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[quote]Okie okie. I'm so overwhelmed that a lot of you read my first story, "night walks" so i decided to write another story. In one my commentsz sa" night walks", i told ate mizel na i would be put
#101 2008-06-22 03:10:28
- azaliah
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Re: [quote]Okie okie. I'm so overwhelmed that a lot of you read my first story, "night walks" so i decided to write another story. In one my commentsz sa" night walks", i told ate mizel na i would be put
more pa pOh next post 
you always leave us hangin hehe
nice story pOh 
you always leave us hangin hehe
nice story pOh
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#102 2008-06-22 03:31:41
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Re: [quote]Okie okie. I'm so overwhelmed that a lot of you read my first story, "night walks" so i decided to write another story. In one my commentsz sa" night walks", i told ate mizel na i would be put
[align=center][quote]@ cutie phunk: efektiv? cguro nga haha...
@ fairy delights: cgeh, na-send q na. and yeah, secret lng ntin yung pm m, okie? 
@ xxbubbliexx: ate, na-approve q n friend request m. kw pla yun, kla q kng cnu. na-recognize q lng primary m eh haha...
@ lady_end: haha, sakto reaction m, e2ng nxt chap ung sagot sa reaction m.
@ azaliah: of corz, bitin... so that you'll crave 4 more... haha... gnyan kming mga author d2 s ftalk lit. sec. haha
-- ayan, update ulit. cnisipag ako xe wlang mgwa eh. plibhasa, bmabagyo, cnisipon tska nlalagnat aq. pgtiyagaan nu muna 2ng 2 chaps okie? geh, tC... wag magkakasakit! --[/quote]
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[u][i][b]Chapter 12[/b][/i][/u]
Around 2 months na rin kaming nagpapanggap ni Arvhin and slowly, we became an item na rin sa campus. Sa 2 months na yun, medyo iwas na si Aljay sakin.
Nikz, hey girl, na-ospital daw si Aljay ah.
-Jaelyn
Yan ang bumulaga sa uamaga ko. Hay naku, late na akong pumasok at nakita ko na lang yang note ni Jae sa table ko. Gaaa� bakit naman ganito?! Ang sama naman!
---Last night---
[i]*buzz*[/i]
[i]smasher_lardizabal: hi bhe
nikz.s.not.dt.kinda.grl: eow vhin
smasher_lardizabal: msta nman araw m?
nikz.s.not.dt.kinda.grl: aus lng� mutik sumemplang s bike haha
smasher_lardizabal: magingat k nman. Bka kng anung mngyri sau
nikz.s.not.dt.kinda.grl: aww� tnx s concern
smasher_lardizabal: btw, mlpit n mag-18 ah
nikz.s.not.dt.kinda.grl: yeah�
smasher_lardizabal: nu plano m?
nikz.s.not.dt.kinda.grl: wla p nman
nikz.s.not.dt.kinda.grl: itz not lyk may sumthing s araw n un db?
smasher_lardizabal: T_T
nikz.s.not.dt.kinda.grl: oh gosh. sori, yeah, 18 i 4got
smasher_lardizabal: no itz ok
nikz.s.not.dt.kinda.grl: cneseryoso m n b ung plano n un? db knwari lng nman un? pra lng mgselos c a.
smasher_lardizabal: probably
nikz.s.not.dt.kinda.grl: probably what?
smasher_lardizabal: wla.
nikz.s.not.dt.kinda.grl: d nga?
smasher_lardizabal: wla nga
nikz.s.not.dt.kinda.grl: ai, geh, bkas xnhin m sakin un ah, nid 2 sign out na, mom�s calling me
smasher_lardizabal: bye
nikz.s.not.dt.kinda.grl: bye[/i]
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Mukhang sineseryoso na ni Arvhin yung pagpapaselos. Wag naman sana. I printed our ym conversation kagabi, just to let Cloud read it. Hindi nga ako masyado nakatulog dahil dito eh. Kainis. Tapos eto naman ngayon, pambungad ng araw ko, na-late na ako then malalaman ko na si Aljay nasa ospital. Ano pang mangyayari? Pakibato na lang sakin lahat ng mga ayokong mangyari ha! Bwiset.
�Nicole, Bola!�
*Boogsh* Binato nga ako.
�Ouch. Gawdd. Loko ka Dale�
�Tae, anong nangyayari sa�yo? Kasalanan ko bang di ka tumitingin? Eh gusto mo ata sumunod kay Aljay sa ospital eh!�
[u][i][b]Chapter 13[/b][/i][/u]
Ang sakit matamaan ng bola sa mukha. Gym Class na namin. It�s the last period of the day and so far, buong araw akong wala sa sarili. Sa Laboratory nga kanina, ipanghihilamos ko pa yung Chloroform sa mukha ko eh. Buti nakita nung isang member namin, napigilanm ako, Nung Math naman namin, hindi ko man lang ma-apply ang elementary algebra sa geometry. Kumusta naman ang buhay ko di ba?
Dale helped me up. Mapahiga ka ba naman dahil tinamaan ka sa mukha ng bola. Ayun, pumunta kami ng clinic para sa ice pack. Pagkapunta naming clinic, sakto nag-bell na. Buti naman, hindi na ako mahihirapan. Uwian na.
Umuwi muna ako sa bahay to prepare some stuff tapos pumnta na ako sa ospital kung saan naka-confine si Aljay. Ang usapan ng barkada dun na lang daw magkita-kita.
3rd floor. Room 87. Room 87. Room 87. Eto na.
I knocked and then a woman came out. Kamukha siya ni Aljay kaya ang hula ko mama niya yun.
�Good afternoon po. Uhmm��
�Ah pasok ka hija, Aljay, may bisita ka.�
Pumasok ako and when his mother asked me to sit down, tsaka lang ako umupo sa sofa malapit sa hinihigaan ni Aljay.
�Hey. Di pa ba dumarating yung iba?�
�Hindi pa. Una kang dumating.�
�Oh. Ganun ba. Anyway, eto oh.�
I handed him a plastic container. It�s weird for a guy pero mahilig siya sa home-made cookies. Buti na lang may natira pa sa mga na-bake ko last night. Nilagay ka lang yun sa plastic container tapos design ng unti sa packaging. (Buti na lang pinag-aralan namin �to sa Entrepreneurship class namin) I was expecting him to say thank you pero nagulat ako sa sinabi niya
�Nikz, is something bothering you?�
�Huh? What do you mean?�
�Nagbebake ka lang pag sobrang Masaya ka o pag-depress ka. You obviously are not happy at mukhang di ka masyado naktulog. You can tell me kung may problema ka na di mo masbi sa barkada.�
Naman. Bakit alam niya ugali ko? Bakit sakto yung sinabi niya? Arghh� asar
�Ano ka ba. Trip ko lang mag-bake kagabi kasi hindi ako makatulog.�
I knew he wasn�t satisfied pero hindi na lang siya nag-react.
Lumabas muna yung mom ni Aljay, leaving the two of us there in the room. Nag-switch topic agad siya para mapasaya siguro ako at he manage to be successful. Kahit papaano, napagaan niya yung loob ko.
[b]Aljay�s POV[/b]
Alam kong malungkot si Nikz kahit hindi niya aminin. Halatang-halata naman eh. I know her too well. Tsaka nakalimutan niya ata na Psychologist ang ate ko kaya alam ko kung nagsisinungaling siya. Sa movement pa lang ng mata niya, nakita ko na di siya nagsasabi ng totoo nung binaggit niya na di lang siya makatulog kaya nag-bake siya.
However, it was also obvious na ayaw niya talagang mag-open up kaya hindi ko na siya pinilit. Nagkwentuhan na lang kaming dalawa at sana, sana napagaan ko yung loob niya.
Nakakatuwa na marinig ko siyang tumawa at makita ko siyang nakangiti.
�Salamat Aljay. Napasaya mo ako ngayon.�
�Wala yon. basta, lagi akong nandito para sa�yo. Tandaan mo yan.�
�Uhmm� Thanks.�
Teka, tama ba yung nakita ko? Nag-blush si Nikz? Ayos yun ah.
After a while, dumating na rin sina Lem, Cloud at Dale. Si Jae, hindi dumating dahil sa SG meeting at si Arvhin naman dahil sa Badminton practice.
Kwentuhan session lang tapos umuwi na rin sila.
When they left, I saw something on the sofa� Naiwan siguro... Sa pwesto ng inupuan ni Cloud.
@ xxbubbliexx: ate, na-approve q n friend request m. kw pla yun, kla q kng cnu. na-recognize q lng primary m eh haha...
@ lady_end: haha, sakto reaction m, e2ng nxt chap ung sagot sa reaction m.
@ azaliah: of corz, bitin... so that you'll crave 4 more... haha... gnyan kming mga author d2 s ftalk lit. sec. haha
-- ayan, update ulit. cnisipag ako xe wlang mgwa eh. plibhasa, bmabagyo, cnisipon tska nlalagnat aq. pgtiyagaan nu muna 2ng 2 chaps okie? geh, tC... wag magkakasakit! --[/quote]
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[u][i][b]Chapter 12[/b][/i][/u]
Around 2 months na rin kaming nagpapanggap ni Arvhin and slowly, we became an item na rin sa campus. Sa 2 months na yun, medyo iwas na si Aljay sakin.
Nikz, hey girl, na-ospital daw si Aljay ah.
-Jaelyn
Yan ang bumulaga sa uamaga ko. Hay naku, late na akong pumasok at nakita ko na lang yang note ni Jae sa table ko. Gaaa� bakit naman ganito?! Ang sama naman!
---Last night---
[i]*buzz*[/i]
[i]smasher_lardizabal: hi bhe
nikz.s.not.dt.kinda.grl: eow vhin
smasher_lardizabal: msta nman araw m?
nikz.s.not.dt.kinda.grl: aus lng� mutik sumemplang s bike haha
smasher_lardizabal: magingat k nman. Bka kng anung mngyri sau
nikz.s.not.dt.kinda.grl: aww� tnx s concern
smasher_lardizabal: btw, mlpit n mag-18 ah
nikz.s.not.dt.kinda.grl: yeah�
smasher_lardizabal: nu plano m?
nikz.s.not.dt.kinda.grl: wla p nman
nikz.s.not.dt.kinda.grl: itz not lyk may sumthing s araw n un db?
smasher_lardizabal: T_T
nikz.s.not.dt.kinda.grl: oh gosh. sori, yeah, 18 i 4got
smasher_lardizabal: no itz ok
nikz.s.not.dt.kinda.grl: cneseryoso m n b ung plano n un? db knwari lng nman un? pra lng mgselos c a.
smasher_lardizabal: probably
nikz.s.not.dt.kinda.grl: probably what?
smasher_lardizabal: wla.
nikz.s.not.dt.kinda.grl: d nga?
smasher_lardizabal: wla nga
nikz.s.not.dt.kinda.grl: ai, geh, bkas xnhin m sakin un ah, nid 2 sign out na, mom�s calling me
smasher_lardizabal: bye
nikz.s.not.dt.kinda.grl: bye[/i]
----
Mukhang sineseryoso na ni Arvhin yung pagpapaselos. Wag naman sana. I printed our ym conversation kagabi, just to let Cloud read it. Hindi nga ako masyado nakatulog dahil dito eh. Kainis. Tapos eto naman ngayon, pambungad ng araw ko, na-late na ako then malalaman ko na si Aljay nasa ospital. Ano pang mangyayari? Pakibato na lang sakin lahat ng mga ayokong mangyari ha! Bwiset.
�Nicole, Bola!�
*Boogsh* Binato nga ako.
�Ouch. Gawdd. Loko ka Dale�
�Tae, anong nangyayari sa�yo? Kasalanan ko bang di ka tumitingin? Eh gusto mo ata sumunod kay Aljay sa ospital eh!�
[u][i][b]Chapter 13[/b][/i][/u]
Ang sakit matamaan ng bola sa mukha. Gym Class na namin. It�s the last period of the day and so far, buong araw akong wala sa sarili. Sa Laboratory nga kanina, ipanghihilamos ko pa yung Chloroform sa mukha ko eh. Buti nakita nung isang member namin, napigilanm ako, Nung Math naman namin, hindi ko man lang ma-apply ang elementary algebra sa geometry. Kumusta naman ang buhay ko di ba?
Dale helped me up. Mapahiga ka ba naman dahil tinamaan ka sa mukha ng bola. Ayun, pumunta kami ng clinic para sa ice pack. Pagkapunta naming clinic, sakto nag-bell na. Buti naman, hindi na ako mahihirapan. Uwian na.
Umuwi muna ako sa bahay to prepare some stuff tapos pumnta na ako sa ospital kung saan naka-confine si Aljay. Ang usapan ng barkada dun na lang daw magkita-kita.
3rd floor. Room 87. Room 87. Room 87. Eto na.
I knocked and then a woman came out. Kamukha siya ni Aljay kaya ang hula ko mama niya yun.
�Good afternoon po. Uhmm��
�Ah pasok ka hija, Aljay, may bisita ka.�
Pumasok ako and when his mother asked me to sit down, tsaka lang ako umupo sa sofa malapit sa hinihigaan ni Aljay.
�Hey. Di pa ba dumarating yung iba?�
�Hindi pa. Una kang dumating.�
�Oh. Ganun ba. Anyway, eto oh.�
I handed him a plastic container. It�s weird for a guy pero mahilig siya sa home-made cookies. Buti na lang may natira pa sa mga na-bake ko last night. Nilagay ka lang yun sa plastic container tapos design ng unti sa packaging. (Buti na lang pinag-aralan namin �to sa Entrepreneurship class namin) I was expecting him to say thank you pero nagulat ako sa sinabi niya
�Nikz, is something bothering you?�
�Huh? What do you mean?�
�Nagbebake ka lang pag sobrang Masaya ka o pag-depress ka. You obviously are not happy at mukhang di ka masyado naktulog. You can tell me kung may problema ka na di mo masbi sa barkada.�
Naman. Bakit alam niya ugali ko? Bakit sakto yung sinabi niya? Arghh� asar
�Ano ka ba. Trip ko lang mag-bake kagabi kasi hindi ako makatulog.�
I knew he wasn�t satisfied pero hindi na lang siya nag-react.
Lumabas muna yung mom ni Aljay, leaving the two of us there in the room. Nag-switch topic agad siya para mapasaya siguro ako at he manage to be successful. Kahit papaano, napagaan niya yung loob ko.
[b]Aljay�s POV[/b]
Alam kong malungkot si Nikz kahit hindi niya aminin. Halatang-halata naman eh. I know her too well. Tsaka nakalimutan niya ata na Psychologist ang ate ko kaya alam ko kung nagsisinungaling siya. Sa movement pa lang ng mata niya, nakita ko na di siya nagsasabi ng totoo nung binaggit niya na di lang siya makatulog kaya nag-bake siya.
However, it was also obvious na ayaw niya talagang mag-open up kaya hindi ko na siya pinilit. Nagkwentuhan na lang kaming dalawa at sana, sana napagaan ko yung loob niya.
Nakakatuwa na marinig ko siyang tumawa at makita ko siyang nakangiti.
�Salamat Aljay. Napasaya mo ako ngayon.�
�Wala yon. basta, lagi akong nandito para sa�yo. Tandaan mo yan.�
�Uhmm� Thanks.�
Teka, tama ba yung nakita ko? Nag-blush si Nikz? Ayos yun ah.
After a while, dumating na rin sina Lem, Cloud at Dale. Si Jae, hindi dumating dahil sa SG meeting at si Arvhin naman dahil sa Badminton practice.
Kwentuhan session lang tapos umuwi na rin sila.
When they left, I saw something on the sofa� Naiwan siguro... Sa pwesto ng inupuan ni Cloud.
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#103 2008-06-22 04:50:12
- Cutie_Phunk
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Re: [quote]Okie okie. I'm so overwhelmed that a lot of you read my first story, "night walks" so i decided to write another story. In one my commentsz sa" night walks", i told ate mizel na i would be put
^OMG!
baka...
un ung prinint
n Nikz!.
naku nmn!
jiji:D...
xana un ngah!
pra malaman nah
n Aljay ang
katotohanan!
jiji:D
update nah pouh!
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#104 2008-06-22 06:24:12
- lady_end
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Re: [quote]Okie okie. I'm so overwhelmed that a lot of you read my first story, "night walks" so i decided to write another story. In one my commentsz sa" night walks", i told ate mizel na i would be put
wat? naiiwan cguwo niyah
yung prinint ni nikz..
tsktsk
patay na..3
ajaja
update na puh
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#105 2008-06-22 06:59:51
- Cutie_Phunk
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Re: [quote]Okie okie. I'm so overwhelmed that a lot of you read my first story, "night walks" so i decided to write another story. In one my commentsz sa" night walks", i told ate mizel na i would be put
uu ngah nmn
pouh!
update nah pouh
sis!
jiji:D
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#106 2008-06-22 08:18:29
- jhayyuliajay
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Re: [quote]Okie okie. I'm so overwhelmed that a lot of you read my first story, "night walks" so i decided to write another story. In one my commentsz sa" night walks", i told ate mizel na i would be put
hala...bistado na cla.prepare for the worst na ang drama nyan.
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#107 2008-06-22 09:05:22
- xxBUBBLiExx
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Re: [quote]Okie okie. I'm so overwhelmed that a lot of you read my first story, "night walks" so i decided to write another story. In one my commentsz sa" night walks", i told ate mizel na i would be put
waah.. kawawa kanaman 
oo nga, baka yung niprint na ym conversation. 
again, i'll wait. amf. nakakaloka na. binabagyo pa
ang saya
oo nga, baka yung niprint na ym conversation.
again, i'll wait. amf. nakakaloka na. binabagyo pa
ang saya
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#108 2008-06-22 09:49:09
- meng.o3
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Re: [quote]Okie okie. I'm so overwhelmed that a lot of you read my first story, "night walks" so i decided to write another story. In one my commentsz sa" night walks", i told ate mizel na i would be put
noooo please not the printed conversation!!!
dapat todo selos muna si aljay!!! 
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#109 2008-06-22 23:18:14
- hazel013
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Re: [quote]Okie okie. I'm so overwhelmed that a lot of you read my first story, "night walks" so i decided to write another story. In one my commentsz sa" night walks", i told ate mizel na i would be put
hala..lagot na,...tsk.tsk. update na!!hehe,.kakaexcite naman 2
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#110 2008-06-23 05:58:44
- maree12
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Re: [quote]Okie okie. I'm so overwhelmed that a lot of you read my first story, "night walks" so i decided to write another story. In one my commentsz sa" night walks", i told ate mizel na i would be put
> i think yung conversation sa ym yun. .
sira ang plano. . hahaha. .
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#111 2008-06-23 06:53:51
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Re: [quote]Okie okie. I'm so overwhelmed that a lot of you read my first story, "night walks" so i decided to write another story. In one my commentsz sa" night walks", i told ate mizel na i would be put
[align=center][b]waaaahhhh..ang ganda-ganda..sa tingin ko rin ung sa ym conversation ni nikki at arvhin un..hahahaha...
uyyy..nag-b;ush si nikki..
ang bilis mag-update!!![/b][/align]
ang bilis mag-update!!![/b][/align]
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#112 2008-06-23 11:34:00
- angel_in_tears08
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Re: [quote]Okie okie. I'm so overwhelmed that a lot of you read my first story, "night walks" so i decided to write another story. In one my commentsz sa" night walks", i told ate mizel na i would be put
wah.... ang tagal ko tong d nabasa.... buti nalang natapos q....
aish bitin pa din.... wahahaha....
anu na kea mangyayari kay nikz? hmmmm
waiting for the nxt chappie...
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#113 2008-06-24 09:17:51
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Re: [quote]Okie okie. I'm so overwhelmed that a lot of you read my first story, "night walks" so i decided to write another story. In one my commentsz sa" night walks", i told ate mizel na i would be put
[align=center][quote]@ lady_end: i'm so sori i couldn't upd8 yet.. s sbado, pramis
@ cutie phunk: ahehe... i lyk ur guess pero ndi q p maa-update 2 ngaun eh keia bitin muna, stand by muna ah
@ jhayyuliajay: oye... sundan ang susunod n kabanata...
@ xxbubbliexx: ahaha, e2 tpos n :thunder: bgyo oh. pero ndi q p maa-update 
@ ate meng: hala... print n b ung ym o hndi pa? xe hula nla nbsa na eh... ndi q 2loi alam cnu susundin q 
@ hazel013: weee, slmat... tska tnx nga pla s bday greeting ah 
@ maree12: o isa k pang ym ang hula... nag-iisa lng c ate meng oh. haha
@ cutiegal: gnun tlga... dpat me blush efek... para cute db?
@ angel_in_tears08: yah, u've bin gone 4 so long. na-miss q nga commentsz m eh. glad ur back[/quote]
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[align=center][quote]--- aun oh. ate meng, pnu b yan? nu na gagawin q? nbsa n b ni aljay o ndi pa? 8 clang ngxbeng bistado na, ikaw ayaw m pa... haha... i dunno what 2 do keia preview nlng muna ha. xncia na... pg-iicpan q munag maigi kng buko n b cla o hndi pa... ---[/quote]
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[quote][b]Chapter 14 -- Preview[/b]
�Hala� Lagot na! Pano na?�
�Eh hindi pa naman natin sure eh.�
�Maski na. What if he finds out? We�re both dead!�
�Relax. Don�t be paranoid.�
�How can I not be? Tatlo tayong mapapahamak dito.�
�You don�t have to be so negative. If ever he was able to read it, he should�ve reacted to me already.�
�Para kasing� betrayal. What we did to him. Parang pinaglaruan natin siya kapag nalaman niya.�
�So you�re giving up?�
�Do you think I should be?�
�Do YOU think you should be?[/quote]
@ cutie phunk: ahehe... i lyk ur guess pero ndi q p maa-update 2 ngaun eh keia bitin muna, stand by muna ah
@ jhayyuliajay: oye... sundan ang susunod n kabanata...
@ xxbubbliexx: ahaha, e2 tpos n :thunder: bgyo oh. pero ndi q p maa-update
@ ate meng: hala... print n b ung ym o hndi pa? xe hula nla nbsa na eh... ndi q 2loi alam cnu susundin q
@ hazel013: weee, slmat... tska tnx nga pla s bday greeting ah
@ maree12: o isa k pang ym ang hula... nag-iisa lng c ate meng oh. haha
@ cutiegal: gnun tlga... dpat me blush efek... para cute db?
@ angel_in_tears08: yah, u've bin gone 4 so long. na-miss q nga commentsz m eh. glad ur back[/quote]
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[align=center][quote]--- aun oh. ate meng, pnu b yan? nu na gagawin q? nbsa n b ni aljay o ndi pa? 8 clang ngxbeng bistado na, ikaw ayaw m pa... haha... i dunno what 2 do keia preview nlng muna ha. xncia na... pg-iicpan q munag maigi kng buko n b cla o hndi pa... ---[/quote]
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[quote][b]Chapter 14 -- Preview[/b]
�Hala� Lagot na! Pano na?�
�Eh hindi pa naman natin sure eh.�
�Maski na. What if he finds out? We�re both dead!�
�Relax. Don�t be paranoid.�
�How can I not be? Tatlo tayong mapapahamak dito.�
�You don�t have to be so negative. If ever he was able to read it, he should�ve reacted to me already.�
�Para kasing� betrayal. What we did to him. Parang pinaglaruan natin siya kapag nalaman niya.�
�So you�re giving up?�
�Do you think I should be?�
�Do YOU think you should be?[/quote]
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#114 2008-06-24 09:28:33
- xxBUBBLiExx
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Re: [quote]Okie okie. I'm so overwhelmed that a lot of you read my first story, "night walks" so i decided to write another story. In one my commentsz sa" night walks", i told ate mizel na i would be put
yeah ..
kahit preview lang, nakuntento na ako.. pero hindi.. XD
dpat update mo na ate kate.
asar 
di pa tapos assignment ko sa history napadaan lang
kahit preview lang, nakuntento na ako.. pero hindi.. XD
dpat update mo na ate kate.
asar di pa tapos assignment ko sa history napadaan lang
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#115 2008-06-24 23:47:23
- azaliah
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- 1969-12-31
Re: [quote]Okie okie. I'm so overwhelmed that a lot of you read my first story, "night walks" so i decided to write another story. In one my commentsz sa" night walks", i told ate mizel na i would be put
paraNg matagal yung
sabado for an update 
nakakaMiss kasi...
nakakaMiss kasi...
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#116 2008-06-25 01:11:53
- 3fuuji3
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- 1969-12-31
Re: [quote]Okie okie. I'm so overwhelmed that a lot of you read my first story, "night walks" so i decided to write another story. In one my commentsz sa" night walks", i told ate mizel na i would be put
[i]bangh 2 chappie agad 
gawddd dami update
hahaha patayyy bulgaran mode na to yooohhhhehehe
pano naman c aljay?!! yay so so so 
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gawddd dami update
hahaha patayyy bulgaran mode na to yooohhhhehehe
pano naman c aljay?!! yay so so so [/i]
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#117 2008-06-25 11:57:14
- meng.o3
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- 1969-12-31
Re: [quote]Okie okie. I'm so overwhelmed that a lot of you read my first story, "night walks" so i decided to write another story. In one my commentsz sa" night walks", i told ate mizel na i would be put
Ayos lang. mabuko sila..haha they can always say naman na yun ang plan nung una..pero nagkadevelopan.. wuahahahaha
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#118 2008-06-26 10:28:52
- maree12
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Re: [quote]Okie okie. I'm so overwhelmed that a lot of you read my first story, "night walks" so i decided to write another story. In one my commentsz sa" night walks", i told ate mizel na i would be put
> haha. . babaguhin ko na isip ko. .
wag muna. .
wak muna papabasa. . haha. .
patagalin mo yung storya. .
toinks. .
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#119 2008-06-27 20:38:43
- eclipse_twins
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- 1969-12-31
Re: [quote]Okie okie. I'm so overwhelmed that a lot of you read my first story, "night walks" so i decided to write another story. In one my commentsz sa" night walks", i told ate mizel na i would be put
[align=center][quote]@ xxbubbliexx: kuntento pero ndi eh noh. haha... well, well, well, history. i love that! especially ung asian, yan tlga na-enjoy q. haha (segue lng)
@ azaliah: e2 na. e2 na. hndi n yan mtgal
@ 3fuuji3: bulgaran? let'z see...
@ ate meng: e2 n ung respond kng mbubuko b cla o hndi.
@ maree12: ahaha, super change of mind. edi kampi n kau ni ate meng?[/quote]
[/align]
[u][i][b]Chapter 14[/b][/i][/u]
[b]Continuation of Aljay�s POV[/b]
Just when I was supposed to pick up the piece of paper, bumalik si Cloud sa room.
�Hey Aljay! Have you seen� Oh, that�s mine. Thanks!�
�Talaga? Buti nakita ko. Here.�
Binigay ko na yung paper and she left. I wonder what�s inside that paper. I�ll probably ask Cloud when I get out of this hell.
[b]Arvhin�s POV[/b]
�Hala� Lagot na! Pano na?�
�Eh hindi pa naman natin sure eh.�
�Maski na. What if he finds out? We�re dead!�
�Relax. Don�t be paranoid.�
�How can I not be? Tatlo tayong mapapahamak dito.�
�You don�t have to be so negative. If ever he was able to read it, he should�ve reacted to me already.�
�Para kasing� betrayal. What we did to him. Parang pinaglaruan natin siya kapag nalaman niya.�
�So you�re giving up?�
�Do you think I should be?�
�Do YOU think you should be?
�I don�t know.�
That was our telephone conversation a while ago. Tumawag si Cloud dahil hindi niya sure kung nabasa ni Aljay yung paper containing my ym conversation with Nikz. Bakit kasi kailangan pa ni Nikz i-print un eh.
Anyway, after that, I received a call from Aljay. Sabi niya after 4 days, he�ll be out of �that hell.� Oo, sabi niya yung ospital daw, �hell.� Malay ko dun kung bakit. Siguro dahil bored na siya at walang magawa. Baka rin naman gusto na niya akong patayin dahil alam na niya yung tungkol samin ni Nikz. D*mn. Am I being paranoid or what?
[b]Nikki�s POV[/b]
Anu ba namang klaseng buhay to. Lahat ng member ng fans club ni Aljay gusto magpasama sa ospital kung san siya naka-confine. Gosh. Eh pano naman ba makakapagpahinga yung tao kung andun halos kalahati ng high school department? I said no to them na lang. Sabi ko busy ako. Nalaman kasi nilang idadaan ko yung iba niyang gamit sa locker niya.
Kailangan na kasing tanggalin yung gamit sa lockers kasi magmi-mid year break na. At dahil si Jaelyn ang in charge sa class lockers namin, sakin niya binigay ang code ng locker ni Aljay para dalhin yung gamit sa kanya. Feeling ko nga nang-aasar lang yun eh, o baka naman may hidden agenda. Ewan. Bahala na.
It�s 2pm. Siguro mga 4p.m ko na lang idadaan yung gamit niya sa ospital.
*Tic Tac Tic Tac*
Aisht. I�m so tempted to look at his stuff.
No. Nikz, that�s personal. Don�t.
He wouldn�t find out, ok lang yan.
Eh pano kung malaman niya? Tigok ka.
Wala naming makakakita eh.
�Ai Naku!�
To look or not to look????
@ 3fuuji3: bulgaran? let'z see...
@ ate meng: e2 n ung respond kng mbubuko b cla o hndi.
@ maree12: ahaha, super change of mind. edi kampi n kau ni ate meng?[/quote]
[/align]
[u][i][b]Chapter 14[/b][/i][/u]
[b]Continuation of Aljay�s POV[/b]
Just when I was supposed to pick up the piece of paper, bumalik si Cloud sa room.
�Hey Aljay! Have you seen� Oh, that�s mine. Thanks!�
�Talaga? Buti nakita ko. Here.�
Binigay ko na yung paper and she left. I wonder what�s inside that paper. I�ll probably ask Cloud when I get out of this hell.
[b]Arvhin�s POV[/b]
�Hala� Lagot na! Pano na?�
�Eh hindi pa naman natin sure eh.�
�Maski na. What if he finds out? We�re dead!�
�Relax. Don�t be paranoid.�
�How can I not be? Tatlo tayong mapapahamak dito.�
�You don�t have to be so negative. If ever he was able to read it, he should�ve reacted to me already.�
�Para kasing� betrayal. What we did to him. Parang pinaglaruan natin siya kapag nalaman niya.�
�So you�re giving up?�
�Do you think I should be?�
�Do YOU think you should be?
�I don�t know.�
That was our telephone conversation a while ago. Tumawag si Cloud dahil hindi niya sure kung nabasa ni Aljay yung paper containing my ym conversation with Nikz. Bakit kasi kailangan pa ni Nikz i-print un eh.
Anyway, after that, I received a call from Aljay. Sabi niya after 4 days, he�ll be out of �that hell.� Oo, sabi niya yung ospital daw, �hell.� Malay ko dun kung bakit. Siguro dahil bored na siya at walang magawa. Baka rin naman gusto na niya akong patayin dahil alam na niya yung tungkol samin ni Nikz. D*mn. Am I being paranoid or what?
[b]Nikki�s POV[/b]
Anu ba namang klaseng buhay to. Lahat ng member ng fans club ni Aljay gusto magpasama sa ospital kung san siya naka-confine. Gosh. Eh pano naman ba makakapagpahinga yung tao kung andun halos kalahati ng high school department? I said no to them na lang. Sabi ko busy ako. Nalaman kasi nilang idadaan ko yung iba niyang gamit sa locker niya.
Kailangan na kasing tanggalin yung gamit sa lockers kasi magmi-mid year break na. At dahil si Jaelyn ang in charge sa class lockers namin, sakin niya binigay ang code ng locker ni Aljay para dalhin yung gamit sa kanya. Feeling ko nga nang-aasar lang yun eh, o baka naman may hidden agenda. Ewan. Bahala na.
It�s 2pm. Siguro mga 4p.m ko na lang idadaan yung gamit niya sa ospital.
*Tic Tac Tic Tac*
Aisht. I�m so tempted to look at his stuff.
No. Nikz, that�s personal. Don�t.
He wouldn�t find out, ok lang yan.
Eh pano kung malaman niya? Tigok ka.
Wala naming makakakita eh.
�Ai Naku!�
To look or not to look????
Last edited by eclipse_twins (2008-06-27 20:43:12)
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#120 2008-06-27 21:03:15
- Cutie_Phunk
- » FTalkGeek
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- 1969-12-31
Re: [quote]Okie okie. I'm so overwhelmed that a lot of you read my first story, "night walks" so i decided to write another story. In one my commentsz sa" night walks", i told ate mizel na i would be put
^tsgeh nah!
tignan
moh nah!
jiji:D..
nice2 pouh!
nxt cahppie nah pouh!
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