[quote][b]henzorvincent510 wrote:[/b] hello!! nice story na ha!! make sure you continue it .... or else...[jj] i know whos nick na!!! i know na also who sunshine is !!!! be online in yahoomessenger ooki... anyways nice story!!!! read my story also its short because velvet611 also made it short so i also made it short... so just read it ooki.... hope you like it [[peace]] gud nyt everybody![/quote] ok i'll continue it...but if icontinue it you have to continue yours! thanks! for supporting me!! [quote][b]To all who supported me: Hi guys i just wann say thanks! you guys made me happy everytime you commented my story you suported me! you made me confident ! Thanks and have a great day! -Rachel-[/b][/quote] EDITED: heres Chapter 23: [b]Chapter 23:[/b] Ran:Ok...Here you go...Just it noodles Sunshine:Thanks...sorry! Ran:Its ok...I'll never give up Sunshine:Ok! Ran:So ano gagawin mo sa school Sunshine:Asus! Nag tagalog pa 2! Ran:Of course i need to teach you naman para you know can speak it to me paminsan-minsa Sunshine:Ok i have to go to school now...Tina is outside w8ing for me Ran:Ok Sunshine:Byebye kuya Ran! Ran:Byebye sis! [b][Outside with Tina][/b] Sunshine:Hi Tina! Tina:Why didnt you go to Anna's house Sunshine:Oh yah! i frgot! Tina:Shes on her way now ....Lets go to her house! Sunshine:Sorry! Tina:Its ok! Sunshine:Thanks! Tina:What were you doing ??? Sunshine:Ummm just studying Tina:Ok! [b][At Anna's House][/b] Anna:Yes? Both Tina and Sunshine:Hi! Anna:Hi Guys! Sunshine:Sorry i didnt go yesterday Anna:Its ok! Sunshine:Thanks!!! Im gonna Miss you! Tina:Yah! Anna:Me too! Anna's Mom:Okay,Anna its time to go now... Say bye to Sunshine and Tina Anna:Byebye guys we have to go Sunshine:We are gonna miss you! Tina and Sunshine:Byebye! Anna:Byebye [b][In school][/b] Tina:Lets go to the Park for luck Sunshine:Good Idea! [b][In the Park][/b] Sunshine:We wish that Anna and her family would fly back to America safe! Tina:Mighty Park ...Help us! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Will Anna and her family fly safe? Find out in Chapter 24! :clock:

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