[quote]@[b]ily23[/b]: u're new. welcome 2 ftalk and tnx 4 d compliment [/quote] [quote]@[b]ate kim[/b]: d b gnamit? awtz. ge bgay q number ni lem, tnong q muna kng pwede. hehe[/quote] [quote]@[b]ate mizel[/b]: yup, kathleen. some people call me kate. bhala k n kng anung gus2 m twag sakin. uhm, auq mxado gyahin format ni ate kim xe... wla lng, para nman original ung format q haha... and yeah, aq rn super gm tpos d nman mxado magrrply... sumtymx, knwari gm pero cnend q lng xa dun s person n gus2 qng itxt haha...[/quote] [quote]@[b]pinkblack08[/b]: super impact b ung last line? ahehehe.... glad u lyk it[/quote] for those who are reading this story, i'll update tomorrow... promise! i inserted some pics, kya edited lhat ng chapters... i just drew it so d xa mxado maganda... para yan ke ate mizel na sabik s drawings, haha... jaz kidding para dn ke pinkblack08 n hopefully isheshare nya ung drawing nya... ayee, g0 girl... share share share! sabik n kmi ni ate mizel.. my drawings aren't that pretty but i posted it so i hope u will too hehe, god bless everybody... [img]http://i162.photobucket.com/albums/t273/eclipse_twins/blackheartblink.gif[/img] [img]http://i162.photobucket.com/albums/t273/eclipse_twins/blackheartblink.gif[/img] [img]http://i162.photobucket.com/albums/t273/eclipse_twins/blackheartblink.gif[/img]

Last edited by eclipse_twins (2008-04-29 12:43:20)

ang cute ng drawings. hahaha. update na. can't wait.

> anu ba yan ngayon lang ulit tumambay dito. wahaha. well, ang danda talaga nung story. . hintay ko na rin yung update.. by the way, cute drawings. .

Last edited by maree12 (2008-04-29 22:49:11)

[quote]@pinkblack08: i'll wait for your drawings @ate kim: tnx. minadali ko lang yan eh. @maree12: tnx din. tambay ka lang d2 lagi. para masaya hehe @cutie gal: no need to wait, e2 na ung update.[/quote] [u][i][b]CHAPTER 5[/b][/i][/u] Saturday and Sunday had passed by swiftly pero di ko pa rin nakalimutan yung message. At last Monday came, Monday distracted me ang took my thoughts away from the weird texter, “Nakakainis 2.” ---- Every Monday, Christian Living ang first period namin. I like our teacher kasi kahit na our topic is about religion and a lot of teens our age find God boring, she can make every student interested in her subject. Parang magic nga eh, with a snap, our class find God not only as a God but also as a friend. Pero while waiting for the teacher, I was doodling my to –do list for the day, at ayun na nga, dumating yung teacher namin. She was explaing our project when she stopped. Eh pano ba naman may nagsuper-enter ng class. I checked my watched. Oopss… 10minutes late. Kung ayos ang mood ni Miss, she’ll let this pass, pero kung mainit ang ulo niya, patay kang bata ka. Tingin ko naman kilala niyo na kung sinong late… “Lem, Good morning!” “Good morning Miss.” Ai may gulay. Walking distance lang ang bahay natin tapos nalate ka pa. It’s not at all surprising. Ganyan talaga siya. Laging late. “You know that I don’t tolerate tardiness, right?” “Yes Miss.” “I need you to report to the Dean’s office.” Hay… Kawawa naman si Lem. Compared sa barkada niya, siya na yung pinakamabait. And in case I didn’t mention, bad boy group and barkada nito. Well, if you know them, mababait naman sila but they really got a bad reputation when it comes to violations and demerits. Siga kasi eh tapos marami pang mga ka-ek-ekan sa buhay. Marami silang navaviolate sa Code of Conduct ng School. Ayan tuloy. Pero in fairness, si Lem, nagkakaviolation lang dahil sa tardiness, sa behavioral record, okay naman siya. Ni wala nga siyang record ng pakikipag-away eh. I guess that is why he kind of stands out from his barkada… and why girls love him so much. After a few minutes, our teacher grouped us for a project. Our project is a documentary about poor people and their faith in God. ”Jaelyn, Cloud, Nikki, Aljay, group 3 kayo. Jaelyn, lead the group.” “Yes Miss.” Super ngiti si Cloud at Nikki sakin. Siyempre naman I’m with my bestfriends kaya ang saya namin. Pinasahan ako ng note ni Nikki. “Ka-group natin si Aljay! Can you believe it? Ang swerte mo, girl!” Aww. Yes. Ang swerte ko nga. Ahahahahayyyy… Si Aljay Lim, Filipino-Chinese. My super crush. I mean crush ko talaga. Ang talino niya kasi eh. Not only that, ang smooth niya maglaro ng Basketball. Parang walang effort pero swak lagi yung tira. Shoot. He’s got a great sense of humor too. Others say medyo green siya mag-joke minsan. Oo nga siguro pero when it comes to me, he never gives green jokes. We were planning already when our teacher suddenly interrupted. “Jaelyn, kindly take care of Lem. I’ll assign him in your group.” WHAAAAT??!! “Okay miss.” Smile lang Jae. Cool it. Nakangiti ako pero I wanted to shout. Ewan ko kung bakit pero feeling ko something wouldn’t be right kung nandito siya sa grupo namin. A few mintues of chatting then pumunta ako kay Aljay. “Can I get you number?” “Interested in me? Haha…” “I’m probably interested or probably kailangan ko lang ng number mo para sa project.” “Ouch. That’s harsh.” OMG. Nakakatunaw yung smile niya. “Just give me your digits. Mahirap gumawa ng project ng walang communication.” “You’re going to have to please me for that.” “Well I guess I would just be using my contacts.” Well that wasn’t so bad for a conversation. Pero parang iba, Parang ang hangin niya. Lumayo na ako then pumunta kay Cloud. “Cloud, Aljay wouldn’t give me his number.” “Don’t worry Jae, I have his number. Bigay ko na lang sayo.” “Thanks girl” A few moments after, pumasok na si Lem ng room from the Dean’s office. “Hi Lem. Uhmm, ka-group kita sa project so I guess we’d be working more. We have a month to work on this.” “Ah okay.” Whoah. That was cold. What’s gotten into him? Parang nung Friday lang, hinatid niya pa ako sa bahay tapos ngayon ni hindi man lang niya ako mabigyan ng ngiti. “Are you okay?” “Oo, Ok lang ako.” He smiled. Pero this time, pilit lang yung ngiti niya. What happened? Why is he ice-cold?

next chap please. aba, demanding. hehe.

awww..another nice update of the story..i can't wait for the other.

waaa kick-out na daw sya!haha joke...anong nakain kaya ni Lem?

omigod...i jz followd a link frm mizz mizel's siggy & led me here... so cool... il watchng out for this

waahh!!! nice story sis! bitin..wahehe..next chappy please...hekhekhek excited eh.. ganda kxe.. wat hapen kya kay Lem?

[quote]@ate mizel: omg... tnx for the link on your siggy. i appreciate that... super @ate kim: i wish aljay ang lem exist so that i could give you their numbers, but you never know, ryt? malay ntin may lem at aljay sa 22ong buhay @pinkblack08: ahaha, ang pait naman ng sinapit ni lem, kick out? clue: di xa kick out. what happened 2 him? may clue d2 s chap n 2 @cutiegal: tnx. ang cute mo @shy19: welcome to night walks! well i am hapi that you seem to be glad u followed ate mizel's link. @kristina08: i didn't know you were reading this too. well, tnx din. aii, singit ko lang pala, i love your layouts! @angel_in_tears08: you're watching out for my story, i'm watching out for yours too.[/quote] [quote]--well, well, well, i'm hapi with your comments ahehe *awoot, baka lumaki ulo ko haha* -- that'll never happen! --super iyak tawa ako sa mga commentz nu --ung tawa, xur aq jan pero ung iyak, d q alam kng s commentz nu ba o s nangyri s pc nmin --na-virus kasi eh --but i'll look for ways to update this --for the mean time, enjoy this chapter![/quote] [u][i][b]Chapter 6[/b][/i][/u] What’s gotten into Lem? May nangyari ba sa Dean’s Ofice? Why am I worried about him? Bigla akong pinasahan ng note ng seatmate ko. A note from Aljay. He gave his number. Then there was a note written below his number: “Text me anytime. I’m here even when it’s not regarding the project. -Aljay” Kung iba, kilig na kilig na siguro kapag binigyan ng note ng crush niya pero bakit parang wala lang sakin to? After a while, si Cloud naman nagpasa ng note sakin. “Girl, ano ba naman tong seatmate ko. He’s so quiet. Wala siyang imik. Then, kanina bigla niyang tinanong kung anong meron sa inyo ni Aljay. -Cloud” Seatmate? I took a glance at Cloud’s seat, si Lem yung katabi niya. I didn’t know why but parang iba talaga yung aura niya ngayon. Something must’ve happened. “Jaelyn!” “Ah. Yes?” “Please focus. This is unusual but your thoughts are drifting away from this room.” “I’m sorry Miss.” Hay, kakaalala ko dahil wala si Lem sa sarili niya, hindi ko napansin na pati ako wala na rin sa sarili ko. This is so unexpected from me. I managed to survive the day even with giving minimal attention. I’m relieved that our meeting was cancelled. Kung hindi, nakakahiya sa co-officers ko. With nothing to do, I went home. After a few steps, nagsimulang umambon, at umulan na. Buti na lang may payong ako. I decided to walk. Hindi ko rin alam kung bakit, pwede naman akong magtrycicle pero mas pinili kong maglakad with my head down. Well, I like the rain. Somehow it made me relax a little with this unfocused day. I sighed without knowing the reason. At nung tumingala ako, nakita ko siya. Mag-isa sa ulan. Walang payong. Pero parang sinadya niyang magpaulan. “Lem, wala kang payong. Mag-trycicle ka na.” “No need.” “Magkakasakit ka.” “Okay lang.” “Okay lang? Ano ka ba? Here, take my umbrella.” “Jae, Hindi ko kailangan. And pag binigay mo sakin yung payong mo, ikaw yung mababasa.” “Malapit na lang yung street namin. I’m going to be fine. Bakit ka ba nagpapaulan?” “Basta.” “Well I don’t know your reason and I don’t know how long you’re going to stay out here. Take my umbrella.” With those words, alam kong tatanggi siya kaya tumakbo na ako. Pagdating sa street namin, I looked back at him and smiled. Unexpectedly, he smiled. Lem’s genuine smile. Hindi yung smile na may hidden agenda at hindi yung smile na pilit. Basa ako paguwi ko sa bahay pero ayos lang sakin. That night, before I sleep, tumunog yung cellphone ko. *1 message received* Sender: Nakakainis 2 -Salamat sa payong… and thanks for showing that you care.- “Lem… Hay…” “Nakakainis 2” is Lem… Then, I changed his name from “Nakakainis 2” to “Raindrops” Hindi ko sure bakit yun yung nilagay ko when I usually put the whole name in my phone book. Siguro kasi may hang-over pa ako sa nangyari kanina. I read his message again and smiled. Tapos, nagreply na ako. REPLY -No problem. I’ve always cared.- Send. I closed my eyes for a few minutes then checked my sent items. Recipient: “Raindrops” -No problem. I’ve always cared.- Nakangiti pa ako eh tapos biglang nanlaki yung mata ko. Para akong biglang nagising sa mahimbing na tulog. “Aaahhh!” Ano tong sinend ko? What did I do? Wala ako sa sarili ko. Bakit ganon yung respond ko sa kanya? Hindi kaya… [i]Lumalabas ang totoong nararamdaman kapag wala sa sarili?[/i]