[quote=eclipse_twins]@ rocel: gnun... hehe... bti nman. i'll upd8 l8r, pra mlaman nu na kng cnu un[/quote] grabeh ka nman sis.. express update ka.. ehehe hmmm... syang nhihilo so steph.. d tuloy nlaman kun gwapings b si fafa lawrence ko.. ahhihih

[align=center][quote]@ rikodlaya: uhmm... secret! haha, kip reading 2 find out d answer. hehe... btw, tnx 4 d compliment @ rocel: haha, gnun. express? ngaun lng yan xe wla kming psok eh up 2 wednesday @ ate kim: tlga. haha, i got d surname yeong from a friend. korean xe xa. eniwei, tnx 4 reading ds. aq rn bnbsa q ung s2ry m eh hehe @ girl next door: oo nga eh xo i'm running out of ideas kng pnu q xa icocontinue bt i myt continue it. taglish cgro. bhala na. @ dess29: ok lng yan. mrmi nman nagcmla ng gnyan d2 eh. aq, c babols (bubblie), c danx (minekoarch) at mrmi pang ib. we ol startd reading d s2ries hir tpos nung 2mgal at uber na-inspire kmi, aun post post post n ng s2ries. i'll update mmya okie? ciao![/quote] [/align] [spoiler]--i miss ate meng and ate mizel... san n kya cla???--[/spoiler]

Weeeee....!!! Sino kaya talaga ang kapartner ni Steph?? Si Lawrence or Dervin..?? Anyways, i like your story!!

hahaha, korean pala? di pako nakarinig ng yeong na apelyido sa korean e. xD cute rin ba? hahaha. xD nakuu. thanks thanks. nakikita nga kitang nagrereply. di na nga lang ako maka reply sa inyong lahat kasi kapus lagi sa oras. hahahaa. xD continue na. hahaha. excited na si kimmie.

[quote][align=center]@ aljelyn13: yah. e2. another update @ ate kim: cute? uhmm, mejo. o0.. haha... aus lng khit ndi m aq mreplyan, i understand @ ashley pain 15: tnx, aq rn mejo nanghhnayang eh @ gossip girl03: cnu bng gs2 m? c dervin o c lawrence? @ hazel013: and wat do u conclude kng concerned c dervin? sumthng fishy n b un? hehe --itx nearly 1am. sori 4 d l8 upd8.--[/align][/quote] [u][i][b]CHAPTER 3[/b][/i][/u] I ran up my room, took my phone from my purse and check my messages. 1 missed call from Tristan. 1 missed call from Meg. 3 missed calls from Dervin. May 20 messages pa galing sa kanila. Pinakamaraming messages si Dervin. Hala, sobrang nag-alala siguro sila. I texted the three of them saying na nakauwi na ako around 7PM and apologizing for making them worry. After a few minutes tumawag si Dervin. “Hello?” “Hello Steph? Anong nangyari sa’yo?” “Wala. Na-injure lang ‘yung paa ko tapos nahilo ako. Pero may tumulong naman sakin kaya—“ “You could’ve just asked Tristan to go or at least let me take you there!” “It’s okay. Maayos naman na ako. As I said may tumulong sa’kin.” “Still, anything could happen. Pa’no kung hindi mabait ‘yung tumulong sa’yo? Pa’no kung walang tumulong sa’yo?” “Hey hey hey Dervin. Cut it out will you? I’m fine, okay?” “Sorry.” “Sorry too. Alam kong nag-alala kayo.” “You should probably take a rest.” “Ikaw rin. Goodnight.” “G’night.” I hung up. He’s so worried. Haixt. Kawawa naman siya. I was supposed to go down when my notebook caught my eyes. It had a blue post-it. A message. [quote][i]Stephanie, I hope you don’t mind that I checked your things. I read your notes. Nakausap ko na ‘yung captain ng basketball team namin. He said he would fax the confirmation letter to your school tomorrow. Ask the doctor to check your foot. Take care, Lawrence[/i][/quote] Hala. Ginalaw pa ‘yung gamit ko. Sabagay, wala nga pala siyang clue kung sino ako. Siguro kung ako ‘yung nasa position niya gan’on din gagawin ko. Ang bait naman niya. To think of it, sino ba ako para tulungan niya ‘di ba? I went down to eat then had a sponge bath and other night rituals, tapos natulog na. I woke up around 4:30AM. Normally 6:00AM ako nagigising kasi 7:30 pa ang klase namin. However, I couldn’t go back to sleep. I changed from pajamas, washed my face and brushed my teeth. I took my MP4 and cell phone and tried to jog around the neighbourhood. I love jogging. It helps me clear my thoughts. Kaso lang, medyo masakit pa ‘yung paa ko. Alangan magjogging ako. So, I decided to walk around na lang. Walking is still a form of an exercise right? [quote]MP4, Now playing: No Angel by Saosin take back and rewind this tape or erase it black and you'll never think of him but we've had one chance to take back but over and over again i'll clean your wounds this time so we can rewind all to black on tonight i'll tear into another lie (to you) cause you wouldn't take me home your eyes are nice to be clear now cause you wouldnt take me home your right and it wasn't a mistake i never told you what you were missing and i will feel the sign i will feel the way and i will feel the sign to eternal sin? i never wanted to hear all the things that you told me we are the only ones we are running from i never wanted to hear all the things that you told me we are the only ones we are running from this time it's over it's all in my head now it's over this time i'm not coming home tonight (just take me home) i want to break it off we should stop cause there's nothing going on we are the only ones[/quote] “Ang emo naman ng tugtog ko habang naglalakad.” I told myself. Before the song finished, somebody went to my side. Medyo nagulat ako pero si Tristan lang pala ‘yun. “G’morning!” I removed my one ear phone from my left ear and smiled at Tristan. “Good morning.” “Ang aga mo naman magising. Teka, bakit naglalakad ka lang? Why not jog?” I pointed at my foot and then his smile disappeared. “Eto ba ‘yung nangyari kahapon?” I nodded. “Ang kulit mo kasi eh. Sabi ko kasi sa’yo hahatid na kita eh. Ano bang nangyari?” “Kukwento ko sa’yo pero upo muna tayo sa swing d’un sa playground. Sakit na ng paa ko eh.” “Ahaha, oo nga pala. Sige, ‘lika na.” We sat on the swing and he offered me the water he brought with him I drank and told him the story. Tahimik lang siya habang nakikinig sa’kin. Si Tristan ba ‘to? Ang tahimik ah. Normally makulit ‘to tsaka nagsa-side comment every once in a while. Ngayon, natapos ‘yung kwento ko, ang narinig ko lang sa kanya “talaga” tska “gano’n.” “Tristan? Bakit ganyan ka? May problema ba? Bakit ang tahimik mo?” “Ha? Ah, wala. Naalala ko lang kahapon.” [i]“Bakit? Anong nangyari kahapon?”[/i] [spoiler]CHAPTER 4: “You know what Steph, you should realize na kahit boyish ka and halos lahat ata ng lalaki sa campus komportable sa’yo, tinatawag kang pare or dude or bro, you’re still a girl. You’re sweet and caring. You might not realize it but you’re beautiful too.” “Sa’n ba papunta ‘yang sinasabi mo?” “Hmm… I guess iiwan ko na lang na palaisipan ‘yan sa’yo.” “Huh? Ano ngang ibig mo sabihin?”[/spoiler]

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Si Lawrence?? Or pde both?? Anyways, I like your story!!! Really!! Keep it up!!

[quote][align=center]@ russell 18: hehe. tnx. hanging? well, un nga ung maganda dun. may thrill haha @ gossipgirl03: thank u. i'm reading ur s2ry 2. both? well, you're two-timer ah. haha @ rikodlaya: gnun. o xa xa, e2 na ang update. --this is quite long pero msya xe may flashback--[/align][/quote] [u][i][b]CHAPTER 4[/b][/i][/u] “Nung sinabi ko kay Dervin na umalis ka kahapon mag-isa, he showed us na okay lang sa kanya. As if wala namang mangyayari sa’yo. Yet he’s my best friend so I can see with the way he fidgets his wrist band and constantly check the time that he was worried about you. I dismissed the team early kasi alam kong wala sa sarili si Dervin. When I talked to him he insisted that nothing was wrong kaya sabi ko uuwi na ako pero hindi ako umuwi. Hinintay ko siyang umuwi. He tried calling you but I guess he couldn’t. Nag-stay siya hanggang 7:00PM sa school then went home. Pagkauwi niya, he called me and asked me whether you called. Talagang nag-alala siya although ayaw niyang ipakita.” “Oh. Hindi ko expected na gan’on siya mag-aalala para lang sakin. It’s not everyday that a guy tells me he cares for me.” “You know what Steph, you should realize na kahit boyish ka and halos lahat ata ng lalaki sa campus komportable sa’yo, tinatawag kang pare or dude or bro, you’re still a girl. You’re sweet and caring. You might not realize it but you’re beautiful too.” “Sa’n ba papunta ‘yang sinasabi mo?” “Hmm… I guess iiwan ko na lang na palaisipan ‘yan sa’yo.” “Huh? Ano ngang ibig mo sabihin?” “Wala. Let’s go, it’s 5:30AM. Uwi na tayo para makaprepare, may pasok pa.” “Oo nga pala. Waah. Teka—“ Nagulat ako kasi bigla akong binuhat ni Tristan. “Sasakit lang ‘yung paa mo kapag pinaglakad kita kaya bubuhatin na lang kita. Isipin mo si Superman ako. haha” “What?! Adik. Ang corny mo ah! Bagay nga kayo ni Meg, pareho kayo corny. Haha” “Siyempre bagay kami ni Meg noh. Gwapo ako eh. Haha. Kapit ka na. Express ‘to!” Tumakbo si Tristan habang buhat ako. Ang loko talaga nito oh. Superman daw. Parang bata lang eh. Pero in fairness, natuwa naman ako. ** FRESHMEN ORIENTATION Ano ba namang klaseng school ‘to. Ang laki naman. Feeling ko langgam ako, nakakaintimidate lalo na’t galing ako sa maliit na school dati. Orientation ngayon, wala pa si Meg. Siya pa naman sana ‘yung kasama ko kasi old student na siya dito. “Aray” May nakabunggo sa’king guy. “Ai sorry. Teka lang.” Pinulot niya ‘yung gamit ko tapos inabot sa’kin. Whoah, ang tangkad. Mga 5’6” siguro ‘yung height nitong taong ‘to. 5’2” lang ako, ang liit ko naman. Senior siguro ‘to. “Thank you kuya.” “Ayan, sorry talaga ha. Anong grade ka na ba? Hatid kita sa room niyo.” “Uhmm… Freshmen Orientation ngayon ‘di ba?” ”Wah, sorry ulit. Akala ko elementary ka. Naku, strike 2 na ‘ko.” “Hindi, okay lang. Maliit naman kasi—“ “TRISTAAAAN!” “Meg?” Sabay naming nasabi nung guy. “Hoy Tristan anong ginagawa mo kay Stephie. Tae ka, naghahabol ka agad ng babaeng new student. Layuan mo nga ‘tong kaibigan ko.” “Hindi Meg, nabangga niya ako tapos tutulungan niya lang sana ako.” “Fine fine. Anyway, Tristan, si Stephanie, long-time friend ko. Stephie, si Tristan, freshmen student aiming for basketball varsity.” “First year ka lang? Akala ko senior ka! And here you were thinking that I was an elementary student.” Nagtawanan kaming tatlo. Then Meg said, “Hai naku Tristan, hindi maliit si Stephie, matangkad ka lang talaga.” And we laughed again. We entered the multi-purpose hall dahil d’un gagawin ‘yung orientation. 10 minutes after we started, may pumasok na guy. Halos ka-height din siya ni Tristan or probably taller, I couldn’t distinguish that time. Medyo maputi siya,singkit and his hair was black. ‘Yung mata niya parang black pero ‘pag tiningnan mo mabuti, you’ll see the hints of brown. Lahat ng nasa MPH (multi-purpose hall) napatingin sa kanya. “Sorry I’m late.” Tapos umupo siya sa row namin. Tumabi siya kay Tristan. “Late ka na naman, Dervin.” Magkakilala sila? “Hindi ka pa ba sanay?” “Anyway, I’ll introduce you to some of my friends. This one’s Meg and the other is Stephanie. Girls, dati kong schoolmate, si Dervin.” Meg and I smiled at him but he didn’t even exert enough effort to give a genuine smile. Halatang pilit ‘yung ngiti niya. But then that’s better than not reacting. Two weeks after that, nag-open ng tryouts and basketball team. Tristan was automatically a member already dahil varsity siya when he was in elementary and he has a recommendation letter. Dervin and I needed to undergo the tryout to be a regular member. ** “Ui Steph, tahimik mo ah. Masyado ka nang nasarapan sa pagbuhat ko eh.” “Loko ka talaga, Tristan. Hindi noh, may naalala lang ako.” “Ano naman ‘yun?” “Remember when Dervin and I had our tryouts in Freshmen year?” “Yup. I remember, hindi ako nagtake nun kasi magaling ako eh, haha” “Oo na magaling ka na pero hindi ‘yun ‘yung tinutukoy ko. ‘Yung pinagalitan ako ng senior dahil hindi ako maka-shoot ng bola.” “Oh, that one. Oo nga, I remember may recommendation ka rin from your previous school pero ayaw ka nila tanggapin kasi hindi mo mashoot ‘yung bola dahil sa sobrang kaba.” “Yeah. Kinakabahan talaga ako. Intimidating kasi matatangkad ‘yung kasabayan ko. I remember biglang lumapit si Dervin sakin. Hinawakan niya ‘yung kamay ko and assisted me in shooting. After that, tuloy-tuloy na, nagawa kong maka-shoot kahit three points. Alam mo ba n’ung time na ‘yun, parang sa kanya ako humugot ng lakas. Hanggang ngayon, tuwing may competitions iniisip ko ‘yung nangyaring ‘yun para maka-shoot ako.” “I see. Steph, you know that you can trust me with anything right?” “Yes, of course. Bakit?” “Well, can you answer my question honestly?” “Sure. Ano ‘yun?” [i]“Do you like Dervin?"[/i]

say yes steph...!!.hahaha... nkkpuzzle tlga story nyu...kbitin..jeje.. nyc one ateh.. update...update...

waaaaaaaaaah.. kakakilig wahahha nct chap na sis..

[quote=eclipse_twins]@ hazel013: and wat do u conclude kng concerned c dervin? sumthng fishy n b un? hehe[/quote] haha,veryy fishy.. hhmmnn..pero gs2 ko rin si tristan.. hahha go,go,go ate.. update na hahahha gnda ng storyyyy wwweeee