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[align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

[quote=asukal_rienee]ayeeh, ang sweet :rose: haha, kelan next chap? excited akuh! :D[/quote] yup...kahit anu gawin koh, friend ko pa rin xa,:crybaby: next chap??? dont know sis... mybe this weekend, [quote=pinkloveriza01]sis kailan mo popost ung next chapter? hehe.. :D super excited na din ako.. =)[/quote] ewan ko sis...hihi, di pa kasi ako nakapag-type... cguro dis weekend kung hindi ako ma.bz...;)
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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

^ sizzz... update na!!!haha..
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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

wow! ganda ng kwento =) [sa wakas nakapagtagalog rin aq.lol.] hehehe kip it up :D
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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

@baby_haizeek: asan na ung reply mo? intay ko la pala. anyways. ganda story!:thumbsup: mom ni zac ka name ng mom ko! cool~!
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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

[quote=baby_haizeek]ewan ko sis...hihi, di pa kasi ako nakapag-type... cguro dis weekend kung hindi ako ma.bz...;)[/quote] ahh.. ok.. i'll w8.. :D just take ur time.. :)
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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

[quote=baby_haizeek]char!! ayun ginawan na koh ng friend koh, nag-hanap lang ata siya sa internet... bahala na yung teacher ko dun, basta may naipasa ako...hihihi, salamat nalang sa concern ni "njblxii"... thanks, my dear sissy....[/quote] mamatx nmn! at gnwab ka niya! jiji.. Btw, an' tgal kong d nka-ol! jiji. san nah yong update sis? antay lng kme! jiji.. :D
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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

ganda tlaga ng story. hehe. update na poh.:D
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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

please update na sis.. :D
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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

wow . . . hahah . . i love it:wow:
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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

wee. sis,update muna. jiji. antay lng kming lht xa update mo, at sa nxt chappie nito! tsek!2. :D
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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

sis asan n po ung next.. wow... gnda tlga ng story... nku... d q n matiis n di mbasa.. heheh gudluck sis...
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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

Sorry sa lahat ng mga readers kasi nag-hintay kayo ng matagal...Hope you'll enjoy reading this Chapter!!=) [align=center][b]Chapter Nine [/b] [b][i]�WINKER�[/i][/b][/align] [b]Gel�s Room[/b] [b]Gene:[/b] Gel, paano mo ba nagawang halikan si Nikko infront of the crowd dun sa baba�??? [b]Gel:[/b][color=red] Paki-alam mo!! Baba na nga tayo let�s enjoy mommy�s birthday party..[/color] [b]Portia:[/b] Haaaaaay, Gel� tumigil ka nga, kita mo nang lasing ka na gusto mo pa rin pumunta dun� pinapahiya mo lang parents mo, buti pa si Shy�.. [b]Gel:[/b][color=red] Huwag na huwag mong babanggitin ang pangalan na yan sa kin� I hate that name!! Bakit ba puro nalang kayo Shy?? Ano bang meron siya na wala ako???!!! Everytime andiyan siya na-oout of place ako!![/color] [b]Mommy:[/b] [color=brown]Tumigil ka nga!! How could you say bad things to your own sister� Pinahiya mo na nga ako sa party pati ba naman sa harap ng mga kaibigan mo..[/color] [b]Gel:[/b][color=red] I don�t care!! Kampihan mo ang paborito mong anak!!![/color] [b]Mommy:[/b] [color=brown]Portia and Gene� You can go home, total the party�s over� Thank you for coming nalang�[/color] [b]Gene and Portia:[/b] Sige poh� [b]Shy�s Room[/b] [b]Shy:[/b][color=pink] Muddy!! Ano ba gagawin ko???!!! Wait wala naman akong kasalanan diba?? So dapat hindi ako takot�. Hoooooh!!! Enhale!!! Exhale!! Kaya mo yan Shy., Go! Go! Go![/color] [b]Daddy:[/b]Shy??? Mag-usap nga tayo�. Bakit ganun ang reaction ng ate mo??? I know something�s going on�. [b]Shy:[/b][color=pink] Sige Daddy, I�m going to tell you kung ano ang nangyari�[/color] [i][b]Pakiki-epal ni Ms. Author: To make the story short kinwento ni Shy lahat ng nang-yari sa kanila ni Gel�Open kasi siya sa Daddy niya kaya yun�.hehehe,back to the story mga readers�[/b][/i] [b]Daddy:[/b]So now I know� Hayaan nalang natin ang ate mo, I know she has her own way of dealing things� I�ll talk to her nalang kung mejo ok ok na siya� Lasing yun diba?? [b]Shy:[/b][color=pink] Opoh,� Thanks Dad,[/color] [b]Daddy:[/b] Sige matulog kana anak� [b]Mommy:[/b] [color=brown] RAFAEL!!!!![/color] [b]Daddy:[/b] Yes?? Anu yun honey??? [b]Mommy:[/b] [color=brown] Napatawag yung ate mo, Bad news� Si Papa daw, wala na�.=�([/color] [b]Daddy:[/b] Huh??? Halika� Puntahan natin sila� Gisingin mo yung mga bata, [b]Shy:[/b][color=pink] Si lolo??? Bakit??? Hindi pwede..huhuhuhuhuhu�[/color] [b]Mommy:[/b] [color=brown] Shy��.. Gel��. Gising kayo, I have a bad news, Your Tita Angie called me at sabi niya na wala na daw yung lolo niyo, Mag-bihis kayo at pupunta tayo ngayon dun�.[/color] [b]Shy:[/b][color=pink] Huh?? Eh� Si ate poh, tulog� Lasing yun diba??�[/color] [b]Daddy:[/b] Sige anak, hayaan lang muna natin ang ate mong makapag-pahinga.. Alam kong pagod yun,,, Let�s Go�. [b]Mommy:[/b] [color=brown] Tara na Hon, Let�s go� Aling Tekla,,,, Ikaw nalang poh ang bahala dito sa bahay pati kay Gel� Hindi ko alam kung kelan kami makaka-uwi.. Tatawag nalang ako kung makarating na kami doon� Malayo-layo din kasi yung Vigan�. [b]Shy:[/b][color=pink] What??? Bka magtagal kami doon�. Papaano na si Nikko?? Hmmmmm, Mamimiz ko siya�. Hindi man lang ako nakpag-paalam sa kanya ng maayos�[/color] [b]Daddy:[/b] Tama nay an Shy na pag-sasalita mo nang mag-isa, Sakay ka na� [b]Shy:[/b][color=pink] Ay,opoh�[/color] [b]Aling Tekla:[/b] Upo ma�am� Mag-eengat kayu nela ser!! [b]BROOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOMMMMMMMMMMMM!!![/b] [b][i](Nakita niyang umalis ang sasakyan nila�)[/i][/b] [b]Gel:[/b][color=red] Mag-sama kayong tatlo, wala na kayong Gel na maabutan pag-uwi niyo dito� I thought we�re family.,..This is your fault Shy!![/color] [b]The Next Morning..[/b] [b]Aling Tekla:[/b] Gil�.!!! Gil�.!!! Gil�.!!! [b]Gel:[/b][color=red] Ano poh yun??? Alig Tekla,pahingi nga po ng gamot� Ang sakit ng ulo ko�.[/color] [b]Aling Tekla:[/b] Sige�. Haleka, [b]Gel:[/b][color=red] Salamat po� Kailan ang uwi dito nila Mommy???[/color] [b]Aling Tekla:[/b] Eha, hendi ku alam� Segoru next wek ata� [b]Gel:[/b][color=red] Ah, sige� Maliligo na poh ako,, Late na kasi�.[/color] [b]SCHOOL�[/b] [b]Nikko:[/b][color=blue] Anne??? Alam mo ba kung nasaan si Shy?? Wala pa kasi eh.[/color] [b]Anne:[/b] [color=purple] Haaaaaay�hindi kana nasanay dun., diba?? Palaging late naman ang babaeng yun�[/color] [b]Honey:[/b][color=orange] Kaya nga Nikko, lalo na ngayon na andyan Daddy niya tapos nagkaroon pa ng ALAMZ NA�sa party kagabi,[/color] [b]Nikko:[/b][color=blue] Haaaaaaaaaaaaaay, kumuzta na kaya si Shy ko�hmmmmmm,[/color] [b]Honey:[/b][color=orange] Shy mo??? Duh!! As if naman, kayo na�[/color] [b]Anne:[/b] [color=purple] Ambisyoso!!! Hehehehe, sige Nikz see you� Alis na kami,[/color] [b]Nikko:[/b][color=blue]Ok�.,[/color] [b]VIGAN�[/b] [b]Shy:[/b][color=pink] Haaaay,ang layo layo naman ng Vigan!! Sino kaya nag-embento ng lugar na toh?? Kakasuhan koh,�[/color] [b]Daddy:[/b] Tumugil ka nga diyan� Nkakatawa mga pinag-sasasabi mo, [b]Mommy:[/b] [color=brown] Shy��.. Ilagay mo na nga yung mga gamit natin sa kwarto[/color] [b]Shy:[/b][color=pink] Opo, gawin ba namanga kng alalay�. Hmmmmmmm, Maktawag nga kay Nikko�. 0908*****31[/color] [i][b]Pakiki-epal ni Ms. Author: WOW! Smart si PAPA YUMMY,hehehehe�.papansin na naman ang magnadang author�hahaha![/i][/b] [color=pink] Hello??? Nikko???[/color] [b]Nikko:[/b][color=blue] Oh??? Shy?? Npatawag ka?? Asan ka nga pala?? Bakit hndi ka pumasok??[/color] [b]Shy:[/b][color=pink] Andito kami ngayon sa Vigan.. Kagabi kasi napatawag yung Tita Angie ko, Sabi niya winker na daw si lolo�[/color] [b]Nikko:[/b][color=blue] Ganun ba?? Condolence�[/color] [b]Shy:[/b][color=pink] Nakakalungkot nga eh, Lalo na kung nakikita ko yung sing-sing na bigay niya� Suot ko ito always, Since grade 3 pa ako nito� Tagla na noh???[/color] [b]Nikko:[/b][color=blue] I know Shy kung nasaan man siya ngayon He�s happy�[/color] [b]Shy:[/b][color=pink] I hope so, Sige Nikz maya nalang� Pakisabi nalang kina Anne at Honey na ndito ako sa Vigan� Ingatz� Bye�.[/color] [b]Nikko:[/b][color=blue] Ok�Take Care too, And I Love�.�[/color] Toooooooooooooooooooooot�.. [b]Nikko:[/b][color=blue] Anak ng tipaklong!! Naputol na� Hmmmmm,�.. Azar!![/color] [b]Shy:[/b][color=pink] Mommy� Saan kop o ba ilalagay ang mga gamit??? WHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAT??? LOLO??? Akala ko ba� Winker ka na!![/color] [b]Lolo:[/b] Haaaay mga bata nga talaga ngayon�. Yung Tita Angie mo kasi gusto niyang mag-reunion sila ng Daddy mo kaya yun ang naisip niyang palusot.. [b]Shy:[/b][color=pink] Thank God!! Kung ganun� Akala ko kasi anon a nangyari sa inyo�[/color] [b]Lolo:[/b] Ano nga pala sabi mo?? Winker??? Anu yun??? [b]Shy:[/b][color=pink] Matanda ka nga talaga kayo lo, Yung winker po ay baklish word for �WALA��..[/color] [b]Lolo:[/b] Ganun ba?? Bago yun ha!! Sige, gagamitin ko yun sa mga captions ko sa friendster pictures ko� [b]Shy:[/b][color=pink] What the!!??? Lo?? May friendster kayo??? Ayos ka rin noh!! Penge nga poh ng e-add,� Hehehehe, i-aadd kita�[/color] [b]Lolo:[/b] Sige apo, Paki-check nalang kung may update ako� [b]Mommy:[/b] [color=brown] Pa??? Nag-kita na pala kayo ni Shy�[/color] [b]Lolo:[/b] Oo, kawawa naman yung bata,,, Naabala pa tuloy yung pag-aaral niya,,, Asan nga pala si Angelie??? [b]Shy:[/b][color=pink] Ay Lo, naiwan po si Ate�[/color] [b]Lolo:[/b] Ah, sana makapunta siya dito� [b]Mommy:[/b] [color=brown] Pa. narinig ko nga pala yung pinag-uuspan niyo kanina ni Shy� Totoo bang may FRIENDSTER ACCOUNT kayo???[/color] [b]Lolo:[/b] Ay! Abat, porket matanda na ako hindi ibig sabihin niyan na huli na ako sa mga makabagong pa-uso ng kabataan ngayon� [b]Shy:[/b][color=pink] Haaaaay,lolo talaga� I love you poh��[/color] [b]SCHOOL..[/b] [b]Mrs. Astrologo:[/b] Class� Listen, this coming Friday will be our acquaintance Party� Prepare for the program dito sa room natin,,,, Yung mga SSC Officers naman, be sure na kahit busy kayo sa induction of officers ng whole school� Mamamanage niyo pa rin ang mga responsibilities niyo dito sa class natin� [b]Honey:[/b][color=orange] Wow!! Ayos toh! Acquaintance na!! It�s Disco time��[/color] [b]Next Chapter: "Chapter 10-To Death" thank you for reading....=)[/b] :lol:~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ :lol: [quote=angeli718]^ sizzz... update na!!!haha..[/quote] hehehe,andrito na po sis... nag-update na koh, tagal kong di naka-open sa page na toh,hihihi... [quote=Kaygee :3]wow! ganda ng kwento =) [sa wakas nakapagtagalog rin aq.lol.] hehehe kip it up :D[/quote] hehehe,thank you sis... kaya nga, pwede kang mag-tagalog dito... hirap kasi kung puro nalang english... PINOY AKO!!,haha! [quote=eri.03]@baby_haizeek: asan na ung reply mo? intay ko la pala. anyways. ganda story!:thumbsup: mom ni zac ka name ng mom ko! cool~![/quote] naku sis! nag-reply na ata ako sau... talagA? wow! what a co.e!! magkapareha sila ng name, [quote=pinkloveriza01]ahh.. ok.. i'll w8.. :D just take ur time.. :)[/quote] no need to wait sis, and sorry to keep you for waiting... nag-update na ako!! hehehe, sa wakas!! [quote=Cutie_Phunk]mamatx nmn! at gnwab ka niya! jiji.. Btw, an' tgal kong d nka-ol! jiji. san nah yong update sis? antay lng kme! jiji.. :D[/quote] hehehe,ako rin sis! ngayon nga lang ako nakapag-ol ulit.... sorry kung mejo natagalan... hirap kasi mag-isip kung ano ang pwedeng chapter 9... [quote=aenemij]ganda tlaga ng story. hehe. update na poh.:D[/quote] hehehehe,salamat poh.. ayan na nag-update na me, enjoi reading... [quote=banoCore]wow . . . hahah . . i love it:wow:[/quote] nakzzzz!! slamat naman poh,=) [quote=grace17]sis asan n po ung next.. wow... gnda tlga ng story... nku... d q n matiis n di mbasa.. heheh gudluck sis...[/quote] andito na sis yung next,hehehe... salamat sa inyo... char! kakatuwa nman poh kayo, enjoi reading...

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x avie x
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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

nice, ganda ng kwento.. amazing. tuloy niyo po ah.. :)
baby_haizeek
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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

[quote=x avie x]nice, ganda ng kwento.. amazing. tuloy niyo po ah.. :)[/quote] hai sa'yo!! new reader, thank you sa support...
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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

Woo. Nakakachaka si lolo. May friendster. Nyahaha. Makahingi nga ng Testimonial dun. Hahaha.:lol: Next chapter please.
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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

nag'update na pla si sis! lol kakatawa nman ung lolo. may fs. haha anung # ni papa yummy? :d :lol: :lol:
angeli718
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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

waa.. gnda ng chapter.. [b]winker?![/b] haha.. sa nman nakuha un.?.. update na agad..!! haha..
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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

[quote=bianx_06]Woo. Nakakachaka si lolo. May friendster. Nyahaha. Makahingi nga ng Testimonial dun. Hahaha.:lol: Next chapter please.[/quote] hahahaha, ala na kasi akong maisip... mejo boring yung chapter na toh, don't worry... next chapter im xur magugustuhan ninyo.... [quote=_berii.^�]nag'update na pla si sis! lol kakatawa nman ung lolo. may fs. haha anung # ni papa yummy? :d :lol: :lol:[/quote] yes!!! hehehe....sa wakas, natagalan ako diyan... boring noh??? no. niya??? secreto lang poh, para bibo...hkhkhk, [quote=angeli718]waa.. gnda ng chapter.. winker?! haha.. sa nman nakuha un.?.. update na agad..!! haha..[/quote] ganda ba?? feel ko nga na boring... cute ng word na "WINKER" noh? xpression ka kasi yan...hihihihi, winker lang,....
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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

[quote=baby_haizeek]hehehe,ako rin sis! ngayon nga lang ako nakapag-ol ulit.... sorry kung mejo natagalan... hirap kasi mag-isip kung ano ang pwedeng chapter 9...[/quote] wee. awh.okay lng yon sis! ang mhlga nka-update kna ulit!:D @t: wee. natatawa ako sa lolo nila! may fs accnt pla? pengeh nmn! jiji.. wee.ano kyah mngyayari sa nxt chappie? :D
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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

[quote=Cutie_Phunk]wee. awh.okay lng yon sis! ang mhlga nka-update kna ulit!:D @t: wee. natatawa ako sa lolo nila! may fs accnt pla? pengeh nmn! jiji.. wee.ano kyah mngyayari sa nxt chappie? :D[/quote] hehehe,sabagay... yes,sis! my fs... ok na lolo, hindi nagpapa-huli sa uso... i'm xur u will like the next chapter...;]
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