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#81  2008-08-11 06:31:04

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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

It's so cute and funny! :lol: Next chappie puleeeeeeeeeeeeezzz! :D
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#82  2008-08-13 06:59:01

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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

[b]Chapter 6 [i]You’ll always be my baby..[/i][/b] [b]Precinct 8…[/b] [b]Anne:[/b] [color=purple]pssssst!! Honey!![/color] [b]Honey:[/b][color=orange]Yes??[/color] [b]Anne:[/b] [color=purple]Ano na balita diyan sa counting??[/color] [b]Honey:[/b][color=orange]Tapos na, alam ko na kung sino yung nanalo as 3rd Year Representative. Galing galling ni Zac mag-campaign! Panalo talaga si Shy! 12 votes lamang niya…[/color] [b]Anne:[/b] [color=purple]Talaga? Ayos toh! Halika, puntahan na natin si Shy at Zac excited na me sabihan sila ng good news!![/color] [b]Sa may school corridor..[/b] [b]Nikko:[/b][color=blue] Sino kaya nanalo sa election? Nanalo kaya si Shy?[/color] [b]Roland:[/b][color=teal] Ayan! Shy kana naman ng Shy… [/color] [b]Nikko:[/b][color=blue] Wala lang,hehe.. She’s cute kasi…[/color] [b]Roland:[/b][color=teal] Haaaay,bahala ka nga.. Patay ka talaga kay Gel kung malaman niyang type mo utol niya…[/color] [b]Nikko:[/b][color=blue] Eh di, itatago ko,. Pra hindi niya malaman…total na-una naman talaga si Shy sa kin..[/color] [b]Roland:[/b][color=teal] Ano sabi mo?[/color] [b]Nikko:[/b][color=blue] Wala…buti nalang di mo narinig,[/color] [b]Roland:[/b][color=teal] hmmmm,uy! Diba kaibigan yun ni Shy na kasama sa E.B.O. Tanungin mo kung nanalo si Shy tapos na ata yung counting sa precinct ng 3rd Year..[/color] [b]Nikko:[/b][color=blue] Anung E.B.O.??[/color] [b]Roland:[/b][color=teal] Electoral Board Officer..grabeh ka yun lang di mo pa ma-getz,hihihi..[/color] [b]Nikko:[/b][color=blue] hehehe,ang tanga ko! Pero hayaan na natin,gwapo naman!! Sige diyan ka lang puntahan ko sila…[/color] [b]Roland:[/b][color=teal] gung-gung! Bilis… tapos alis na tayo ditto sa school,[/color] [b]Nikko:[/b][color=blue] Wui….diba mga Electoral Board Officers kayo? Sino nanalo as 3rd Year Rep???[/color] [b]Honey:[/b][color=orange]Bakit??[/color] [b]Nikko:[/b][color=blue] Wala lang, I’m just interested to know kasi siya nag mag-aarange ng JS natin..[/color] [b]Anne:[/b] [color=purple]Si Nadal yung nanalo, yung kapitid ng Girlfriend mo…[/color] [b]Nikko:[/b][color=blue] Ah,ok thanks.. Buti naman, ngawa pala ng ,ma-ayos ni Mang Jani ang pinapagawa ko.[/color] [b]Honey:[/b][color=orange]What do you mean??[/color] [b]Nikko:[/b][color=blue]Nothing, thanks for the info... See you,[/color] [b]Honey:[/b][color=orange]Hoi Anne. Ano kaya yun?? [/color] [b]Anne:[/b] [color=purple]SSSSSHHHHHHHHHHHHHHYYYYYYYYY!!! Congratz!!! BLOW-OUT mo tomorrow ha???[/color] [b]Shy:[/b][color=pink]Gaga! Bakit?? Did I won??.[/color] [b]Honey:[/b][color=orange]I-cocongratz ka ba naming ngayon kung hindi ikaw yung nanalo??? Gaga ka talaga… [/color] [b]Shy:[/b][color=pink]Gaga!Alam ko yun!.[/color] [b]Anne:[/b] [color=purple]hehehe, haaaaaaaay!! Tigilan niyo na nga kaka-gaga diyan! Let’s tell Zac the good news… [/color] [b]Shy:[/b][color=pink]I’ll be the one to tell him nalang later after their basketball practice...[/color] [b]Honey:[/b][color=orange]Ok sige, may meeting pa kasi kami. Para sa proclamation of winners ng election this coming Monday. [/color] [b]Shy:[/b][color=pink]Sige, I want to thank him siya kasi yung nag-campaign talaga for me.. [/color] [b]7:00 in the evening …sa 2nd basketball court, after the practice ng varsity[/b] [b]Shy:[/b][color=pink]ZAC!! [/color] [i][b]sabay hug… [/b][/i] [b]Zac:[/b][color=green]Huh? Shy? [/color] [b]Shy:[/b][color=pink]THANK YOU!! Mwaaaaaaaaaaaaaah!!! [/color] [b]Zac:[/b][color=green]For what?? [/color] [b]Shy:[/b][color=pink]Asuz!! Pa-I don’t know ka pa! Ikaw yung gumawa ng mga fliers na ipinamigay sa lahat ng 3rd Year students tapos gumawa ng jingle na alam halos lahat ng tao ditto sa school. Shock nga ako eh, kasi pag-daying ko kanina dito sa school may naririnig akong malakas na ingay sa may Lawrence. Dun mo pa nilagay yung mga malalaking speakers kasibawal ng mag-campaign dito sa loob ng campus…[/color] [b]Zac:[/b][color=green]I really don’ know what your saying..[/color] [b]Shy:[/b][color=pink]bazta Zac! Thank you! [/color] [b]Zac:[/b][color=green] Your welcome… Sbay na tayong umuwi, gusto mo? [/color] [b]Shy:[/b][color=pink] Ay, huwag na… nag-mamadali kasi ako, I’m excited to tell Mommy and ate Gel… Sige Zac, bye!! Mwaaaaaah!!! Love you. BESPREN!!! [/color] [b]Zac:[/b][color=green] Ouch!! Ok na sana kaso my bestfriend pa….[/color] [b]Sa my sakayan ng jeep.. [i]We were as one babe…for a moment in time And it seems everlasting that you will always be mine… Now you wanna be free so I’m letting you fly… Coz I know in my heart babe our love will never die…[/b][/i] [b]Shy:[/b][color=pink]What the! My Papa Yummy’s still here, akala ko naman umuwi na siya! Buysit!! Hindi ako nakapag-make over! [/color] [i][b]You’ll always be a part of me… And I’m part of you definitely… Girl don’t you know you cant escape me… Ooohhh, darling coz you’ll always be my BABY…[/b][/i] [b]Nikko:[/b][color=blue]Shy??? Late na ah! Noh pa ginagawa mo dito?? [/color] [b]Shy:[/b][color=pink]Huh? Uhhhmm,,pauwi na kasi ako.. [/color] [b]Nikko:[/b][color=blue]Ah, bakit mag-isa ka lang? Asan na mga friends mo? Uy! Congaratz pala,hihi… Asan blow out mo?? [/color] [b]Shy:[/b][color=pink]hehehe,salamat.. I will not win kung hindi dahil kay ZAC! [/color] [b]Nikko:[/b][color=blue]Huh? Why? [/color] [b]Shy:[/b][color=pink]Siya kasi yug nag-campaign for me. From the fliers to the speakers.. [/color] [b]Nikko:[/b][color=blue]Yun ba sabi niya?? Eh, ako gumawa lahat ng yun para sa’yo… [/color] [b]Shy:[/b][color=pink]WHAT THE!! Ikaw gumawa nun?? Kaya pala nag-taka si Zac kung bakit ako nag-pasalamat sa kanya… Wait… Why did you do all those things?? Just for me….[/color] [b]Nikko:[/b][color=blue]Wala lang… I want to help you, just like what you did when I was in third year…[/color] [b]Shy:[/b][color=pink]Ah, yun ba? Wala yun… Nikko, Thanks ha?? [/color] [b]Nikko:[/b][color=blue]No problem bazta ikaw… BABY SHY koh… [/color] [b]Shy:[/b][color=pink]hehehe, Baby ka diyan… [/color] [b]Nikko:[/b][color=blue]Your always’s be my baby..[/color] [b]Shy:[/b][color=pink]Tumigil ka nga, huwg kang magpaka-DAVID COOK! Gwapo kaya yun tapos magaling kumanta… [/color] [b]Nikko:[/b][color=blue]hehehe.. Gwapo naman ako, hindi lang maganda boses ko…[/color] [b]Shy:[/b][color=pink]oo na… pasalamat ka naging mabait ka sa akin kasi kung hindi, naku! Kinontra na kita…hihi,[/color] [b]Nikko:[/b][color=blue]Halika Shy, Hated na kita sa inyo…. [/color] [b]Shy:[/b][color=pink]Huwag na, kakahiya sa’yo… [/color] [b]Nikko:[/b][color=blue]Pleeeeaaaaaseee!!! I won’t accept “NO” as an answer… [/color] [b]Shy:[/b][color=pink]Sige, pero hindi mo ako ibaba sa mismong tapat ng bahay naming…Bak ano pa sabihin ni Ate Gel tungkol sa kin..[/color] [b]Nikko:[/b][color=blue]Yes! Ma’am! Thank You… [/color] [b]Shy:[/b][color=pink]hehehe,cge tara! LARGA!!! [/color] [b]BROOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOM!!![/b] [b]Zac:[/b][color=green]Was that Shy??? Yung naka-angkas kay Nikko… [/color] [b]Anne:[/b] [color=purple]Yup! Siya nga yun… It’s definitely her! Bakit kaya sila magkasama???[/color] [b]Zac:[/b][color=green]It can’t be… Baka malaman toh ng ate niya… That Nikko…. Lagot siya sa kin kung malaman kong pinag-tritripan niya si SHY at ate Gel…. [/color] [b]Honey:[/b][color=orange]Dude, CHILL!! Kausapin nalang natin si Shy tomorrow… I know she has some explaining to do….[/color] [b][i]Abangan… Chapter 7 : Away, away, away na toh![/i][/b] SORRY kung late.. bz talga me s school.... [quote=jykaaa]It's so cute and funny! :lol: Next chappie puleeeeeeeeeeeeezzz! :D[/quote] naku!,hihi... new reader! thank you for reading...=) [quote=lady_end]uu sis kaya dapat acu ang manalo..^_^ bwahaha. talo sana c shy, lolengz.. uu nga weh.. c angelie palaging update dito sa lit. nd na kc acu masyadong dumadaan sa lit weh.. i'll wait fur the next chappiee.[/quote] hehehe,talunin natin si SHY!!! mag-himagsik tayo!!...hahaha, ako nga rin eh, di rin me mahilig dumaan dito sa lit... my next chaptie is here na poh, [quote=Cutie_Phunk]^weeeh! sis,asan nah yong nxt chappie? jiji.. still waiting for it! :D[/quote] hehehe,sorry to keep you waiting sis!! andito na xa!!! ginawang tao!! [quote=angeli718]yea, yea, yea.. continue ur storryy.. nxt chappie plz.. i lab this story.. ksma pa ko sa cast.. angeli.. haha..[/quote] thank you for the positive comments... continue reading poh, im doing this para sa mga readers!! char! [quote=eunich]weeee.. ganda ganda nitoo.. pakaaabangan ko to.. :drool: :drool: :drool: :drool: :drool: 바비어닟 ^clicckky^.^[/quote] hehehe,talga?? dumarami na mga readers koh..hihi,im happy!! thankz for reading... [quote=eri.03]tlga sis.?:o haha. pakilala mo naman ako. haha. LOL. *joke* grabe naman un. ung personality nia sa story ganun din in person?yummy din? haha:D pero sis next chappie na.haha. atat na tlga ako.:wow:[/quote] hehehe, if ever na magkita tayo tapos kasama ko siya! hahaha,as if naman my possibility na mang-yari... yup,yun PAPA NIKKO sa story koh ay si PAPA NIKKO koh rin in person...hahaha,

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#83  2008-08-13 15:45:00

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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

ahh.. nice chapter.. nxt chappie na agad.. haha.. update!! update! update!!
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#84  2008-08-15 07:36:25

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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

[quote=baby_haizeek]hehehe,sorry to keep you waiting sis!! andito na xa!!! ginawang tao!![/quote] ahw! nbasa ko na sis! an' saya! siya nga nanalo! pero,ang probz lng is; d fah nah proclaim! ha!3.. nakuh nakuh nakuh! an' ganda nng chappie nah to! abngn ko nxt! bka maging xciting fah! kasi may away! jiji.. :D
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#85  2008-08-15 08:21:26

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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

buti nlan ng'update na si sis! ahihi. an gnda tlga n storii m.
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#86  2008-08-16 04:45:12

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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

[quote][b]baby_haizeek wrote:[/b] hehehe, if ever na magkita tayo tapos kasama ko siya! hahaha,as if naman my possibility na mang-yari... yup,yun PAPA NIKKO sa story koh ay si PAPA NIKKO koh rin in person...hahaha[/quote] ate pee un! ge pkilaal mo ko.! weee.. :P more more more!:thumbsup:
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#87  2008-08-16 21:28:08

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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

nice!!!!!! over!!!! ang galing mo talaga!!! good luck poh!:D
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#88  2008-08-17 03:42:11

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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

wahhhh... kktuwa tong story n2... kkakilig:wow: feeling q aq c shy:o=D... next chappie pliz
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#89  2008-08-22 00:19:28

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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

[align=center][b]Chapter7 [i]Away, away, away na toh![/i][/b][/align] [b]Sa kwarto ni Shy..[/b] [b]Shy:[/b][color=pink] Haaaaay, What a day!! Buti nalang hindi natuloy ang program ng Proclaimation of winners kanina, ayokong ma-ulit yung speech thingy!! May thank you thank you chuva pa kasi yan galing sa winners...[/color] [i][b] I remember the times we spend together All those drives We had a million questions all about our life And when we got to New York Everything felt right I wish you were here with me Tonight…. I remember the days we spend together Were not enough And you still feel like dreaming Except we always woke up Never thought not having you here now Would hurt so much… Tonight I’m fallen and I can’t get up, I need your loving hands to come and pick me up, And every night I miss you I can just look up And know the stars are holding you Holding you holding you Tonight…[/b][/i] [b]Shy:[/b][color=pink] O.M.G. Asan na ba yung phone ko? Someone’s calling… Ay!! Ayun…. Hello???[/color] [b]Nikko:[/b][color=blue]Uhmmmm, Shy are you still up??? [/color] [b]Shy:[/b][color=pink]Nikko??? Kung tulog na ako, sa tingin mo sasagutin ko kaya yung tawag mo? [/color] [b]Nikko:[/b][color=blue]Relax ka lang..hehehe, ang cute mo talaga kung nagagalit ka… Para kang DUGONG! [/color] [b]Shy:[/b][color=pink] DUGONGin mo mukha mo![/color] [b][i]KRRRRRRIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIINNNNNNNNNNNNNNNGGGGG…[/i][/b] [b]Zac:[/b][color=green]Good evening po. Pwede po bang maka-usap si Shy? [/color] [b]Aling Tekla:[/b] Hilo??? Tika lang pu ser! Tatawagen ku lang se Shy… Shy??? may tawag ka sa TILIPUNU…. [b]Shy:[/b][color=pink] Nikko wait lang ha? Aling Tekla pakisabi na mamaya nalang… May kausap pa ako sa cellphone ko..[/color] [b]Aling Tekla:[/b] Naku, Sir suri…. Ayaw pa-isturbu ni Shy, may ka-usap daw siyang impurtanti sa silpun niya, pasinsya pu… [b]Zac:[/b][color=green] Ok, I’ll talk to her nalang bukas,…Thank You,[/color] [b]Aling Tekla:[/b] Oki pu.. [b][i]toooooooooooooooooooooot……[/i][/b] [b]Shy:[/b][color=pink] Hello? Nikko? Bakit ka nga pala napatawag?[/color] [b]Nikko:[/b][color=blue]Nothing… I just want to greet my DUGONG a sweet good night,=)[/color] [b]Shy:[/b][color=pink] DUGONG ka diyan!! Sige good night din BUTIKING-ASO. ..[/color] [b]Nikko:[/b][color=blue] Kahit na, ako pa rin ang pinka-gwapong BUTIKING-ASO dito sa whole universe..hahaha![/color] [b]Shy:[/b][color=pink] hahaha,umamin ka rin na isa kang BUTIKING –ASO..[/color] [b]Nikko:[/b][color=blue] Oo nga. Basta gwapo!![/color] [b]Shy:[/b][color=pink] Sige na, oo na… Ikaw na ang pinka-GWAPONG BUTIKING-ASO na nakilala ko….[/color] [b]Nikko:[/b][color=blue] Good, at ikaw rin ang pinaka-sexy sa lahat ng mga DUGONG![/color] [b]Shy:[/b][color=pink] Ay! Daya! Kahit gaano ka-sexy ang DUGONG….mataba pa rin yun![/color] [b]Nikko:[/b][color=blue] At least ikaw ang pinaka-payat sa mga matataba…hahahaha, [/color] [b]Shy:[/b][color=pink] Bahala ka nga! Mag-hanap ka ng ibang kausap! Good Night…[/color] [b]Nikko:[/b][color=blue] Wait….[/color] [b]Shy:[/b][color=pink] Ano?[/color] [b]Nikko:[/b][color=blue] I love you DUGONG… Sleep tight, see you tomorrow..[/color] [b][i]Sabay end call….[/i][/b] [b]Shy:[/b][color=pink] Haaaaaaaaaaaayz, Ang hirap naman ng ganito… In-love ako sa Boyfriend ng ate ko… Maka-sulat nga kay Ate Charo para maka-hingi ng payo? Hmmmmmmmmm, Huwag nalang… Baka malaman pa ni Ate Gel….. Bakit pa kasi hindi nalang siya hiwalayan ni Nikko? Mas maganda naman ako – kung nakatalikod… Mas matalino naman ako – kung walang exam… At higit sa lahat, Mas mabait ako kay ate – kung hindi kon nakakalimutang uminom ng gamot na pampa-kalma! Anu ba to? Lalong nafrufrustrate ako sa mga sinasabi ko, epekto na ata ito sa kamndag ng Papa Yummy ko…. HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYYYYYZ!!! I LOVE YOUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU….. PAPA YUMMMMMMMMMYYYYYYYYYYYYY!!![/color] [b]Gel:[/b] [color=red]Hoi!! Ang ingay mo, ano ba sinisigaw mo diyan? Sino yung PAPA YUMMY na yan ha?,hehehe… Aheeeeeeeeeemmmmmmmmmmm… In-love na ba Lil’Sis ko??[/color] [b]Shy:[/b][color=pink] Ate? Kanina ka pa ba diyan??[/color] [b]Gel:[/b] [color=red] Hindi naman masyado… bakit? May tinatago ka sa kin noh?.hehehe…[/color] [b]Shy:[/b][color=pink] Wala ah!![/color] [b]Gel:[/b] [color=red] Amin na…hehehe,[/color] [b]Shy:[/b][color=pink] AYOKO NGA! ,hehehe…[/color] [b][i]Nawala ang smiling face ni Gel at bigla siyang nagging seryoso…[/i][/b] [b]Gel:[/b] [color=red] Sige ako nalang may sasabihin sa’yo….[/color] [b]Shy:[/b][color=pink] Bakit ate Gel? May problema ka ba??? Tell me, I want to help you…[/color] [b]Gel:[/b] [color=red] Nikko and I BROKE UP….=’([/color] [b]Shy:[/b][color=pink] ………………[/color] [b][i]Gel started crying….[/i][/b] [b]Gel:[/b] [color=red] Shy, I don’t know what to do. He told me na he had fallen for someone else… Lagot ang girl na yun sa kin kung malaman ko kung sino siya! [/color] [b]Shy:[/b][color=pink] Uhmmm,ate teka muna… Baka naman inosente yung girl, kawawa kung kakalabanin mo,,,,[/color] [b]Gel:[/b] [color=red] Shy, I’ll do everything for me to have Nikko back.[/color] [b]Shy:[/b][color=pink] ……………… Huh?? Eh, Sige po… Ikaw bahala…[/color] [b]Gel:[/b] [color=red] Shy, thanks for being a good sister to me… Thank you rin sa time na binigay mo ngayon para mailabas ko yung totoong na-feefeel ko.. I LOVE YOU SIS!![/color] [b][i]Lumabas na si Gel sa kwarto ni Shy…. habang nakaharap si Shy sa mirror..[/i][/b] [b]Shy:[/b][color=pink] My God!! GAGA ka Shy!! GAGA!! Ano ba naman yan! Am I the reason kung bakit hiniwalayan ni Nikko si ate….??? Ayokong awayin ako ng sarili kong ate!! This can’t be happening to me!!! HEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEELLLLLLLLLLLLPPPPPPPPP!!![/color] [b][i]Sa Mateo Custudio University..7:00 in the morning[/i][/b] [b]Anne:[/b] [color=purple]Shy!![/color] [b]Honey:[/b][color=orange]Hala! Lagot ka sa amin, Akala ko ba walang secrets between us… Bakit hindi ka nag-sasabi sa amin tungkol sa inyo ni Nikko???[/color] [b]Shy:[/b][color=pink] Huh?? Let’s talk about it later, wag dito sa harap ng gate… Ang dami daming officers na nakabantay diyan noh! Lagot ako sa ate ko kung umabot sa kanya ang balitang yan…[/color] [b]Honey & Anne:[/b] SORRRYYYYY,,,, [b]Shy:[/b][color=pink] halina kayo, Bilis!! Sa room nalang tayo mag-usap….[/color] [b]Honey & Anne:[/b] Ok…. [b]Shy:[/b][color=pink] Wow! Super twins kayo ngayon ah!!...hehehe,[/color] [b][i]Sa classroom….[/i][/b] [b]Anne:[/b] [color=purple]Shy!! Sige mag-start ka na sa mga sasabihin mo… I know mahaba-haba yan…[/color] [b]Honey:[/b][color=orange]Kaya nga…[/color] [b]Shy:[/b][color=pink] Where will I start??[/color] [b]Honey:[/b][color=orange]Bakit kasama mo kagabi si Nickson Custodio?[/color] [b]Shy:[/b][color=pink] Nakita niya kasi akong mag-isa sa sakayan ng jeep kaya lumapit siya at nag-congratz sa pagka-panalo ko….Wala kasing jeep na dumadaan kaya inihatid nalang niya ako sa bahay…[/color] [b]Anne:[/b] [color=purple]Ganun ba? Ang bait na pala ni Papa Yummy sa’yo…[/color] [b]Shy:[/b][color=pink] Yes, and parang ayaw ko ng ganun…[/color] [b]Honey:[/b][color=orange]Ayaw daw?? Pero deep inside kinikilig…hahaha, Pakipot!! [/color] [b]Shy:[/b][color=pink] Gaga! Pakipot ka diyan! May prob kasi,[/color] [b]Anne:[/b] [color=purple]Ano naman yang prob na yan??[/color] [b]Shy:[/b][color=pink] Nikko and Ate Gel broke up… And he told Ate Gel na he’s inlove with someone else… Tapos last night he told me na he loves me, So I think ako na nga yung love niyang bago… Si ate naman kaka-asar! Hindi siya titigil na mabawi ulit si Nikko at lagot daw yung girl na umagaw kay Nikko sa kanya, So…. That means…. LAGOT AKO sa ATE KOH!![/color] [b]Honey & Anne:[/b] huh??? [b]Shy:[/b][color=pink] What a reaction! Naka-tulong talaga kayo,huhuhu… Heeeeeeeeeelllllllllllpppppppppppp!!!![/color] [b]Honey:[/b][color=orange]Ok sige, let’s just keep our mouth shut about sa inyo ni Papa Yummy para hindi malaman ni Ate Gel at para hindi ka niya awayin…[/color] [b]Anne:[/b] [color=purple]Yah! Good idea…[/color] [b]Shy:[/b][color=pink] Ok from now on, yan ang gagawin natin… Act normal na parang wala lang…[/color] [b]Anne:[/b] [color=purple]Fine, pero paano si Zac? Can we tell him the truth?? [/color] [b]Shy:[/b][color=pink] No! He hates Nikko…baka mag-away sila,[/color] [b]Honey:[/b][color=orange]Paano kung mag-tanong??[/color] [b]Anne:[/b] [color=purple]Eh di gawan mo ng palusot..Magaling ka naman diyan,diba?? [/color] [b]Honey:[/b][color=orange]Binigyan niyo pa ako ng problema…. And, Speaking of the DEVIL,…[/color] [b]Zac:[/b][color=green]What???[/color] [b]Honey:[/b][color=orange]Ay! Este, ANGEL pala…[/color] [b]Zac:[/b][color=green]Shiza Nadal!! You have to explain something.. Bakit kasama mo yung Custudio na yun?? Ayokong kaka-usapin mo siya! He’s a Buzzard man!![/color] [b]Nikko:[/b][color=blue]At bakit??? Boyfriend ka ba ni Shy?? Pa-buzzard buzzard ka pa diyan! Pare, di mo nga ata alam spelling niyan eh…..[/color] [b]Zac:[/b][color=green]Shut up! IDIOT!![/color] [b]Shy:[/b][color=pink] Oi ano ba kayo?...tama na yan![/color] [b]Zac:[/b][color=green]Shy, stay out of this… Away toh ngayon ng mga lalaki,[/color] [b]Shy:[/b][color=pink] How can I stay out of this if ako yung rason kung bakit kaya nag-aaway???[/color] [b]Zac:[/b][color=green]Nikko,this is your fault… Two timer ka! Pinag-sasabay mo si SHY tapos si Ate Gel!!![/color] [b][i]silence…. tapos nag-tinginan lahat ng tao kay Gel na nasa likod lang pala nila..[/i][/b] [b]Gel:[/b] [color=red] Nikko,papaano mo nagawa sa kin yun??? At ikaw nman Shy, You know how much I love Nikko….[/color] [b][i]biglang nag-walk out si Gel…[/i][/b] [b]Shy:[/b][color=pink] Ate Gel… Waaaaiiiiiitttttttt……[/color] [b]Abangan niyo poh, chapter eight koh… Entitled [i]Not so Ordinary B-day Party[/i].. Thanks sa mga readers, mwaaaaaaah!!![/b] mga readers....hehehe, mamaya na ako mag-rereply sa mga comment niyo, may 2 na exam pa kasi ngayong hapon... thanks sa pg-babasa,=)

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#90  2008-08-22 00:39:36

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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

nice chappie sizz.. i'll wait agen for the nxt chappie..
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#91  2008-08-22 03:11:36

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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

Not so ordinary bday? ? Parang starting ng halos lahat ng harry potter books? Hehe. Btter kip tis up . Hehe. Well, so nice story sis. Pero change mo ung color ni Shy, super light. sana gnito kagwapo si Nikko. | | | | v [img]http://i111.photobucket.com/albums/n131/magicalloverofhp/Naima/Robert1.jpg[/img] ^dba ang gwapo?

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#92  2008-08-22 05:50:21

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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

waahh! super l8 na aquh!! :wallbash: hmmph!! i'll be waiting for the next chap!! =)
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#93  2008-08-22 07:34:21

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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

Hala ang dami ko na palang na-miss! Haha! Update na po!! Daliiiii!! Haha. :D
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#94  2008-08-22 09:01:50

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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

ang cute haha... hla! bka macra ang sisyip nina gel at saka shy :wallbash::penguin::o mah gosh...
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#95  2008-08-22 09:30:58

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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

waa.. an gnda tlga ng story mo sis. c nikko naman kasi, ngaun lang sinabi kay shy. haha. next chappie na. :D
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#96  2008-08-23 00:13:55

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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

waaaahhh!. em late!. lolx.. nakakatawah ung chap. 6.. den sa chap. 7.. biglah acoeng kinabahan.. lolx.. OMG shy! wawa ka naman.... tsktsk.. ~juliene~
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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

wee. an' cute nng chappie nato! away away away! nxt cahppie na sis! :D
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#98  2008-08-23 21:11:55

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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

*omgeee. nglit c ate gel. ptai c shy. nweis. ms love nmn tlga ni nikko c shy. ouchy kai ate gel. haha. tsssk
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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

>sshockings!:o haha. its all zac's fault. nde naman kasi bf ni zac si shy para mag react ng ganun.! asar tlga.haha PAPA YUMMY! nakakinlove ka tlga.! haha:wow::wow: sis. more moremore.!=D
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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

[quote=angeli718]nice chappie sizz.. i'll wait agen for the nxt chappie..[/quote] xure, thank you sa pag-babasa.... [quote=njblxii]Not so ordinary bday? ? Parang starting ng halos lahat ng harry potter books? Hehe. Btter kip tis up . Hehe. Well, so nice story sis. Pero change mo ung color ni Shy, super light.[/quote] hahaha,harry potter talaga... nakakatuwa nman yung mga readers koh, iba iba ang reaction... nyweiz,thanks for reading... dont worry sis, mag-hahanap ako ng pic na mas gwapo pa dyan, my nahanap na nga ako i'll post it after ko ma-edit.. kip seyp, [quote=jykaaa]Hala ang dami ko na palang na-miss! Haha! Update na po!! Daliiiii!! Haha. :D[/quote] dami ba?? hehehe,d naman poh maxado... thanks for reading sis, [quote=_berii.^ü]waa.. an gnda tlga ng story mo sis. c nikko naman kasi, ngaun lang sinabi kay shy. haha. next chappie na. :D[/quote] kaya nga sis! asar yang nikko na yan! late na siya,hkhk.. namiz kita sis! tgal ko kacng d nakapag-comp... [quote=akuzet16]waaaahhh!. em late!. lolx.. nakakatawah ung chap. 6.. den sa chap. 7.. biglah acoeng kinabahan.. lolx.. OMG shy! wawa ka naman.... tsktsk..[/quote] hehehe,wow! nakaka-amaze yung mga reactions niyo... thank you for reading sis, dont worry gagawin kong funny na ewan yung next chapter, [quote=Cutie_Phunk]wee. an' cute nng chappie nato! away away away! nxt cahppie na sis! :D[/quote] hehehe,xur poh.,.. i'll update soon,,, namiz kita sis! hehehe,tagal ko kcng di nakapag-computer... [quote=asukal_rienee]ang cute haha... hla! bka macra ang sisyip nina gel at saka shy :wallbash::penguin::o mah gosh...[/quote] let's just hope na hindi masira ang sisyip nila, wow! word of the day ko ngaun is "SISYIP" auz yung word na yun sis, thanks for reading... [quote=gaara_gfzz]waahh! super l8 na aquh!! :wallbash: hmmph!! i'll be waiting for the next chap!! =)[/quote] hehehe,thanks for reading my dear sis...=) i'll update soon... [quote=*nicz.love]*omgeee. nglit c ate gel. ptai c shy. nweis. ms love nmn tlga ni nikko c shy. ouchy kai ate gel. haha. tsssk[/quote] kaya nga sis mas love niya si Shy.. maka-SHY tayo! pero wawa talaga si Ate Gel, [quote=eri.03]>sshockings!:o haha. its all zac's fault. nde naman kasi bf ni zac si shy para mag react ng ganun.! asar tlga.haha PAPA YUMMY! nakakinlove ka tlga.! haha:wow::wow: sis. more moremore.!=D[/quote] hehehe,wag mong ayain si ZAC sis... wawa naman, ty for reading... ok i'll give u mor mor mor...hahaha,
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