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[align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

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[align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

[align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions....thankz poh, [/b] [b][align=center]CHARACTERS:[/align][/b] [color=blue][align=center][b]Nickson Custudio ( Nikko )[/b][/align][/color] [b]Description:[/b] Ang gwapong anak ng may ari ng Mateo Custodio University, hunk siya, habulin ng mga girls pero hindi pa na-iinlove. Girlfriend niya si Angelli Noreen Nadal,classmate since Highschool. He's the type of guy na maingay, mahilig sa away at motorcycle addict. Naiinis lahat ng mga teachers sa kanya. Kahit ang pamilya nila ang may-ari ng school d pa rin siya lusot sa mga rules at regulation. Super Pasaway!! [b]Age:[/b] 16 years old [b]Year Level:[/b] 4th Year Highschool [b]Height:[/b] 5'10 [b]Status:[/b] currently in a relationship... [color=pink][align=center][b]Shiza Suzanne Nadal ( Shy )[/b][/align][/color] [b]Description:[/b] Isang ordinaryong girl na nag-aaral sa Mateo Custudio University. Hindi sila mahirap pero hindi rin sila mayaman. Maraming boys ang nag-kakagusto sa kanya dahil sa maganda na matalino pa, pero sa dami ng mga manliligaw niya tanging si Nickson Custodio,na boyfriend ng kanyang ate ngayon ang tinitibok ng puso niya. Siya ang captain sa Cheering Squad ng Highschool. [b]Age:[/b] 15 years old [b]Year Level:[/b] 3rd Year Highschool [b]Height:[/b] 5'4 [b]Status:[/b] Single [align=center][color=red][b]Angelli Norren Nadal[/b] ( Gel )[/color][/align] [b]Description:[/b] Maganda, mabait, kikay, matalino at talented. Dream girl siya ng mga boys sa school nila. Girlfriend ni Nickson Custodio,pero ngkakalabuan na sila ngayon kasi nalaman ng Boyfriend niya na mayroon siyang ibang lalaki. [b]Age:[/b] 16 years old [b]Year Level:[/b] 4th Year Highschool [b]Height:[/b] 5'5 [b]Status:[/b] currently in a relationship...... [align=center] [color=green][b]Zachary Cabrera[/b] ( Zac )[/color][/align] [b]Description:[/b] Captain sa Varsity ng Basketball ng MCU. May lihim na pagtingin sa bestfriend niyang si Shy. Honor student since 1st Year. Kabarkada niya si Nikko at team mate sa Basketball pero tutol sa feelings ng bestfriend niya para kay Nikko. Ayaw na ayaw niya kay Gel. [b]Age:[/b] 16 years old [b]Year Level:[/b] Fourth Year Highschool [b]Height:[/b] 5'9 [b]Status:[/b] loyal na loyal sa bestfriend..... [b][b]Barkada ni Nikko[/b] 1. [color=teal][b]Roland[/b][/color] - his best buddy 2. [color=limegreen][b]Kristian[/b][/color] - bully sa group 3. [color=navy][b]Michael[/b][/color] - cousin ni Nickson na may gusto kay Gel, siya ang dahilan king bakit nagkakalabuan asi Nikko at Gel [b][b]Barkada ni Shy[/b] 1. [color=orange][b]Honey[/b][/color] - bestest bestfriend ni Shy...since First Year,maingay, makulit, masiyahin at bibong bibo 2. [color=purple][b]Anne[/b][/color] - mahinhin sa group, ayaw niya talaga sa boys. [align=center][b]+CHAPTER ONE+ "First Day of School"[/b][/align] [i][b]Sa Bahay ng mga Nadal (6:00 am)[/i] [b]Mommy[/b]: [color=brown]Shy.......Gel........gising na malalate na kayo sa school it's already 6:00 am, ang babagal niyo pa naman maligo, kumain at magbihis.:angry:[/color] [b]Shy's POV[/b] good morning!!... .......hmmmmmmmmmm,si Mommy talaga first day na first day of school ng-sesermon kaagad....:rolleyes: [b]Shy:[/b] [color=pink]Opoh ma,bababa na po. Ate Gel........asan na ba yung towel koh?? wooooooooyyyy!!! Ate Gel,gising na!!! Malalate na tayo!!! :evil: Bahala ka nga,ang hirap hirap ming gisingin... [/color] [b]Gel:[/b] [color=red]Shy,andun sa kwarto nila Mommy yung towel mo..iniiwan mo lang kasi kung saan saan,,,,:rolleyes:[/color] [b]Shy:[/b] [color=pink]Ok,thnx!:cool: Bilisan mo na nga diyan,excited na me makita mga classmates koh....weeee!!:D:D[/color] [i] [b]Sa Mateo Custodio University...[/b][/i] [b]Shy:[/b] [color=pink]Ate,kita kitz nalang tayo dito sa school...cge.chao!!=| Hoooooooonneeeeeeeyyy!!! Long time no see,[i]( with matching beso! )[/i][b][/b] Nakita mo na ba si PAPA YUMMY???:wow:[/color] [b]Gel:[/b] [color=red]Haaaay,tong kapatid kong toh......:lol: hmmmmmmm,matxt nga si BABY kung andito na siya sa school....:question::question:[/color] [b]Honey:[/b] [color=orange]Hindi ko pa nakita BESPREN si Papa Yummy mo eh,tanungin nalang natin ate mo total boyfriend naman niya yun...hehehe,=D[/color] [b]Shy:[/b] [color=pink]Gaga ka ba talaga BESPREN??!!! Mapapatay ako ng kapatid ko kung malaman niyang patay na patay ako sa Boyfriend nya,:wallbash:....Huwag na nga lang natin hanapin si Papa Yummy koh,makikita nalang natin yun maya-maya....:wow::wow: [/color] [i][b]Apple Bottom Jeans, Boots with the Fur.............. Shawty get LOW LOW LOW LOW LOW LOW LOW....[/b][/i] [b]Gel:[/b] [color=red]Baby kooooooooooo!!!!:wow::wow:[/color] :penguin: :penguin: :penguin: [color=red]lakas naman ng music niyang motor mo!!.... tingnan mo,nag-tinginan tuloy dito mga tao....:redface:[/color] [color=red]kakahiya!!![/color] [b]Nikko:[/b] [color=blue]Hayaan mo na sila Babes, I missed you!![/color] [b][i]( with hug,pero nalatingin kay Shy )[/i][/b]....:P [b]Gel:[/b] [color=red]Tara na nga,Baby....:):) Punta na tayo sa Room...:kiss: Shy,tama na ang chika diyan...punta na kayo ni Honey sa Classroom nyo...:angry::angry: [/color] [b]Shy:[/b] [color=pink]Opoh,:cry:.........[/color][i]( sabay alis )[/i] [b] Shy:[/b] [color=pink]Bespren!!!....nakita mo yun??? Ang ganda talaga ng motor ni Nikko,bagay na bagay sa kanya....:rolleyes::rolleyes:[/color] :wow: :wow: :wow: :wow: [b]Honey:[/b] [color=orange]Oo na,huwag mo nga lakasan boses mo,.....Nasa likod lang ata natin yung ate mo!!..:paranoid::paranoid: [/color] [b]Shy and Honey:[/b] Good morning po Sir....:) Good morning po Ma'am..........:) [b]Shy:[/b] [color=pink]Bespren,muztah nga pala summer mo??? Bakit di ka nag-tetext????[/color] [b]Honey:[/b] [color=orange]Wala lang, nasira kasi phone ko...:angry::angry: Nabasa!!!....nakalimutan kong nasa bulsa ko pala siya nang naliligo ako sa pool,:drool::drool: [/color] [b]BBBBBBBBBBLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAGGGG!!!!![/b] :wallbash: :wallbash: :wallbash: :wallbash: :wallbash: :wallbash: [b]Shy:[/b] [color=pink]OOOOOOOUUUUUUUUUCCCCCCCCHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!![/color] [i][align=center][b]Abangan Chapter 2: Sino ka?????[/b][/align][/i] [b]Sa mga nag-basa, comment po kayo kung itutuloy ko ang story ko kasi kung hindi maganda, uulitin ko nalang....Thankyou sa pagbabasa,[/b]

Last edited by baby_haizeek (2009-07-13 07:22:59)

Cutie_Phunk
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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

^weew! first to comment! new story again!, aabngn nah nmn! ha!3,=D,. -topic- weew! sis,sino kyah un??., nxt chappie nah sis!, :)
baby_haizeek
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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

hehehe,ok lang poh ba ung story koh???...:redface:
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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

^yah!, lht nng story dito mgagandah! and very interesting! pati den yong sayo!,. ang gandah nng mga names! jiji:D,. btw,sis when will you post the nxt chappie???., stil waiting for it! :)...
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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

thankz sis,for appreciating...hehehe,:D ewan koh poh kung kelan me mg.popost ng chapter two.... pero try koh a.s.a.p. for you,wow!!....:)
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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

nice story ah aabangan kuh 2h. gravbeh ang title.. sis, can i take him? :crybaby: :crybaby: :crybaby: parang , ewan kuh bah.. i'll wait fur the next chappie sistah..
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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

@baby_haizeek:ahw!ukie sis! but em stil waiting for it! :D...
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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

weee.it's nice!wow.parang maganda patutunguhan.woot.subaybayan ku to. :arrow: update na yan. :D
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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

wee! ang cute ng story! subaybayan ko din toh! go gurl! keep it up! :D:thumbsup:
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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

[b][color=purple][align=center]cutie_phunk: thankz talaga sis....=) lady end: hehehe,dapat kasi maganda yung titlte para attractive sa readers...thankz for reading, i'll update soon...iicp pa kz me for the next chapter, jhayyuliajay: thanx poh sis for reading... dhen2x: hehehe,cute ba??...salamat poh,[/align][/color][/b]
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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

Ituloy mo, miss author. kakacurious ung blaaaaggg oouucchh sino ka.. moment ehh. :lol: gudlak on this. ;)
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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

weeeeh!., sino aqouh!?. aqouh si!... hehe... lol.. juzz kiddding sis!., ehhehe... sana aqouh nalang ung gf ni nikko!., tutal gwapo naman cya!. haha,,, [b]nasan na c gel?!., sis gel!., can i take him?!.[/b] haha.. lol
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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

[align=center]wohoo! :lol: [i]ang cute naman[/i], di pala nagkakalayo sa age si shy kay gel. [b]im excited how this story goes.[/b] [b]good luck![/b] :D[/align]
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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

[b][align=center]+CHAPTER Two+ Sino ka??[/align][/b] [b]Shy:[/b] [color=pink]OOOOOOOOOOOOUUUUUUUUUUUCCCCCCCCCCHHHHHHHH!!!!![/color] [color=limegreen][b]YOU BASTARD!!! Natapon tuloy juice ko, Asaaaaaaaaaaaaar!!!![/b][/color]:evil: [b]Gel:[color=red]SHY!!:O:O[/color] Shy:[/b] [color=pink]Im so Sorry!!![/color]:crybaby::crybaby: [b]Kristian:[/b] [color=limegreen] huh???[/color] [b][i](biglang tumigil ang mundo at napasamile)[/i][/b] :wow: :wow: :wow: [color=limegreen]Oh,it's OK miss...It was my fault,hindi kasi ako tumutingin sa dinadaanan ko. Next time if I bump into you sisiguraduhin kong hindi ka na sisigaw ng "OUCH" kakabingi kasi,abot ata hanggang library sigaw mo..[/color]:eh: :eh: [b]Nikko:[/b] [color=blue]Kristian?? Pare,ingatan mo yang si Shy. Kasi, Baby ko…[/color] [i]( tumingin ng masama si Gel kay Nikko):evil:[/i][/b] [color=blue]Baby Sister ko yan!!!:eh:[/color] [b]Shy:[/b] [color=pink]hmmmmm,:angry: tumigil ka nga diyan Nikko!! Hindi na ako Baby!!:disgust:[/color] [b]Honey;[/b] [color=orange]Halika na nga Shy, Baka andun na si Mrs. Astrologo terror pa nman yung teacher na yun!![/color]:paranoid: [b]Shy:[/b] [color=pink]Okay!![/color]:):thumbsup: [b]Gel:[color=red] cge,we have to go na rin. Andun na ata teacher namin. Bye!![/color]:penguin: [/b] [i][b](sabay walkout …)[/b][/i] [b]Kristian:[/b] [color=limegreen]Hey Miss!! You drop your PHONE!! Asan na ba yung Shy na yun??? Bigla nalang nawala..[/color] [b][i](Shy and Honey papunta sa room nila…)[/i][/b] [b]Shy:[/b] [color=pink]Bespren,sino kaya yung guy na nakabangga ko kanina:question: Ang gwapo!!! Pero mas gwapo pa rin si Papa Yummy koh.:drool:[/color] [b]Honey:[/b] [color=orange]Oo nga noh, new student siguro yun hindi kasi familiar ang kagwapuhan niya dito sa campus. :D Bes,nakikita mo ba yung girl na nakatalikod dun? Mukhang si Anne yun ah,wow naman nagpa-kulot!! Halika puntahan na natin at asarin.[/color]:eh: [b]Shy:[/b] [color=pink] Sira! Aasarin mo talaga!![/color]:lol: [b]Shy and Honey:[/b] AAAAAANNNNNNNNNNEEEEEEE!!!!!:o:O [b]Anne:[/b][color=purple] Hey!! Mga Bespren, namiz ko talaga mga kakulitan niyo nung summer! Ei,nga pala magiging masaya yung Junior Year natin ngayon!!:cool:[/color] [b]Shy and Honey:[/b] Bakit:question::question: [b]Anne:[/b][color=purple] Kasi,tingnan niyo yung List of students in each section. Bilis!!![/color] [b]Shy and Honey:[/b] WOW!! Classmates ulit tayong tatlo!!!! [b] (inside the classroom…)[/b][/i] [b]Mrs.Astrologo:[/b] Good Morning class. I am going to be your adviser this whole school year. If you don’t like me,then wala kayong magagawa kundi magtiis…:P Honey:[/b][color=orange] Grabe naman yang teacher na yan!! Ang sungit.. [/color]:evil: [i][b](pabulong na sabi ni Honey)[/b][/i] [b]Shy:[/b] [color=pink]Teka muna guys,asan na ba si ZACHARIAS!!??? Hindi ko pa siya nakikita ah..:paranoid:[/color] [b]Honey:[/b][color=orange]Oo nga, may utang pa sa kin yun…hihihi,=D[/color] [b]Anne:[/b][color=purple] Andun siya sa kabilang room. Malas nga eh, wala tayong makokopyahan kung may quiz sa CHEMISTRY.[/color]:crybaby: [b][i](inintroduce na ng whole class ang mga sarili nila infront after that Recess time na nila..)[/b][/i] [b]KRRRRRRIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIINNNNNNNNNNGGGGG!!![/b] [b][i](nakita nina Anne, Honey at Shy si Zac na kasama ang lalaking nakabangga ni Shy kanina)[/i][/b] [b]Zac:[/b][color=green] Shy!! Yung phone nasa lost and found section kanina kinuha ko nalang para maibalik ko sa’yo. Nahulog dawn g nakabangga mo si Kristian. Here it is.[/color];) [b]Shy:[/b][color=pink]Talaga?? Nahulog, di ko namalayan yun ah. Buti nalang mabait yung nakabangga ko. Ano nga ulit pangalan nun?? Kristian?? Tama ba?? I’ll thank him nalang kung magkita kami sa ditto sa campus.[/color] [b]Anne:[/b] [color=purple] May nakabangga ka kanina?? Bakit di mo nachika?? Hmmmpp.tampo ako!:crybaby:[/color] [b]Shy:[/b] [color=pink]Oo,gwapo nga eh!! Wag kana magtampo bespren papakilala nalang kita sa kanya if ever makasalubong natin…Ok???[/color] [b]Honey:[/b] [color=orange]Ang hihilig niyo talaga sa gwapo!!:mad:[/color] [b]Anne. Shy, Zac:[/b] [b]bakit ikaw hindi?? Nagsalita ka pa,hehe..=D[/b] [i][b](bumalik na sila sa mga classrooms nila..)[/b][/i] [i][b]Sa class nina Nikko…[/b][/i] [b]Nikko:[/b] [color=blue]Babes,pakikuha nga ng ballpen ko sa locker. Sige na plzzzz…[/color] [b]Ms. Jimenez:[/b] [i][b]Mr. Custodio! It’s not right for you na utusan si Ms. Nadal, babae yan!! Go get your ballpen yourself![/b][/i] :evil: [b]Gel:[/b] [color=red]hahaha,buti nga![/color]:D [b]Nikko:[/b] [color=blue] Grabe ka namang mag-lambing babes, binubuti nga buti nga mo ko. Ang Sweet!![/color] [b]Gel:[/b][color=red] SORRY PO…Baby, sabay nalang tayo uwi mamaya.[/color] [b]Nikko:[/b] [color=blue] Sorry baby,hindi pwede eh…may lakad kami nila Roland next t ime nalang,[/color] [b]Gel:[/b][color=red]Ok..hmmm.,:doubt:[/color] [b][i](uwian na!!)[/i][/b] [b]Nikko:[/b] [color=blue]Bye babes. Ingatz,[/color] [b]Gel:[/b][color=red] Ok,bye din…Ilove you!!:wow:[/color] [b]Roland:[/b][color=teal] Nikz,san ba punta natin ngayon??[/color] [b]Nikko:[/b] [color=blue]Bazta…susundan natin si Shy,,,[/color] :eh: :eh: :eh: [b]Roland:[/b][color=teal] Gung-gung!! Bakit naman?? Naiin-love kana siguro dun noh?? Naku!! Alam ba ni Gel pinag-gagagawa mo?? Baka mapatay ka nun…[/color] [b]Nikko:[/b] [color=blue]Siyempre hindi…Cute kasi yung batang yun, halika na nga Im sure labasan na nila..:eh:[/color]:wow: ======[b]Abangan Chapter 3: Manong. Huwag po!! Huwag po!![/b]

Last edited by baby_haizeek (2008-07-19 02:24:30)

baby_haizeek
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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

[align=center]here's my chapter two....:cry: hope you like it, germandi: hehe,thnx for reading...sinadya kong bitin ang chapter one,=) akuzet16: hehehe,sayo nlang si nikko?? hala,dami na tayong gf niya!! azaliah: thankz for reading.yup one year lang gap nila para ayoz!! cutie_phunk: andito na po ung next chapter,dedicated for you my dear sis....[/align]
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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

[b]wee. new story. angnda sis. =) update m na ulit. :D[/b]
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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

aw!.. Nikko!..ur a bad bad bad boy!..i lyk it!! :D haha..watda?.. -[i]Manong. Huwag po!! Huwag po!![/i] anu yan???? :o -->nxt chaps n poe!..kkbitin ihh.. :eh:
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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

[b]berii:[/b] thankz for reading,i'll update soon...=) [b]rocel:[/b] hahaha,me too...iLike nikko, bazta abangan mo nlang kung bakit [i]manong huwag po Huwag po[/i] ang title ng chapter three...kakatuwa yan!! thanks for reading,
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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

wow... ang ganda ng story.. hehe.. another chapter na po... (curious sa manyayari) hehe
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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

:lol: [quote=baby_haizeek]======Abangan Chapter 3: Manong. Huwag po!! Huwag po!![/quote] wew, baka tuluyan na akung mabaliw.. ajaja.. next ba yan? gravbeh huh..? huwag po? :eh: ganda ng chappie na2h.. kristian bah un? ang gwapo daw niyah? ajaja, at c nikko, badboy, cnuh bah talagah gux2h nya? :P ajaja... baxtah w8 fur the next chappie na lang.. next update na.. :eh: :P
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