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[align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

huwee~ nag'update na si sis. paki'epal naman yang si zac. tsk. haha. i'll wait for teh part two sis. ;)
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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

weee.. nag-update na sizz.. part 2 na!! gndang chapter to..
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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

yipee!! may update na!! [inspiring para update quh na din akin] hehe. Go Go Go ate!!
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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

[quote=baby_haizeek]hehehe, paramihan tayo sis ng mahahanap na gwapo...=) wow naman! kaya nga SAWA na talaga si NIKKO sa kanya, tsupe tsupe...kay GEL, pero wawa xa...[/quote] Geh sis! Ung sino ang pinakagwapo yun xa si Nikko. Game?
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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

wow.:wow: nice story tlga toh.. love it..! :wow: hi2ntayin ko susunod na chapter.. :D
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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

haha.. go nikko!., pagtanggol mouh c shy!., i lubb it!., hahahah. gel chupeh!., alis kah jan!., ttoinkzs.. nxt chappie plzs.. ~juliene~
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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

[quote=xxGiRL NeXT DooRxx]:D yehey! ngupdate na..hahaha cge ill w8 4 d update.. :D[/quote] hehehe,thanks for reading...=) [quote=whatwendz]o my goshh..... nice chaptiie.. hahahaha.. haaay naku.. hahaha.. cant w8 for the next chapter.... shockz...........[/quote] sorry sis sa late na reply... na-busy kasi... thanks for reading, [quote=asukal_rienee]wuha oo, YUKKY pero di ako naaawa sa knya! =D=D=D yay! thursday? bat may ata? :( niaha:lol:[/quote] grabeh,wala kang awa sis!! hehehehe.... tinatapos ko pa ngayon yung part 2... tinatamad na nga ako,hihihi... [quote=eri.03]^ganun ba. ok. nde na. haha. lol~! ganto na pla. go zac! go! welcum. haha. gnda naman ng storii.! ok. sis ill wait for that more more more.!=D[/quote] hahahaha,cge... Go ZAC!! and Go Nikko!! thank you...=) [quote=_berii.^�]huwee~ nag'update na si sis. paki'epal naman yang si zac. tsk. haha. i'll wait for teh part two sis. ;)[/quote] kaya nga! umeeksena talaga si Zac, yan ang role niya sa story koh...hihi, [quote=angeli718]weee.. nag-update na sizz.. part 2 na!! gndang chapter to..[/quote] tinatapos ko pa ngayong sis yung part 2... gusto ko na siyang matapos, tinatamad na akong mag-type...huhu, [quote=gaara_gfzz]yipee!! may update na!! [inspiring para update quh na din akin] hehe. Go Go Go ate!![/quote] sige, update ka na rin sis....=) hala, ate talaga... [quote=njblxii]Geh sis! Ung sino ang pinakagwapo yun xa si Nikko. Game?[/quote] cge, wait ka lang... ala pa akong mahanap...azar! [quote=pinkloveriza01]wow.:wow: nice story tlga toh.. love it..! :wow: hi2ntayin ko susunod na chapter.. :D[/quote] thank you... ipopost ko ata mamaya yung part two... [quote=akuzet16]haha.. go nikko!., pagtanggol mouh c shy!., i lubb it!., hahahah. gel chupeh!., alis kah jan!., ttoinkzs.. nxt chappie plzs..[/quote] hehehe, naku sis! pati tuloy ako na-iinis na kay GEL!! chupe!! hahaha... kawawa!! pinag-tulungan natin sis,
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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

[quote=baby_haizeek]grabeh,wala kang awa sis!! hehehehe.... tinatapos ko pa ngayon yung part 2... tinatamad na nga ako,hihihi...[/quote] wahaha... may awa naman akoh! =D=D=D waw, excited na ako sa part 2!!! :o kawawa naman mommy nina Shy! anu kaya mangyayari sa b day partie? :eh:
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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

[quote=baby_haizeek]thank you... ipopost ko ata mamaya yung part two...[/quote] ok.. i'll w8.. lab it..! :wow:
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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

[align=center][i][b]Not so Ordinary Birthday Party (Part-II)[/b][/i] [/align] [b]Nadal�s Residence�[/b] [b]Mommy:[/b] [color=brown]Shy?? Saan ka ba nanggaling??? Kanina pa ako nag-hihintay sa�yo.. Pinuntahan ka pa naman ni Zac, Nikko at Michael sa bahay nila Anne,[/color] [b]Shy:[/b][color=pink]Huh? Sorry po�. Akala ko kasi hindi ako kailangan sa Party, Silang tatlo po ba ang magkakasama?? [/color] :o [b]Mommy:[/b] [color=brown]Yes� Don�t mind them nalang, babalik nalang sila dito kung malaman nilang andito kana sa bahay� Sige na punta ka na sa kwarto m at mag-bihis naka-uniform ka pa kasi,[/color] [b]Shy:[/b][color=pink]Opo�Andito pa la yung parents ni Zac at Nikko,[/color] [b]Mommy:[/b] [color=brown]Oo, inimbitahan ko sila�Alam mo naming close ang family natin sa kanila,[/color] [b]Shy:[/b][color=pink]Sige Mommy mag-bibihis na ako�,[/color] [b]Bahay ni Anne�[/b] [b]Nikko:[/b] [color=blue]Tao po� Anne??[/color] [b]Zac:[/b][color=green] Uhhhmmmm, Nikko? I�m sorry pala sa nangyari dun sa school� Nalaman ko na ngayon yung whole story, masakit man para sa kin I have to accept the fact na you and Shy liked each other� Alagaan siya pare ha?? Lagot ka sa kin kung paiyakin mo!,,,hehehe.=) Friends???[/color]:cry: [b]Nikko:[/b] [color=blue]Sure PARE! Friends! Promise ko rin sa�yo na hindi ko sasaktan si Shy.. Salamat![/color]:eh: [b]Michael:[/b][color=teal] So, are you guys going to hug or what??[/color] [b]Zac:[/b][color=green] Nikko, baka masuntok ko tong kano mong pinsan�[/color] [b]Nikko:[/b] [color=blue]Yes Michael, after the hug� kissing comes next.hahahaha![/color] [b]Zac:[/b][color=green] Kadiri,hahahaha�[/color]:puke: [b]Michael:[/b][color=teal]Yah! Kadiri ka talaga! [/color] [b]Nikko:[/b] [color=blue]HAHAHAHA![/color] [b]Anne:[/b] [color=purple]Nikko? Zac?? Friends na kayo??? At may kasama pa kayong PAPA JUICY!![/color] [b]Nikko:[/b] [color=blue]Anne, nga pala insane kong si Micahel�[/color] [b]Zac:[/b][color=green] Yes Anne, friends na kami ni Nikko..[/color] [b]Anne:[/b] [color=purple]Oh, eh di mabuti�. I know Shy will be happy kung malaman niyang ok na kayo,[/color] [b]Honey:[/b][color=orange] Anne, sino ba yan bakit ang tagal mo sa labas�. WOW!! Zac??? Nikko??? Totoo ba toh??? At may kasama pa kayong PAPA JUICY!![/color] [b]Zac:[/b][color=green] Magkaibigan talaga kayo� Papa Juisy, Papa Juicy kayo diyan!![/color] [b]Michael:[/b][color=teal]Hi! I�m Nikko�s cousin� [/color] [b]Nikko:[/b] [color=blue]Tumigil ka nga diyan sa pagpapa-cute Mike�s�hehehe,[/color] [b]Anne:[/b] [color=purple]Si Shy ba pinunta niyo dito?? Sorry� naka-alis na kasi siya, I�m sure nadun nay un sa bahay nila by this time�[/color] [b]Nikko:[/b] [color=blue]Ah ganun ba�. Thanks Anne at Honey sa info, alis na kami�[/color] [b]Honey:[/b][color=orange] Sige ingat kayo�. Pati na rin si Papa Juicy,[/color] [b]Zac:[/b][color=green] Sige kita kitz nalang bukas sa school�[/color] [b]Anne:[/b] [color=purple]Sure�. Bye!![/color] [b]Honey:[/b][color=orange] Anne, lahi ata nila Nikko yung mga gwapo noh??[/color] [b]Anne:[/b] [color=purple]Siguro nga, tingnan mo nalang si Papa Juicy, gwapo rin.. [/color] [b]Honey:[/b][color=orange] Excited na akong chikahan si Shy tungkol kay Papa Juicy,[/color] [b]Anne:[/b] [color=purple]Tumigil ka nga diyan, ako yung nauna sa kanya..bleh!! [/color] [b]Honey:[/b][color=orange]Sa akin naman siya nakatingin�hahaha!, [/color] [b]Anne:[/b] [color=purple]Pasok na nga tayo sa loob, nilalamok na ako dito, [/color] [b]Nadal�s Residence�[/b] [b]Mommy:[/b] [color=brown]Sa lahat ng mga andito sa party na toh� I want to thank You for coming, ~~~~~~~~ Huh?? Anu yan???[/color]:o [b]Gel:[/b] [color=red] What the??? Mascot! May phobia ako diyan!![/color] [b]Shy:[/b][color=pink] Yeeeeey!!! I love JOLLIBEE!!!![/color]:lol: [b]Jollibee:[i] HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO YOU! HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO YOU! HAPPY BIRTHDAY� HAPPY BIRTHDAY�HAPPY BIRHTDAY T O YOU�[/i][/b] [b]Mommy:[/b] [color=brown]Paano nakapasok yan dito??[/color] [b]Aling Tekla:[/b] Hay Naku Ma�am! Iwan ku!! Kaosap ku kase kanena yung waiter na gwapu� [b]Mommy:[/b] [color=brown]Haaaaay, hala� my party crasher tayo,[/color] [b][i]Yinkap ni Jollibee si Mommy at may ibinulong sa kanya�[/i][/b] [b]Jollibee:[/b] Namiz kita honey ng sobra� [b]Mommy:[/b] [color=brown]Rafael??[/color] [b]Jollibee:[/b] Huwag ka munang maingay sa mga bata,,,,[/color] [b][i]Yayakapin na sana si Gel, pero�[/i][/b] [b]Gel:[/b] [color=red]Stay away from me!!! Takot ako sa�yo�[/color] [b][i]Tinanggal ni Jollibee yung costume�.[/i][/b] [b]Gel at Shy:[/b] DAAAAAAAAADDDDDDDDYYYYYYYYYYY!!!! =) =) =) =) [b]Mommy:[/b] [color=brown]Ang ganda ng naisip mong entrance�[/color] [b]Gel:[/b] [color=red]Daddy namiz kita, akala ko pa nman tinatakot mo lang kami�[/color] [b]Shy:[/b][color=pink] Daddy, ang galling mo! What a surprise!![/color] [b]Daddy:[/b] Ang init init sa loob niyan.. Hindi ko na uulitin yung gnawa koh, Namiz ko din kayo mga anak�lalo na yung Mommy niyo, Upo tayo, Doon oh, Nakikita ko yung mga Custudio at Cabrera� [b]Gel:[/b] [color=red]No thanks Dad, kayo nalang �[/color] [b]Mommy:[/b] [color=brown]Pasensya na kung naabala kayo sa grand entrance ni Rafael.. gusto niya kasing supresahin ang mga bata sa kanyang pag-dating..[/color] [b]Mrs. Cabrera:[/b] Ok lang yun, [b]Mrs. Custudio[/b] Kaya nga, doon mo nlang paupuin si Rafeal tabi nila George [i][b](Daddy ni Zac)[/b][/i].. [b]Mommy:[/b] [color=brown]Naku kahit hndi ko na sabihin sa kanya, doon talaga uupo yun�[/color] [b]Mrs. Cabrera:[/b] Naku, asan na kaya sila Zac?? [b]Mrs. Custudio[/b] Andun oh�. Katabi ni Shy, [b]Mommy:[/b] [color=brown]Ang laki na pinag-bago ng mga bata..[/color] [b]Mrs. Cabrera:[/b] Ganyan talaga�. [b][i]Patuloy silang nag-usap usap tungkol sa mga anak nila�[/i][/b] [b]Shy:[/b][color=pink] Aba! Himala, bakit magkasama kayong dalawa??[/color] [b]Zac:[/b][color=green] Hala, grabe naman.. Shy, friends na kami.. Ayos diba??[/color] [b]Shy:[/b][color=pink] Eh di, mabuti kung ganun�[/color] [b]Nikko:[/b] [color=blue]Kaya nga, ang gaan ng feeling kung walang kaaway.. Shy, nga pala.. Meet Michael, my cousin..[/color] [b]Shy:[/b][color=pink] Hello, nice meeting you� Papa Juicy siya ha,[/color] [b]Michael:[/b][color=teal]Pardon?? [/color] [b]Shy:[/b][color=pink] Nothing,hehehe�[/color] [b]Zac:[/b][color=green] Kaibigan mo talaga sina Anne ant Honey, pare-pareho kayo ng iniisip� Papa Juicy�[/color] [b]Shy:[/b][color=pink] SSSHHHHHHH, baka marinig ka ni Nikko�hehehe,[/color] [b]Nikko:[/b] [color=blue] Shy, namiz mo siguro yung daddy mo ng sobra�[/color] [b]Shy:[/b][color=pink] syempre naman, hindi na kailangan itanong yan�[/color] [b]Nikko:[/b] [color=blue] Wait lang ha??[/color] [b]Shy:[/b][color=pink] Sure, Oi Zac, paki-abot nga ng camera� Halika picture picture tayo para friendster�hehehe,[/color] [b]Zac:[/b][color=green] Teka muna, dapat maganda yung angle�[/color] [b][i]Sa table ni Gel�[/i][/b] [b]Gene:[/b] Hoi, Gel�are you ok??? [b]Gel:[/b][color=red] No, I�m not� tingnan mo yung kapatid koh, kakaasar! Nilalandi si Nikko�[/color] [b]Portia:[/b] Hindi naman, ayun nga si Nikko sa may sound system eh� Kausap yung DJ, Sarap ng sauce nitong kinakain koh,� [b]Gel:[/b][color=red] Ano kaya ang balak ni Nikko�[/color] [b]Gene:[/b] Ikaw sana yung kasama ni Nikko ngayon noh? Gel, diba si Michael yun� Yung alam mo na� [b]Gel:[/b][color=red] Yup, si Micahel nga yun� Ayokong makita pag-mumukha niya! He promised me na hindi niya sasabihin kay Nikko yung tungkol sa min, I hate him!!![/color] [b]Portia:[/b] Relax ka lang,�. Baka mapansin tayo dito ng Mommy at Daddy moh� [b]Gel:[/b][color=red] Sige maiwan ko kayo, Punta lang ako dun� Iinom ng wine hanggang sa malasing ako�[/color] [b][i] A little conversation�. Turning into little sweet sensation� And they�re only getting sweeter every time� A friendly get together Turning into visions of forever.. If I just believe this foolish heart of mine� I can�t pretend that I�m just a friend �Coz thinking maybe we were meant to be� [/i][/b] [b]Nikko:[/b] [color=blue] Shy? Would you like to dance with me??[/color] [b]Shy:[/b][color=pink] Huh? [/color] [b]Zac:[/b][color=green] Sige na Shy,[/color] [b]Shy:[/b][color=pink] Ok�[/color] [b][i]I think I�m fallen� fallen� in love with you� And I don�t, I don�t know what to do� I�m afraid you�ll turn away� But I�ll say it anyway� I think I�m fallen� For you� Whenever we�re together I�m wishing that goodbyes would turn never.. Coz with is where I always wanna be.. Whenever I�m beside you.. All really wanna do is hold you.. No one else but you has meant this much to me.. I can�t pretend that I�m just a friend� �Coz thinking maybe we were meant to be� I think I�m fallen� fallen� in love with you� And I don�t, I don�t know what to do� I�m afraid you�ll turn away� But I�ll say it anyway� I think I�m fallen� For you� I�m fallen for you� I�m fallen for you�[/i][/b] [b]Gel:[/b][color=red] Stop!![/color] [b][i]Sabay bunot kay Nikko at Mwaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah!!![/i][/b] [b]Mommy:[/b] [color=brown]Angeli! [/color] [b]Gel:[/b][color=red] Mommy? Hindi mo ba alam na yang anak mo inagaw sa kin si Nikko..[/color] [b]Gene:[/b] Gel, tara na� lasing ka lang, punta na tayo sa kawarto mo.. I�m sorry po tita� [b]Daddy:[/b]Gel, Go to your room and Shy I want to talk with you� After the party,� I know may dapat akong malaman,, [b]ABANGAN!! [i]Chapter 9-Winker[/i]... thanyo sa mga patuloy na nag-babasa sa story koh... at hindi kayo nabobored,=)[/b] [quote=asukal_rienee]wahaha... may awa naman akoh! =D=D=D waw, excited na ako sa part 2!!! :o kawawa naman mommy nina Shy! anu kaya mangyayari sa b day partie? :eh:[/quote] hehehe,andito na poh sis! sana magustuhan niyo... [quote=pinkloveriza01]ok.. i'll w8.. lab it..! :wow:[/quote] no need to wait kasi it's already there...hehehe, enjoy reading,

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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

[quote=baby_haizeek]no need to wait kasi it's already there...hehehe, enjoy reading,[/quote] yeah.. nag enjoy nga ako eh.. haha,.,. :lol: lab ko tlga tong story moh.. lab it!!!!.. :wow: [i'll wait for the next chapter]
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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

[quote=pinkloveriza01]yeah.. nag enjoy nga ako eh.. haha,.,. :lol: lab ko tlga tong story moh.. lab it!!!!.. :wow: [i'll wait for the next chapter][/quote] hehehe,talaga?? salamat... akala ko mabobored na yung mga readers ko sa chapter na toh,
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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

Sis! Sira ulo na nga si Gel . =) Hahaha! | | | | | v [img]http://i246.photobucket.com/albums/gg115/spacey94/Cedric%20Diggory/cd000.jpg[/img] Ok ba ?
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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

[quote=baby_haizeek]ABANGAN!! Chapter 9-Winker... thanyo sa mga patuloy na nag-babasa sa story koh... at hindi kayo nabobored,[/quote] wee.d naman nkaka-bored ahh! gandah ngah!xciting masyadoh! tgal den akong d nka-online! jiji.. gandah nn 2 chapters na pina-lampas ko sis! jiji.. go!nxt chapter nah! :D
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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

yan nag'update na! :lol: baka makieksena pa yang c michael ah. :eh: huwee~ papa juicy ba? =D =D next na. moar.moar.moar. :thumbsup: :thumbsup:
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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

[quote=njblxii]Sis! Sira ulo na nga si Gel . =) Hahaha![/quote] hahahaha,ang sama! sira ulo talaga... yup, ok yun sis!! saan mo nkuha?? PAPA JUICY siya,hkhkhk... [quote=Cutie_Phunk]wee.d naman nkaka-bored ahh! gandah ngah!xciting masyadoh! tgal den akong d nka-online! jiji.. gandah nn 2 chapters na pina-lampas ko sis! jiji.. go!nxt chapter nah! :D[/quote] bakit ka nga pala natagalang d nkapag-online?? salamat sa pag-babasa,,,=) matatagalan pa bago ako makapag-update, nag-iisip pa nga ako ngayon ng science song, asar! wala akong talent mag-compose!!! [quote=_berii.^�]yan nag'update na! :lol: baka makieksena pa yang c michael ah. :eh: huwee~ papa juicy ba? =D =D next na. moar.moar.moar. :thumbsup: :thumbsup:[/quote] hehehe,oo... natagalan akong gumawa sa part 2 na yan! azar!! yes! xmpre may papa yummy... meron ding PAPA JUICY, auz diba??
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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

[quote=baby_haizeek]hehehe,oo... natagalan akong gumawa sa part 2 na yan! azar!! yes! xmpre may papa yummy... meron ding PAPA JUICY, auz diba??[/quote] aus! haha. kelan sis ang next chapter? :D
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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

[quote=baby_haizeek]hehehe,talaga?? salamat... akala ko mabobored na yung mga readers ko sa chapter na toh,[/quote] bkit nman mabobored kmi?? hndi cguro..,ang ganda kya ng story.. :eh:
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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

[quote=_berii.^�]aus! haha. kelan sis ang next chapter? :D[/quote] depende kung magkaroon na ako ng freetime, azar talaga!! science month ngayon dami daming gagawin... [quote=pinkloveriza01]bkit nman mabobored kmi?? hndi cguro..,ang ganda kya ng story.. :eh:[/quote] ala lang sis,, feel ko lang...
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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

[quote=baby_haizeek]depende kung magkaroon na ako ng freetime, azar talaga!! science month ngayon dami daming gagawin...[/quote] woah. :O may science month pa tlga ah. haha. take ur time sis. i'll wait for teh next na lang. ;)
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