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[align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

[quote=asukal_rienee]ayeeh, ang sweet :rose: haha, kelan next chap? excited akuh! :D[/quote] yup...kahit anu gawin koh, friend ko pa rin xa,:crybaby: next chap??? dont know sis... mybe this weekend, [quote=pinkloveriza01]sis kailan mo popost ung next chapter? hehe.. :D super excited na din ako.. =)[/quote] ewan ko sis...hihi, di pa kasi ako nakapag-type... cguro dis weekend kung hindi ako ma.bz...;)
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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

^ sizzz... update na!!!haha..
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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

wow! ganda ng kwento =) [sa wakas nakapagtagalog rin aq.lol.] hehehe kip it up :D
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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

@baby_haizeek: asan na ung reply mo? intay ko la pala. anyways. ganda story!:thumbsup: mom ni zac ka name ng mom ko! cool~!
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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

[quote=baby_haizeek]ewan ko sis...hihi, di pa kasi ako nakapag-type... cguro dis weekend kung hindi ako ma.bz...;)[/quote] ahh.. ok.. i'll w8.. :D just take ur time.. :)
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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

[quote=baby_haizeek]char!! ayun ginawan na koh ng friend koh, nag-hanap lang ata siya sa internet... bahala na yung teacher ko dun, basta may naipasa ako...hihihi, salamat nalang sa concern ni "njblxii"... thanks, my dear sissy....[/quote] mamatx nmn! at gnwab ka niya! jiji.. Btw, an' tgal kong d nka-ol! jiji. san nah yong update sis? antay lng kme! jiji.. :D
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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

ganda tlaga ng story. hehe. update na poh.:D
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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

please update na sis.. :D
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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

wow . . . hahah . . i love it:wow:
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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

wee. sis,update muna. jiji. antay lng kming lht xa update mo, at sa nxt chappie nito! tsek!2. :D
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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

sis asan n po ung next.. wow... gnda tlga ng story... nku... d q n matiis n di mbasa.. heheh gudluck sis...
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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

Sorry sa lahat ng mga readers kasi nag-hintay kayo ng matagal...Hope you'll enjoy reading this Chapter!!=) [align=center][b]Chapter Nine [/b] [b][i]”WINKER”[/i][/b][/align] [b]Gel’s Room[/b] [b]Gene:[/b] Gel, paano mo ba nagawang halikan si Nikko infront of the crowd dun sa baba…??? [b]Gel:[/b][color=red] Paki-alam mo!! Baba na nga tayo let’s enjoy mommy’s birthday party..[/color] [b]Portia:[/b] Haaaaaay, Gel… tumigil ka nga, kita mo nang lasing ka na gusto mo pa rin pumunta dun… pinapahiya mo lang parents mo, buti pa si Shy….. [b]Gel:[/b][color=red] Huwag na huwag mong babanggitin ang pangalan na yan sa kin… I hate that name!! Bakit ba puro nalang kayo Shy?? Ano bang meron siya na wala ako???!!! Everytime andiyan siya na-oout of place ako!![/color] [b]Mommy:[/b] [color=brown]Tumigil ka nga!! How could you say bad things to your own sister… Pinahiya mo na nga ako sa party pati ba naman sa harap ng mga kaibigan mo..[/color] [b]Gel:[/b][color=red] I don’t care!! Kampihan mo ang paborito mong anak!!![/color] [b]Mommy:[/b] [color=brown]Portia and Gene… You can go home, total the party’s over… Thank you for coming nalang…[/color] [b]Gene and Portia:[/b] Sige poh… [b]Shy’s Room[/b] [b]Shy:[/b][color=pink] Muddy!! Ano ba gagawin ko???!!! Wait wala naman akong kasalanan diba?? So dapat hindi ako takot…. Hoooooh!!! Enhale!!! Exhale!! Kaya mo yan Shy., Go! Go! Go![/color] [b]Daddy:[/b]Shy??? Mag-usap nga tayo…. Bakit ganun ang reaction ng ate mo??? I know something’s going on…. [b]Shy:[/b][color=pink] Sige Daddy, I’m going to tell you kung ano ang nangyari…[/color] [i][b]Pakiki-epal ni Ms. Author: To make the story short kinwento ni Shy lahat ng nang-yari sa kanila ni Gel…Open kasi siya sa Daddy niya kaya yun….hehehe,back to the story mga readers…[/b][/i] [b]Daddy:[/b]So now I know… Hayaan nalang natin ang ate mo, I know she has her own way of dealing things… I’ll talk to her nalang kung mejo ok ok na siya… Lasing yun diba?? [b]Shy:[/b][color=pink] Opoh,… Thanks Dad,[/color] [b]Daddy:[/b] Sige matulog kana anak… [b]Mommy:[/b] [color=brown] RAFAEL!!!!![/color] [b]Daddy:[/b] Yes?? Anu yun honey??? [b]Mommy:[/b] [color=brown] Napatawag yung ate mo, Bad news… Si Papa daw, wala na….=’([/color] [b]Daddy:[/b] Huh??? Halika… Puntahan natin sila… Gisingin mo yung mga bata, [b]Shy:[/b][color=pink] Si lolo??? Bakit??? Hindi pwede..huhuhuhuhuhu…[/color] [b]Mommy:[/b] [color=brown] Shy…….. Gel……. Gising kayo, I have a bad news, Your Tita Angie called me at sabi niya na wala na daw yung lolo niyo, Mag-bihis kayo at pupunta tayo ngayon dun….[/color] [b]Shy:[/b][color=pink] Huh?? Eh… Si ate poh, tulog… Lasing yun diba??…[/color] [b]Daddy:[/b] Sige anak, hayaan lang muna natin ang ate mong makapag-pahinga.. Alam kong pagod yun,,, Let’s Go…. [b]Mommy:[/b] [color=brown] Tara na Hon, Let’s go… Aling Tekla,,,, Ikaw nalang poh ang bahala dito sa bahay pati kay Gel… Hindi ko alam kung kelan kami makaka-uwi.. Tatawag nalang ako kung makarating na kami doon… Malayo-layo din kasi yung Vigan…. [b]Shy:[/b][color=pink] What??? Bka magtagal kami doon…. Papaano na si Nikko?? Hmmmmm, Mamimiz ko siya…. Hindi man lang ako nakpag-paalam sa kanya ng maayos…[/color] [b]Daddy:[/b] Tama nay an Shy na pag-sasalita mo nang mag-isa, Sakay ka na… [b]Shy:[/b][color=pink] Ay,opoh…[/color] [b]Aling Tekla:[/b] Upo ma’am… Mag-eengat kayu nela ser!! [b]BROOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOMMMMMMMMMMMM!!![/b] [b][i](Nakita niyang umalis ang sasakyan nila…)[/i][/b] [b]Gel:[/b][color=red] Mag-sama kayong tatlo, wala na kayong Gel na maabutan pag-uwi niyo dito… I thought we’re family.,..This is your fault Shy!![/color] [b]The Next Morning..[/b] [b]Aling Tekla:[/b] Gil….!!! Gil….!!! Gil….!!! [b]Gel:[/b][color=red] Ano poh yun??? Alig Tekla,pahingi nga po ng gamot… Ang sakit ng ulo ko….[/color] [b]Aling Tekla:[/b] Sige…. Haleka, [b]Gel:[/b][color=red] Salamat po… Kailan ang uwi dito nila Mommy???[/color] [b]Aling Tekla:[/b] Eha, hendi ku alam… Segoru next wek ata… [b]Gel:[/b][color=red] Ah, sige… Maliligo na poh ako,, Late na kasi….[/color] [b]SCHOOL…[/b] [b]Nikko:[/b][color=blue] Anne??? Alam mo ba kung nasaan si Shy?? Wala pa kasi eh.[/color] [b]Anne:[/b] [color=purple] Haaaaaay…hindi kana nasanay dun., diba?? Palaging late naman ang babaeng yun…[/color] [b]Honey:[/b][color=orange] Kaya nga Nikko, lalo na ngayon na andyan Daddy niya tapos nagkaroon pa ng ALAMZ NA…sa party kagabi,[/color] [b]Nikko:[/b][color=blue] Haaaaaaaaaaaaaay, kumuzta na kaya si Shy ko…hmmmmmm,[/color] [b]Honey:[/b][color=orange] Shy mo??? Duh!! As if naman, kayo na…[/color] [b]Anne:[/b] [color=purple] Ambisyoso!!! Hehehehe, sige Nikz see you… Alis na kami,[/color] [b]Nikko:[/b][color=blue]Ok….,[/color] [b]VIGAN…[/b] [b]Shy:[/b][color=pink] Haaaay,ang layo layo naman ng Vigan!! Sino kaya nag-embento ng lugar na toh?? Kakasuhan koh,…[/color] [b]Daddy:[/b] Tumugil ka nga diyan… Nkakatawa mga pinag-sasasabi mo, [b]Mommy:[/b] [color=brown] Shy…….. Ilagay mo na nga yung mga gamit natin sa kwarto[/color] [b]Shy:[/b][color=pink] Opo, gawin ba namanga kng alalay…. Hmmmmmmm, Maktawag nga kay Nikko…. 0908*****31[/color] [i][b]Pakiki-epal ni Ms. Author: WOW! Smart si PAPA YUMMY,hehehehe….papansin na naman ang magnadang author…hahaha![/i][/b] [color=pink] Hello??? Nikko???[/color] [b]Nikko:[/b][color=blue] Oh??? Shy?? Npatawag ka?? Asan ka nga pala?? Bakit hndi ka pumasok??[/color] [b]Shy:[/b][color=pink] Andito kami ngayon sa Vigan.. Kagabi kasi napatawag yung Tita Angie ko, Sabi niya winker na daw si lolo…[/color] [b]Nikko:[/b][color=blue] Ganun ba?? Condolence…[/color] [b]Shy:[/b][color=pink] Nakakalungkot nga eh, Lalo na kung nakikita ko yung sing-sing na bigay niya… Suot ko ito always, Since grade 3 pa ako nito… Tagla na noh???[/color] [b]Nikko:[/b][color=blue] I know Shy kung nasaan man siya ngayon He’s happy…[/color] [b]Shy:[/b][color=pink] I hope so, Sige Nikz maya nalang… Pakisabi nalang kina Anne at Honey na ndito ako sa Vigan… Ingatz… Bye….[/color] [b]Nikko:[/b][color=blue] Ok…Take Care too, And I Love….…[/color] Toooooooooooooooooooooot….. [b]Nikko:[/b][color=blue] Anak ng tipaklong!! Naputol na… Hmmmmm,….. Azar!![/color] [b]Shy:[/b][color=pink] Mommy… Saan kop o ba ilalagay ang mga gamit??? WHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAT??? LOLO??? Akala ko ba… Winker ka na!![/color] [b]Lolo:[/b] Haaaay mga bata nga talaga ngayon…. Yung Tita Angie mo kasi gusto niyang mag-reunion sila ng Daddy mo kaya yun ang naisip niyang palusot.. [b]Shy:[/b][color=pink] Thank God!! Kung ganun… Akala ko kasi anon a nangyari sa inyo…[/color] [b]Lolo:[/b] Ano nga pala sabi mo?? Winker??? Anu yun??? [b]Shy:[/b][color=pink] Matanda ka nga talaga kayo lo, Yung winker po ay baklish word for “WALA”…..[/color] [b]Lolo:[/b] Ganun ba?? Bago yun ha!! Sige, gagamitin ko yun sa mga captions ko sa friendster pictures ko… [b]Shy:[/b][color=pink] What the!!??? Lo?? May friendster kayo??? Ayos ka rin noh!! Penge nga poh ng e-add,… Hehehehe, i-aadd kita…[/color] [b]Lolo:[/b] Sige apo, Paki-check nalang kung may update ako… [b]Mommy:[/b] [color=brown] Pa??? Nag-kita na pala kayo ni Shy…[/color] [b]Lolo:[/b] Oo, kawawa naman yung bata,,, Naabala pa tuloy yung pag-aaral niya,,, Asan nga pala si Angelie??? [b]Shy:[/b][color=pink] Ay Lo, naiwan po si Ate…[/color] [b]Lolo:[/b] Ah, sana makapunta siya dito… [b]Mommy:[/b] [color=brown] Pa. narinig ko nga pala yung pinag-uuspan niyo kanina ni Shy… Totoo bang may FRIENDSTER ACCOUNT kayo???[/color] [b]Lolo:[/b] Ay! Abat, porket matanda na ako hindi ibig sabihin niyan na huli na ako sa mga makabagong pa-uso ng kabataan ngayon… [b]Shy:[/b][color=pink] Haaaaay,lolo talaga… I love you poh……[/color] [b]SCHOOL..[/b] [b]Mrs. Astrologo:[/b] Class… Listen, this coming Friday will be our acquaintance Party… Prepare for the program dito sa room natin,,,, Yung mga SSC Officers naman, be sure na kahit busy kayo sa induction of officers ng whole school… Mamamanage niyo pa rin ang mga responsibilities niyo dito sa class natin… [b]Honey:[/b][color=orange] Wow!! Ayos toh! Acquaintance na!! It’s Disco time……[/color] [b]Next Chapter: "Chapter 10-To Death" thank you for reading....=)[/b] :lol:~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ :lol: [quote=angeli718]^ sizzz... update na!!!haha..[/quote] hehehe,andrito na po sis... nag-update na koh, tagal kong di naka-open sa page na toh,hihihi... [quote=Kaygee :3]wow! ganda ng kwento =) [sa wakas nakapagtagalog rin aq.lol.] hehehe kip it up :D[/quote] hehehe,thank you sis... kaya nga, pwede kang mag-tagalog dito... hirap kasi kung puro nalang english... PINOY AKO!!,haha! [quote=eri.03]@baby_haizeek: asan na ung reply mo? intay ko la pala. anyways. ganda story!:thumbsup: mom ni zac ka name ng mom ko! cool~![/quote] naku sis! nag-reply na ata ako sau... talagA? wow! what a co.e!! magkapareha sila ng name, [quote=pinkloveriza01]ahh.. ok.. i'll w8.. :D just take ur time.. :)[/quote] no need to wait sis, and sorry to keep you for waiting... nag-update na ako!! hehehe, sa wakas!! [quote=Cutie_Phunk]mamatx nmn! at gnwab ka niya! jiji.. Btw, an' tgal kong d nka-ol! jiji. san nah yong update sis? antay lng kme! jiji.. :D[/quote] hehehe,ako rin sis! ngayon nga lang ako nakapag-ol ulit.... sorry kung mejo natagalan... hirap kasi mag-isip kung ano ang pwedeng chapter 9... [quote=aenemij]ganda tlaga ng story. hehe. update na poh.:D[/quote] hehehehe,salamat poh.. ayan na nag-update na me, enjoi reading... [quote=banoCore]wow . . . hahah . . i love it:wow:[/quote] nakzzzz!! slamat naman poh,=) [quote=grace17]sis asan n po ung next.. wow... gnda tlga ng story... nku... d q n matiis n di mbasa.. heheh gudluck sis...[/quote] andito na sis yung next,hehehe... salamat sa inyo... char! kakatuwa nman poh kayo, enjoi reading...

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x avie x
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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

nice, ganda ng kwento.. amazing. tuloy niyo po ah.. :)
baby_haizeek
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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

[quote=x avie x]nice, ganda ng kwento.. amazing. tuloy niyo po ah.. :)[/quote] hai sa'yo!! new reader, thank you sa support...
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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

Woo. Nakakachaka si lolo. May friendster. Nyahaha. Makahingi nga ng Testimonial dun. Hahaha.:lol: Next chapter please.
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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

nag'update na pla si sis! lol kakatawa nman ung lolo. may fs. haha anung # ni papa yummy? :d :lol: :lol:
angeli718
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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

waa.. gnda ng chapter.. [b]winker?![/b] haha.. sa nman nakuha un.?.. update na agad..!! haha..
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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

[quote=bianx_06]Woo. Nakakachaka si lolo. May friendster. Nyahaha. Makahingi nga ng Testimonial dun. Hahaha.:lol: Next chapter please.[/quote] hahahaha, ala na kasi akong maisip... mejo boring yung chapter na toh, don't worry... next chapter im xur magugustuhan ninyo.... [quote=_berii.^ü]nag'update na pla si sis! lol kakatawa nman ung lolo. may fs. haha anung # ni papa yummy? :d :lol: :lol:[/quote] yes!!! hehehe....sa wakas, natagalan ako diyan... boring noh??? no. niya??? secreto lang poh, para bibo...hkhkhk, [quote=angeli718]waa.. gnda ng chapter.. winker?! haha.. sa nman nakuha un.?.. update na agad..!! haha..[/quote] ganda ba?? feel ko nga na boring... cute ng word na "WINKER" noh? xpression ka kasi yan...hihihihi, winker lang,....
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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

[quote=baby_haizeek]hehehe,ako rin sis! ngayon nga lang ako nakapag-ol ulit.... sorry kung mejo natagalan... hirap kasi mag-isip kung ano ang pwedeng chapter 9...[/quote] wee. awh.okay lng yon sis! ang mhlga nka-update kna ulit!:D @t: wee. natatawa ako sa lolo nila! may fs accnt pla? pengeh nmn! jiji.. wee.ano kyah mngyayari sa nxt chappie? :D
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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

[quote=Cutie_Phunk]wee. awh.okay lng yon sis! ang mhlga nka-update kna ulit!:D @t: wee. natatawa ako sa lolo nila! may fs accnt pla? pengeh nmn! jiji.. wee.ano kyah mngyayari sa nxt chappie? :D[/quote] hehehe,sabagay... yes,sis! my fs... ok na lolo, hindi nagpapa-huli sa uso... i'm xur u will like the next chapter...;]
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