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[align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

[quote=lady_end]ajaja ganun bah sist.. dapat mamili talagah c nikko sa takdang panahon :P[/quote] kea nga sis,sa takdang panahon!!!=)
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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

[b][/b] ate. ung iba pong tinayp na kulay baby pink. maxado pong mlabo. pero po :thumbsup:
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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

@baby_haizeek: :arrow:ahw! pareha teu sis! thiz becoming thursday nd friday! exam nah nmn! kyah ngah! need to study! bka d meh mka-opn nng cmpter! so,bumbwi pag walng klase!? :D,... intay prin sa update mo sis! :)...

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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

[quote=eri.03]ate. ung iba pong tinayp na kulay baby pink. maxado pong mlabo. pero po :thumbsup:[/quote] nahihiya ako sa'yo...hehehe,=) wag mo naman akong tawagin na ate... cge,try kong baguhiin yung color para mas clear...yung yelow nga eh,di ko rin nakikita... malabo xa,maxadong light...:mad: [quote=Cutie_Phunk]pareha teu sis! thiz becoming thursday nd friday! exam nah nmn! kyah ngah! need to study! bka d meh mka-opn nng cmpter! so,bumbwi pag walng klase!? :D,... intay prin sa update mo sis! :)...[/quote] tah sis!:eh: bawi talaga me ngayong di pa exam.. asar pa nman yung PHYSICS na subject na yan!!:crybaby: pero dont worry sis,i'll update on the night after ng exam namin... i'm planning p nga to change the colors kasi di nababasa ng ma-ayos...hmmmm,:disgust: cge sis, ingatz..=)
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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

hahahah kiShhh ay layk it!!... mariXuu.. hehehehh:lol: nxt chapteR pleasE..:o hehehehe exciting....=)
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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

[align=center][b]Chapter Four[/b][/align] [align=center][b][i]Ballpen ko![/i][/b][/align] [b]Good Morning![/b] [b]Shy:[/b][color=pink] haaiz!! Ganda talaga ng gising ko ngayon!! Panaginip lang ba yung nangyari sa amin ni Nikko kagabi??[/color] [b]Gel:[/b] [color=red]Shy,gising na! Pupunta pa kayo ni Mommy sa doctor. [/color] [b]Shy:[/b][color=pink] Doctor? Bakit? Pinag-samantalahan ba ako ni Papa Yummy kagabi? Sana nga!! Bakit ba wala akong maalala. Azar!:O Uhhhhmmmmm,Ate bakit po ba kami ni Mommy pupunta sa doctor?[/color]=( [b]Gel:[/b] [color=red]Mag-papacheck-up lang kayo. Hindi mo ba naaalala? Diba natalisod ka kagabi dun malapit sa parlor ni Petra? Buti na nga lang nakita ka ni Nikko. Tingnan mo yang paa mo namamaga. Halika na nga Baby Sis, kain ka na. [/color] [b]Shy:[/b][color=pink] Ah, oo nga pala. Now I remember!! Sige ate una ka nalang.[/color] [b]Gel:[/b] [color=red]Ok.[/color] [b][i](sa dinning table….)[/i][/b] [b]Gel:[/b] [color=red]Mommy, total Saturday naman ngayon, lalabas kami ng mga friends ko ha? Payagan niyo naman po ako. Ayokong mag-stay ditto sa bahay. Si Aling Tekla lang kasi makakasama ko.[/color]:disgust: [b]Shy:[/b][color=pink]Bakit ayaw mong makasama si Aling Tekla? Ayos nga yan eh,hehehe.. Marami kang maririnig na mga words na kakaiba.[/color] [b]Mommy:[/b][color=brown]Tumigil nga kayo. Baka marinig kayo niyan. Sige Angeli you can go to the mall with your friends but you must be back here before 9:00 ion the evening. At ikaw naman Shiza pagkatapos nating magpa-check up. Dito ka lang sa bahay, Huwag kang aalis..[/color] [b]Shy:[/b][color=pink]Ay! Daya![/color]:evil: [b]Gel:[/b] [color=red]Thank You Mommy, Shy.Bleeeh!![/color]:eh: [b][i](Sa hospital…)[/i][/b] [b]Shy:[/b][color=pink]In fairness gandang hospital na to! Parang yung nakikita ko sa t.v Ayos ah![/color] [b]Doctor:[/b]Oh,Mrs. Nadal pasok po kayo. Buti nalang hindi marami yung pasyente ditto sa O.P.D. ward. Siya nab a yung pangalawang mong anak? Dalaga na ah! Dati baby pa siya nang nakita ko. Haaayz, bilis lang talaga ng panahon. Halika hija, matingnan nga yang paa mo. [b]Mommy:[/b][color=brown]Sige na Shy, para maka-uwi tayo kaagad.[/color] [b][i](yun,natapos ng i.check ng doctor ang paa niya.. At may biglang pumasok na tao…)[/i][/b] [b]Nikko:[/b][color=blue]Ma! Tumawag si Tita sa kin, sabi si Michael daw andito ngayon sa Pilipinas. Kararating lang. Sasama ka ba? Pupunta ako sa airport?[/color] [b]Shy:[/b][color=pink]Papa Yummy?[/color]:wow: [b]Doctor:[/b]Nickson, I’ll talk to you later. May pasyente pa ako. [b]Nikko:[/b][color=blue]Shy?[/color]=| [b]Doctor:[/b]Magka-kilala kayo? [b]Shy:[/b][color=pink]Opo, magka-school mate kami.[/color] [b][i](Lumabas si Shy, dun siya nag-hintay sa mommy niya na kinaka-usap pa yung doctor..)[/i][/b] [b]Nikko:[/b][color=blue]So, how’s your foot? Pasensya nga pala kanina bigla lang ako pumasok. Hindi ko kasi alam na my pasyente si Mommy.[/color]:redface: [b]Shy:[/b][color=pink]Ok lang yun. Eto ok naman yung paa ko. Kaso namamaga pa pero sabi ng Mommy mo inumin ko lang daw yung gamut hindi na to mamamaga.[/color] [b]Nikko:[/b][color=blue]Buti naman. Nga pala, nakatulog ka kagabi habang hinahatid kita sa bahay niyo. Buti na nga lang hindi ka nahulog.[/color] [b]Shy:[/b][color=pink]Ganun ba? Naku! Kakahiya..[/color] [b]Mommy:[/b][color=brown]Shy, halika na anak. Doktora salamat po..[/color] [b][i](Nasa kotse na si Shy tapos yung mommy niya..)[/i][/b] [b]Mommy:[/b][color=brown]Anak, yung anak ni Dr. Custodio kilala mo diba? Ang gwapong bata.[/color] [b]Shy:[/b][color=pink]Mommy naman, bata yun. Hala! Child abuse ka![/color]:P [b]Mommy:[/b][color=brown]Sinabi ko bang type ko? Hindi noh, sa’yo nalang siya. Hehehe,[/color] [b]Shy:[/b][color=pink]Ayoko po. Baka magalit si Ate Gel.[/color] :paranoid: [b]Mommy:[/b][color=brown]Ano sinabi mo?[/color] [b]Shy:[/b][color=pink]Wala po. Hehehe,.[/color] [b][i](Sa bahay nila Shy..)[/i][/b] [b]Shy:[/b][color=pink]Haaayzz, kakatamad dito. Walang magawa..hmmmmm,.[/color] [b]Aling Tekla:[/b] Shy, pahiram nga aku ng bulpin mu. [b]Shy:[/b][color=pink]Ano po? Ano yung “bulpin”?.[/color] [b]Aling Tekla:[/b] Bulpin, yun yung ginagamit mu sa pag-sulat. Bulpin! [b]Shy:[/b][color=pink]Ay! Ballpen,hehehe.:lol: Oo naman. Wait lang po kukunin ko lang sa taas.[/color] [b][i]Hindi mahanap hanap ni Shy yung ballpen niya. Super Asar talaga siya kasi may sentimental value yun dahil…..[/i][/b] [b]FLASHBACK[/b] Shy’s Experience about that Ballpen Nung Second Year palang ako one afternoon tapos na ang classes ng buong school. Nauna nang umuwi si Honey tapos si Anne, ako naman hinihintay ko si Zac nag-prapractice kasi siya ng basketball sa 2nd Court with the varsity para sa isang league game sa darating na Saturday. Tinatamad na akong umupo sa bench at manuod sa kanila kaya I decided na mag-libot libot lang muna. Nasa may 3rd Year lobby ako, when I saw someone crying. Hindi clear kung sino ang taong nandun. Alam naman ninyo na hindi ako takot sa mga multo multo, kaya nilapitan ko. He stoped crying and bigla siya nag-salita. [b]Nikko:[/b][color=blue]What are you doing here?[/color] Yung lalaking andun ay si Nickson Custodio pala. [b]Shy:[/b][color=pink]Sorry, sige alis na ko…[/color] [b]Nikko:[/b][color=blue]Wait! Please stay. Kailangan ko ng taong makaka-usap.:crybaby:[/color] [b]Shy:[/b][color=pink]Sige kaw bahala.[/color] [b][i](With matching smile..)[/i][/b] That was the first time I saw him sad. I don’t know how to comfort him. [b]Nikko:[/b][color=blue]Have you heard the news?[/color] [b]Shy:[/b][color=pink]Hindi, bakit? Hindi ako mahilig ng ganyan. Buti kung Star News, ok pa..[/color] [b]Nikko:[/b][color=blue]Na-accidente lolo ko, he’s now at the Intensive Care. I don’t want him to die. Siya na ang tumayong ama ko because my daddy died when I was three. I don’t want to loose another Daddy.[/color] [b][i](And then he started crying again..)[/i][/b] Bigla niya kong yinakap. That was the time na I fell in love with him. Biglaan yun. [b]Shy:[/b][color=pink]Nikko, don’t worry, Your lolo will be fine[/color] [b]Nikko:[/b][color=blue]Thanks Shiza, ikaw lang nasa tabi kung kailan ko kailangan ng makakasama.[/color] I don’t know what was happening; all I knew is that my heart beats fast. Dahan-dahan niyang tinaas ang ulo ko and then…. He kissed me! :puke: [b]Nikko:[/b][color=blue]Anak ng tipaklong at kabayo! Sorry![/color] [b]Shy:[/b][color=pink]…. Ha??? Hmmmmmmmm. Am I dreaming??? [/color] [b]Nikko:[/b][color=blue]Shy Sorry! Nabigla talaga ako. Kalimutan nalang natin yung nangyari.[/color] [b]Shy:[/b][color=pink]ok…[/color][b][i](and then she blushes)[/i][/b] [b]Nikko:[/b][color=blue]Halika nga, tingnan mo yung stars oh? Ganda! I remember when I was young every time nag-cacamping kami ni lolo nag-stastar gazing kami.[/color] [b]Shy:[/b][color=pink]Close talaga kayo ng lolo mo noh?[/color] [b]Nikko:[/b][color=blue]Yes! Love na love ko talaga yun.[/color] May kinuha si Nikko sa bulsa niya… [b]Nikko:[/b][color=blue]Shy, sa’yo nalang oh..[/color] [b]Shy:[/b][color=pink]Aanhin ko ba yan? Marami akong ballpen noh![/color] [b]Nikko:[/b][color=blue]Wala lang, I want you to keep this para every time makikita mo tong ballpen na maaalala mo ang araw na toh. July 18, 2007 ang araw kung kailan nasa tabi ni Nikko si Shy. [/color] I secretly told my self… [b][i]I’m going to keep this forever.[/i][/b] [b]END OF FLASHBACK[/b] [b]Shy:[/b][color=pink]Aling Teklaaaaaaaaaaaaa!...huhuhu,[/color] [b]Aling Tekla:[/b]Anu ang prublime mu!? [b]Shy:[/b][color=pink]Ang ballpen ko!!!!!!!!,[/color] [b]Aling Tekla:[/b]Bakit?? Akin na, pahiram dahil mag-susulat pa aku kay Ati Charu!! [b]Shy:[/b][color=pink]Aling Tekla naman oh.. Hahanapin natin yun! Halughugin natin ang buong bahay….huhuhuhu.. [/color] [b]Aling Tekla:[/b]Oki! Oki! Sige ditto ako sa baba. Diyan ka sa kwarto mo. [b]Shy:[/b][color=pink]Sige po..,[/color] [b][i](Hinalughog ni Shy ang buong kwato niya….. At sa wakas….. Nahanap din ang ballpen na yun)[/i][/b] [b]Shy:[/b][color=pink]Yeahey! Ang ballpen ko!!,:)[/color] :arrow:[b][i]Abangan Chapter Five[/i][/b] [i]Election[/i]

Last edited by baby_haizeek (2008-07-20 01:42:32)

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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

[b]hinalikan ni nikko c shy? :o haha. :lol:[/b]
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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

[quote=_berii.^ü]hinalikan ni nikko c shy? :o haha. :lol:[/quote] hehehe,yup..nung 2nd year palang si Shy tapos 3rd year si Nikko.. thanks for reading sis,
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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

^bruttatatata, my sistah im sorry.!! late na bah akuh>?? :/ bwahahaha, i'll wait fur the next chapiie^_^
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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

[quote=lady_end]^bruttatatata, my sistah im sorry.!! late na bah akuh>?? :/ bwahahaha, i'll wait fur the next chapiie^_^[/quote] hehehe,di naman maxado...=) thank you for reading,
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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

[quote][b]baby_haizeek wrote:[/b]nahihiya ako sa'yo...hehehe,=) wag mo naman akong tawagin na ate... cge,try kong baguhiin yung color para mas clear...yung yelow nga eh,di ko rin nakikita... malabo xa,maxadong light...:mad:[/quote] sis na lang. ahihi. xenxa. **grabe sis.! ang ganda kakakilig.! hinalikan ni nikko si shy..!!weee.

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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

[quote=baby_haizeek]hehehe,di naman maxado... thank you for reading,[/quote] ur welcome.. brulalala inulit ku na naman ng pagbasa! kasi nakalimutan kuh weh. dami kasing mga story dito// :D brulalala, i'll wait fur ur update. :D

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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

[quote=eri]**grabe sis.! ang ganda kakakilig.! hinalikan ni nikko si shy..!!weee.[/quote] hehehe,kaya nga sis kakakilig..:D [quote=lady_end]ur welcome.. brulalala inulit ku na naman ng pagbasa! kasi nakalimutan kuh weh. dami kasing mga story dito// :D brulalala, i'll wait fur ur update. :D[/quote] hehehe,brudadadada nman sis! kaya ang dami ng story... pero sa site ng candymag mas madami dun...

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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

sis kelan po ang next update? atat na atat na ako kay papa yummy.!haha. LOL
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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

weeeh!., em olweizs leyt sis!., heheh. cause em xo bz!., heheheh.. kinilig aqouh dun sa chapter 4?., heheh... ang gling ng s2ry!., nkktwa!., heheh. kip it up sis!., nd make mre!.,
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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

[quote=baby_haizeek]hehehe,yup..nung 2nd year palang si Shy tapos 3rd year si Nikko.. thanks for reading sis,[/quote] [b]ah. ur welcome sis. :) gnda naman ng story mo eh. btw, kelan next update? :D[/b]
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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

[quote=eri.03]sis kelan po ang next update? atat na atat na ako kay papa yummy.!haha. LOL[/quote] hahaha,talaga sis??? bz pa kz me.. ang dami daming school work!! at in-charge pa kami sa pag-arrange ng acquaintance party namin, pero i'll try to update soon...=| [quote=akuzet16]weeeh!., em olweizs leyt sis!., heheh. cause em xo bz!., heheheh.. kinilig aqouh dun sa chapter 4?., heheh... ang gling ng s2ry!., nkktwa!., heheh. kip it up sis!., nd make mre!.,[/quote] hehehe,ok lang yun sis....np! salamat sa supporta!! mwaaaaah!!! [quote=_berii.^ü]ah. ur welcome sis. :) gnda naman ng story mo eh. btw, kelan next update? :D[/quote] thank you ulit...hehehe, ilang beses ba me mag-papasalamat sa inyo,hihi... uhmmm,i'll try to update soon... mejo bz kasi me ngayon sa school....
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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

[quote=baby_haizeek]thank you ulit...hehehe, ilang beses ba me mag-papasalamat sa inyo,hihi... uhmmm,i'll try to update soon... mejo bz kasi me ngayon sa school....[/quote] [b]ah. ok sis. :) bsta i'update mo. mghhntay na lang aku. :D[/b]
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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

[quote=baby_haizeek]hehehe,ok lang yun sis....np! salamat sa supporta!! mwaaaaah!!![/quote] whhaaak!., ur welcum sis!., hehehehe = D
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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

waahh! ano vuh nmn to! late nah nmn ako! hu!3:crybaby:,,, peo... sis,an' kilig nng chappie nah to! Nikko kissed Shy?., waah! an' kilig! jiji... waiting for the nxt chappie sis! :D,,,
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