first to comment fir chappie 18 im so like wondering who that stranger is ... omg!! cant w8

nice story u made sis! wow.. it's really great! just can't wait fer d next chapter!

Nice story! good job!

^Thanks sis! Thanks to all! Heres Chapter 19: [b]Chapter 19:[/b] Anna:Are you sure? Lara:Yes!!!! Sunshine:OMG! Lara:Ok we have to stay calm! kk? Sunshine:Yes Lara's Correct! Tina:Maybe its just a joke! Sunshine:Yah lets just play the laptop anyways we're all dressed up right? Tina:Yah! ...... .................. Sunshine:Look I have a new comment in my story Together Forever! Lara:Its from [b]gaara_gfzz [/b] Anna:Lets check her profile! Lara:Yah! [quote]================================================================ Name: | Shamz | Status:Offline ================================================================ Rank: | FriendsterManiac | Join date:2008-05-03 ================================================================ Gender: | Female | Posts: 631 ================================================================ Location: | Hongkong | Post per day: 5.5 ================================================================ Birthday | June 3rd 1992 | Referrals: 0 ================================================================ Recent Reputation Points [+16] -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------[/quote] Sunshine:She seems nice! Lara:Yah! Anna:I agree! Tina:well i dont like her!!!! Sunshine:C'om Tina shes nice! Anna:Yah look ! Tina:Ok fine! but im watching her! Anna:Oh ok! Lara:Lets look at her comment! Sunshine: Anna:Sure! [quote]Nice story sis! love it! Can i be your friend?[/quote] Sunshine:See Tina,shes nice! Anna:Yah Tina! trust us we know! Sunshine:Yah! Tina:Ok! Fine maybe i was just overacting! Lara:Ok lets get some yummy foods! Anna:Yes!!! Lara:(sings a song) Food Food omg food lets get some food lets get some food lets party yah food!:cake: :cake: :cake: Sunshine:Lets go to fs! (friendster) Lara:Yah lets go to my account look a new message [quote]Hi remember me from the phone! see you Tonight By the way tell your friends that im coming![/quote] Sunshine:OMG!!! It is true! [b][Someone Knocks at the door][/b] Anna:Whos that? Tina:Im scared! Lara:Lets go check whos that! ..... .................. Lara:Hello? Stranger:Hello! Lara:Who are you! Stranger:You'll see [b][Cuts Lara with a knife on the stomach then runs away][/b] Lara:Ouch! Tina:OMG! Anna:Are you ok? Sunshine:Lets get her to the Hospital! Anna:Yah! [b][In the Hospital][/b] Sunshine:Doc is she gonna be ok? Anna:Doctor do whatever you can do pls? Tina:Help our friend! [b][After 5 HOURS][/b] Doctor:Umm Ms.Sunshine You better get going cuz shes not really feeling well Anna:How is she? Doctor:She is not really feeling well Anna:How is she ??? did you succed??? Doctor:Ummmm Ummmm Anna:Pls !!! Sunshine:C'mon Doc reply us Doctor:Ummm!!!! ___________________________________________________________________________________________ [b]Is Lara ok? or not? Find out in Chapter 20![/b]

Last edited by Sunshine0918 (2008-08-25 20:44:28)

heeheh idk! secret!!! you'll just have to find out yourself!

Hi.. I am tanya, I would like to be friends with you either. Wow.. Your story is really great!! It's cute..!! I'm waiting for the next chap.!!

woah! lara is gonna die?!

[img]http://i220.photobucket.com/albums/dd93/Never_Fell_In_Love/emoticons/224027861.gif[/img] Zup Rachel .. heard much about u ...

Hey guys heres Chapter 20! [b]Chapter 20:[/b] Doctor:Im sorry! But your friend has lost alot of blood,which means the only way to save her is to donate blood to her! Sunshine:What?! Chelsea:Hi! I heard about what happened! Oh yah remember Henzor! Henzor:Hi Sunshine! Sunshine:Hi! Chelsea:What happened to Lara??? Henzor:Is she ok? Chelsea:Who will donate blood ??? Anna:Hi Im Anna! We need help !!! Henzor:Yah!! Vincent:Hi my name is Vincent im a friend of Sunshine I will donate blood to Lara Sunshine: Oh Hi! Thanks so much Vincent!!! Vincent:Your welcome Doctor:So you will donate blood to Lara? Vincent:Yes! Doctor:OK come with me! [b][After an 1 hour][/b] Doctor:You may go see Lara now shes better Anna:Shall we go? Tina: [b][With Lara][/b] Sunshine:Lara are you better now? Anna:Are you? Lara:Yah! I think so! But im feeling kinda weak Chelsea:Hi Lara its Chelsea Henzor:Remember me Henzor Sunshine:Guys She had a cut on her belly,she didnt loose her memorie Anna:Guess who donated blood to you Lara:Who? Tina:Vincent Lara: Oh! Sunshine:Dont you wanna say Thanks to him Lara:Just say it for m pls! Sunshine:Ok! Lara:When can i be out of the Hospital Doctor:The day after a week ,you have to rest here first. Lara:Oh! Doctor:Im sorry but can some1 call Lara's mom??? Sunshine:I will ! Lara:kk! Thanks! [b][On the phone][/b] [quote]Sunshine:Hi! Mrs.David Mrs.David:Yes? Oh Is this Sunshine? Sunshine:Yes i have bad news and good news Mrs.David:Bad News first! Sunshine:Ok Your daughter is in the hospital because someone cut her in the tummy with a knife Mrs.David:Omg! What?! Whats the Good news??? Sunshine:someone donated blood to her Mrs.David:Ok! Im on my way there Sunshine:Byebye! Mrs.David:Byeby![/quote] Sunshine:Her mom is on the way! Doctor:Guys i think you have to go home na! Sunshine:Ok! Anna:byebye! [b][Everyone says their goodbyes and leave] [At Sunshine's House][/b] omg! This year is so hard! I hate it! God pls help me!!!!! Ran:Sunshine light off now! Sunshine:Ok! Ran:Good night!!!! Sunshine:Good night also! [b][The next day at school][/b] Sunshine:Back to school!!! Tina:Later lets visit Anna...Remember its her last day! Sunshine:Oh Yah! Im gonna miss her!!! Tina:Sunshine im gonna go to my sister kk? Sunshine:Sure! ..... ...................... Gwen:Hi Sunshine! Nick:Hi ! Sunshine:What yah talking about? Gwen:Ok! You see Nick has a crush on You-know-who Sunshine:Oh i know! Nick:Dont tell! Sunshine:OK! Nick:Sure? Sunshine:Yes? _______________________________________________________________________________________ [b]Will Sunshine tell the secret or not Find out in Chapter 21 !!!! [/b]:rose:

Last edited by Sunshine0918 (2008-08-29 09:11:47)

^Well they called called a cab and went there very fast!!! Hehhehehe :