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[align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

huwee~ nag'update na si sis. paki'epal naman yang si zac. tsk. haha. i'll wait for teh part two sis. ;)
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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

weee.. nag-update na sizz.. part 2 na!! gndang chapter to..
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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

yipee!! may update na!! [inspiring para update quh na din akin] hehe. Go Go Go ate!!
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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

[quote=baby_haizeek]hehehe, paramihan tayo sis ng mahahanap na gwapo...=) wow naman! kaya nga SAWA na talaga si NIKKO sa kanya, tsupe tsupe...kay GEL, pero wawa xa...[/quote] Geh sis! Ung sino ang pinakagwapo yun xa si Nikko. Game?
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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

wow.:wow: nice story tlga toh.. love it..! :wow: hi2ntayin ko susunod na chapter.. :D
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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

haha.. go nikko!., pagtanggol mouh c shy!., i lubb it!., hahahah. gel chupeh!., alis kah jan!., ttoinkzs.. nxt chappie plzs.. ~juliene~
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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

[quote=xxGiRL NeXT DooRxx]:D yehey! ngupdate na..hahaha cge ill w8 4 d update.. :D[/quote] hehehe,thanks for reading...=) [quote=whatwendz]o my goshh..... nice chaptiie.. hahahaha.. haaay naku.. hahaha.. cant w8 for the next chapter.... shockz...........[/quote] sorry sis sa late na reply... na-busy kasi... thanks for reading, [quote=asukal_rienee]wuha oo, YUKKY pero di ako naaawa sa knya! =D=D=D yay! thursday? bat may ata? :( niaha:lol:[/quote] grabeh,wala kang awa sis!! hehehehe.... tinatapos ko pa ngayon yung part 2... tinatamad na nga ako,hihihi... [quote=eri.03]^ganun ba. ok. nde na. haha. lol~! ganto na pla. go zac! go! welcum. haha. gnda naman ng storii.! ok. sis ill wait for that more more more.!=D[/quote] hahahaha,cge... Go ZAC!! and Go Nikko!! thank you...=) [quote=_berii.^ü]huwee~ nag'update na si sis. paki'epal naman yang si zac. tsk. haha. i'll wait for teh part two sis. ;)[/quote] kaya nga! umeeksena talaga si Zac, yan ang role niya sa story koh...hihi, [quote=angeli718]weee.. nag-update na sizz.. part 2 na!! gndang chapter to..[/quote] tinatapos ko pa ngayong sis yung part 2... gusto ko na siyang matapos, tinatamad na akong mag-type...huhu, [quote=gaara_gfzz]yipee!! may update na!! [inspiring para update quh na din akin] hehe. Go Go Go ate!![/quote] sige, update ka na rin sis....=) hala, ate talaga... [quote=njblxii]Geh sis! Ung sino ang pinakagwapo yun xa si Nikko. Game?[/quote] cge, wait ka lang... ala pa akong mahanap...azar! [quote=pinkloveriza01]wow.:wow: nice story tlga toh.. love it..! :wow: hi2ntayin ko susunod na chapter.. :D[/quote] thank you... ipopost ko ata mamaya yung part two... [quote=akuzet16]haha.. go nikko!., pagtanggol mouh c shy!., i lubb it!., hahahah. gel chupeh!., alis kah jan!., ttoinkzs.. nxt chappie plzs..[/quote] hehehe, naku sis! pati tuloy ako na-iinis na kay GEL!! chupe!! hahaha... kawawa!! pinag-tulungan natin sis,
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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

[quote=baby_haizeek]grabeh,wala kang awa sis!! hehehehe.... tinatapos ko pa ngayon yung part 2... tinatamad na nga ako,hihihi...[/quote] wahaha... may awa naman akoh! =D=D=D waw, excited na ako sa part 2!!! :o kawawa naman mommy nina Shy! anu kaya mangyayari sa b day partie? :eh:
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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

[quote=baby_haizeek]thank you... ipopost ko ata mamaya yung part two...[/quote] ok.. i'll w8.. lab it..! :wow:
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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

[align=center][i][b]Not so Ordinary Birthday Party (Part-II)[/b][/i] [/align] [b]Nadal’s Residence…[/b] [b]Mommy:[/b] [color=brown]Shy?? Saan ka ba nanggaling??? Kanina pa ako nag-hihintay sa’yo.. Pinuntahan ka pa naman ni Zac, Nikko at Michael sa bahay nila Anne,[/color] [b]Shy:[/b][color=pink]Huh? Sorry po…. Akala ko kasi hindi ako kailangan sa Party, Silang tatlo po ba ang magkakasama?? [/color] :o [b]Mommy:[/b] [color=brown]Yes… Don’t mind them nalang, babalik nalang sila dito kung malaman nilang andito kana sa bahay… Sige na punta ka na sa kwarto m at mag-bihis naka-uniform ka pa kasi,[/color] [b]Shy:[/b][color=pink]Opo…Andito pa la yung parents ni Zac at Nikko,[/color] [b]Mommy:[/b] [color=brown]Oo, inimbitahan ko sila…Alam mo naming close ang family natin sa kanila,[/color] [b]Shy:[/b][color=pink]Sige Mommy mag-bibihis na ako…,[/color] [b]Bahay ni Anne…[/b] [b]Nikko:[/b] [color=blue]Tao po… Anne??[/color] [b]Zac:[/b][color=green] Uhhhmmmm, Nikko? I’m sorry pala sa nangyari dun sa school… Nalaman ko na ngayon yung whole story, masakit man para sa kin I have to accept the fact na you and Shy liked each other… Alagaan siya pare ha?? Lagot ka sa kin kung paiyakin mo!,,,hehehe.=) Friends???[/color]:cry: [b]Nikko:[/b] [color=blue]Sure PARE! Friends! Promise ko rin sa’yo na hindi ko sasaktan si Shy.. Salamat![/color]:eh: [b]Michael:[/b][color=teal] So, are you guys going to hug or what??[/color] [b]Zac:[/b][color=green] Nikko, baka masuntok ko tong kano mong pinsan…[/color] [b]Nikko:[/b] [color=blue]Yes Michael, after the hug… kissing comes next.hahahaha![/color] [b]Zac:[/b][color=green] Kadiri,hahahaha…[/color]:puke: [b]Michael:[/b][color=teal]Yah! Kadiri ka talaga! [/color] [b]Nikko:[/b] [color=blue]HAHAHAHA![/color] [b]Anne:[/b] [color=purple]Nikko? Zac?? Friends na kayo??? At may kasama pa kayong PAPA JUICY!![/color] [b]Nikko:[/b] [color=blue]Anne, nga pala insane kong si Micahel…[/color] [b]Zac:[/b][color=green] Yes Anne, friends na kami ni Nikko..[/color] [b]Anne:[/b] [color=purple]Oh, eh di mabuti…. I know Shy will be happy kung malaman niyang ok na kayo,[/color] [b]Honey:[/b][color=orange] Anne, sino ba yan bakit ang tagal mo sa labas…. WOW!! Zac??? Nikko??? Totoo ba toh??? At may kasama pa kayong PAPA JUICY!![/color] [b]Zac:[/b][color=green] Magkaibigan talaga kayo… Papa Juisy, Papa Juicy kayo diyan!![/color] [b]Michael:[/b][color=teal]Hi! I’m Nikko’s cousin… [/color] [b]Nikko:[/b] [color=blue]Tumigil ka nga diyan sa pagpapa-cute Mike’s…hehehe,[/color] [b]Anne:[/b] [color=purple]Si Shy ba pinunta niyo dito?? Sorry… naka-alis na kasi siya, I’m sure nadun nay un sa bahay nila by this time…[/color] [b]Nikko:[/b] [color=blue]Ah ganun ba…. Thanks Anne at Honey sa info, alis na kami…[/color] [b]Honey:[/b][color=orange] Sige ingat kayo…. Pati na rin si Papa Juicy,[/color] [b]Zac:[/b][color=green] Sige kita kitz nalang bukas sa school…[/color] [b]Anne:[/b] [color=purple]Sure…. Bye!![/color] [b]Honey:[/b][color=orange] Anne, lahi ata nila Nikko yung mga gwapo noh??[/color] [b]Anne:[/b] [color=purple]Siguro nga, tingnan mo nalang si Papa Juicy, gwapo rin.. [/color] [b]Honey:[/b][color=orange] Excited na akong chikahan si Shy tungkol kay Papa Juicy,[/color] [b]Anne:[/b] [color=purple]Tumigil ka nga diyan, ako yung nauna sa kanya..bleh!! [/color] [b]Honey:[/b][color=orange]Sa akin naman siya nakatingin…hahaha!, [/color] [b]Anne:[/b] [color=purple]Pasok na nga tayo sa loob, nilalamok na ako dito, [/color] [b]Nadal’s Residence…[/b] [b]Mommy:[/b] [color=brown]Sa lahat ng mga andito sa party na toh… I want to thank You for coming, ~~~~~~~~ Huh?? Anu yan???[/color]:o [b]Gel:[/b] [color=red] What the??? Mascot! May phobia ako diyan!![/color] [b]Shy:[/b][color=pink] Yeeeeey!!! I love JOLLIBEE!!!![/color]:lol: [b]Jollibee:[i] HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO YOU! HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO YOU! HAPPY BIRTHDAY… HAPPY BIRTHDAY…HAPPY BIRHTDAY T O YOU…[/i][/b] [b]Mommy:[/b] [color=brown]Paano nakapasok yan dito??[/color] [b]Aling Tekla:[/b] Hay Naku Ma’am! Iwan ku!! Kaosap ku kase kanena yung waiter na gwapu… [b]Mommy:[/b] [color=brown]Haaaaay, hala… my party crasher tayo,[/color] [b][i]Yinkap ni Jollibee si Mommy at may ibinulong sa kanya…[/i][/b] [b]Jollibee:[/b] Namiz kita honey ng sobra… [b]Mommy:[/b] [color=brown]Rafael??[/color] [b]Jollibee:[/b] Huwag ka munang maingay sa mga bata,,,,[/color] [b][i]Yayakapin na sana si Gel, pero…[/i][/b] [b]Gel:[/b] [color=red]Stay away from me!!! Takot ako sa’yo…[/color] [b][i]Tinanggal ni Jollibee yung costume….[/i][/b] [b]Gel at Shy:[/b] DAAAAAAAAADDDDDDDDYYYYYYYYYYY!!!! =) =) =) =) [b]Mommy:[/b] [color=brown]Ang ganda ng naisip mong entrance…[/color] [b]Gel:[/b] [color=red]Daddy namiz kita, akala ko pa nman tinatakot mo lang kami…[/color] [b]Shy:[/b][color=pink] Daddy, ang galling mo! What a surprise!![/color] [b]Daddy:[/b] Ang init init sa loob niyan.. Hindi ko na uulitin yung gnawa koh, Namiz ko din kayo mga anak…lalo na yung Mommy niyo, Upo tayo, Doon oh, Nakikita ko yung mga Custudio at Cabrera… [b]Gel:[/b] [color=red]No thanks Dad, kayo nalang …[/color] [b]Mommy:[/b] [color=brown]Pasensya na kung naabala kayo sa grand entrance ni Rafael.. gusto niya kasing supresahin ang mga bata sa kanyang pag-dating..[/color] [b]Mrs. Cabrera:[/b] Ok lang yun, [b]Mrs. Custudio[/b] Kaya nga, doon mo nlang paupuin si Rafeal tabi nila George [i][b](Daddy ni Zac)[/b][/i].. [b]Mommy:[/b] [color=brown]Naku kahit hndi ko na sabihin sa kanya, doon talaga uupo yun…[/color] [b]Mrs. Cabrera:[/b] Naku, asan na kaya sila Zac?? [b]Mrs. Custudio[/b] Andun oh…. Katabi ni Shy, [b]Mommy:[/b] [color=brown]Ang laki na pinag-bago ng mga bata..[/color] [b]Mrs. Cabrera:[/b] Ganyan talaga…. [b][i]Patuloy silang nag-usap usap tungkol sa mga anak nila…[/i][/b] [b]Shy:[/b][color=pink] Aba! Himala, bakit magkasama kayong dalawa??[/color] [b]Zac:[/b][color=green] Hala, grabe naman.. Shy, friends na kami.. Ayos diba??[/color] [b]Shy:[/b][color=pink] Eh di, mabuti kung ganun…[/color] [b]Nikko:[/b] [color=blue]Kaya nga, ang gaan ng feeling kung walang kaaway.. Shy, nga pala.. Meet Michael, my cousin..[/color] [b]Shy:[/b][color=pink] Hello, nice meeting you… Papa Juicy siya ha,[/color] [b]Michael:[/b][color=teal]Pardon?? [/color] [b]Shy:[/b][color=pink] Nothing,hehehe…[/color] [b]Zac:[/b][color=green] Kaibigan mo talaga sina Anne ant Honey, pare-pareho kayo ng iniisip… Papa Juicy…[/color] [b]Shy:[/b][color=pink] SSSHHHHHHH, baka marinig ka ni Nikko…hehehe,[/color] [b]Nikko:[/b] [color=blue] Shy, namiz mo siguro yung daddy mo ng sobra…[/color] [b]Shy:[/b][color=pink] syempre naman, hindi na kailangan itanong yan…[/color] [b]Nikko:[/b] [color=blue] Wait lang ha??[/color] [b]Shy:[/b][color=pink] Sure, Oi Zac, paki-abot nga ng camera… Halika picture picture tayo para friendster…hehehe,[/color] [b]Zac:[/b][color=green] Teka muna, dapat maganda yung angle…[/color] [b][i]Sa table ni Gel…[/i][/b] [b]Gene:[/b] Hoi, Gel…are you ok??? [b]Gel:[/b][color=red] No, I’m not… tingnan mo yung kapatid koh, kakaasar! Nilalandi si Nikko…[/color] [b]Portia:[/b] Hindi naman, ayun nga si Nikko sa may sound system eh… Kausap yung DJ, Sarap ng sauce nitong kinakain koh,… [b]Gel:[/b][color=red] Ano kaya ang balak ni Nikko…[/color] [b]Gene:[/b] Ikaw sana yung kasama ni Nikko ngayon noh? Gel, diba si Michael yun… Yung alam mo na… [b]Gel:[/b][color=red] Yup, si Micahel nga yun… Ayokong makita pag-mumukha niya! He promised me na hindi niya sasabihin kay Nikko yung tungkol sa min, I hate him!!![/color] [b]Portia:[/b] Relax ka lang,…. Baka mapansin tayo dito ng Mommy at Daddy moh… [b]Gel:[/b][color=red] Sige maiwan ko kayo, Punta lang ako dun… Iinom ng wine hanggang sa malasing ako…[/color] [b][i] A little conversation…. Turning into little sweet sensation… And they’re only getting sweeter every time… A friendly get together Turning into visions of forever.. If I just believe this foolish heart of mine… I can’t pretend that I’m just a friend ‘Coz thinking maybe we were meant to be… [/i][/b] [b]Nikko:[/b] [color=blue] Shy? Would you like to dance with me??[/color] [b]Shy:[/b][color=pink] Huh? [/color] [b]Zac:[/b][color=green] Sige na Shy,[/color] [b]Shy:[/b][color=pink] Ok…[/color] [b][i]I think I’m fallen’ fallen’ in love with you… And I don’t, I don’t know what to do… I’m afraid you’ll turn away… But I’ll say it anyway… I think I’m fallen… For you… Whenever we’re together I’m wishing that goodbyes would turn never.. Coz with is where I always wanna be.. Whenever I’m beside you.. All really wanna do is hold you.. No one else but you has meant this much to me.. I can’t pretend that I’m just a friend… ‘Coz thinking maybe we were meant to be… I think I’m fallen’ fallen’ in love with you… And I don’t, I don’t know what to do… I’m afraid you’ll turn away… But I’ll say it anyway… I think I’m fallen… For you… I’m fallen for you… I’m fallen for you…[/i][/b] [b]Gel:[/b][color=red] Stop!![/color] [b][i]Sabay bunot kay Nikko at Mwaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah!!![/i][/b] [b]Mommy:[/b] [color=brown]Angeli! [/color] [b]Gel:[/b][color=red] Mommy? Hindi mo ba alam na yang anak mo inagaw sa kin si Nikko..[/color] [b]Gene:[/b] Gel, tara na… lasing ka lang, punta na tayo sa kawarto mo.. I’m sorry po tita… [b]Daddy:[/b]Gel, Go to your room and Shy I want to talk with you… After the party,… I know may dapat akong malaman,, [b]ABANGAN!! [i]Chapter 9-Winker[/i]... thanyo sa mga patuloy na nag-babasa sa story koh... at hindi kayo nabobored,=)[/b] [quote=asukal_rienee]wahaha... may awa naman akoh! =D=D=D waw, excited na ako sa part 2!!! :o kawawa naman mommy nina Shy! anu kaya mangyayari sa b day partie? :eh:[/quote] hehehe,andito na poh sis! sana magustuhan niyo... [quote=pinkloveriza01]ok.. i'll w8.. lab it..! :wow:[/quote] no need to wait kasi it's already there...hehehe, enjoy reading,

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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

[quote=baby_haizeek]no need to wait kasi it's already there...hehehe, enjoy reading,[/quote] yeah.. nag enjoy nga ako eh.. haha,.,. :lol: lab ko tlga tong story moh.. lab it!!!!.. :wow: [i'll wait for the next chapter]
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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

[quote=pinkloveriza01]yeah.. nag enjoy nga ako eh.. haha,.,. :lol: lab ko tlga tong story moh.. lab it!!!!.. :wow: [i'll wait for the next chapter][/quote] hehehe,talaga?? salamat... akala ko mabobored na yung mga readers ko sa chapter na toh,
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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

Sis! Sira ulo na nga si Gel . =) Hahaha! | | | | | v [img]http://i246.photobucket.com/albums/gg115/spacey94/Cedric%20Diggory/cd000.jpg[/img] Ok ba ?
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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

[quote=baby_haizeek]ABANGAN!! Chapter 9-Winker... thanyo sa mga patuloy na nag-babasa sa story koh... at hindi kayo nabobored,[/quote] wee.d naman nkaka-bored ahh! gandah ngah!xciting masyadoh! tgal den akong d nka-online! jiji.. gandah nn 2 chapters na pina-lampas ko sis! jiji.. go!nxt chapter nah! :D
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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

yan nag'update na! :lol: baka makieksena pa yang c michael ah. :eh: huwee~ papa juicy ba? =D =D next na. moar.moar.moar. :thumbsup: :thumbsup:
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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

[quote=njblxii]Sis! Sira ulo na nga si Gel . =) Hahaha![/quote] hahahaha,ang sama! sira ulo talaga... yup, ok yun sis!! saan mo nkuha?? PAPA JUICY siya,hkhkhk... [quote=Cutie_Phunk]wee.d naman nkaka-bored ahh! gandah ngah!xciting masyadoh! tgal den akong d nka-online! jiji.. gandah nn 2 chapters na pina-lampas ko sis! jiji.. go!nxt chapter nah! :D[/quote] bakit ka nga pala natagalang d nkapag-online?? salamat sa pag-babasa,,,=) matatagalan pa bago ako makapag-update, nag-iisip pa nga ako ngayon ng science song, asar! wala akong talent mag-compose!!! [quote=_berii.^ü]yan nag'update na! :lol: baka makieksena pa yang c michael ah. :eh: huwee~ papa juicy ba? =D =D next na. moar.moar.moar. :thumbsup: :thumbsup:[/quote] hehehe,oo... natagalan akong gumawa sa part 2 na yan! azar!! yes! xmpre may papa yummy... meron ding PAPA JUICY, auz diba??
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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

[quote=baby_haizeek]hehehe,oo... natagalan akong gumawa sa part 2 na yan! azar!! yes! xmpre may papa yummy... meron ding PAPA JUICY, auz diba??[/quote] aus! haha. kelan sis ang next chapter? :D
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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

[quote=baby_haizeek]hehehe,talaga?? salamat... akala ko mabobored na yung mga readers ko sa chapter na toh,[/quote] bkit nman mabobored kmi?? hndi cguro..,ang ganda kya ng story.. :eh:
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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

[quote=_berii.^ü]aus! haha. kelan sis ang next chapter? :D[/quote] depende kung magkaroon na ako ng freetime, azar talaga!! science month ngayon dami daming gagawin... [quote=pinkloveriza01]bkit nman mabobored kmi?? hndi cguro..,ang ganda kya ng story.. :eh:[/quote] ala lang sis,, feel ko lang...
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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

[quote=baby_haizeek]depende kung magkaroon na ako ng freetime, azar talaga!! science month ngayon dami daming gagawin...[/quote] woah. :O may science month pa tlga ah. haha. take ur time sis. i'll wait for teh next na lang. ;)
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