weew!, frst 2 cmmnt!, jiji:D, it hink?., it would be nyc ep u should continue the story!, jiji=), ~i'll w8 4 d nxt chappie!,

ur wlcme!, ukie!, i'll w8 4 da nxt chappie!,. kip it up!,

woooah! i loove the story ill look out for this one good job! mwaaa.

[quote=akuzet16]nice story u have.. hehe.. r u the one who made this story?!., by the way!. kip it up!. gud luck in this story and hope that there are more comments n ur story![/quote] thx for d comment! yes i'm d one hu made ds story.. [qoute][b]continuation of d episode one!..[/b][/qoute] all the fourth yr students [ section A ] met their new classmate which is.. Hillary Hyacinth. teacher: Hillary you may sit down beside wid Brandon.. Brandon: Hillary: ok [b]having discussions... after the class is over.. [/b] Eric: Ephron! guess what i met a beautiful girl in my room! Ephron: oh ok.. Brandon: guys look... [ pointing hillary in d hidden garden of their school ] Eric: who is that?!? Ephron: she's the only daughter of our school she is... Brandon: Hillary! my new seatmate! Ephron: n d hidden garden.. Hillary: huh.. i'm happy to be in this place.. who is dat boy [ talking to herself and watching Ephron at d opposite side ] Ephron: Brandon is she watching on us?!? Brandon: i think she's watching on me ahihi., do i look handsome?!? Eric: i dont think so.. Ephron. may i have the key? i will go home now.. Ephron: here.. [ giving the key to Eric ] lock all the doors if you already inside the house ok?!? Eric: bye guys! Ephron and Brandon: bye! [b]Hillary went near to the two boys [ brandon and ephron ][/b] Hillary: are you my classmates ryt?!? Ephron: yes we are Brandon: by the way i'm brandon and he's Ephron. [i]hillary's mind..[/i] - oh he's Ephron.. he's quite handsome looked like intelligent.. Ephron: what are u thinking/!? Hillary: me??! nothing... Brandon: so why are you staying n d hidden place.. like in the special garden of the university eh?!? Hillary: well.. i'm scared to be seen in here of my mom.. Ephron: and why?!? Hillary: ahm nothing ahihihi.. oh! i gotta go.. i need to buy my requirements.. Brandon: oh we wanted to go with you ryt Ephron?!? Ephron: huh?!?? but.. Brandon: ahm dont mind Ephron. we are planning also to buy some of our requirements [b][u]n d mall..[/u][/b] Hillary: i'm used to go n the mall being alone.. Ephron: why are you used to it huh?!? Hillary: ahm nothing ahi [ hiding something to the two boys ] Brandon: i guess we bought already all the requirements that we needed.. Ephron: Hillary: yah ahihi [b][u]n going home...[/u][/b] Hillary: here's my house.. nice to be with the two of you guys.. i'm having fun! bye.. Brandon: wow! what a huge house you have! Hillary: ahihi.. Ephron: i guess we need to go now Hillary its getting late already bye.. Hillary: bye Hillary had a demanding mother thats why she's afraid to speak out of what is her feelings to her parents, she's afraid to cry in front of her mom and to have a mistakes also.. she is a girl who had a big discipline and a good student from the another university she had a boyfriend before but now she dont have any.. because of the attitude of her mother.. though she's rich and elegant to look at.. but deep inside of her is like a baby who need help to other to cry on... months have passed by Ephron and Hillary become a seatmates already they share thoughts and experiences in their life.. Ephron shared about his family that both of his parents worked in abroad so that they can live a nice house and to have good education... [b][u]during class.. Ephron and Hillary is chatting through writing on a piece of paper..[/u][/b] [b][i] in the paper...[/i][/b] [quote]Hillary: wat a nice family u have Ephron.. Ephron: yah they are so nice Hillary: i hope that my mom will be like that also Ephron: don't be lyk dat.. we always missed of our mother every time we're having breakfast cause she's the one preparing our lunchbox and our things during school days but not only our eldest sister is the one preparing on it.. Hillary: awh ok.. lets listen now our teacher ahihihi Ephron: ahih yup2![/quote] teacher: Hillary answer this equation and explain.. Hillary: [ answering ] teacher: now explain your answer why you come up in that answer.. Hillary: ok. [ explaining ] [b][u]d class is over..[/u][/b] teacher: well its time already class.. thanks for explaining your answer Hillary. you answer is correct., good bye class! Hillary: thanks ms. students: goodbye and thank you ms! Brandon: you're so great Hillary! Hillary: thanks for the appreciation... Ephron: Brandon do you know that guy?!? [ pointing to a certain guy trying to get inside of the school ] Brandon: nope! i don't know him.. how about you Hill?!? [b]hillary just run away and got out in the school... the two boys are shocked cause they saw that Hillary and the guy talked to each other...[/b] [quote]end of episode one! - SCHOOL DAYS - what do you think is the realtion between Hillary and the guy near the gate?!? just wait for the next episode guyz! hope u can read ds continuation of my story god bless u all! [/quote]

^yea maybe:) i agreee. its nice. lol cant wait for the next chappie

nice story very creative way to go keep up the gud work have u taught of writing... hihihi

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[quote]hi! ds s d continuation of my episode two![/quote] [b][u]on the house of Hillary...[/u][/b] Hillary: i'm home now! maid: well thank God mom you should go to your moms room Hillary: what?!/ [ kind of worried ] maid: i think ma'am is angry again cause you went home late. by the way why you went home late? Hillary: sorry... i just went with my friends in going home is that a sin already? maid: well for me its ok but for your mom it is.. Hillary: ok i will... Mrs. Simpson: why are you late at home?!? huh?!? Hillary: i just went with my friends mom.. Mrs. Simpson: your friends again!!! you gave more importance to your friends!! thats why i transferred you in our own school!!! and thats what you did?!? Hillary: sorry mom but i cant live without friends.. Mrs. Simpson: what is more important to you friends? or studying? Hillary: studyin.. Mrs. Simpson: go to your room. fix yourself and make your assignments now!! and sleep early! Hillary: yes mom.. [b][u]in hillary's room...[/u][/b] [i]hillary's phone ringing... hillary answered it..[/i] [quote]Hillary: hello?!? Henry: Hill? Hillary: Hen.. ry?!? Henry: why?!? are you shock? Hillary: nope.. i'm just scared if mom will get inside directly in my room and what if... Henry: what if mom will caught you talking with me? Hillary: yes... Henry: dont worry.. i just want to hear your voice.. i already miss your voice.. Hillary: [ giggling ] ahahhaa! sure?!? Henry: yes! so how are you today? Hillary: i'm just ok.. i went home with my friends now but mom is angry cause its already late.. Henry: dont be sad just be happy, but make sure that you should went home earlier than today. ok? Hillary: ok Henry: oh i think to go now... bye.. Hillary: bye..[/quote] Hillary is fond writing a diary where she can express her feelings and her experiences everyday... its the only way that she can release her anger to her mom and to what she feels towards her mom.. in her diary, she named it as hera... [quote]Dear Hera, hi there again my day is ok in school i have close friends already even though its two months passed by already and i really felt at home with Ephron, Brandon and to the sister and younger brother of Ephron.. now i just find confusing because i'm feeling today happy but sad.. ugh! i feel confuse!!! ever! well my ex boyfriend bid goodbye in our school and i really missed him i want to hug and kiss him but i cant because it might cause a big fight again to mom and to Henry like what happened in the past.. ahm i went home with my close friends.. well i'm happy to be with them chatting especially Ella.. ahihihi.. she shared about Ephron. do you know hera.. i can feel more than friends towards one of my closes friends today.. ahihihi.. oooops! ahihi i'm just happy thinking about that but the sad part is when i went home my mom scolded me again i feel depressed everyday i went home she always did that. she had no time to rest in scolding me ugh! so bad! i really hate her! she's overprotective! i just wanted to feel like the most teenagers do. that they have many friends in going home and going out with friends.. she just dont know how my effort in studying hmp! well i need to bid goodbye now hera.. i need to study.. bye...[/quote] [quote] dats d end of the episode two - " unexpected feeling " i hope that you can guess already who is the one that Hillary is trying to refer in her diary about her [b]CRUSH[/b] [/quote]

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[b]during pe class...[/b] teacher: class next week is your 2nd grading for the honor role.. well usually our dance numbers for the program is by a group of boys or girls but today we will make it a twist for today... i would like that it will be by partner.. no auditions for this... but i will be the one who will choose their partners... ok.. [ watching the list of students ] Brandon: ahm what a heck?!? Ephron: haiz just follow the rules brandon boy: yup2! teacher: ok ahmm... Ephron and Hillary! Brandon and Michelle blah blah.,.,. ahiahihi [ some other students pa yan na sinabi sa teacher ] Ephron's mind: why all of the girls.. my partner is Hillary! hmp! Ephron: ahm ms can i exchange parters ?!? teacher: and who is it?!? Ephron: ahmm..... michelle? michelle: wow! miracle my prince charming wants me now! an evil like laughter.. brandon: nah.. he dont want you he just felt uncomfortable towards to hillary michelle: hmp! ew... hillary?!? she's just a beautiful daughter of the principal! and dats all! hmp! there's nothing special to it... during practice.. hillary: ahm sorry i stepped on your foot.. Ephron: ahm its ok.. just ignore it just continue dancing... hillary: ahm ok...

Nycee... I'm going to keep reading! Luv it..

hehehe! the image reminded me of the movie "shutter", the last part of the movie? but i like this story more! ^^ do continue!!