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[align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

[quote=baby_haizeek]cutie_phunk: andito na po ung next chapter,dedicated for you my dear sis....[/quote] enx yah sis! nah late ngah ako weeh! d agad naka-opn nng pc! hahiyzs! Btw,sis! gandah nng chappie nahto wah! anoh kyah gagawin ni nikko kay shy! nakuh nmn to si nikko uu! meron nah siyang geli! hahabulin pah yong kapatid! jiji,,. nxt chappie nah sis! xcited nah akoh sa nxt nah mngyayari! weeww!! :D,,,
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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

[quote=Cutie_Phunk]enx yah sis! nah late ngah ako weeh! d agad naka-opn nng pc! hahiyzs! Btw,sis! gandah nng chappie nahto wah! anoh kyah gagawin ni nikko kay shy! nakuh nmn to si nikko uu! meron nah siyang geli! hahabulin pah yong kapatid! jiji,,. nxt chappie nah sis! xcited nah akoh sa nxt nah mngyayari! weeww!! :D,,,[/quote] hehehe,natutuwa talaga ako sa mga pinag-sasabi ng readers...salamat talaga!! love you all..

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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

:P :P :P :P thankyou!!

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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

[quote=lady_end]wew, baka tuluyan na akung mabaliw.. ajaja.. next ba yan? gravbeh huh..? huwag po? :eh: ganda ng chappie na2h.. kristian bah un? ang gwapo daw niyah? ajaja, at c nikko, badboy, cnuh bah talagah gux2h nya? :P ajaja... baxtah w8 fur the next chappie na lang.. next update na.. :eh: :P[/quote] hehehe,relax lang sis...=) kakatuwamangyayari sa next chapter..abangan mo update koh, thankz for reading my story pala... hehehe,kaw sino gusto mo NIKKO OR KRISTIAN???

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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

[b]SALAMAT SA MGA NAGBABASA NG STORY KO...=)[/b]

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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

[quote=reikazek]wow... ang ganda ng story.. hehe.. another chapter na po... (curious sa manyayari) hehe[/quote] Tthankz for reading,xure!! i'll update soon...=)
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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

[quote=baby_haizeek]hehehe,relax lang sis... kakatuwamangyayari sa next chapter..abangan mo update koh, thankz for reading my story pala... hehehe,kaw sino gusto mo NIKKO OR KRISTIAN??? Last edited by baby_haizeek (Yesterday 15:45:43)[/quote] c kristian sistah.. parehaz name ng crux kuh weh :paranoid: :redface: :lol: kc chickboy c nikko. :P ajiji.. i'll wait fur the next chappie sistah :D
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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

[quote=lady_end]c kristian sistah.. parehaz name ng crux kuh weh :paranoid: :redface: :lol: kc chickboy c nikko. :P ajiji.. i'll wait fur the next chappie sistah :D[/quote] hehehe,cge sis!! Kristian is yours, akin nalang si NIKKO...hahaha,:lol: i dont know pa kz kung kelan me mkapag.update first summative exam namin nxt week... azar!!:angry: ang early!!!
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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

^waah! ehh?.,sino nmn skn? jiji.. sis,avoid posting 5x you myt get spamm or bannned! concern lng nmn akoh! :)... Btw,sis!update moh nah! stil waiting! :D,,,
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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

[quote=Cutie_Phunk]^waah! ehh?.,sino nmn skn? jiji.. sis,avoid posting 5x you myt get spamm or bannned! concern lng nmn akoh! :)... Btw,sis!update moh nah! stil waiting! :D,,,[/quote] thankz so concern....=) kaw pili ka,hehehe....sino yung sa'yo???
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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

[quote=baby_haizeek]thankz so concern....=) kaw pili ka,hehehe....sino yung sa'yo???[/quote] maybeh??? c Zac nah lng sakin! kasi,magaling siya sa basketball! jiji... and also idol ko si Zac Efron nng Hs musical! :D!,,,
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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

[quote=Cutie_Phunk]maybeh??? c Zac nah lng sakin! kasi,magaling siya sa basketball! jiji... and also idol ko si Zac Efron nng Hs musical! :D!,,,[/quote] cge,my mga papa na tayo sis dito sa story ko...hehehe,:D
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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

weeeeh!., sis haizeek!. plzs. don't use double posting!., heheh... warning pa pouh yan!., and if ndi kayo magbabago.. moderators will take care opf u nalang!., jhheehe.. btt: weedeh!/. inove na ba talaga c nikko kay shy?!.., hmmm... curious aqouh!., ehehe... btw. yan na ba ung title ng chpter 3?!., hmmm.. curious aqouh kung anong mangyayari!., hehe
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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

[quote=akuzet16]weeeeh!., sis haizeek!. plzs. don't use double posting!., heheh... warning pa pouh yan!., and if ndi kayo magbabago.. moderators will take care opf u nalang!., jhheehe.. btt: weedeh!/. inove na ba talaga c nikko kay shy?!.., hmmm... curious aqouh!., ehehe... btw. yan na ba ung title ng chpter 3?!., hmmm.. curious aqouh kung anong mangyayari!., hehe[/quote] sorry poh,akala ko kasi pwede kasi dun sa teen talk pwede... dont worry sis,d na ma.uulit... wait,anu poh ba talaga yung double-posting??? hehehe,secret lang sis...kung inlove na ba si nikko ky Shy,ahihi... cge,mg.uupdate na poh ako...=)
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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

[align=center][b]Chapter Three[/b][/align] [align=center]Manong! Huwag po. Huwag po.[/align] [b]Sa classroom ni Shy…[/b] [i][b] I remember the times we spend together All those drives We had a million questions all about our life And when we got to New York Everything felt right I wish you were here with me Tonight…. I remember the days we spend together Were not enough And you still feel like dreaming Except we always woke up Never thought not having you here now Would hurt so much… Tonight I’m fallen and I can’t get up, I need your loving hands to come and pick me up, And every night I miss you I can just look up And know the stars are holding you Holding you holding you Tonight…[/b][/i] [[b]Mrs. Astrologo:[/b] Kaninong phone yang tumutunog?? How many times do I have to tell you na bawal ang cellphone ditto sa school!! [b]Shy:[/b][color=pink] Uhmm,Ma’am.. Akin po. Importante to si Mommy kasi tumatawag. Saglit lang. Excuse me. Mommy?? Napatawag ka?? Dapat importante yan, kasi pinahiya pa ako ng teacher ko kanina na bawal nga ang cellphone sa School.[/color] [b]Mommy:[/b][color=brown]Shy, anak.. Uwi ka ng maaga my pupuntahan tayong dinner.[/color] [b]Shy:[/b][color=pink] Sino naman po yung ka-dinner natin? Mamaya baka killer o rapist yan??[/color] [b]Mommy:[/b][color=brown] Ano ka ba? Hindi noh! Basta it’s a surprise. Bilisan mo na diyan. Andito na nga ate mo sa bahay. Dali… Bilis!! Sige, Bye anak. Ilove you! Ingat ka.[/color] [b]Shy:[/b][color=pink] Sige po. Bye! Ilove you too..[/color] [b]Honey:[/b] [color=orange]Shy, tara na! Tapos na class natin. Punta tayo sa mall..[/color] [b]Shy:[/b][color=pink] Talaga? Naka-usap ko lang si Mommy natapos na kaagad si Mrs. Astrologo sa pag-sesrmon. Sorry talaga BESPREN hindi ako makakasama sa inyo ni Anne. May pupuntahan daw kaming dinner nila ate Gel tapos Mommy. Sige, I have to go na. See you tomorrow![/color] [b](sabay takbo pababa ng stairs..)[/b] [b]Honey:[/b] [color=orange] Cge. Ingat nalang Shy!![/color] [b]Sa gate ng school nila..[/b] [b]Shy:[/b][color=pink] Oh, my gosh! Andun si Papa Yummy sa my Lawrence-(isang small canteen malapit sa school) Hmmm, do I look ok??[/color] [b]Nikko:[/b][color=blue]Hahaayz, Pare tagal naman ni Shy. Naasar na ako![/color] [b]Roland:[/b] [color=teal]Chill dude! Atat-atat ka talagang Makita yung Shy na yun. Naku! Pare, iba na yan. Hahaha,[/color]=D [b]Nikko:[/b][color=blue] Bro, papunta na siya dito. Lalapitan ko ba?[/color] [b]Roland:[/b] [color=teal] Ano ka ba??!! Nag-antay tayo ditto ng 100 years tapos hindi mo siya lalapitan. Ang sarap mong suntukin.[/color] [b]Nikko:[/b][color=blue] Hi, Shy! [/color] [b]Shy:[/b][color=pink] Hello, Nikko! (tapos sabay taray!)[/color] [b]Nikko:[/b][color=blue] Ang taray naman ng baby sister ko.[/color] [b]Shy:[/b][color=pink] Hindi na nga ako Baby! Asar ka talaga! Alis nga diyan! Go! Shoo!![/color] [b]Nikko:[/b][color=blue] Opo, sige hindi na kita aasarin. Halika Shy, sabay ka nalang sa kin. Hatid kita sa inyo.[/color] [b]Shy:[/b][color=pink] Ayoko nga!! Sige Nikko, nagmamadali talaga ako. Bye!![/color] [b]Nikko:[/b][color=blue] Sige, Ingat!! Halika na Bro. Sundan natin..[/color] [b]Roland:[/b] [color=teal] Wait, kunin ko lang motor ko.[/color] [b]Shy:[/b] [color=pink]Complete na araw ko ngayon!! Yes!![/color] [b]Habang nag-lalakad si Shy may napansin siyang mga nag-iinoman dun sa kanto. Natakot siya kasi mga lasing na sila. Malayo-layo na rin yung nilakad niya galing sa entrance ng kanilang subdivision and then….[/b] [b]Shy:[/b] [color=pink] OUCH!! Ano kaya ginagawa ng batong yan diyan. Natumba tuloy ako. Azaaaar!!! Hindi tuloy ako makatayo. Sakit ng paa ko. Haaaay,mag-hihintay nalang ako dito na may dumaang tricycle. Nag-mamadali pa naman ako, ngayon pa nangyari to![/color] Shhhshshshshshhsshsh….. Kkkkrkrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrkkkkkkk……. Bbbbbrrrrrrrrrriiiiiiiiimmmmmmmmmmm…. [b]Shy:[/b] [color=pink]Ano ba yang ingay na yan?? Kung sino ka man lumabas ka na!! Huwag mo na nga akong takutin, total hindi naman ako takot. Sayang effort mo..[/color] AAAAAwwwwwwoooooooooooooooo!! [b]Shy:[/b] [color=pink]hahahaha,natatawa na ako sa’yo!! Ano ka? LOBO??[/color] Meeeoooooooooooooooooowwwwwww!!! [b]Shy:[/b] [color=pink]Pusa naman ngayon??? Ano kaya sunod???[/color] [b][i](bigla nalang may lalaking humawak sa braso ni Shy…)[/i][/b] [b]Miss ang kinis kinis mo naman. Ano ginagawa mo dito? Gumagabi na. Halika sumama ka sa kin. May gagawin tayo at alam kong magugustuhan mo…[/b] [b]Shy:[/b] [color=pink]Sorry, pero hindi ako sumasama sa mga taong hindi ko kilala. Nag-hihintay lang ako dito ng tricycle hindi kasi ako makalakad, natalisod me sa banda dun kanina.[/color] [b]Sumama kana Miss, mabilis lang naman gagawin natin..[/b] [b]Shy:[/b] [color=pink]Ayoko!!![/color] [b][i](hinihinla siyang tumayo sa kina-uupuan niya…)[/i][/b] [b]Shy:[/b] [color=pink][b]Manong!!! Huwag po!! Huwag po!!![/b][/color] [b]Excuse me!! Sino tinatawag mong manong? Ako? How dare you!! Mukha ba akong manong?? Hindi naman diba?? Actually MANANG dapat!! But I still prefer to be called ATE or Sister!! Gusto lang naman kitang i-skin treatment sa salon ko. Ang ganda ganda kasi ng skin mo.[/b] [b]Nikko:[/b][color=blue] Bro.asan na ba si Shy??[/color] [b]Roland:[/b] [color=teal]Kaya nga dude!! Hindi naman ata kabayo yun na mablis mag-lakad o tumakbo. Bigla nalang nawala..[/color] [b]Sa bahay ng mga Nadal..[/b] [b]Gel:[/b][color=red] Mommy, asan na ba si Shy?? Ang tagal.[/color] [b]Mommy:[/b] [color=brown]Kaya nga, tinawagan ko na yun kanina.. Halika Gel, una nalang tayo dun. Nakakahiya naman sa mga bisita natin na nag-hihintay sa Restaurant.[/color] [b]Gel:[/b][color=red] Aling Tekla,una na po kami. Pakisabi nalang kay Shiza kung dumating na humabol nalang siya sa OCHO Restaurant. Sige po. Alis na kami ni Mommy.[/color] [b]Aling Tekla:[/b] Upu Jil!! Pag-sasabihan ku nalang siya na umuna na kayu sa dinnir.. Ingat kayu ni Mam!! [b]Shy:[/b] [color=pink]AY!! Sorry kaw kasi hindi ka kaagad nag-sabi. Tinakot mo pa ako. Ako nga pala si Shy. Ikaw ano pangalan mo??[/color] [b]Petra:[/b] Ako si Petra!! [b]Shy:[/b] [color=pink]Ah,nice to meet you Petra..=)[/color] [b][i]First you say you won’t Then you say you will.. We’re standing still Jenny…. You got me on my knees…. Jenny, It’s killing me……[/i][/b] [b]Petra:[/b] Naku, Shy!! Tingnan mo oh! Pagka-ganda gandang motor!! Wish ko makasakay diyan lalo na kung ganyang kagwapo ang nag-dridrive!! [b]Shy:[/b] [color=pink]Kilala ko yan ah!! Si Papa Yummy yun!! Niiikkkkkooooooooo!!!![/color] [b]Petra:[/b] Pakilala mo ako… [b]Nikko:[/b][color=blue] Shy?? Andito ka lang pala!! Ano ba ginagawa o dito? Halika na nga, Hatid na kita sa bahay niyo. Sige Roland, bukas nalang. Hatid ko pa siya.. Salamat pala..[/color] [b]Petra:[/b] Hi Papa!! (habang nakatingin kay Roland):wow: [b]Shy:[/b] [color=pink]Roland, type ka ata ng kaibigan ko. Hahaha,[/color] [b]Roland:[/b] [color=teal]Sige, Bro! Alis na ko!! Bukas nalang!![/color] [b]Petra:[/b] Papa, wait!!! [b]Shy:[/b] [color=pink]Sige, Petra.. Alis na ako, Nice meeting you ulit. Sakit na kasi ng paa ko. Kita kitz nalang ditto sa Subdivision. Huwag kang mag-alala bibigyan kita ng tip pampaganda ng kutis..[/color] [b]Nikko:[/b][color=blue] Halika na Shy, sakay na. Namamaga na yang paa mo.[/color] [b]Shy:[/b] [color=pink]Bye Petra!![/color] [b](sumakay na si Shy sa motor ni Nikko…) Nikko:[/b][color=blue]Shy, are you ok?? Nag-aalala ako for you. Kapit ka ng mabuti. Huwag ka ng mahiya yumakap sa kin,hehehe..[/color] [b]Shy:[/b] [color=pink]Nikko!! Mas gugustuhin ko pang mahulog kesa yakapin ka!! (deep inside kinikilig…)[/color] [b]Nikko:[/b][color=blue]Sige na, Yakap na!!.[/color] [b]Shy:[/b] [color=pink]Oo!! Yan na!! Naka-yakap na!! [/color] [b]Nikko:[/b][color=blue]Very good, baby Shy! Masunuring bata!! [/color] [b]Shy:[/b] [color=pink]haaaaaaay, Sana malayo pa bahay namin..Ang bango niya, I never thought na makaksama ko siya ngayon..I wish hindi na matapos ang araw na to!! [/color] [b]Nikko:[/b][color=blue]May sinasabi ka??? [/color] [b]Shy:[/b] [color=pink]Wala, mag-drive ka na nga!! [/color] ======Abangan!! +Chapter Four+ Ballpen ko!!

Last edited by baby_haizeek (2008-07-12 05:16:39)

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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

^weew! kaka-kilig nmn nng chappie nahto! jiji,.. nxt chappie nah pouh sis! :D,,
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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

^ajaja lokong petra na yan kalako may gagahasa kai shy.. ajajaja =D at cyakah yang nikko na yan... cnuh bah talagah huh? bawahahahaha i'll w8 4 the next update :P
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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

[b]wee. kkilig. haha. may gusto naman yang si papa yummy ke shy! haha. xp kelan ang next update sis?[/b]
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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

[quote=Cutie_Phunk]^weew! kaka-kilig nmn nng chappie nahto! jiji,.. nxt chappie nah pouh sis! :D,,[/quote] hehehe,naxt week pa me makakapag-update sis kasi exam namin dis week... buti na nga lang natapos ko toh!! [quote=lady_end]^ajaja lokong petra na yan kalako may gagahasa kai shy.. ajajaja =D at cyakah yang nikko na yan... cnuh bah talagah huh? bawahahahaha i'll w8 4 the next update :P[/quote] hahaha,hindi magagawa ni Petra yun!! Pareha sila girl..=) ewan ko kay nikko,,,kung sino ba talaga...hmmmm,;] [quote=_berii.^ü]wee. kkilig. haha. may gusto naman yang si papa yummy ke shy! haha. xp kelan ang next update sis?[/quote] hehehe,kaya nga!! papano na si Gel??:( Next Saturday or di kaya friday... Asar kasi First Summative Exam namin dis cming week,:mad: [b]Sa mga nag-babasa salamat!![/b]
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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

[quote=baby_haizeek]hahaha,hindi magagawa ni Petra yun!! Pareha sila girl.. ewan ko kay nikko,,,kung sino ba talaga...hmmmm,[/quote] ajaja ganun bah sist.. dapat mamili talagah c nikko sa takdang panahon :P
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