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[quote]Okie okie. I'm so overwhelmed that a lot of you read my first story, "night walks" so i decided to write another story. In one my commentsz sa" night walks", i told ate mizel na i would be put

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Re: [quote]Okie okie. I'm so overwhelmed that a lot of you read my first story, "night walks" so i decided to write another story. In one my commentsz sa" night walks", i told ate mizel na i would be put

wah.... awts naman un.... nxt na sis... ahehe.... ngayon q lang ulit nabasa 2.... it was really nice....:D love it...:penguin:
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Re: [quote]Okie okie. I'm so overwhelmed that a lot of you read my first story, "night walks" so i decided to write another story. In one my commentsz sa" night walks", i told ate mizel na i would be put

[b]aye. ng'update si sis. :) cnu nmang trish yan?!:disgust: bibigay na si nikki.! haha! =D update mo na ulit sis. =) :eh:[/b]
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Re: [quote]Okie okie. I'm so overwhelmed that a lot of you read my first story, "night walks" so i decided to write another story. In one my commentsz sa" night walks", i told ate mizel na i would be put

:arrow: im thrish.. :paranoid: with the H :lol:
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Re: [quote]Okie okie. I'm so overwhelmed that a lot of you read my first story, "night walks" so i decided to write another story. In one my commentsz sa" night walks", i told ate mizel na i would be put

ahihi! ang cute tlaga ng mga stories mo...im glad i joined ft...love junky kc ko...im looking 4ward to ur nxt update...nga pala, pinapabasa ko din sa mga friends ko yung stories mo...hope you dont mind...:wow:
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Re: [quote]Okie okie. I'm so overwhelmed that a lot of you read my first story, "night walks" so i decided to write another story. In one my commentsz sa" night walks", i told ate mizel na i would be put

wee. w8 ko nx chap! gudluck! nice story sis! i rili lyk it! +repu for yah!
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Re: [quote]Okie okie. I'm so overwhelmed that a lot of you read my first story, "night walks" so i decided to write another story. In one my commentsz sa" night walks", i told ate mizel na i would be put

[align=center][quote]@ cutie phunk: ahehe... xncia n tlga. bc xe. e2, khit short upd8 lng, pantawid gutom lng muna 2 haha @ angel in tears 08: oo nga sis eh. nag-disappear k bgla eh. san k b npnta? @ berii: pra sakin nga mtatagtag p c nikz eh. kng aq un bka cmla plng, bmigay n aq. gaaa @ ate meng: nice... iba k tlga humirit ate eh. eniwei, asan n c ate mizel? wla k ng partner in crime ahehe @ leah_leighn: aww. tnx. :D (flattered ang lola mo haha) bout d s2ry, np... ok lng un, ms msya pg ms mrming ngbbsa. y not read love s2ry as a grup db? d more d merrier! gnyan kmi ng brkda q eh, sbay sbay ngbbsa, sbay sbay knikilig haha.. .wla lng, share q lng... @ yna_16: slmat s compliment... at slmat s repu! kip on reading girl. ur new plng d2 s deviant love db? welcome s mgulong mundo ni nikz, arvhin at aljay! ---ok. emo mode aq ngaun. actually comments nu lng ang nagpasaya sakin eh kya as a treat, I'll update 2day. mejo maiksi lng xa xe part 1 lng but I think mlkas ung impact ng chappie n 2 s inu. hehe... hapi reading! ciao!---[/quote] [/align] [u][i][b]Chapter 17 ~Part 1~[/b][/i][/u] “I said let go Aljay and just leave me alone! Why won’t you leave me alone?” I couldn’t help it, umiiyak na ako. Sh*t I’m falling apart. After a while binitawan niya ako. “Nikz… I’m sorry.” I am not sure whether I didn’t want to answer or I didn’t have the strength to answer. However, I guess pareho yun yung rason kung bakit wala na lang akong masabi sa kanya. I just cried as he had let go of me. Next thing I knew, I was in the school clinic. [b]Arvhin’s POV[/b] I’ve seen it all. Lahat ng nangyari kay Aljay at Nikki. Hindi ko alam kung papasok ba ako sa eksena o hindi. After all, it was between the two of them. Hindi ako pwedeng basta makialam kahit na honestly speaking, I think I am involved already. It hurts to see Nikki crying. It hurts more to see that the person she likes was the one who hurt her. If only I can do something to make her feel better. Alam kong nahihirapan siya and she was losing her senses. Until she stopped crying and lost consciousness. Before she could fall, nasalo ko siya. I didn’t know how or why, instincts na lang siguro yun. Alam kong nagulat si Aljay sa bigla kong pagpasok. “Vhin…” “Tama na Aljay.” “I didn’t know I would make her cry.” “Too bad, you already did.” “But I didn’t mean to” “Sabing tama na. Baka nakakalimot ka.. ako yung boyfriend niya.” He was obviously shocked by what I said and I wanted to retrieve those words yet I know it’s better not to. With that, I carried Nikki to the clinic.

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Re: [quote]Okie okie. I'm so overwhelmed that a lot of you read my first story, "night walks" so i decided to write another story. In one my commentsz sa" night walks", i told ate mizel na i would be put

:crybaby: :crybaby: sistah naman... xuper kabitin weh... i'll wait fur the whole chappie :P
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Re: [quote]Okie okie. I'm so overwhelmed that a lot of you read my first story, "night walks" so i decided to write another story. In one my commentsz sa" night walks", i told ate mizel na i would be put

^ huhu... naiiyak n aq xe umiiyak emoticon mo ahehe yah, xncia na... bitin tlga eh
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Re: [quote]Okie okie. I'm so overwhelmed that a lot of you read my first story, "night walks" so i decided to write another story. In one my commentsz sa" night walks", i told ate mizel na i would be put

[align=center][b]huhuhuhuhu.. nikki..tama na ang pagcollapse.. ang dami nmang nagmamahal kay nikki ano ba yan hahahahaha nice one sis kate..love it[/b][/align]
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Re: [quote]Okie okie. I'm so overwhelmed that a lot of you read my first story, "night walks" so i decided to write another story. In one my commentsz sa" night walks", i told ate mizel na i would be put

hu!3:cry:... bat nmn ganon??? bitin mxadoh sis kate! nxt chappie nh pra mgandah! :D,,,
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Re: [quote]Okie okie. I'm so overwhelmed that a lot of you read my first story, "night walks" so i decided to write another story. In one my commentsz sa" night walks", i told ate mizel na i would be put

[quote=eclipse_twins]@ yna_16: slmat s compliment... at slmat s repu! kip on reading girl. ur new plng d2 s deviant love db? welcome s mgulong mundo ni nikz, arvhin at aljay![/quote] wee. hehe w8 ko ult nx chap! now lng aq npdaan s section n tuh! wee. u deserve to have a +repu sis,. nice job =):thumbsup:
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Re: [quote]Okie okie. I'm so overwhelmed that a lot of you read my first story, "night walks" so i decided to write another story. In one my commentsz sa" night walks", i told ate mizel na i would be put

:arrow: oh my gedddd... vhin.. yaaaa~ u r 'the boyfriend' :thumbsup:
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Re: [quote]Okie okie. I'm so overwhelmed that a lot of you read my first story, "night walks" so i decided to write another story. In one my commentsz sa" night walks", i told ate mizel na i would be put

^ ay oo nga noh. . thrish pala name ni ate meng. with h. . haha. . nice update. . wla naman hard feelings. . haha. . ;)
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Re: [quote]Okie okie. I'm so overwhelmed that a lot of you read my first story, "night walks" so i decided to write another story. In one my commentsz sa" night walks", i told ate mizel na i would be put

huhu, nikki's hurting so much! parang mas gus2 ko n 2loy para sa kanya si arvhin...kaso love story nila aljay to eh...hehe, can't wait to read what's gonna happen next...
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Re: [quote]Okie okie. I'm so overwhelmed that a lot of you read my first story, "night walks" so i decided to write another story. In one my commentsz sa" night walks", i told ate mizel na i would be put

[align=center][quote]@leah leighn: gs2 m c arvhin nlng mk2luyan nya? @ maree12: ahehe. thrish. bguhin q kya ung trish to thrish? @ ate meng: if arvhin is the boyfriend, hu is aljay? @ yna16: ahehe. nku, mdmi pang mgling d2 s lit. section noh. grbe. talented 2ng sec. n 2 eh @ cutie phunk: e2 na oh. nxt chappie hehe @ cutie gal: hehe. nice. tnx tnx. slmat.[/quote] [/align] [u][i][b]Chapter 17 ~Part2~[/b][/i][/u] [quote]If I give up on you I give up on me If we fight what's true, will we ever be Even God himself and the faith I knew Shouldn't hold me back, shouldn't keep me from you Tease me, by holding out your hand Then leave me, or take me as i am And live our lives, stigmatized I can feel the blood rushing though my veins When i hear your voice, driving me insane Hour after hour day after day Every lonely night that i sit and pray[/quote] That music hits the spot. Super sapul talaga. Teka. Stigmatized. Ganito nga ba kami? Kami nino? Ni Aljay o ni Arvhin? Gash. Hayzz. Nga pala, Bakit nasa clinic ako? “Miss Saldivar. Gising ka na pala.” “Bakit po nandito ako? Anong oras na?” “It’s 3 in the afternoon. Nahimatay ka kanina. Mr. Lardizabal was the one who brought you here.” Arvhin? Pano? The last thing I remember was talking to Aljay tapos umiiyak ako. Tapos… I guess yun na yun. Nahimatay nga ako. The nurse advised me to go home kasi baka daw mabinat ako or anything. I did what she said. I went home. Not because I was scared na mabinat, but because I don’t exactly know how to face Aljay. Pag-uwi ko sa bahay, soundtrip lang ako. Wala ako sa mood mag-aral. I just can’t focus on doing anything. I open my eyes, only to see Just how sad this world could be That i often cry alone...oohhh [quote]I look at the sky, longing to see There's a chance out there for me For my heart to be set free... My friends had say that it's ok When rainbow's fade in clouds of gray But in my heart i know someday True happiness will come my way... I never knew love till i found you I's magic in your smile Never knew love till i saw you lookin' in my eyes And suddenly our sadness disappears True love has fin'lly shown its smilin' eyes on me...[/quote] I closed my eyes and felt the song. Then, there was the knock on my room’s door and it opened. “Nikz.”
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Re: [quote]Okie okie. I'm so overwhelmed that a lot of you read my first story, "night walks" so i decided to write another story. In one my commentsz sa" night walks", i told ate mizel na i would be put

[quote=eclipse_twins]@ yna16: ahehe. nku, mdmi pang mgling d2 s lit. section noh. grbe. talented 2ng sec. n 2 eh[/quote] ur one of them sis :thumbsup: @T: wee. nbitin aku! haaha ill be w8ting for the nx chap sis! gluck
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Re: [quote]Okie okie. I'm so overwhelmed that a lot of you read my first story, "night walks" so i decided to write another story. In one my commentsz sa" night walks", i told ate mizel na i would be put

[quote=eclipse_twins]^ huhu... naiiyak n aq xe umiiyak emoticon mo ahehe yah, xncia na... bitin tlga eh[/quote] eh ganun bah sistah :D happie na akuh wew, nahimatay pala cya wew, gravbeh huh? cnuh kayah ang nag knock ng door? :o ewan kuh bah.. :P i'll wait fur the next update
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Re: [quote]Okie okie. I'm so overwhelmed that a lot of you read my first story, "night walks" so i decided to write another story. In one my commentsz sa" night walks", i told ate mizel na i would be put

[b]--> woot. cnu amn un? :o hahah. w8ng for the next chappie. =) [/b]
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Re: [quote]Okie okie. I'm so overwhelmed that a lot of you read my first story, "night walks" so i decided to write another story. In one my commentsz sa" night walks", i told ate mizel na i would be put

mejo lang...haha, pero on second thought si aljay na lang...galing-galing aman nung story...lam mo, gus2 ko din sana magsulat kaya lang hindi ako pang luv story eh...hays, i envy you...:cry:[align=center][/align]
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Re: [quote]Okie okie. I'm so overwhelmed that a lot of you read my first story, "night walks" so i decided to write another story. In one my commentsz sa" night walks", i told ate mizel na i would be put

:arrow: if arvhin is the boyfriend, then aljay is the other boyfriend :lol: two timer ito!
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