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- » [quote]Okie okie. I'm so overwhelmed that a lot of you read my first story, "night walks" so i decided to write another story. In one my commentsz sa" night walks", i told ate mizel na i would be put
[quote]Okie okie. I'm so overwhelmed that a lot of you read my first story, "night walks" so i decided to write another story. In one my commentsz sa" night walks", i told ate mizel na i would be put
- lady_end
- » FTalkWhiz
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Re: [quote]Okie okie. I'm so overwhelmed that a lot of you read my first story, "night walks" so i decided to write another story. In one my commentsz sa" night walks", i told ate mizel na i would be put
waahahahaha. anu yan?
totohanan na atah yan weh. ajajaja. 
next update na
next update na
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- Cutie_Phunk
- » FTalkGeek
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- 1969-12-31
Re: [quote]Okie okie. I'm so overwhelmed that a lot of you read my first story, "night walks" so i decided to write another story. In one my commentsz sa" night walks", i told ate mizel na i would be put
ang gandah nng story!,
nkaka-rlate!,
~wat if magka-22o ung
d nmn 22o?.
hayy nakuh!,
bxtha!,
ang gandah tlgah nng s2ry!
nxt chapie plzs..,???
jiji:D
nkaka-rlate!,
~wat if magka-22o ung
d nmn 22o?.
hayy nakuh!,
bxtha!,
ang gandah tlgah nng s2ry!
nxt chapie plzs..,???
jiji:D
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- xxBUBBLiExx
- » FTalkElite
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- 1969-12-31
Re: [quote]Okie okie. I'm so overwhelmed that a lot of you read my first story, "night walks" so i decided to write another story. In one my commentsz sa" night walks", i told ate mizel na i would be put
kawawang aljay 
bhe?? XDDDD
go arvhin 
bhe?? XDDDD
go arvhin
Last edited by xxBUBBLiExx (2008-06-10 09:16:12)
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- ---mad4u---
- » FTalkAddict
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- 1969-12-31
Re: [quote]Okie okie. I'm so overwhelmed that a lot of you read my first story, "night walks" so i decided to write another story. In one my commentsz sa" night walks", i told ate mizel na i would be put
omg... late nanaman ako. 
@topic:
weeeeee.!
may plan na sila.
magiging totoo na ito.
@topic:
weeeeee.!
may plan na sila.
magiging totoo na ito.
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- eclipse_twins
- » FTalkAddict
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- 1969-12-31
Re: [quote]Okie okie. I'm so overwhelmed that a lot of you read my first story, "night walks" so i decided to write another story. In one my commentsz sa" night walks", i told ate mizel na i would be put
[u][i][b]Chapter 10[/b][/i][/u]
"love you, bhe..."
aljay mimicked.
"loko ka talaga. ginagaya mo pa si vhin!"
"pasensiya na 'bhe' ha. wala kasi akong nasasabihan ng 'i love you' eh."
then he rolled his eyes. natawa ako sa kanya. halatang nagseselos na. ahaha... ang lokong to, marunong rin pala magselos.
"oi, nikz, bakit ka tumatawa diyan?"
"wala, wala..."
umalis na ako habang tumatawa pa rin.
[b]aljay's pov[/b]
"di magkakatotohanan noh. you worry too much. geh nikz, love you bhe.”
“I love you too.”
i happen to be at the back of these so-called 'lovers' when i heard this.
di magkakatotohanan? why does nikz have to worry? anong pinaguusapan nila?
i know that they are hiding something but i am not really sure what. tapos nung kausap ko pa si nikz, i guess i sound kind of defensive just because i am so d*mn pissed off. nagseselos ako. oo na. pero bakit naman? kilala ko si arvhin. alam niyang si nikki yung tinutukoy ko nung nag-recollection kami kaya bakit naman siya pa yung niligawan niya. worse, naging gf niya?
naku naman. ngayon kailangan pa magkunwari akong masaya para sa kanila kahit hindi naman talaga.
"earth to aljay! nagpaplano tayo para kina nikz at vhin."
"sorry. iniisip ko yung exam sa math mamaya."
big fat lie. f*ck. nakakahalata na ata sina cloud.
"could you at least focus? after all, para sa best friend mo to"
"okay."
"where was i? oh yeah. ayun. dun na lang tayo sa bahay. dale and i will be for designing the gerden. jae and lem, food and drinks. so that leaves us with aljay. ikaw na lang magsundo sa kanila. okay na ba yun?"
tae. ako pa yung susundo sa lovers. may magagawa pa ba ako eh nag-agree na lahat sa naka-assign sa kanila..?
after dismissal time, inapproach ko si arvhin.
"vhin, kina cloud tayo ngayon. dun tayo magcecelebrate."
"oh. talaga. sure thing. pero pano si nikz? hihintayin ko na lang siya. may special test pa siyang tinetake eh."
"mauna ka na, ako nang bahala kay nikz."
"sige. ingatan mo siya ha."
"oo naman."
[b]nikki'z pov[/b]
[i]*1 message received*
Sender: Vhin Lardizabal
:bhe, kna cloud tau "magcclebr8." c aljay na maghahatid sau. ok lng? geh, datz ur chance.
nga pla, wag kang papahuli ah. bka mdulas k. geh, gud lak.:[/i]
cool lang. relax. di ka mahuhuli ni aljay. impossible. pinaghandaan niyo to ni arvhin di ba?
almost 6:00 pm na nung lumabas ako. i saw aljay waiting for me.
medyo kinilig ako na natatawa na kinakabahan. ang gulo noh? pero ganun talaga eh. mahirap i-describe.
"hey."
"hey, ako na pinaghintay ni vhin."
"yeah, he texted me. let's go."
sumakay ako sa scooter ni aljay. wee, ang lamig naman tapos nakaangkas pa ako. ahihi, kilig ang lola niyo oh. super yakap. naka-chansing pa... haha
"aljay?"
he didn't look back.
"aljay..."
still no.
"ALJAY!"
"what?"
"hindi to yung daan papunta kina cloud!"
"i know."
"san mo ako dadalhin?"
"isipin mo na lang kidnapper ako ngayon."
"whaaattt?!" 
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- meng.o3
- » FTalkElite
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- 1969-12-31
Re: [quote]Okie okie. I'm so overwhelmed that a lot of you read my first story, "night walks" so i decided to write another story. In one my commentsz sa" night walks", i told ate mizel na i would be put
OMG special date ito! 
manyakers ka nikz..nichansing mo si papa aljay
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- xxBUBBLiExx
- » FTalkElite
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- 1969-12-31
Re: [quote]Okie okie. I'm so overwhelmed that a lot of you read my first story, "night walks" so i decided to write another story. In one my commentsz sa" night walks", i told ate mizel na i would be put
wow. 
lanya ka aljay, san mo xa dadalhin 
XD
anyway, sige, iba na.. go aljay
ahaha. te kate, week ends ka nalang nkkpagnet?
ako rin siguro, baka ganun an 
lanya ka aljay, san mo xa dadalhin XD
anyway, sige, iba na.. go aljay
ahaha. te kate, week ends ka nalang nkkpagnet?
ako rin siguro, baka ganun an
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- Cutie_Phunk
- » FTalkGeek
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- 1969-12-31
Re: [quote]Okie okie. I'm so overwhelmed that a lot of you read my first story, "night walks" so i decided to write another story. In one my commentsz sa" night walks", i told ate mizel na i would be put
huh???.,
'noh ga2win niya kay nikz???.,
nakuh nmn 2 c aljay, uu!.
tgl kzng mag-paramdam!
jiji:D
.,
'noh ga2win niya kay nikz???.,
nakuh nmn 2 c aljay, uu!.
tgl kzng mag-paramdam!
jiji:D
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- maree12
- » FTalkManiac
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- 1969-12-31
Re: [quote]Okie okie. I'm so overwhelmed that a lot of you read my first story, "night walks" so i decided to write another story. In one my commentsz sa" night walks", i told ate mizel na i would be put
sis eclipse, di ko alam, nakapag-contribute
ako dito sa story mo. . hahah. .
ok tong si nikz. . nanansing pa. .
haha. .daig pa lalaki. .
saan kaya siya dadalhin. . .
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- jhayyuliajay
- » FTalkGeek
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- 1969-12-31
Re: [quote]Okie okie. I'm so overwhelmed that a lot of you read my first story, "night walks" so i decided to write another story. In one my commentsz sa" night walks", i told ate mizel na i would be put
what.tinakas ba nman si nikki....?haha.kakilig.
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- hazel013
- » FTalkManiac
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- 1969-12-31
Re: [quote]Okie okie. I'm so overwhelmed that a lot of you read my first story, "night walks" so i decided to write another story. In one my commentsz sa" night walks", i told ate mizel na i would be put
haha!kidnapper daw oh!haha!ang saya! eh cnu ba talaga love interest nia d2 ate?? hehe.naguguluhan ako eh..pero paranag mas gusto ko si arvhin..whehehe:lol:
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- 3fuuji3
- » FTalker
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- 1969-12-31
Re: [quote]Okie okie. I'm so overwhelmed that a lot of you read my first story, "night walks" so i decided to write another story. In one my commentsz sa" night walks", i told ate mizel na i would be put
[i]whaaattt hahaha lo kidnapr hah?!! 
wahahaha loko to c aljay iba ang style hahah
kilig lig lig lig
next na gen hehhe [/i]
wahahaha loko to c aljay iba ang style hahah
kilig lig lig lig
next na gen hehhe [/i]
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- lady_end
- » FTalkWhiz
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- 1969-12-31
Re: [quote]Okie okie. I'm so overwhelmed that a lot of you read my first story, "night walks" so i decided to write another story. In one my commentsz sa" night walks", i told ate mizel na i would be put
wth.. kidnapper?
wew, anuh kaya ang gagawin nila?
ajijji
next na puh
ajijji
next na puh
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- eclipse_twins
- » FTalkAddict
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- 1969-12-31
Re: [quote]Okie okie. I'm so overwhelmed that a lot of you read my first story, "night walks" so i decided to write another story. In one my commentsz sa" night walks", i told ate mizel na i would be put
ahehe... long tym no update
i'll update it on saturday... nid 2 study for geom, chem and history
plus i'm slacking off wid d keyboard...
i'll be back... with better twists 
at n22wa aq...
xe kidnapper n c aljay
hang on pipol
love lotzz
---KaTe---
at n22wa aq...
xe kidnapper n c aljay
hang on pipol
love lotzz
---KaTe---
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- Cutie_Phunk
- » FTalkGeek
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- 1969-12-31
Re: [quote]Okie okie. I'm so overwhelmed that a lot of you read my first story, "night walks" so i decided to write another story. In one my commentsz sa" night walks", i told ate mizel na i would be put
weew!,
ateh eclipse!.
i'll w8 4 d nxt chappie!
kip it up!
jiji:)
jiji:)
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- eclipse_twins
- » FTalkAddict
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- 1969-12-31
Re: [quote]Okie okie. I'm so overwhelmed that a lot of you read my first story, "night walks" so i decided to write another story. In one my commentsz sa" night walks", i told ate mizel na i would be put
[quote]e2 n oh. as promised. update
tnx 4 waiting lalo na ke cutie_phunk [/quote]
[u][i][b]Chapter 11[/b][/i][/u]
“Hoy Aljay! Sira ka ba? Kidnapper?! Ibaba mo ako!”
“Wag kang malikot!”
“Ibaba mo ako!”
“Shoot! Sige magpumiglas ka diyan para malaglag ka. Paagahin mo yung pagkamatay mo!”
Oopps. He has a point. Malalaglag ako kapag naglikot ako dito. Darn. What can I do?
After a few minutes, tinigil ni Aljay yung motorcycle. He went down and removed his helmet.
“Ano? Diyan ka lang?”
“Tae ka! Bakit nandito tayo?”
“Eh kasi sabi ni Cloud may kulang na drinks kaya eto, pinapunta ako sa 7eleven.”
“Ngee…”
“Wait. Were you really expecting that I would harm or do anything to you?”
“Actually yeah.”
“So ganun ako ka-halay para sa’yo?”
“Uhmm… Hin—“
“Never mind. It’s okay.”
Tapos pumasok na siya ng 7eleven. Akala ko iiwan na niya ako. Bigla niyang binuksan yung door ng 7eleven.
“Hey Nikz. Come on. Pumasok ka na, mamaya anong mangyari sa’yo diyan sa labas eh.”
Nung nakapasok kami, kinuha niya lahat ng kailangan tapos bumili siya ng slurpee. Isang slurpee lang binili niya and isang siopao.
“Hoy, ang daya mo, sarili mo lang binilhan mo ng snacks. Ako wala.”
“Di naman akin to eh. Iyo to noh.”
Sabay bigay sakin ng pagkain.
“Eh pano ka?”
“Kumain na ako kanina. Hindi naman ako tulad ng iba diyan na nagpapalipas ng gutom dahil sa exam.”
Napatingin lang ako sa kanya then nag-thank you. After I ate, lumabas kami ng 7eleven. He gave me his jacket. Napansin niya siguro na nilalamig na ako kasi he suddenly put his jacket over my shoulders. Sinuot ko naman yun tapos I wore my helmet na rin.
It was a silent ride going to Cloud’s house. Pagdating namin dun, ayun celebrate kasi kami dahil kami na kunwari ni Arvhin and kung anu-anong kasinungalingan.
We manage to get a smooth start. Parang kami talaga. Ok naman sakin yun, still I can’t help but wish na sana…
Yung celebration na yun, para samin na lang ni Aljay.
tnx 4 waiting lalo na ke cutie_phunk [/quote]
[u][i][b]Chapter 11[/b][/i][/u]
“Hoy Aljay! Sira ka ba? Kidnapper?! Ibaba mo ako!”
“Wag kang malikot!”
“Ibaba mo ako!”
“Shoot! Sige magpumiglas ka diyan para malaglag ka. Paagahin mo yung pagkamatay mo!”
Oopps. He has a point. Malalaglag ako kapag naglikot ako dito. Darn. What can I do?
After a few minutes, tinigil ni Aljay yung motorcycle. He went down and removed his helmet.
“Ano? Diyan ka lang?”
“Tae ka! Bakit nandito tayo?”
“Eh kasi sabi ni Cloud may kulang na drinks kaya eto, pinapunta ako sa 7eleven.”
“Ngee…”
“Wait. Were you really expecting that I would harm or do anything to you?”
“Actually yeah.”
“So ganun ako ka-halay para sa’yo?”
“Uhmm… Hin—“
“Never mind. It’s okay.”
Tapos pumasok na siya ng 7eleven. Akala ko iiwan na niya ako. Bigla niyang binuksan yung door ng 7eleven.
“Hey Nikz. Come on. Pumasok ka na, mamaya anong mangyari sa’yo diyan sa labas eh.”
Nung nakapasok kami, kinuha niya lahat ng kailangan tapos bumili siya ng slurpee. Isang slurpee lang binili niya and isang siopao.
“Hoy, ang daya mo, sarili mo lang binilhan mo ng snacks. Ako wala.”
“Di naman akin to eh. Iyo to noh.”
Sabay bigay sakin ng pagkain.
“Eh pano ka?”
“Kumain na ako kanina. Hindi naman ako tulad ng iba diyan na nagpapalipas ng gutom dahil sa exam.”
Napatingin lang ako sa kanya then nag-thank you. After I ate, lumabas kami ng 7eleven. He gave me his jacket. Napansin niya siguro na nilalamig na ako kasi he suddenly put his jacket over my shoulders. Sinuot ko naman yun tapos I wore my helmet na rin.
It was a silent ride going to Cloud’s house. Pagdating namin dun, ayun celebrate kasi kami dahil kami na kunwari ni Arvhin and kung anu-anong kasinungalingan.
We manage to get a smooth start. Parang kami talaga. Ok naman sakin yun, still I can’t help but wish na sana…
Yung celebration na yun, para samin na lang ni Aljay.
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- Cutie_Phunk
- » FTalkGeek
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- 1969-12-31
Re: [quote]Okie okie. I'm so overwhelmed that a lot of you read my first story, "night walks" so i decided to write another story. In one my commentsz sa" night walks", i told ate mizel na i would be put
^weew!enx ateh eclipse!
-topic-
mmn..,??
effective kyah ang gagawin
nila??.,
hayy nakuh!
bitin tlgah!
jiji:D..
nxt chappie pouh ateh!
Last edited by Cutie_Phunk (2008-06-22 00:14:28)
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- fairydelights
- » FTalker
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- 1969-12-31
Re: [quote]Okie okie. I'm so overwhelmed that a lot of you read my first story, "night walks" so i decided to write another story. In one my commentsz sa" night walks", i told ate mizel na i would be put
hi there eclipse_twins
i want to read ur stories.. can u pls do me a favor please PM me it.. i had a hard time copieng them.. i love stories and i want to read urs..
please do send it to me.. il print it and read.. then il post my comment about it.. +repu+ if il love it..
keep up the good work..
i want to read ur stories.. can u pls do me a favor please PM me it.. i had a hard time copieng them.. i love stories and i want to read urs..
please do send it to me.. il print it and read.. then il post my comment about it.. +repu+ if il love it..
keep up the good work..
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- xxBUBBLiExx
- » FTalkElite
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- 1969-12-31
Re: [quote]Okie okie. I'm so overwhelmed that a lot of you read my first story, "night walks" so i decided to write another story. In one my commentsz sa" night walks", i told ate mizel na i would be put
wooo.. ate kate.
update paaa.. 
naks. ayus lng yan nikz kayo na ni arvhn. i wag ka na umasa kasi sakin na si aljay. XDDD
aha. i'll wait for the next.
update paaa..
naks. ayus lng yan nikz kayo na ni arvhn. i wag ka na umasa kasi sakin na si aljay. XDDD
aha. i'll wait for the next.
Last edited by xxBUBBLiExx (2008-06-22 01:07:01)
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#100 2008-06-22 01:08:08
- lady_end
- » FTalkWhiz
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- 1969-12-31
Re: [quote]Okie okie. I'm so overwhelmed that a lot of you read my first story, "night walks" so i decided to write another story. In one my commentsz sa" night walks", i told ate mizel na i would be put
awtz, kunwari2x pa..
baka maka22hanan na ang pagpapanggap ..
ajiji..
next chapter na puh
..
ajiji..
next chapter na puh
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