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[align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

akuzet16
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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

weeeeh!., ang danda ng chappie.. lawl. lagot nah c shy!., OMG!. bka pfagalitahn cyah ni daddy!., lawl :wallbash:
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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

[quote=baby_haizeek]hahahaha,ang sama! sira ulo talaga... yup, ok yun sis!! saan mo nkuha?? PAPA JUICY siya,hkhkhk...[/quote] yah yah! Pinapakilala ko sayo, Cedric Diggory(Harry Potter charater) slash Edward Cullen(Twilight) slash Robert Pattinson. So ako na panalo? Kang Shy na naman tayo maghahanap.! ok ba!?:)
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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

waw, nice chappie, si Gel naman! lukarit! haha =D akala ko matino, kiring din pala! :lol::lol::lol: maldita! =D=D=D lol, masyado ko na inaaaway si Gel, natawa naman ako sa dad nila! =D:lol: Jollibee? Nice one! ;)
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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

weeee..nice chappie.. i mean nys part 2.. hahaa... sorii.. late ako magbsa.. gndang part 2 to!!
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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

[quote=baby_haizeek]bakit ka nga pala natagalang d nkapag-online?? salamat sa pag-babasa,,, matatagalan pa bago ako makapag-update, nag-iisip pa nga ako ngayon ng science song, asar! wala akong talent mag-compose!!![/quote] wee.. kaxe bx maxadoh! b-coz of our "bwan ng wika!" jiji.. galingan mo sa pag compose sis!..:D Btw,nice chappie sis! like it very mch! patay si shy ngayon key daddy!. ajiji, nxt chappie nah sis! :D:thumbsup:
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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

Waw. Ang ganda ng story. Hehe. Love it. Nakakachaka 'tong si Gel. Ayos na nga sana istorya eh. Nagkaayos na si Zac tsaka si Nikko. Nako. Move on Girl.:)
njblxii
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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

[quote=Cutie_Phunk]baby_haizeek wrote: bakit ka nga pala natagalang d nkapag-online?? salamat sa pag-babasa,,, matatagalan pa bago ako makapag-update, nag-iisip pa nga ako ngayon ng science song, asar! wala akong talent mag-compose!!![/quote] tungkol saan ang knta? Bka mkatulong ako. *WiNk
pinkloveriza01
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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

[quote=baby_haizeek]ala lang sis,, feel ko lang...[/quote] hmmpf.. hehe.. kaka enjoii nga eh.. =) we lhab it!.. haha.. :lol:
Cutie_Phunk
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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

[quote=njblxii]tungkol saan ang knta? Bka mkatulong ako. *WiNk[/quote] sa science song raw sis! sge sis! 2lungan mo xa! jiji.. :D
shashaii
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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

:o=):eh: extra! extra!... hehehe.. like it kish.. =)
baby_haizeek
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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

[align=center][b]GIVE ME YOUR E-ADDS.... para ma-add ko kayo sa friendster...=) thank you...[/b][/align] [quote=_berii.^ü]woah. :O may science month pa tlga ah. haha. take ur time sis. i'll wait for teh next na lang. ;)[/quote] oo, naloloka na nga kami mag-hanap ng kung anu anung experiments... bazta may ma-ipasa lang sa teacher namin, hmmmp..... [quote=akuzet16]weeeeh!., ang danda ng chappie.. lawl. lagot nah c shy!., OMG!. bka pfagalitahn cyah ni daddy!., lawl :wallbash:[/quote] hehehe, lagot din si GEL... kakarating lang ng DADDY nila, prob kaagad ang haharapin... [quote=njblxii]yah yah! Pinapakilala ko sayo, Cedric Diggory(Harry Potter charater) slash Edward Cullen(Twilight) slash Robert Pattinson. So ako na panalo? Kang Shy na naman tayo maghahanap.! ok ba!?:)[/quote] hahahaha,wow! sis naman, nag-erffort ka pa talaga... buti ka pa my time mag-hanap ng mga gwapo.. samantalang ako, naku!! wala!! naka-tambak school works!! azaaaaaar!!! [quote=asukal_rienee]waw, nice chappie, si Gel naman! lukarit! haha =D akala ko matino, kiring din pala! :lol::lol::lol: maldita! =D=D=D lol, masyado ko na inaaaway si Gel, natawa naman ako sa dad nila! =D:lol: Jollibee? Nice one! ;)[/quote] yah!! GAGA si Gel....hihihi, cge sis! awayin mo a si Gel, naiirita din ako sa kanya... tulad ng pagka-irita ko sa friend ko ngayon!! nag-away kani,hate her!! hahaha,nakakatawa yung part na JOLLIBEE... un-expected kasi...=) hindi ba corny??? [quote=angeli718]weeee..nice chappie.. i mean nys part 2.. hahaa... sorii.. late ako magbsa.. gndang part 2 to!![/quote] hehehe,thank you... hindi ka nman late.... [quote=Cutie_Phunk]wee.. kaxe bx maxadoh! b-coz of our "bwan ng wika!" jiji.. galingan mo sa pag compose sis!..:D Btw,nice chappie sis! like it very mch! patay si shy ngayon key daddy!. ajiji, nxt chappie nah sis! :D:thumbsup:[/quote] char!! ayun ginawan na koh ng friend koh, nag-hanap lang ata siya sa internet... bahala na yung teacher ko dun, basta may naipasa ako...hihihi, salamat nalang sa concern ni "njblxii"... thanks, my dear sissy.... [quote=bianx_06]Waw. Ang ganda ng story. Hehe. Love it. Nakakachaka 'tong si Gel. Ayos na nga sana istorya eh. Nagkaayos na si Zac tsaka si Nikko. Nako. Move on Girl.:)[/quote] ay naku, salamat poh...=) new reader ka ba? parang ngayon ko lang kasi nakita username mo na nag-comment...=) kaya nga sis, dapat mag-move on na si GEL... gooo!! alllliiiiiiiisss.... chuuuuuuuuppppeeeeeee!! hahahahaha, thank for reading sis... [quote=pinkloveriza01]hmmpf.. hehe.. kaka enjoii nga eh.. =) we lhab it!.. haha.. :lol:[/quote] ah, salamat... akalo koh kasi boring yung story koh... puro kasi kalokohan yung nandyan, pang-comedy na ewan...=) [quote=shashaii]:o=):eh: extra! extra!... hehehe.. like it kish.. =)[/quote] hahahaha, haguy sha!! xtra daw kamu ni gene keith anu??? nabasa mo na tanan na chapter?? Guuuyz...meet my classmate!!! [b]"SHASHAII"[/b] she helped me in writing the part two sa chapter 8...hehehe,

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_berii.^ü
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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

[quote=baby_haizeek]oo, naloloka na nga kami mag-hanap ng kung anu anung experiments... bazta may ma-ipasa lang sa teacher namin, hmmmp.....[/quote] ahaha. lol o sis. nsan na ung next? haha. :D
bianx_06
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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

[quote=baby_haizeek]ay naku, salamat poh... new reader ka ba? parang ngayon ko lang kasi nakita username mo na nag-comment... kaya nga sis, dapat mag-move on na si GEL... gooo!! alllliiiiiiiisss.... chuuuuuuuuppppeeeeeee!! hahahahaha, thank for reading sis...[/quote] ^ Yup. New reader ako. At nagustuhan ko siya kagad. Hehe. Next Chapter na. Atats na mga tao dito.:lol:
asukal_rienee
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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

[quote=baby_haizeek]yah!! GAGA si Gel....hihihi, cge sis! awayin mo a si Gel, naiirita din ako sa kanya... tulad ng pagka-irita ko sa friend ko ngayon!! nag-away kani,hate her!! hahaha,nakakatawa yung part na JOLLIBEE... un-expected kasi...=) hindi ba corny???[/quote] haha... sige aawayin ko, :evil: pati ung frend mo??? ou naman natatawa ako dun, hindi naman siiya corny eh, ;)
baby_haizeek
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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

[quote=_berii.^ü]ahaha. lol o sis. nsan na ung next? haha. :D[/quote] haaaay... hndi pa ako nakapag-start sa next chapter. ala pa me ma.icp... at depressed ako ngayon dahil sa wasy namin ng frnd koh... :crybaby: kung magkaroon ng time, mag-uupdate ako...:thumbsup: [quote=bianx_06]^ Yup. New reader ako. At nagustuhan ko siya kagad. Hehe. Next Chapter na. Atats na mga tao dito.:lol:[/quote] ah,hehehe... salamat s pag-babasa... tinatamad pa me mag-update kasi ang dami dami ko pang ginagawa sa school, pero i'll try to update soon...=) [quote=asukal_rienee]haha... sige aawayin ko, :evil: pati ung frend mo??? ou naman natatawa ako dun, hindi naman siiya corny eh, ;)[/quote] hehe,si Gel awayin mo... huwag yung friend koh... ayoko kcng ma-hurt siya,,,
_berii.^ü
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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

[quote=baby_haizeek]haaaay... hndi pa ako nakapag-start sa next chapter. ala pa me ma.icp... at depressed ako ngayon dahil sa wasy namin ng frnd koh... :crybaby: kung magkaroon ng time, mag-uupdate ako...:thumbsup:[/quote] cge sis. just take ur time. ;)
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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

wiii ganda nmn ng story another chapter namn hek[gagad]
baby_haizeek
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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

[quote=_berii.^ü]cge sis. just take ur time. ;)[/quote] i think this weekend ako makakapag-update,,, this week kasi busy para sa acquaintance party namin, super late na nga... acquainted na kasi kami with each other at nag-aaway away na nga...hihi, [quote=gratitude1]wiii ganda nmn ng story another chapter namn hek[gagad][/quote] wow!:eh: new reader... hehehe,thank you poh...
asukal_rienee
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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

[quote=baby_haizeek]hehe,si Gel awayin mo... huwag yung friend koh... ayoko kcng ma-hurt siya,,,[/quote] ayeeh, ang sweet :rose: haha, kelan next chap? excited akuh! :D
pinkloveriza01
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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

sis kailan mo popost ung next chapter? hehe.. :D super excited na din ako.. =)
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