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[align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

wow ang ganda sis...........:thumbsup: ang dami ko na plang namiss na chaps......:crybaby: hehehehe....... update na poh!!!!!
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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

..ang gnda talaga grabeh!!!.. ..update na po..:) ..kailan kaya mga sweet moments nina shy at nikko..? ..sana..lapit nah..hehehe ..ganda talga!!!!!!nakaka adik...~~~ ..go go go go!!!update nah!!!!:D
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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

update na sis.. haha.. i can't wait..:lol:
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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

kish... soo0 nice.. luv it... ngayon plang ako nkpgopen nf ftalk after a 100 yrs.. heheh
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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

t s k~! wla pa ring update?:cry: i cant wait. waa!
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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

..updaet na p0o0o!! hehehehhe.,,, kakabitin kc eh.. :)
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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

Chapter 12 Birthday Bash [b]SEPTEMBER 23, 2008[/b] [b]Mommy:[/b][color=brown] Shy!!! Anak….. Gising na, [/color] [b]Shy:[/b] [color=deeppink]Opo!! Hala, practice na naming mamaya para sa cheerdance competition…[/color] [b]Mommy:[/b][color=brown] Kain ka na.. Bilis…, [/color] [b]Shy:[/b] [color=deeppink]Mommy?? Bakit ka ba nag-mamadali na paalisin dito sa bahay?[/color] [b]Mommy:[/b][color=brown] Malalate ka na kasi…[/color] [b]Shy:[/b] [color=deeppink]Sige po… Alis na ako, Ano kaya balak nila Mommy..??? Si Daddy hindi rin nag-pakita… Ano ba ang meron sa araw na toh. Hmmmmmm, September 23??? My gosh!! Muddy…. Happy Birthday to myself!!! Happy Birthday to me…. Happy Birthday to me…. Happy Birthday…. Happy????[/color] [b]PEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEPPPPP!!![/b] [b]Nikko:[/b][color=blue] Woooooiiiiii….. BABY GIRL, Birthday Girl pala,hehehe San yung pakalz??? Man-libre ka naman diyan,[/color] [b]Shy:[/b] [color=deeppink] Anak ng tipaklong…… Papatayin mo ata ako sa Birthday ko, Nga pala ano sabi mo??? Pakalz??? Anu yun??[/color] [b]Nikko:[/b][color=blue] Pakalz.... It means kainan, food or anything basta related sa party celebration…[/color] [b]Shy:[/b] [color=deeppink] ahhh, yun ba yun…[/color] [b]Nikko:[/b][color=blue] Shy??[/color] [b]Shy:[/b] [color=deeppink] ha?…[/color] [b]Nikko:[/b][color=blue] I love you, Mwah!! [/color][b][i](sabay kiss!)[/i][/b] [color=blue]Sige,hehehe…. See you later,,,,,[/color] [b]Shy:[/b] [color=deeppink] Hoooooooooooooooooooooyyyyyyyyyy!! Ano yun? Iwanan ba naman ako,… Hugh!! Azar!![/color] [b]Sa labas ng Classroom nila…. [i]Happy Birthday to you…. Happy Birthday to you…. Happy Birthday…. Happy Birthday…. Happy Birthday to you SHY!!….[/i][/b] [b]Shy:[/b] [color=deeppink] Uy! Salamat…… Mrs. Astrologo pati sa inyo classmates, Sinurprie niyo ko… Wait, asan sina Anne at Honey???[/color] [b]Mrs. Astrologo:[/b] Tama na ang tanong Shiza, Halika… Let’s start our class,,, [b]Shy:[/b] [color=deeppink] I smell something fishy… Nakakapagtaka kung bakit wala ang dalawang GAGA na yun, tapos nag-start ng class si Mrs. Astrologo na wala si Anne, Favorite student niya yun….hmmmmm[/color] [b]KRRRRIIIIIIINNNNNNNNGGGGGGG!!![/b] [b]Shy:[/b] [color=deeppink] Haaaay, Lunch break na… Asan na kaya sila???...hmmmmmm,[/color] [b]NADAL’S RESIDENCE..[/b] [b]Anne:[/b][color=purple] Honey, akin na nga yung gunting…[/color] [b]Honey:[/b][color=orange] Anong gunting??? Cutter toh!![/color] [b]Anne:[/b][color=purple] Ah, cutter ba yan?? Akala ko gunting tawag diyan…[/color] [b]Honey:[/b][color=orange] Nakakahiya ka naman Anne,hehehe.. Hindi mo alam kung ano yung gunting tsaka cutter… First honor ka pa naman..[/color] [b]Anne:[/b][color=purple] Joke lang…[/color] [b]Honey:[/b][color=orange]Hmmmmppfff!! Palusot ka pa…[/color] [b]Nikko:[/b][color=blue] hoi, kayong dalawa… Tama na ang chika… tapusin niyo na yung banner, Para mailagay ko na yan,,[/color] [b]Mommy:[/b][color=brown] Aling Tekla, asan na po ba yung binili kong mga party poppers???[/color] [b]Aling Tekla:[/b] NAKO ma’am andon ata sa sasakyan ni ser… Kokonin ko lang, [b]Mommy:[/b][color=brown] sige,[/color] [b]Honey:[/b][color=orange] Tita, si Aling Tekla noh? Para si Patani sa Survivor kung mag-salita.…[/color] [b]Nag-tawanan ang lahat…[/b] [b]Aling Tekla:[/b] Ma’am, andeto na po… san ku po eto ilalagay?? [b]Anne:[/b][color=purple] Akin na po yun Aling Tekla, kami kasi ni Honey yung gagamit niyan mamaya…[/color] [b]Nikko:[/b][color=blue] Tita, aalis mo na ako…may gagawin lang po ako,[/color] [b]Mommy:[/b][color=brown] sige, balik ka nalang dito hijo..[/color] [b]--------------------------------------- CANTEEN -----------------------------------------[/b] [b]Shy:[/b] [color=deeppink] Ang boring naman, wala akong kaibigan sa araw ng Birthday ko… Aling Rose, pabili nga po ng Chilidog tapos drinks… Salamat poh,[/color] [b]Aling Rose:[/b] Hija, may ibibigay ako sayo…e2 oh. [b]Shy:[/b] [color=deeppink] Ha??? Ano toh?? Flower… White Rose, Salamat po, saan naman nanggaling toh??[/color] [b]Aling Rose:[/b] Basta… [b]Shy:[/b] [color=deeppink] Hmmmm, uy! My papel…Ano ba toh, ang liit naman ng font, “15 sweet things I want to tell you…”[/color] Sino kaya may gawa nito, Lagot siya sa kin…nakakahiya toh,[/color] [b]Manong Jani:[/b] Shy, may nag-papabigay sa’yo… [b]Shy:[/b] [color=deeppink] White Rose??? May maliit na papel??[/color] [b]Manong Jani:[/b] Oo, eto oh…sige alis na ko, [b]Shy:[/b] [color=deeppink] Rose # 1 “I DON’T WANT TO LOOSE YOU.” What the?? Sino ka ba…hmmm, [/color] [b]Zac:[/b][color=green] Shy, bakit mag-isa ka lang?? Asan yung dalawa mong alagad?? Hehehe..[/color] [b]Shy:[/b] [color=deeppink] Alagad ka diyan! Ewan, hindi sila pumasok…[/color] [b]Zac:[/b][color=green] Ah, baka nag-lakwatsa sa MALL…alam mo naman yun, Nga pala… Happy Birthday, my bibigay ako sa’yo…oh,[/color] [b]Shy:[/b] [color=deeppink] Pati ba naman ikaw Zac?…[/color] [b]Zac:[/b][color=green] Hawakan mo, sige… Alis na ko, my class na kami…[/color] [b]Shy:[/b] [color=deeppink] Rose # 2 “I WANT TO BE WITH YOU FOREVER”…[/color] [b]my humawak sa skirt ni Shy, at….[/b] [b]Bata:[/b] Ate Ate, Happy Birthday….Flower po para sa’yo… [b]Shy:[/b] [color=deeppink]Ay! Thank you, Rose # 3 “MY HEART TELLS ME THAT WE’RE MEANT TO BE”… [/color] [b]Kristine Joy:[/b] Shy, halika… Bilis, punta ka sa my flag pole… May limang white Roses dun, [b]Shy:[/b] [color=deeppink]Huh?? Tine, kilala mo ba kung sino yung nag-lagay ng mga roses na yun dun??? [/color] [b]Kristine Joy:[/b] oo,hehe…pero secret lang kung sino, Happy Birthday! Bilis kunin mo na, [b]Shy:[/b] [color=deeppink]Sino kaya my pakana lahat ng toh… Hmmmm, malamang si ANNE at HONEY… Lagot sila sa ‘kin bukas, Rose # 4 “I LOVE YOUR SMILE AND THE WAY YOU LOOK INTO MY EYES” Rose # 5 “YOU’RE THE ONLY ONE I REALLY WANT TO BE WITH” Rose # 6 “YOU’RE THE GIRL THAT I EVER DREAM” Rose # 7 “MY HEART BEATS ONLY FOR YOU” Rose # 8 “I DON’T NEED ANYTHING BUT YOU” Nag-nonose bleed na ko sa mga English words no toh… Sino ka ba,..[/color] [b]Principal:[/b] Ms. Nadal, what are you doing here? You go back to your classroom na, nag-stastart na yung classes sa taas. [b]Shy:[/b] [color=deeppink]Opo, sorry po…[/color] [b]Principal:[/b] Wait, I have something to give you… A white rose with a note, Sige balik ka na sa room mo… [b]Shy:[/b] [color=deeppink] Thank you po ma’am, Grabeh, pati principal kinunchaba,,,, Galing ng taong toh Rose # 9 “YOU DESERVE NOTHING BUT THE BEST”…[/color] [b]CLASSROOM ni Shy…[/b] [i]Wow naman Shy, may nine roses ka na… Sino nag-bigay niyan,?[/i] [b]Shy:[/b] [color=deeppink] Ewan, iba iba kasi nag-bigay nito…[/color] [i]Nga pala, ako din mag-bibigay sa’yo…hehehe, HAPPY BIRTHDAY!![/i] [b]Shy:[/b] [color=deeppink] Ikaw din?? Sino ba nag-utos sa inyo??…[/color] [i]Secret lang,hehehe…[/i] [b]Shy:[/b] [color=deeppink]Rose # 10 “I FELL INLOVE WITH YOU SO FAST”…[/color] [b]Mrs.Astrologo:[/b] Shiza, come here first… May nag-papabigay nito for you, [b]Shy:[/b] [color=deeppink]Another Rose??? Pang-11 na toh, Rose # 11 “YOU MEAN EVERY LITTLE THING TO ME”… Apat na lang.,malalaman ko na kung sino may pakana nito..[/color] [b]Gel:[/b][color=red] Shy, halika nga…[/color] [b]Shy:[/b] [color=deeppink]Ate?? Bakit po??[/color] [b]Gel:[/b][color=red] White rose para sa’yo… Happy Birthday Sis, Sorry sa lahat ng nagawa ko.. Namiz kita…[/color] [b]Shy:[/b] [color=deeppink]Ate,namiz din kita… [/color] [b][i](sabay hug…) [/b][/i] [b]Gel:[/b][color=red] Tama na ang drama, Basahin mo na ang nakasulat diyan,.. Sabay tayo mamaya sa pag-uwi…[/color] [b]Shy:[/b] [color=deeppink]Rose # 12 “I WILL DO EVERYTHING JUST TO MAKE YOU HAPPY” … Kung sino ka man, thank you.. at ito ang best na gift na natanggap sa Birthday ko,. Nagka-bati na kami ulit ni Ate Gel… [/color] [b]Anne:[/b][color=purple] Shy!! HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!…[/color] [b]Shy:[/b] [color=deeppink]Anne??? Si Honey??? … [/color] [b]Honey:[/b][color=orange]Andito ako present!! HAPPY BIRTHDAY …[/color] [b]Shy:[/b] [color=deeppink]Gaga kayo! Bakit ba kayo absent?? Tingnan niyo my pa-flowers flowers pa kayo … Salamat nga pala,[/color] [b]Anne:[/b][color=purple] uy,hindi kami may gawa niyan noh..pero kasali kami sa plano, Oh..isang flower para sa’yo,[/color] [b]Honey:[/b][color=orange]tama si Anne hindi kami yung may gawa niyan…oh flower again for you,basahin mo na mga naka-sulat diyan… [b]Shy:[/b] [color=deeppink]Kung hindi kayo…eh sino???[/color] [b]Anne:[/b][color=purple] Eh di sino pa nga ba??...Sige na, basa na!![/color] [b]Shy:[/b] [color=deeppink]Mag-hintay ka nga, nakita na niyang ang dami na ng flowers na toh na dala dala koh…kung tulungan niyo kaya ako, [/color] [b]Honey:[/b][color=orange]hehehe,ayoko nga…hehehe,[/color] [b]Anne:[/b][color=purple]Ayoko rin.hahaha!![/color] [b]Shy:[/b] [color=deeppink]Ang sama niyo!! Andito na babasahin ko na, Rose # 13 “I CAN’T GET YOU OUT OF MY MIND” Rose # 14 “I DON’T WANT TO BE YOUR FIRST LOVE, I WANT TO BE YOUR LAST”[/color] [b]Anne:[/b][color=purple]Ui, ano toh?? Tingnan niyo inaapakan natin my flower petals… [/color] [b]Shy:[/b] [color=deeppink]Hala, oo nga noh… Halika sundan natin.[/color] [b]Honey:[/b][color=orange]Kanina pa yan diyan, ikaw nalang Shy… May gagawin pa kami ni Anne, puntahan naming si Mrs. Astrologo…lamz na, Absent kami kanina,,,,[/color] [b]Anne:[/b][color=purple]oo nga pala, Sige Shy… Ciao![/color] [b]Shy:[/b] [color=deeppink]Hope this will lead me to my Mr. Right,,,hmmmmmm, ……. ………. ……………. …………………… Huh?? Nikko??? Anong ginagawa mo dito sa Second Court??? Tingnan mo ang dilim, [/color] [b]Nikko:[/b][color=blue] Happy Birthday… Uhmmmmm, Shy….[/color] [b]Shy:[/b] [color=deeppink] Oi, ayos tong sinet-up mo… Pati ba yung 16 na white roses???[/color] [b]Nikko:[/b][color=blue] Huwag ka munang maingay diyan, Sinisira mo moment koh…[/color] [b]Shy:[/b] [color=deeppink] Ay Sorry…Sige, continue…[/color] [b]Nikko:[/b][color=blue] Manong Jani,,,,Yung background music po,[/color] [i][b]"Beauty and Madness" Over there, just beneath the moon There's a man with a burden to keep Sleep will fall washouts rags 'n' paperbargs Home and life passing by Who will see the beauty in your life And who will be there to hear you when you call Who will see the madness in your life And who will be there to catch you if you fall Dreams run wild, as lovers find their way Through the night, not a burden to keep And over there, the twinkling of the night Harbor lights say goodnight one more time [/i][/b] [b]Shy:[/b] [color=deeppink] Nikko, thank you for making my Birthday party a memorable one..Ayoko nang matapos ang araw na to,…[/color] [b]Nikko:[/b][color=blue] Your birthday doesn’t end here…Twagain mo na ate mo at sabay-sabay tayong pumunta a bahay niyo…[/color] Next Chapter... Chapter 13 - FOUNDATION DAY!! Sa mga readers ko, sorry to keep you waitig na-busy kasi ako last month... Foundation kasi ng School namin, Sorry poh...

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megumi028
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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

waa.. it soo kiligx.. waa.. sarap nan b-dei ni shy.. haha.. nx na sis.. bitin.. haha..
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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

:o ang ganda naman ng set up for shy's b-day :wow: naman c Nikko :wow: ang ganda ng idea nya :) kaka kilig weeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee :D
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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

ang ganda namn ng idea na yun....... kaiinggit!!! sana ako din sa birthday ko!(joke.......) hehehehehe...... btw,nice chap poh!! nxt na!
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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

oh my golli wow again~! ahaha! nice storii. sana mai gumawa ng gnian skin. lmao. :wow::wow::wow: next naa sis!:D
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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

wow!! ang ganda na sis.. pero sobrahan ata sa pagka.sweet. pero kk lng... hahah! kakatuwa nman ni aling tekla!!! :lol:
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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

aiieee. an swiit naman. haha! next na sis!
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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

..omg!!next nah! ..cnt wait..love it tlga!..
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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

..w0o0o0ow!!! ang sweeeet naman!! :) galing ah!! [quote=baby_haizeek]Sa mga readers ko, sorry to keep you waitig na-busy kasi ako last month... Foundation kasi ng School namin, Sorry poh...[/quote] naku,.. ok lang yun.. at least d mo to napapabayaan, dba??! ganda talag!! :)
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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

woo.. kakilig talaga sis..
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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

[b]gosh!gosh!gosh! ang bongga nun! haha. kinilig ako din sa mga note huh! infairness! bongga talga sis![/b]:wow::wow:=D [b]NIKKO! akin ka na! rawr~![/b]
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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

sis.. nx na.. kaka excite an b-day ni shy.. haha..
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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

new reader sa story.. goshness, ang ganda ng simula hanggang sa chapter 12.. :) buti naman bati na ang magkapatid.. :)
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Re: [align=center][b]Sis, Can I take Him??[/b][/align] [b]Hi poh,sana magustuhan nyo itong story ko. This is my first time to write a story, I will accept your critics, comments and also suggestions...

update update update.. hehehe xD
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