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- » [quote]**i got inspired by ate kim kaya i had my story here... wala lang just to share...**[/quote] [align=center][b]"Night Walks"[/b][/align] [i]it's funny how everything started. i didn't even had
[quote]**i got inspired by ate kim kaya i had my story here... wala lang just to share...**[/quote] [align=center][b]"Night Walks"[/b][/align] [i]it's funny how everything started. i didn't even had
- `mizeL
- » FTalkWhiz
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Re: [quote]**i got inspired by ate kim kaya i had my story here... wala lang just to share...**[/quote] [align=center][b]"Night Walks"[/b][/align] [i]it's funny how everything started. i didn't even had
huwaaaattt?!!! 
dyahe ka na Jaelyn!! 
naka-drugs ka! joke 
wala lang, naisip ko lang oh: Aljay + Jaelyn = AlJaelyn 
......... Lem + Jaelyn = JaeLem uyyyyyyyy
hahahahaha!!! pili na!!
to the author: hahaha walang anuman sis, ganyan lang tlga ako mag-appreciate o diba ?!! hahahaha 
dyahe ka na Jaelyn!! naka-drugs ka! joke
wala lang, naisip ko lang oh: Aljay + Jaelyn = AlJaelyn ......... Lem + Jaelyn = JaeLem uyyyyyyyy
hahahahaha!!! pili na!!
to the author: hahaha walang anuman sis, ganyan lang tlga ako mag-appreciate o diba ?!! hahahaha
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- meng.o3
- » FTalkElite
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- 1969-12-31
Re: [quote]**i got inspired by ate kim kaya i had my story here... wala lang just to share...**[/quote] [align=center][b]"Night Walks"[/b][/align] [i]it's funny how everything started. i didn't even had
nagulat din ako nung nabasa ko un 'i've always cared'
lol. haha. relate to jaelyn sa uber stress ng officer and school.
yay. gulat ka noh? haha i'm kind of looking for something to read..then i didn't know na may great novel dito, buti na lang may link kay mareh dear. 
haha. nakakaintimidate magpost ng story dito. OMG. dalawang lovestory guru na ang nandito...
GO GO GO! eptok pride. haha
too bad ayaw mag load ng pics >_<
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- eclipse_twins
- » FTalkAddict
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- 1969-12-31
Re: [quote]**i got inspired by ate kim kaya i had my story here... wala lang just to share...**[/quote] [align=center][b]"Night Walks"[/b][/align] [i]it's funny how everything started. i didn't even had
[align=center][quote]@ [b]ate mizel[/b]: ahehe na-touch talaga aq xe nlagay m s siggy m ung link ni2..
isipin m nlng may topak si jaelyn haha...
well, solid jaelem aq! (bias eh noh?)
aii, d p pla nppkita ung profile ni lem, abangan nu yan...[/quote]
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[align=center][quote]@ [b]ate meng[/b]: great novel? love story guru? mejo over pa ata yan for me.
first story q plng xe 2.
mrmi pang kakaining bigas, ahaha...
pero i'm flattered po s compliments mo... tnx
and yeah, tnx 4 reading this "novel" ahehe... 
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sa mga authors d2 s ftalk literature section,
wee, ang dming posts ngaun.
itayo ang bandera ng pinoy literature!
ahaha... hoping 4 more posts in this ection 
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sa mga authors d2 s ftalk literature section,
wee, ang dming posts ngaun.
itayo ang bandera ng pinoy literature!
ahaha... hoping 4 more posts in this ection
Last edited by eclipse_twins (2008-05-02 10:45:19)
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- sHy19
- » FTalkAgent
- 2012
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- 1969-12-31
Re: [quote]**i got inspired by ate kim kaya i had my story here... wala lang just to share...**[/quote] [align=center][b]"Night Walks"[/b][/align] [i]it's funny how everything started. i didn't even had
oh god...ang gnda nice msg...
-ive always cared-
moreeeeeeeee...
yeah.,im so glad i followed the link...
so nice to read stories like this [img]http://us.i1.yimg.com/us.yimg.com/i/mesg/emoticons7/105.gif[/img]
nice msg...
-ive always cared-
moreeeeeeeee...
yeah.,im so glad i followed the link...
so nice to read stories like this [img]http://us.i1.yimg.com/us.yimg.com/i/mesg/emoticons7/105.gif[/img]
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- angel_in_tears08
- » FTalker
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- 1969-12-31
Re: [quote]**i got inspired by ate kim kaya i had my story here... wala lang just to share...**[/quote] [align=center][b]"Night Walks"[/b][/align] [i]it's funny how everything started. i didn't even had
wow... its really cute....
ill be waiting for the nxt episode...
ill be waiting for the nxt episode...
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- valentined28
- » n00b
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- 1969-12-31
Re: [quote]**i got inspired by ate kim kaya i had my story here... wala lang just to share...**[/quote] [align=center][b]"Night Walks"[/b][/align] [i]it's funny how everything started. i didn't even had
Next please. Hahaha!
[i]Nakakatunaw naman yung kwento. Hay. [/i]
[i]Maganda siguro si Jaelyn. Pwede ko ba siyang makilala?[/i]
[i]Nakakatunaw naman yung kwento. Hay. [/i]
[i]Maganda siguro si Jaelyn. Pwede ko ba siyang makilala?[/i]
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- eclipse_twins
- » FTalkAddict
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- 1969-12-31
Re: [quote]**i got inspired by ate kim kaya i had my story here... wala lang just to share...**[/quote] [align=center][b]"Night Walks"[/b][/align] [i]it's funny how everything started. i didn't even had
[quote]@valentined28: bahala ka nang mag-imagine whether jaelyn is pretty or not. and nga pla, nakakatunaw ung kwento? well, wag ka munang matunaw coz here's d nxt chap! [/quote]
[quote]hey, aun. well, aus n ung pc namin kaya i decided to update this already. however, i'll be gone for a couple of days. busy na eh, pnapatwag na ako for SG meetings, so baka mga ilang days din b4 i update this again.
don't give up on this thread while i'm gone, okay? hehe, thanks everybody![/quote]
[u][i][b]Chapter 7[/b][/i][/u]
~Part1~
Retrieve! Retrieve! Retrieve! Waaah! Pano ko babawiin yung sinend ko?
Nakita kong dumaan yung ate ko, papunta sa room niya.
“Ate Faye!!!”
“What?!”
Nyak. Nabulabog ko ata siya. Eh bakit ba? Emergency to! Kulang na lang dumating yung ambulansya.
“Ate! Pano ko mababawi yung text na na-send ko?”
“Duh! May lagnat ka ba? Na-send mo na tapos makukuha mo ulit. Mag-isip ka nga.”
“Kailangan ko mabawi yung text ko! Help…”
“Hay. Alam mo kahit awayin mo yang cellphone mo o magdemand ka sa Globe, hindi mo mababawi yung text mo. The person whom you sent the message to is probably reading your text right now. Pero, pwede mo namang bawiin yung sinabi mo.”
Oo nga noh. Ang shonga-shonga ko talaga. I couldn’t retrieve my message, but I can take back what I said.
“Ahaha, I love sis! Thank you!”
Super takbo ako sa kwarto ko. Ang talino talaga ng ate ko. I texted Lem.
Send.
“Sana maniwala siyang wrong send lang yung text ko.”
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Lem’s POV
*1 message received*
Sender: Jae Shen
-sori wrong send knina. uhmm, yah, xur ok lng un. balik mo na lang ung payong pag my tym k.-
Hay. Akala ko pa naman yun na yun. Akala ko gusto mo na ako. Wrong send pala. Wrong send nga ba?
Nung unang hatid ko sayo last Friday, I really waited for you. Kunwari lang yung DOTA stuff na sinabi ko. Ang totoo ang tagal kitang hinhintay at nawawalan na ako ng pagasa na lalabas ka pa nun. Sa isip ko, baka di ko napansin, lumabas ka na o di kaya iniwasan mo ako. Pero nung anino mo pa lang nakita ko, masaya na ako at alam kong maihahatid kita.
You’re exceptional. You’re not like the girls I know. I’ve never even been interested in anybody until I noticed you.
Nung naglalakad ka para magpaload at binati kita pero hindi mo ako pinansin dahil marami kang iniisip, sobrang nagaalala ako sayo nun. Sana umayos yung pakiramdam mo nung nakausap mo ako.
Pagkagaling ko sa Dean’s office kanina, nakita kong kinausap mo si Aljay. Alam kong wala akong karapatan pero hindi ko mapigilang magisip kung anong meron sa inyong dalawa. Tapos wala ka pa sa sarili mo kanina, naisip ko tuloy baka iniisip mo si Aljay. Nabad-trip ako nang sobra-sobra.
Kaya ako nagpaulan para matauhan ako. Para maisip ko na wala akong karapatang kuwestyunin kung anong meron sa inyo ni Aljay at lalong wala akong karapatang magselos. Pero nakita mo akong nagpapaulan. Habang nagsasalita ka, gusto kong maniwalang nag-aalala ka para sakin. Gusto kong maniwala na kahit kaunti, may gusto ka na rin sakin.
“Lemuel! Telepono!”
“Ma, please don’t call me by my first name. Alam mo naman pong ayoko ng “Lemuel” eh.”
“Well, I like your name so I’ll call you by that, okay?”
“Hay, ano pa nga po bang magagawa ko? Sino po palang nasa telepono?”
“Jae… Jae something.”
“Jaelyn?”
“Yes! Exactly hijo, Jaelyn!”
Si Jaelyn… tumawag? Bakit?
“Hello, si Lem na to.”
“Hey Lem.”
[quote][i]--off topic--
ei ate mizel, lemuel ang whole first name ni lem. ahaha...
gawa n tau ng bgo:
Jaelyn+Lem=Jaelem
Jaelyn+Lemuel=Jaeuel ("Jay-wel")
Jaelyn+Lemuel=Lynuel ("Lyn-wel")[/i][/quote]
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[quote]hey, aun. well, aus n ung pc namin kaya i decided to update this already. however, i'll be gone for a couple of days. busy na eh, pnapatwag na ako for SG meetings, so baka mga ilang days din b4 i update this again.
don't give up on this thread while i'm gone, okay? hehe, thanks everybody![/quote]
[u][i][b]Chapter 7[/b][/i][/u]
~Part1~
Retrieve! Retrieve! Retrieve! Waaah! Pano ko babawiin yung sinend ko?
Nakita kong dumaan yung ate ko, papunta sa room niya.
“Ate Faye!!!”
“What?!”
Nyak. Nabulabog ko ata siya. Eh bakit ba? Emergency to! Kulang na lang dumating yung ambulansya.
“Ate! Pano ko mababawi yung text na na-send ko?”
“Duh! May lagnat ka ba? Na-send mo na tapos makukuha mo ulit. Mag-isip ka nga.”
“Kailangan ko mabawi yung text ko! Help…”
“Hay. Alam mo kahit awayin mo yang cellphone mo o magdemand ka sa Globe, hindi mo mababawi yung text mo. The person whom you sent the message to is probably reading your text right now. Pero, pwede mo namang bawiin yung sinabi mo.”
Oo nga noh. Ang shonga-shonga ko talaga. I couldn’t retrieve my message, but I can take back what I said.
“Ahaha, I love sis! Thank you!”
Super takbo ako sa kwarto ko. Ang talino talaga ng ate ko. I texted Lem.
Send.
“Sana maniwala siyang wrong send lang yung text ko.”
---
Lem’s POV
*1 message received*
Sender: Jae Shen
-sori wrong send knina. uhmm, yah, xur ok lng un. balik mo na lang ung payong pag my tym k.-
Hay. Akala ko pa naman yun na yun. Akala ko gusto mo na ako. Wrong send pala. Wrong send nga ba?
Nung unang hatid ko sayo last Friday, I really waited for you. Kunwari lang yung DOTA stuff na sinabi ko. Ang totoo ang tagal kitang hinhintay at nawawalan na ako ng pagasa na lalabas ka pa nun. Sa isip ko, baka di ko napansin, lumabas ka na o di kaya iniwasan mo ako. Pero nung anino mo pa lang nakita ko, masaya na ako at alam kong maihahatid kita.
You’re exceptional. You’re not like the girls I know. I’ve never even been interested in anybody until I noticed you.
Nung naglalakad ka para magpaload at binati kita pero hindi mo ako pinansin dahil marami kang iniisip, sobrang nagaalala ako sayo nun. Sana umayos yung pakiramdam mo nung nakausap mo ako.
Pagkagaling ko sa Dean’s office kanina, nakita kong kinausap mo si Aljay. Alam kong wala akong karapatan pero hindi ko mapigilang magisip kung anong meron sa inyong dalawa. Tapos wala ka pa sa sarili mo kanina, naisip ko tuloy baka iniisip mo si Aljay. Nabad-trip ako nang sobra-sobra.
Kaya ako nagpaulan para matauhan ako. Para maisip ko na wala akong karapatang kuwestyunin kung anong meron sa inyo ni Aljay at lalong wala akong karapatang magselos. Pero nakita mo akong nagpapaulan. Habang nagsasalita ka, gusto kong maniwalang nag-aalala ka para sakin. Gusto kong maniwala na kahit kaunti, may gusto ka na rin sakin.
“Lemuel! Telepono!”
“Ma, please don’t call me by my first name. Alam mo naman pong ayoko ng “Lemuel” eh.”
“Well, I like your name so I’ll call you by that, okay?”
“Hay, ano pa nga po bang magagawa ko? Sino po palang nasa telepono?”
“Jae… Jae something.”
“Jaelyn?”
“Yes! Exactly hijo, Jaelyn!”
Si Jaelyn… tumawag? Bakit?
“Hello, si Lem na to.”
“Hey Lem.”
[quote][i]--off topic--
ei ate mizel, lemuel ang whole first name ni lem. ahaha...
gawa n tau ng bgo:
Jaelyn+Lem=Jaelem
Jaelyn+Lemuel=Jaeuel ("Jay-wel")
Jaelyn+Lemuel=Lynuel ("Lyn-wel")[/i][/quote]
Last edited by eclipse_twins (2008-05-05 23:09:19)
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- `mizeL
- » FTalkWhiz
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- 1969-12-31
Re: [quote]**i got inspired by ate kim kaya i had my story here... wala lang just to share...**[/quote] [align=center][b]"Night Walks"[/b][/align] [i]it's funny how everything started. i didn't even had
hahahahah! sabi ko na nga ba lemuel xa e!
wooo! tumawag si jae!!! tameme mode!!!! hahahahaa ang cute naman!!!!
mas gusto ko yung lynuel... hahahaha 
shucksss 
LOL
toinks, cge cge. good luck sa mga SG meetings mo sis .gif)
basta wak mo ring kalimutan na mag update dito. weeeeee ^^
wooo! tumawag si jae!!! tameme mode!!!! hahahahaa ang cute naman!!!!
mas gusto ko yung lynuel... hahahaha shucksss LOL
toinks, cge cge. good luck sa mga SG meetings mo sis basta wak mo ring kalimutan na mag update dito. weeeeee ^^
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- sHy19
- » FTalkAgent
- 2012
- 0
- 1969-12-31
Re: [quote]**i got inspired by ate kim kaya i had my story here... wala lang just to share...**[/quote] [align=center][b]"Night Walks"[/b][/align] [i]it's funny how everything started. i didn't even had
aww xi***opao
i had the goosebumps...
[sub](nrramdaman q pla un )[/sub]
waaah nmn..bitin
nwei., il b waitng for the update
i had the goosebumps...
[sub](nrramdaman q pla un )[/sub]
waaah nmn..bitin
nwei., il b waitng for the update
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- 3fuuji3
- » FTalker
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- 1969-12-31
Re: [quote]**i got inspired by ate kim kaya i had my story here... wala lang just to share...**[/quote] [align=center][b]"Night Walks"[/b][/align] [i]it's funny how everything started. i didn't even had
[url=http://www.glitter-graphics.com][img]http://dl10.glitter-graphics.net/pub/369/369220a3hjk9pcg9.gif[/img][/url][i]kaka nwub... naks naman update pa plsssssssssss miz kath isa pa.....isa pa....isa pa [/i]
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- valentined28
- » n00b
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- 1969-12-31
Re: [quote]**i got inspired by ate kim kaya i had my story here... wala lang just to share...**[/quote] [align=center][b]"Night Walks"[/b][/align] [i]it's funny how everything started. i didn't even had
maganda si Jaelyn. hahaha. 
grabe. nabitin ako dun. hahaha.
malapit na ako matunaw. next na. go go go! hahaha.
grabe. nabitin ako dun. hahaha.
malapit na ako matunaw. next na. go go go! hahaha.
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- mS'aLline
- » FTalkGeek
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- 1969-12-31
Re: [quote]**i got inspired by ate kim kaya i had my story here... wala lang just to share...**[/quote] [align=center][b]"Night Walks"[/b][/align] [i]it's funny how everything started. i didn't even had
bitin!..
hehehe.,
nice story..
ill be waiting for the update..
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- angel_in_tears08
- » FTalker
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- 1969-12-31
Re: [quote]**i got inspired by ate kim kaya i had my story here... wala lang just to share...**[/quote] [align=center][b]"Night Walks"[/b][/align] [i]it's funny how everything started. i didn't even had
wow.... kyut niya talaga
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- pinkblack08
- » FTalkWhiz
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- 1969-12-31
Re: [quote]**i got inspired by ate kim kaya i had my story here... wala lang just to share...**[/quote] [align=center][b]"Night Walks"[/b][/align] [i]it's funny how everything started. i didn't even had
ay grabe kakilig naman ito!dent yo death ang lula mo!haay..ano nga bang meron sknya?haha
hay... mangligaw ka na lemuel!ahaha
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- khuleht
- » FTalkManiac
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- 1969-12-31
Re: [quote]**i got inspired by ate kim kaya i had my story here... wala lang just to share...**[/quote] [align=center][b]"Night Walks"[/b][/align] [i]it's funny how everything started. i didn't even had
weeee. an sweeet..
im waiting for the next chap!
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- meng.o3
- » FTalkElite
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- 1969-12-31
Re: [quote]**i got inspired by ate kim kaya i had my story here... wala lang just to share...**[/quote] [align=center][b]"Night Walks"[/b][/align] [i]it's funny how everything started. i didn't even had
wrong send. rong snd. Gamit na gamit! haha.. i know lots of people use that excuse ehem ehem ehem,. hahaha sino kaya unnnnn?
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- *kim-a-holic
- » FTalkGeek
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- 1969-12-31
Re: [quote]**i got inspired by ate kim kaya i had my story here... wala lang just to share...**[/quote] [align=center][b]"Night Walks"[/b][/align] [i]it's funny how everything started. i didn't even had
Style ni Jaelyn bulok! Hahahaha. Iyan ang mga style ng mga high sa shabuuu. LOL.
Ba't kaya tumawag si Jaellyyyyynn? Wag mong sabihin.. wrong number? LOL.
Ba't kaya tumawag si Jaellyyyyynn? Wag mong sabihin.. wrong number? LOL.
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- cutiegal
- » FTalkManiac
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- 1969-12-31
Re: [quote]**i got inspired by ate kim kaya i had my story here... wala lang just to share...**[/quote] [align=center][b]"Night Walks"[/b][/align] [i]it's funny how everything started. i didn't even had
grabe this story is good..i like it kaya nga gustong-gusto kong binabasa to eh..nakakabitin pero ayos lng ganda pa rin...ano kaya sasabihin ni jaelyn kay 'lemuel'..hahahahaha
take note:marami na dito ang nagtatagalog ahhh di na english kasi taglish ung story eh pero ayos lng..hahaha
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- misscuppycake
- » FTalkManiac
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- 1969-12-31
Re: [quote]**i got inspired by ate kim kaya i had my story here... wala lang just to share...**[/quote] [align=center][b]"Night Walks"[/b][/align] [i]it's funny how everything started. i didn't even had
haha. hanep. wrong send daw? minsan gnyan aku.
nwei, nice talaga ung story.
*waitng*
minsan gnyan aku.
nwei, nice talaga ung story.
*waitng*
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- eclipse_twins
- » FTalkAddict
- 553
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- 1969-12-31
Re: [quote]**i got inspired by ate kim kaya i had my story here... wala lang just to share...**[/quote] [align=center][b]"Night Walks"[/b][/align] [i]it's funny how everything started. i didn't even had
[u][i][b]Chapter 7[/b][/i][/u]
~Part2~
--Continuation of Lem’s POV--
This voice. Is this really her? Is it really Jae? Parang it’s too good to be true.
Kalma lang Lem. Wag mong parinig na kinakabahan ka. Dapat hindi mahalata sa boses mo na nagulat ka.
“J… Jae?”
“Gotcha! Haha”
“No way! Cloud!”
“Haha… I really got you by that, right? Hay naku Lem!”
“Cloud, never do that to me. Ikaw talaga.”
Eto talagang si Cloud. Nayari pa ako. Although bestfriend siya ni Jaelyn and she could easily blurt out my secrets to her, tinago niya lang yun. Tinago niya lahat, lalo na yung pinakamahalagang sikreto ko, na gusto ko na si Jae. Siguro nakuha ko na rin yung tiwala niya. Ilang taon na rin kasi kaming magkaklase at madalas seatmates kami, just like now.
“Okay fine, I’m sorry. I just called kasi pinakiusapan ako ni Jae.”
“Pinakiusapan? Bakit? Why not let her call me?”
“Ehem ehem. Why? Well, that’s a secret. Friends tayo but my loyalty still remains to Jae. Anyway, it’s about our project in Christian living, the documentary.”
“Ah okay.”
“She asked kung pwede bang yung video cam ninyo yung gamitin.”
“Sure. Walang problema.”
“Dalhin mo sa Saturday, start na tayo. 8a.m. sa bahay nina Jae, planning muna then ready to action na.”
“Okay, I’ll be there. Yun lang ba?”
“And uhm… ano pa ba? Ah, oo nga pala, Jae said take care of yourself. Wag ka daw magkakasakit.”
“Are you playing with me again? Why would she say that?”
“Kung ayaw mo maniwala, di wag. Kasi naman noh kapag nagkasakit ka wala kaming video cam and mababawasan yung grade mo sa member participation. You know Jae hates it nang mataas yung grade niya tapos yung members niya mababa.”
“Ah, yun lang pala yun.”
“You were expecting more, weren’t you? Haha… couldn’t blame you. Sige, bye.”
“Thanks Cloud. Bye.”
Sa Saturday, ano kayang mangyayari?
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