nku na late ako! may update na pala. hehehe... anyways,nice story kakakilig! i'll wait for the next chap!

wew. nice storii! bgong storii na aabangan! waa! update na sis! more. more. more!

naun ko lang nbsa to. gnda pla. next na sis.

....yah ryt ateh...mas mxya kpg nkkpuzzle... uuyy...xan ddlhin ni dervin c steph...? ngee....bliz lawrence pra maabutan xla....hehehe... nyc...update nah kgad...

weeehh.. nxt chap na sis.. haha

omigad naman.. 2 fafas?? lawrence and dervin?? haiz..dervin na lang sana ke steph.. akin namn si lawrence..

waa. haha. sa doctor ln yan ppnta noh? lols next naa. kbitin. haha

waaa now im so very excited to next chapter na po pls @the Story super nc po ate ganda story

[quote][align=center]@ dess29: wla pa nga eh, iyo n agad c lawrence. haha @ pekingkira: supr tnx. aww @ aljelyn: sori 4 d l8 upd8 @ berii: manghuhula k b? filing q oo eh haha @ russell18: hala, pg-agawan nu ni dess c lawrence hehe @ rocel: ndi q p xur kng may sequel 4 tristan. i'll thnk about it @ girlnextdoor: pxncia n ngaun lng aq nkaupd8 @ ashleypain15: e2 na, pra mlaman nu kng maaabtan b cla ni lawrence ---wee saya nka-upd8 n aq. enjoi nu 2 khit mejo wlang kwnta haha--[/align][/quote] [u][i][b]CHAPTER 6[/b][/i][/u] “Steph, just follow me.” “Come on Dervin, sa’n ba tayo pupunta? Saan? Saan? Saan? Tell me.” Tanong ako ng tanong hindi naman niya sinasagot. Hindi niya sinasagot pero sumusunod pa rin ako kung sa’n man niya ako dadalhin. Ewan ko. I guess I trust him that much. I mean siguro kahit dalhin niya ako sa kung saanmang lupalop, kahit na madilim pa at kami lang dalawa, alam kong wala siyang gagawin sa’kin. haha Bigla siyang tumigil tapos tumawag ng taxi. Binuksan niya ‘yung pinto then he turned to me, “Come on, pasok na.” “Ha?” Eto naman ako mukhang engot. Sa’n ba kasi kami pupunta? Wish ko lang sinabi niya ‘ di ba? “Just trust me okay? Hop on.” I did what he said and sat down. He sat next to me and closed the door. I can sense his relief na sumama ako sa kanya. “Sa St. Michael’s Hospital nga po.” Sabi ni Dervin sa driver. Wah? St. Michael’s Hospital? May sakit si Dervin? Masama pakiramdam niya? Hala. Anong nangyari? Hindi ko na kaya, tatanong ko na. “May sakit ka?” “Wala.” “Eh bakit tayo pupunta sa ospital?” “Kung hindi para sa’kin, para kanino pa nga ba?” Para sa’kin? Hindi pa sabihin ng diretso. Aww. Friend ko talaga ‘tong lalaking ‘to. ‘Kala ko wala lang sa kanya ‘yun pala nag-aalala rin naman. Bakit ba ayaw niyang ipahalata sa ibang tao? Wala namang mawawala sa kanya kung ipakita niya o aminin niyang nagaalala siya sa kaibigan niya ah. Weird talaga ‘to. I put out my MP4 then listened to the music. Kuntento na ako ng ganito. Tahimik. After all, Dervin is “a man of few words.” Haha… After a few minutes medyo nahiya ako sa kanya so I offered him to listen to the music too. I thought he would tur n me down pero hindi niya tinanggihan. Naki-soundtrip din siya. [i]MP4, Now playing: Stars By Lacuna Coil Is it asking too much to be given time To know the songs and to sing them Is it asking too much of my vacant smile And my laugh and lies that bring them As the stars are going out And this stage is full of nothing And the friends have all but gone For my life my god I'm singing Chorus; We'll take our hearts outside Leave our lives behind I'll watch the stars go out We'll take our hearts outside Leave our lives behind I'll watch the stars go out Is it asking too much of my favorite friends To take this song for real Is it asking too much of my partner's hands To take this song for real As the stars are going out And this stage is full of nothing And the friends have all but gone For my life my god I'm singing Chorus; We'll take our hearts outside Leave our lives behind I'll watch the stars go out We'll take our hearts outside Leave our lives behind I'll watch the stars go out We'll take our hearts outside We'll take our hearts outside Chorus; We'll take our hearts outside Leave our lives behind I'll watch the stars go out We'll take our hearts outside Leave our lives behind I'll watch the stars go out (repeated) We'll take our hearts outside Leave our lives behind (repeated over Chorus)[/i] When I was about to close my eyes, napatingin ako agad sa bintana ng taxi. Familiar ‘yung isang guy na naglalakad papunta sa direction na pinanggalingan namin. I shrugged it off, baka namamalikmata lang ako. As I listen to the music, I wonder what was going through inside Dervin’s head. Little by little, I didn’t notice that my head tilted to his shoulders as I was drifting far off to sleep. “Hey Steph, gising na, malapit na tayo.” “Ha? Uhm… Nakatulog pala ako.” Hala. OMG talaga. Nakahiga ako sa shoulders ni Dervin. Ahihi, bakit gan’on? May kilig factor. “Ai, sorry. Mabigat ba ako?” “Hindi ah. Okay lang, ‘Yun nga lang tulo laway ka na oh.” Hawak agad ako sa may labi ko kahit alam kong hindi naman ako tulo-laway matulog. Baliw ko talaga. Uto-uto pa. “Haha… Ang bilis ah. Check agad ng bibig eh.” “Loko ka talaga.” I hit punched him light on the arms. “Tama na nga. Nandito na tayo.” Nagbayad si Dervin sa driver ng taxi at bumaba na kami sa ospital. Napa-check ‘yung paa ko and ayun, sabi ipahinga lang for a week, then I’ll be in good shape. Pagkatapos no’n, kumain kami sa Jollibee malapit lang din sa hospital. On my way home, I checked my messages at no’n ko lang naalala… [i] Papuntang school si Lawrence!!![/i]

Last edited by eclipse_twins (2008-10-03 11:21:30)

dudie... i wana read more! hehe.. ano b yang "stars" na song? ngaun ko p yan narinig eh..