may thrill... hehe, that's it muna... TC and G0d bless every1!---[/quote]
hope you enjoy this one---[/quote]
[u][i][b]Chapter 3[/b][/i][/u]
Time Check: 9:30 P.M
My goodness, hindi ako makatulog. Pati MP3, hindi ako mapatulog. Buti na lang walang pasok bukas. Sanay ako sa puyatan pero this night, I am dying to get some sleep, which I can’t get. Anu ba yan tunog ng tunog tong cp na to. Oo nga pala, Friday, kaya maraming super text. Na-flood na ako ng mga GM.
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“Ma, labas lang po ako.”
“San ka pupunta anak?”
“Papaload lang po kina Kuya Edward.”
Walking. I was walking lost with my thoughts. I don’t even exactly know what I’m thinking. Basta ang daming pumapasok sa isip ko. Ai, nandito na pala ako kina Kuya Edward.
“Good evening Kuya.”
“Ui Jaelyn. Good evening din. Gabi na lumabas ka pa ng bahay.”
“Oo nga po eh. Pa-load naman po.”
“Mukhang inutusan ka na naman ng ate mo na magpa-load ah. Sa number ba ni Ate Faye mo?”
“Ai hindi po Kuya, sa number ko po, yung Globe. 25. Pang-unli lang ngayong gabi”
“Himala yan. Kailan ka pa natutong gamitin ang cellphone mong maganda? MP3 lang ginagamit mo sa cellphone mo di ba? haha…”
“Hindi po kasi ako makatulog, eh maraming nagtetext kaya magpapaload na lang ako. text na lang muna”
“Ganun ba. O ayan, na-send ko na.”
“Salamat Kuya Edward.”
“Walang problema. Ikaw pa. Ingat ka pauwi ha. Ayan na sundo mo, hinihintay ka.”
“Hindi Kuya, ako lang uuwi mag-isa. Sino pong sundo yung sinasabi ninyo? Ikaw Kuya ha, niloloko mo ako”
“Ayan kaya sa may kanto. Yung kapareho mo ng T-shirt. Sige na, umuwi ka na.”
Paglingon ko, meron nga akong kapareho ng T-shirt. Naka-Team Building T-shirt din siya. It means ka-batch ko siya.
“Sino bang…”
Naputol. Yeah. Medyo na-tameme nga ako. Because the guy that’s wearing the same T-shirt as mine smiled. So ano naman kung nag-smile siya. No big deal naman. Not. It was a big deal because I know exactly whose smile that belongs to, and that’s the person I least expected to see. Lem.
[quote]---May kasunod na to eh pero pinutol ko muna para medyo may thrill... hehe, that's it muna... TC and G0d bless every1!---[/quote]
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- `mizeL
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Re: [quote]**i got inspired by ate kim kaya i had my story here... wala lang just to share...**[/quote] [align=center][b]"Night Walks"[/b][/align] [i]it's funny how everything started. i didn't even had
nakss, na tameme daw si jaelyn o.. hindi daw nya like.. 
uyyyy..
haha ambilis ng update a!
wala tlga sa isip ko na horror yung title ng story.. heehee
i'm looking forward for the update. night walks... uyyyyyy 
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- pinkblack08
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Re: [quote]**i got inspired by ate kim kaya i had my story here... wala lang just to share...**[/quote] [align=center][b]"Night Walks"[/b][/align] [i]it's funny how everything started. i didn't even had
weee..grabe naman si Lem!gabi na,sinusundan pa rin c Jaelyn!..hmmm
anyway,actually nagdrawing ako kagabi inspired by this story,i mean title,haha..and it's ugly 
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- eclipse_twins
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Re: [quote]**i got inspired by ate kim kaya i had my story here... wala lang just to share...**[/quote] [align=center][b]"Night Walks"[/b][/align] [i]it's funny how everything started. i didn't even had
@pinkblack08: yeah, i agree with ate mizel... show ur drawing... talent yan n0h!
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- `mizeL
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Re: [quote]**i got inspired by ate kim kaya i had my story here... wala lang just to share...**[/quote] [align=center][b]"Night Walks"[/b][/align] [i]it's funny how everything started. i didn't even had
ok,,, wak mawalan ng pag-asa, i'm still cheering up this thread! nagagandahan ako sa istorya! weeeeee!
lem, magpakabait ka at nang si jae ay mahulog sa iyo.. weeeeeeeee ^^
hahaha
nagagandahan ako sa istorya! weeeeee!
lem, magpakabait ka at nang si jae ay mahulog sa iyo.. weeeeeeeee ^^
hahaha
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- angel_in_tears08
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Re: [quote]**i got inspired by ate kim kaya i had my story here... wala lang just to share...**[/quote] [align=center][b]"Night Walks"[/b][/align] [i]it's funny how everything started. i didn't even had
wow nice story... its really cute...
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- eclipse_twins
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Re: [quote]**i got inspired by ate kim kaya i had my story here... wala lang just to share...**[/quote] [align=center][b]"Night Walks"[/b][/align] [i]it's funny how everything started. i didn't even had
[quote]@ate mizel: hehe, e2 n, i upd8d it...
@angel in tears 08: thank u po
---ok, so this particular chapter u wil see d crzy side of jaelyn. hope u lyk ds one---[/quote]
[u][i][b]Chapter 4[/b][/i][/u]
Si Lem talaga. Why twice this night? ano ba to?
“Hi Jae!”
“O Bermillez, bakit nandito ka?”
“Ang sungit mo naman. Kinausap kaya kita just a few minutes ago.”
“Kinausap ka diyan. Mukha mo noh.”
Okay. Fine. Masungit nga ako. I’m too harsh and I admit that. Ni hindi ko nga rin sure bakit eh. Siguro dahil marami nga akong iniisip ngayon and wrong timing siya.
“Galing ako kina Kuya Edward, nagpa-load din ako. Ikaw, papunta ka pa lang kanina. Nag-hi ako pero dinedma mo ako. Seems like you have lots of stuff in your mind.”
“Yup. I do. Sorry. I didn’t mean to be rude.”
“Okay lang yun. Bad mood ka lang. Naistorbo sigruo kita. Wrong timing.”
“Hindi uhm, okay lang. okay lang talaga. Ako yung hindi okay. Urgh, ang gulo ko.”
“Haha… You’re really cute you know?”
Before I knew it, naglalakad na naman kami pauwi. Hinahatid na naman niya ako. What was going on between the two of us? Maybe I’m overreacting. Eh ano naman ba? Hinahatid lang niya ako. He’s just trying to be polite so he’s sending a girl home. No more. No less. Yun nga lang ba?
Well at least I managed to continue talking to him without showing him that I’m thinking lots of stuff in my mind.
“Thanks. For the second time this night.”
“Sure. No prob. Uhm, Pwede bang makuha yung number mo?”
“You know what Lem, I really appreciate that you walked me home but I don’t give my number easily. Go, goodnight.”
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Urgh. Ewan ko ba. What was he thinking to be saying that to me? Andiyan na naman yung you’re cute line niya at ngayon hinihingi pa niya yung number ko.
*28 messages received*
Ano ba yan. Ang tindi magtext. Parang 15 mintues ago kakacheck ko lang ng inbox ko tapos ngayon 28 messages na. Kumusta naman ang mga addict sa text?
{now playing: tigerlily – matchbook romance}
quite unxpected ryt? E2 nakki-gm lng dn xe d aq mak2log.
In fairness an tiyaga nu mgtxt ah. Nalunod na ako. ahaha
Aun. Txt txt na lang.
-::-jae shen-::-
--gm--
Ganun na nga. Nakitext mania na lang ako. Maraming nagreply pero hindi ko sila nireplyan. Fine. Fine. Para akong baliw. Nag-GM kasi naghahanap ng katext, maraming nagreply pero di ko na nireplyan. Parang durog lang eh. Marami akong alam na numbers sa school kasi I need all the contacts I’ll be needing for school activities pero kung just for fun kaya ako magtetext, asa pa sila. Once in a blue moon lang yan. Bihira lang. Sobra. Ang abno ko talaga noh? Tsk tsk.
Kinuha ko yung libro ni Papa. “Cold Fire” by Dean Koontz. Yes, I’m a bookworm and this is my only way of coping with stress or making my self sleepy. Ang ganda na nga basa ko eh kaso biglang nagvibrate yung cellphone ko.
*1 message received*
Sender: --number not registered in your phone book--
-Maganda ba yung may-ari ng CP n 2?-
“Nakakaloko naman tong nagtext nito. Ano ba naman. Mas durog pa ata sakin to eh. Lakas ng trip. Bahala ka nga diyan, di naman kita kilala.”
*5 messages received*
Sender: --number not registered in your phone book--
-Di man lng ngreply. Either busy ka or u r ignoring my msg. di bale u r stil beautiful 4 me.-
Argh. Kainis to ah. Ito rin yung nagtext kanina. Ngayon limang messages, pare-pareho. No questions asked, durog nga to. Normally wala lang sakin kapag may nagtext ng ganito pero this one, there’s something. It’s particularly disturbing. Basta, I’m very intuitive when it comes to these stuff and there is something fishy with this message.
REPLY
-Cnu po 2? Xncia n bka wrong send k. Ds is Jaelyn Shen’s number.-
I was trying so hard to be polite kahit na medyo naiirita ako. Whew. Cool lang Jae. I saved the number with the name “Nakakainis 2”
*1 message received*
Sender: Nakakainis 2
-Wow. Nagreply… No, d aq wrong send. D msg is 4 u.-
“Waaaahhhhh!!!”
Sumigaw na naman ako sa may unan.
“Mamatay ka na!!!”
Sinuntok ko yung teddy bear ko tapos gumulong sa kama. Ganito talga ako. Hindi na to nakakapanibago. Kumatok si Mama sa pinto sabay sabi,
“Jae! Anong problema?”
“Ma, ah, wala po…”
“Anak ah. Napaparanoid ka na naman.”
“Ahehe, oo nga po eh. Sorry po.”
Hay… Sanay na yung pamilya ko sakin. I mean sa school, I may appear cool and sassy but believe me, grabe ang paranoid ko.
*1 message received*
Sender: Nakakainis 2
-Oi, pahinga ka na. Alam ko pagod ka sa meetings mo. MWF ang Student Government. TTH sa school paper. Geh na, u deserve some rest. Goodnight Sleeping Beauty.
Bakit alam nito yung schedule ko? Ang weird.
“Mamatay ka na talaga! Yaaahhh!”
*boogsh*
“Aww god, ako ata mamamatay dito eh.”
Nalaglag ako sa kama. Kakagulong sa kama, nalaglag. And this isn’t the first time. At sa pagkakalaglag ko, andun na lang ako. Nakatulala.
“Sino ka ba at kailangan kong maparanoid?”
[align=center][img]http://i162.photobucket.com/albums/t273/eclipse_twins/IMG_1656.jpg[/img][/align]
---ok, so this particular chapter u wil see d crzy side of jaelyn. hope u lyk ds one---[/quote]
[u][i][b]Chapter 4[/b][/i][/u]
Si Lem talaga. Why twice this night? ano ba to?
“Hi Jae!”
“O Bermillez, bakit nandito ka?”
“Ang sungit mo naman. Kinausap kaya kita just a few minutes ago.”
“Kinausap ka diyan. Mukha mo noh.”
Okay. Fine. Masungit nga ako. I’m too harsh and I admit that. Ni hindi ko nga rin sure bakit eh. Siguro dahil marami nga akong iniisip ngayon and wrong timing siya.
“Galing ako kina Kuya Edward, nagpa-load din ako. Ikaw, papunta ka pa lang kanina. Nag-hi ako pero dinedma mo ako. Seems like you have lots of stuff in your mind.”
“Yup. I do. Sorry. I didn’t mean to be rude.”
“Okay lang yun. Bad mood ka lang. Naistorbo sigruo kita. Wrong timing.”
“Hindi uhm, okay lang. okay lang talaga. Ako yung hindi okay. Urgh, ang gulo ko.”
“Haha… You’re really cute you know?”
Before I knew it, naglalakad na naman kami pauwi. Hinahatid na naman niya ako. What was going on between the two of us? Maybe I’m overreacting. Eh ano naman ba? Hinahatid lang niya ako. He’s just trying to be polite so he’s sending a girl home. No more. No less. Yun nga lang ba?
Well at least I managed to continue talking to him without showing him that I’m thinking lots of stuff in my mind.
“Thanks. For the second time this night.”
“Sure. No prob. Uhm, Pwede bang makuha yung number mo?”
“You know what Lem, I really appreciate that you walked me home but I don’t give my number easily. Go, goodnight.”
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Urgh. Ewan ko ba. What was he thinking to be saying that to me? Andiyan na naman yung you’re cute line niya at ngayon hinihingi pa niya yung number ko.
*28 messages received*
Ano ba yan. Ang tindi magtext. Parang 15 mintues ago kakacheck ko lang ng inbox ko tapos ngayon 28 messages na. Kumusta naman ang mga addict sa text?
{now playing: tigerlily – matchbook romance}
quite unxpected ryt? E2 nakki-gm lng dn xe d aq mak2log.
In fairness an tiyaga nu mgtxt ah. Nalunod na ako. ahaha
Aun. Txt txt na lang.
-::-jae shen-::-
--gm--
Ganun na nga. Nakitext mania na lang ako. Maraming nagreply pero hindi ko sila nireplyan. Fine. Fine. Para akong baliw. Nag-GM kasi naghahanap ng katext, maraming nagreply pero di ko na nireplyan. Parang durog lang eh. Marami akong alam na numbers sa school kasi I need all the contacts I’ll be needing for school activities pero kung just for fun kaya ako magtetext, asa pa sila. Once in a blue moon lang yan. Bihira lang. Sobra. Ang abno ko talaga noh? Tsk tsk.
Kinuha ko yung libro ni Papa. “Cold Fire” by Dean Koontz. Yes, I’m a bookworm and this is my only way of coping with stress or making my self sleepy. Ang ganda na nga basa ko eh kaso biglang nagvibrate yung cellphone ko.
*1 message received*
Sender: --number not registered in your phone book--
-Maganda ba yung may-ari ng CP n 2?-
“Nakakaloko naman tong nagtext nito. Ano ba naman. Mas durog pa ata sakin to eh. Lakas ng trip. Bahala ka nga diyan, di naman kita kilala.”
*5 messages received*
Sender: --number not registered in your phone book--
-Di man lng ngreply. Either busy ka or u r ignoring my msg. di bale u r stil beautiful 4 me.-
Argh. Kainis to ah. Ito rin yung nagtext kanina. Ngayon limang messages, pare-pareho. No questions asked, durog nga to. Normally wala lang sakin kapag may nagtext ng ganito pero this one, there’s something. It’s particularly disturbing. Basta, I’m very intuitive when it comes to these stuff and there is something fishy with this message.
REPLY
-Cnu po 2? Xncia n bka wrong send k. Ds is Jaelyn Shen’s number.-
I was trying so hard to be polite kahit na medyo naiirita ako. Whew. Cool lang Jae. I saved the number with the name “Nakakainis 2”
*1 message received*
Sender: Nakakainis 2
-Wow. Nagreply… No, d aq wrong send. D msg is 4 u.-
“Waaaahhhhh!!!”
Sumigaw na naman ako sa may unan.
“Mamatay ka na!!!”
Sinuntok ko yung teddy bear ko tapos gumulong sa kama. Ganito talga ako. Hindi na to nakakapanibago. Kumatok si Mama sa pinto sabay sabi,
“Jae! Anong problema?”
“Ma, ah, wala po…”
“Anak ah. Napaparanoid ka na naman.”
“Ahehe, oo nga po eh. Sorry po.”
Hay… Sanay na yung pamilya ko sakin. I mean sa school, I may appear cool and sassy but believe me, grabe ang paranoid ko.
*1 message received*
Sender: Nakakainis 2
-Oi, pahinga ka na. Alam ko pagod ka sa meetings mo. MWF ang Student Government. TTH sa school paper. Geh na, u deserve some rest. Goodnight Sleeping Beauty.
Bakit alam nito yung schedule ko? Ang weird.
“Mamatay ka na talaga! Yaaahhh!”
*boogsh*
“Aww god, ako ata mamamatay dito eh.”
Nalaglag ako sa kama. Kakagulong sa kama, nalaglag. And this isn’t the first time. At sa pagkakalaglag ko, andun na lang ako. Nakatulala.
“Sino ka ba at kailangan kong maparanoid?”
[align=center][img]http://i162.photobucket.com/albums/t273/eclipse_twins/IMG_1656.jpg[/img][/align]
Last edited by eclipse_twins (2008-04-29 12:49:35)
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- `mizeL
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- 1969-12-31
Re: [quote]**i got inspired by ate kim kaya i had my story here... wala lang just to share...**[/quote] [align=center][b]"Night Walks"[/b][/align] [i]it's funny how everything started. i didn't even had
Is eclipse_twins = Kathleen???
uyy sis, suggestion lang, mas cute kapag yung style e gaya ke keemee na parang yungvery last line ng bawat chapter e parang ang layo ng gap among the rest? hehehehehe wala lang, mas kilig at cute kasi e.. hehehehe 
anyways, pareho kami ni Jae kung mag GM hindi nirereplyan yung iba, parang may pinatatamaan lang.. hahaha! at, si lem nga yun! stalker nga xa! hahahaahahaha
cge cge next 
anyways, pareho kami ni Jae kung mag GM hindi nirereplyan yung iba, parang may pinatatamaan lang.. hahaha! at, si lem nga yun! stalker nga xa! hahahaahahaha
cge cge next
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- *kim-a-holic
- » FTalkGeek
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- 1969-12-31
Re: [quote]**i got inspired by ate kim kaya i had my story here... wala lang just to share...**[/quote] [align=center][b]"Night Walks"[/b][/align] [i]it's funny how everything started. i didn't even had
Nawp. Sa pagkakaalam ko, di ginamit ang WALK ME HOME sa A Walk To Remember. Pero bagay na bagay yan dito. Hekhek.
Woooaaah. Penge ng number ni Nakakainis 2. Itetext ko siya. Globe din ako ee. Hahaha. Textmate kami.
NEXT. NEXT. NEXT.
Pero bagay na bagay yan dito. Hekhek.
Woooaaah. Penge ng number ni Nakakainis 2. Itetext ko siya. Globe din ako ee. Hahaha. Textmate kami.
NEXT. NEXT. NEXT.
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- pinkblack08
- » FTalkWhiz
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- 1969-12-31
Re: [quote]**i got inspired by ate kim kaya i had my story here... wala lang just to share...**[/quote] [align=center][b]"Night Walks"[/b][/align] [i]it's funny how everything started. i didn't even had
weee...nice one!!looking for the next chapter..ganda nung last line!may impact!haha
@mizel&eclipse:na-uh..nooo wei
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