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[quote]Okie okie. I'm so overwhelmed that a lot of you read my first story, "night walks" so i decided to write another story. In one my commentsz sa" night walks", i told ate mizel na i would be put
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[quote]Okie okie. I'm so overwhelmed that a lot of you read my first story, "night walks" so i decided to write another story. In one my commentsz sa" night walks", i told ate mizel na i would be put
[quote]Okie okie. I'm so overwhelmed that a lot of you read my first story, "night walks" so i decided to write another story.
In one my commentsz sa" night walks", i told ate mizel na i would be putting aljay lim in the lime light soon.
Well guess what? Dahil napansin ko na kahit hindi siya ang bida in that story, ay nagustuhan ninyo siya, i am giving him the chance to be in my second story.
I don't necessarily require you to read "night walks" before reading this, but it'll help if you do... xe mas maiintindihan ninyo yung story na to.
this time, let me introduce you to my second story...[/quote]
[i]A story of martyrdom
A tale of secrets
A girl desperate for existence in his life
A guy numb for emotions
Another guy patiently waiting
This is a Deviant Love[/i]
[u][i][b]Chapter 1[/b][/i][/u]
OMG naman oh. It hurts kaya. Hmph, bakit kasi eto pang si Aljay yung nagustuhan ko. Yes, Aljay Lim. He’s the basketball star of our batch. He’s also intelligent. Guess what his best subject is? It’s actually Math. Honestly speaking, ang halimaw nito eh! Pati final exams around 2-3 mistakes lang. Kumusta ka naman diyan di ba? Partida, yung mali niya dun din na niya sinagutan, kasi naman tinatamad daw siya. Ang hangin di ba? Ewan ko nga bakit nagustuhan ko siya eh.
Back to what hurts. Nasasaktan ako kasi feeling ko mahal niya pa rin ang best friend ko, si Jae. Well, si Jae, ang “Miss SG” namin. Currently taken na siya ng school heartthrob na si Lem. Ilang months na rin simula ng incident kung saan nalaman ni Aljay na si Lem ang mahal ni Jae. I think his mind knows it but his heart is not yet ready to accept it. I like Aljay pero di niya alam yun, at natatakot akong ipaalam kasi baka masaktan lang ako.
By the way, ako si Nikz. Nikki Saldivar. I’m a talker. Correction, I’m a talker, but never a nagger, gets? Hmm… I won’t say I’m intelligent pero medyo na rin. At least I’m an above average student in terms of grades.
“Nikki! No Day dreaming!”
“Ouch. Sorry po.”
Nagtawanan yung klase. Did I mention I’m a day dreamer too? Yeah, now you know.
Maya-maya may note nang pinasa sakin.
Naman Nikz! Halos bawat subject na tatawag yung attention mo ah. Focus girl! Si Aljay na naman yan noh!
-Jae
My best friend knows me too much.
*Riiing*
Hay salamat. Lunch na. Eto lang paborito ko sa school eh. Break time. Haha… Jae, Cloud and I sat with the usual spot sa canteen. Dun kami lagi umuupo, at alam yun ng buong campus. Para ngang may label na “reserved” dun eh, kasi simula first year, dun na kami nakaupo.
“Naman, girls… Di man lang ako mapansin ni crush oh. Kasi naman ‘siya’ pa rin yung gusto niya. Da hell”
I was actually referring to Miss SG here. And they know that then I say “crush”, it’s Aljay.
“Hey, hey, hey. It’s not my fault I’m more beautiful than you. Haha…”
Lokaret talaga tong Miss SG na to. Hmph, buti na lang friends tayo.
Maya-maya umupo si Arvhin at Dale sa table namin. Arvhin and Dale are our friends. This year lang namin sila naging ka-close.
Si Dale, uber chick boy at uber talino, pero uber tamad din. Haha… Si Arvhin, ang resident mathematician namin at star player sa badminton. Best friend siya ni crush. O diba? Magbest friend, pareho magaling sa Math at pareho star player.
Then, sumingit na rin ang isang loka.
“Girl, gusto mo ba talaga mapansin ni crush mo?”
“Of course naman noh!”
“Well, consider your wish granted, I have a plan!”
Ano kayang plano nitong loka?
“Ano naman yun Cloud?”
“You’ll see… basta maki-ride ka lang!”
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- meng.o3
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Re: [quote]Okie okie. I'm so overwhelmed that a lot of you read my first story, "night walks" so i decided to write another story. In one my commentsz sa" night walks", i told ate mizel na i would be put
weeee.... parang night walks pa din.. ansaya saya.. Book 2? o Season 2? hehehehe..
Aljay.. aljay.. gusto ko na sya makita... yaaaaaa...
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- DweaIsMe
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Re: [quote]Okie okie. I'm so overwhelmed that a lot of you read my first story, "night walks" so i decided to write another story. In one my commentsz sa" night walks", i told ate mizel na i would be put
ganda ng story.!
-when ang next chapter?
[hindi kita minamadali...nagtatanong lang..hehe]
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- xxBUBBLiExx
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Re: [quote]Okie okie. I'm so overwhelmed that a lot of you read my first story, "night walks" so i decided to write another story. In one my commentsz sa" night walks", i told ate mizel na i would be put
wahaa.. naks. Si Aljay, basketball star pala.. tsktsk..
i'll wait for the next update.. 
i'll wait for the next update..
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- pinkblack08
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Re: [quote]Okie okie. I'm so overwhelmed that a lot of you read my first story, "night walks" so i decided to write another story. In one my commentsz sa" night walks", i told ate mizel na i would be put
wow!!excited na aq!!ahha
pag tapos na 2ng story,life naman ni Cloud ha!or pwede ring life ni Aljay!ahaha lol
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- jhayyuliajay
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Re: [quote]Okie okie. I'm so overwhelmed that a lot of you read my first story, "night walks" so i decided to write another story. In one my commentsz sa" night walks", i told ate mizel na i would be put
part 2 nang night walks...hihi...sure maganda to...haha...ito ung nakapost sa ending ng night walks diba...haha...keep it coming!
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- alphatama
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Re: [quote]Okie okie. I'm so overwhelmed that a lot of you read my first story, "night walks" so i decided to write another story. In one my commentsz sa" night walks", i told ate mizel na i would be put
Ang ganda. Woooo 
. Matatalino at All-star ang mga bida aa. Hehehe! Next na po.
. Matatalino at All-star ang mga bida aa. Hehehe! Next na po.
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- ---mad4u---
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Re: [quote]Okie okie. I'm so overwhelmed that a lot of you read my first story, "night walks" so i decided to write another story. In one my commentsz sa" night walks", i told ate mizel na i would be put
wooooooooooooooa! love this :]
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- maree12
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Re: [quote]Okie okie. I'm so overwhelmed that a lot of you read my first story, "night walks" so i decided to write another story. In one my commentsz sa" night walks", i told ate mizel na i would be put
another amazing story ulit.
mas maganda kasi season 2 na.
hahah.
parehas pala kami ni nikz. .
daydreamer. haha.
but not usually during class.
sana naman sipagin ako gumawa ng
story. nakakatamad mag-type eh. haha.
well, update na.
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- MiNEKOARCH
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Re: [quote]Okie okie. I'm so overwhelmed that a lot of you read my first story, "night walks" so i decided to write another story. In one my commentsz sa" night walks", i told ate mizel na i would be put
wow. is this the `part 2 ' ng night walks? nasa POV naman ni nikki. lol. 
im sure maganda na naman tong story na 2.. i cant wait for the next chapter! 
im sure maganda na naman tong story na 2.. i cant wait for the next chapter!
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- eclipse_twins
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Re: [quote]Okie okie. I'm so overwhelmed that a lot of you read my first story, "night walks" so i decided to write another story. In one my commentsz sa" night walks", i told ate mizel na i would be put
[quote]@ ate meng: ahaha, malapit na si Aljay... chapter 3
@ dweaisme: tnx. e2 nxt chap oh... di naman aq nagmamadali haha
@ xxbubbliexx: yup.. the one and only aljay, a basket ball star
@ pinkblack08: ahaha, cge cge...
@ jhayyuliajay: oo ito un, naku... part 2 nga, pero sa side naman nina Nikz
@ alphatama: ahaha, ganun... super praise sa characters ah...
@ ---mad4u---: ahehe, tnx
@ maree12: bnabasa m na rin pla 2... hehe, g0! ichecheer kita para ganahan ka magsulat ng story
@ minekoarch: i hope ma-reach ko yung expectatins nu towards this story
--excuse the typos... nagtetxt xe aq while typing this chap haha... multi-tasking di ba? [/quote]
[u][i][b]Chapter 2[/b][/i][/u]
Ano bang plano ang sinasabi ni Cloud? Naman tong gurlaloo na to. Pa-suspense pa… pero in fairness, na-excite naman talaga ako. Haha…
Recently, this campus had been lover’s lane already. Their favorite date? 18. Ewan sa kanila basta halos lahat ng mag-on dito 18 ang monthsary.
“18, 18, 18! Why does this school have so much couples? As if naman magtatagal. For sure 80% sa mga mag-on, wala pang 5 months break na..!”
I was talking with Cloud and Arvhin.
“Girl, ang bitter mo diyan palibhasa NBSB ka diyan.”
“No, I’m not. Ok, fine, NBSB ako pero anu naman?”
“Nikz, you sound defensive.”
“Pati ba naman ikaw Arvhin? Gaaa… No I’m not trying to be defensive, pero yun talaga yung totoo. Wanna bet?”
I wasn’t expecting na pati si Arvhin makikigatong na rin kasi most of the time he’s on my side. Among my friends, sa kanya talaga ako nag-o-open ng tungkol kay Aljay, kahit na alam kong best friend niya si crush. Di naman niya kasi ako nilalaglag.
“Hay naku Nikz, pero kung si Aljay siguro ayos lang maki-18 ka along with the lovers here.”
Yes. The answer is most definitely yes, but I didn’t want to say that because admitting it would be admitting defeat as well.
Several days after, hindi pa rin naisakatuparan ang plano ni Cloud. Eto lunch na, at eto na naman ang angal session ko kay Arvhin.
“Ano bang type ng best friend mo at bakit ganyan siya? I exist naman to a lot of people, but not to him?!”
“Are you asking physically o sa personality?”
“Both!”
“Physically, mahilig siya sa babaeng sexy. Gusto niya ng curves, di masyado sa face.”
“Ouch naman! Bakit may butt naman ako ah! Wala nga lang bust! May gesh… pwede bang sa mukha na lang siya tumingin? Asus, maganda naman ako eh.”
No I wasn’t kidding. Ganyan ako ka-open sa kanya. And I’m serious, a lot of people compliment me for my pretty face, yun nga lng I wasn’t granted the curves.
“Ahaha, Nikz… I wish you would feel that there are people na naaappreciate yung ganda mo. Hindi man si Aljay, but there will definitely be someone.”
“Okay, so sablay na ako sa physical. He’s a body-person. How about sa personality?”
“Well Aljay likes bubbly girls na nakarelate sa sports. Gusto niya may sense kausap. Uhmm, and yung humorous, to the extent na pwede siya makapag-share ng green jokes.”
“Bubbly. May sense kausap. Okay ako dun. Sports. Nope. Green jokes. Nope. 2 out of 4. Ai may gesh talaga oh!” Ayaw kami pagsamahin!”
“That’s not for you to decide. A person who loves sees something that others could not. Kung siya nga yung para sa’yo, makikita niya ang assets mo at tatanggapin niya yung flaws mo.”
“Ah basta. Lam mo Arvhin, hinding hindi ako magbabago para sa lalaki! Naniniwala ako sa sinabi mo. Dapat tanggapin niya ako. If he doesn’t, then he doesn’t deserve me! Duh! Ni hindi ako magpaparetoke o magpapadagdag ng dibdib for him noh! Over my dead body!”
“Ahaha… That’s what I like about you Nikz, you make me laugh and you’re damn cute.”
I wish Aljay is as understanding as Arvhin.
I hope Aljay sees me as Arvhin does.
I hope Aljay will learn to appreciate me like Arvhin had.
[/quote]
[u][i][b]Chapter 2[/b][/i][/u]
Ano bang plano ang sinasabi ni Cloud? Naman tong gurlaloo na to. Pa-suspense pa… pero in fairness, na-excite naman talaga ako. Haha…
Recently, this campus had been lover’s lane already. Their favorite date? 18. Ewan sa kanila basta halos lahat ng mag-on dito 18 ang monthsary.
“18, 18, 18! Why does this school have so much couples? As if naman magtatagal. For sure 80% sa mga mag-on, wala pang 5 months break na..!”
I was talking with Cloud and Arvhin.
“Girl, ang bitter mo diyan palibhasa NBSB ka diyan.”
“No, I’m not. Ok, fine, NBSB ako pero anu naman?”
“Nikz, you sound defensive.”
“Pati ba naman ikaw Arvhin? Gaaa… No I’m not trying to be defensive, pero yun talaga yung totoo. Wanna bet?”
I wasn’t expecting na pati si Arvhin makikigatong na rin kasi most of the time he’s on my side. Among my friends, sa kanya talaga ako nag-o-open ng tungkol kay Aljay, kahit na alam kong best friend niya si crush. Di naman niya kasi ako nilalaglag.
“Hay naku Nikz, pero kung si Aljay siguro ayos lang maki-18 ka along with the lovers here.”
Yes. The answer is most definitely yes, but I didn’t want to say that because admitting it would be admitting defeat as well.
Several days after, hindi pa rin naisakatuparan ang plano ni Cloud. Eto lunch na, at eto na naman ang angal session ko kay Arvhin.
“Ano bang type ng best friend mo at bakit ganyan siya? I exist naman to a lot of people, but not to him?!”
“Are you asking physically o sa personality?”
“Both!”
“Physically, mahilig siya sa babaeng sexy. Gusto niya ng curves, di masyado sa face.”
“Ouch naman! Bakit may butt naman ako ah! Wala nga lang bust! May gesh… pwede bang sa mukha na lang siya tumingin? Asus, maganda naman ako eh.”
No I wasn’t kidding. Ganyan ako ka-open sa kanya. And I’m serious, a lot of people compliment me for my pretty face, yun nga lng I wasn’t granted the curves.
“Ahaha, Nikz… I wish you would feel that there are people na naaappreciate yung ganda mo. Hindi man si Aljay, but there will definitely be someone.”
“Okay, so sablay na ako sa physical. He’s a body-person. How about sa personality?”
“Well Aljay likes bubbly girls na nakarelate sa sports. Gusto niya may sense kausap. Uhmm, and yung humorous, to the extent na pwede siya makapag-share ng green jokes.”
“Bubbly. May sense kausap. Okay ako dun. Sports. Nope. Green jokes. Nope. 2 out of 4. Ai may gesh talaga oh!” Ayaw kami pagsamahin!”
“That’s not for you to decide. A person who loves sees something that others could not. Kung siya nga yung para sa’yo, makikita niya ang assets mo at tatanggapin niya yung flaws mo.”
“Ah basta. Lam mo Arvhin, hinding hindi ako magbabago para sa lalaki! Naniniwala ako sa sinabi mo. Dapat tanggapin niya ako. If he doesn’t, then he doesn’t deserve me! Duh! Ni hindi ako magpaparetoke o magpapadagdag ng dibdib for him noh! Over my dead body!”
“Ahaha… That’s what I like about you Nikz, you make me laugh and you’re damn cute.”
I wish Aljay is as understanding as Arvhin.
I hope Aljay sees me as Arvhin does.
I hope Aljay will learn to appreciate me like Arvhin had.
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- meng.o3
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Re: [quote]Okie okie. I'm so overwhelmed that a lot of you read my first story, "night walks" so i decided to write another story. In one my commentsz sa" night walks", i told ate mizel na i would be put
i hope she loves arvhin the way she loves aljhay.
haha.. kay arvhin na ko ngaun..lulz
bat ganun nu.. mas napapalapit ang loob ng reader sa supporting actor.. haha
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- alphatama
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Re: [quote]Okie okie. I'm so overwhelmed that a lot of you read my first story, "night walks" so i decided to write another story. In one my commentsz sa" night walks", i told ate mizel na i would be put
Wow. Hahaha! Si Arvhin pasimple. Wooooo. I go for the [b]Green Jokes[/b]. Hahaha! Ma-[i]anu[/i] pala si Aljay aa. Wahaha Next na kagad.
Next na kagad.
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- ---mad4u---
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Re: [quote]Okie okie. I'm so overwhelmed that a lot of you read my first story, "night walks" so i decided to write another story. In one my commentsz sa" night walks", i told ate mizel na i would be put
hahaahaha. kai arvhin akoo.. weeeeeeeeeeee
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- jhayyuliajay
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Re: [quote]Okie okie. I'm so overwhelmed that a lot of you read my first story, "night walks" so i decided to write another story. In one my commentsz sa" night walks", i told ate mizel na i would be put
haha...bakit d nalalng siya kay arvhin nagkagusto?haha:lol:
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- MiNEKOARCH
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Re: [quote]Okie okie. I'm so overwhelmed that a lot of you read my first story, "night walks" so i decided to write another story. In one my commentsz sa" night walks", i told ate mizel na i would be put
wow. hahahaha aljay and arvhin. chuba. nice chappie sis eclipse.. naka naman.. NIKZ + ARVHIN!!
next naaaaaaaa.. nae-excite na ko..
aljay and arvhin. chuba. nice chappie sis eclipse.. naka naman.. NIKZ + ARVHIN!!
next naaaaaaaa.. nae-excite na ko..
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- maree12
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Re: [quote]Okie okie. I'm so overwhelmed that a lot of you read my first story, "night walks" so i decided to write another story. In one my commentsz sa" night walks", i told ate mizel na i would be put
hay nako nikz. ayan naman si
Arvhin oh. di pa ba halata sayo na may
gusto siya sayo?
haha. inunahan yung author. .
kapag natapos ko yung sinusulat ko na story,
magpopost talaga ako dito.gusto ko kasi kumpleto
na yung story para madali na lang.haha.
waiting and 
for the update..gif)
Last edited by maree12 (2008-05-23 05:22:23)
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- 3fuuji3
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Re: [quote]Okie okie. I'm so overwhelmed that a lot of you read my first story, "night walks" so i decided to write another story. In one my commentsz sa" night walks", i told ate mizel na i would be put
[i]woooh na late ako 
sa chapie 1 wehehehe
btw hmmm ganda miZ kaTe hehehe more more more hehehe
like it! book 2 by kate hehehe [/i]
sa chapie 1 wehehehe
btw hmmm ganda miZ kaTe hehehe more more more hehehe
like it! book 2 by kate hehehe [/i]
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- angel_in_tears08
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Re: [quote]Okie okie. I'm so overwhelmed that a lot of you read my first story, "night walks" so i decided to write another story. In one my commentsz sa" night walks", i told ate mizel na i would be put
mas ok ata si arvhin wah...
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- MiNEKOARCH
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Re: [quote]Okie okie. I'm so overwhelmed that a lot of you read my first story, "night walks" so i decided to write another story. In one my commentsz sa" night walks", i told ate mizel na i would be put
this is the part 2, nikki's version. lols. update na sis eclipse..
update na sis eclipse..
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