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- » Mods, Please move this to non-eng section since it's a taglish story. :) [quote]This is my very first story. Sorry for the childish scenes and all. Two years ago pa 'to e. :swt:[/quote] [u][align=cen
Mods, Please move this to non-eng section since it's a taglish story. :) [quote]This is my very first story. Sorry for the childish scenes and all. Two years ago pa 'to e. :swt:[/quote] [u][align=cen
- xxBUBBLiExx
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Mods, Please move this to non-eng section since it's a taglish story. :) [quote]This is my very first story. Sorry for the childish scenes and all. Two years ago pa 'to e. :swt:[/quote] [u][align=cen
Mods, Please move this to non-eng section since it's a taglish story. 
[quote]This is my very first story. Sorry for the childish scenes and all. Two years ago pa 'to e. 
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[u][align=center][b]Driving Me Crazy[/b][/align][/u]
[align=center][img]http://img254.imageshack.us/img254/7166/waaaoy5.jpg[/img]
[i]5/18/08 - 6/18/08[/i]
"If you would still believe that Prince Charming is there, you would have your happy ending"[/align]
"Clarz, you need to wake up,” a girl said.
I didn't bother to answer. I'm really tired.
"Clariane!"
"What is it?! Is it fire?! Where?! Tell me!" I held Myca's shoulders; I can say I was trembling with fear.
She sighed, “You fell asleep again. You missed the most beautiful part of the story!"
She acted as if she were a former drama queen. :?
"Corny," I showed her the L sign, "Let’s go home. I'm freaking tired today."
We went outside and drove ourselves home. She said my face was really blank. I mean, seriously. How come my face would be blank? She woke me up! I was having a hard time just to have a dream of him! And then, all vanished by a simple 'Clarz’.
By the way, the dreamer dreams of her Prince. I mean, his name is Prince. He's cute. He was my childhood friend, and, he left Philippines just to be with his Dad. I so freaking miss him. You know what? I don't know his surname that’s why I don’t have any communication with him.
The night when he left, he gave me a stuffed toy. And I was jumping all around because he gave me a Barney doll, which is one of my favourites.
"Please keep this," he smiled.
"Of course, I will. I love you." I chuckled and kissed him on the cheek.
We were like brothers and sisters who won’t be able to be apart, according to my mom. 
He laughed again and hugged me, “I love you, too.”
—–λ—–
It was six' o clock in the evening, so Yaya led us home.
"Hi sweetie," Mom said and kissed me.
"Ma," I was really childish that time, but anyway, I was just a kid then, so that’s fine. I showed her the doll that Prince gave me.
"That's nice. You better keep that because they will be leaving tomorrow."
"Really?! Is it possible to come with them?"
"You want to leave me here?"
I just stared her blankly, “…of course not."
Monday
"Goodbye."
"Wow, you'll ride an airplane. Can I come? Please." I pleaded.
"Sure. If you want, I’ll marry you. Up there.” He looked up and laughed.
I laughed too, “Really? I want to see angels. 
"
"Sure. I promise.”
And I was like, “Yay,” and he'll be able to find his dream, the freaking snow. But now, I don't know. I miss him so bad. But I still have the courage to believe that he'll come back. I'm really hoping. You know one thing? I can communicate with him through dreams. People often think I’m crazy because of my attitude; I love to sleep. Okay, I admit I really sound crazy. But they don't know the deepest reason why I'm acting like this.
And guess what? I’m right.
My prince is truly driving me crazy.
[quote]This is my very first story. Sorry for the childish scenes and all. Two years ago pa 'to e. [/quote]
[u][align=center][b]Driving Me Crazy[/b][/align][/u]
[align=center][img]http://img254.imageshack.us/img254/7166/waaaoy5.jpg[/img]
[i]5/18/08 - 6/18/08[/i]
"If you would still believe that Prince Charming is there, you would have your happy ending"[/align]
"Clarz, you need to wake up,” a girl said.
I didn't bother to answer. I'm really tired.
"Clariane!"
"What is it?! Is it fire?! Where?! Tell me!" I held Myca's shoulders; I can say I was trembling with fear.
She sighed, “You fell asleep again. You missed the most beautiful part of the story!"
She acted as if she were a former drama queen. :?
"Corny," I showed her the L sign, "Let’s go home. I'm freaking tired today."
We went outside and drove ourselves home. She said my face was really blank. I mean, seriously. How come my face would be blank? She woke me up! I was having a hard time just to have a dream of him! And then, all vanished by a simple 'Clarz’.
By the way, the dreamer dreams of her Prince. I mean, his name is Prince. He's cute. He was my childhood friend, and, he left Philippines just to be with his Dad. I so freaking miss him. You know what? I don't know his surname that’s why I don’t have any communication with him.
The night when he left, he gave me a stuffed toy. And I was jumping all around because he gave me a Barney doll, which is one of my favourites.
"Please keep this," he smiled.
"Of course, I will. I love you." I chuckled and kissed him on the cheek.
We were like brothers and sisters who won’t be able to be apart, according to my mom.
He laughed again and hugged me, “I love you, too.”
—–λ—–
It was six' o clock in the evening, so Yaya led us home.
"Hi sweetie," Mom said and kissed me.
"Ma," I was really childish that time, but anyway, I was just a kid then, so that’s fine. I showed her the doll that Prince gave me.
"That's nice. You better keep that because they will be leaving tomorrow."
"Really?! Is it possible to come with them?"
"You want to leave me here?"
I just stared her blankly, “…of course not."
Monday
"Goodbye."
"Wow, you'll ride an airplane. Can I come? Please." I pleaded.
"Sure. If you want, I’ll marry you. Up there.” He looked up and laughed.
I laughed too, “Really? I want to see angels. "
"Sure. I promise.”
And I was like, “Yay,” and he'll be able to find his dream, the freaking snow. But now, I don't know. I miss him so bad. But I still have the courage to believe that he'll come back. I'm really hoping. You know one thing? I can communicate with him through dreams. People often think I’m crazy because of my attitude; I love to sleep. Okay, I admit I really sound crazy. But they don't know the deepest reason why I'm acting like this.
And guess what? I’m right.
My prince is truly driving me crazy.
Last edited by xxBUBBLiExx (2010-02-03 07:41:15)
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- MiNEKOARCH
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- 1969-12-31
Re: Mods, Please move this to non-eng section since it's a taglish story. :) [quote]This is my very first story. Sorry for the childish scenes and all. Two years ago pa 'to e. :swt:[/quote] [u][align=cen
what the!? ganda siguro ng story na toh.. immature ka ba chaw? may pa-barney-barney ka pang nalalaman.. hahaha pero i think your story is cute! 
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EDITED!! nga pala.. bakit MYCA pa yung name? pwede namang DANX. wahahha joke next na chaw chaw.. 
immature ka ba chaw? may pa-barney-barney ka pang nalalaman.. hahaha pero i think your story is cute!
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EDITED!! nga pala.. bakit MYCA pa yung name? pwede namang DANX. wahahha joke next na chaw chaw..
Last edited by MiNEKOARCH (2008-05-20 02:22:24)
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- jhayyuliajay
- » FTalkGeek
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- 1969-12-31
Re: Mods, Please move this to non-eng section since it's a taglish story. :) [quote]This is my very first story. Sorry for the childish scenes and all. Two years ago pa 'to e. :swt:[/quote] [u][align=cen
wee...prince pa ung name...haha...dati chubby pa siya pero for sure when they meet again macho na...wahaha...i'll wait for the next chapter okay...?
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- ---mad4u---
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- 1969-12-31
Re: Mods, Please move this to non-eng section since it's a taglish story. :) [quote]This is my very first story. Sorry for the childish scenes and all. Two years ago pa 'to e. :swt:[/quote] [u][align=cen
waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!
exciting toh ah!
weeeee cant wait for the next chappie
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- xxBUBBLiExx
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- 1969-12-31
Re: Mods, Please move this to non-eng section since it's a taglish story. :) [quote]This is my very first story. Sorry for the childish scenes and all. Two years ago pa 'to e. :swt:[/quote] [u][align=cen
I heard the very annoying sound of the telephone, and of course, the voice of my stupid brother.
“Look! You better hear this! It’s ringing!” my brother while jumping on my soft bed.
I was too annoyed, so I babbled, “Ouch! Biboy, what the heck? Give me that! It’s early in the morning yet you are being so annoying.”
“Hello?"
“Clarz is speaking, who is this!?
The guy seemed to laugh, “Gee, chill. It’s me, Earl.”
“Oh hey, what’s up?”
“Nothing, you free? Let’s hang out."
“Aw. I just don’t know. Today’s the enrolment of the juniors, later afternoon.”
“Dang, I almost forgot. But hey, hanggang 12 nalang. Please? Okay. Love you.”
Love you? Is that what I really heard? He’s going “gay-gay” over me, I guess. I went downstairs to eat my breakfast and tell mom that I’m going out with my friends.
"Mom, Myca, Earl and I are going to SM to -"
"Right. Here’s the money. Be sure you’ll be back before 12. I want you to enjoy the day, okay?"
“O…kay? Thanks."
It seemed weird. She has a big smile on her face. I’m pretty sure she got good news. I wonder if I would ask.
And so I did, “Mom? What’s with the smiley face? Do you have any suitors?”
"What in the? I’m faithful to your dad, and you know that. It’s just that I-"
“CLARIANE! LET’S GO!”
"Oh, Mom. I have to go."
I went outside of the house and entered the car. I sighed. I don’t know but I feel worried of my mom. I feel like there’s something going wrong.
"Best, is it really windy outside? Here’s the comb. Go comb your hair." Myca said and laughed.
"Shut up. You were too early. Hey, where’s Earl?"
I looked at the front seat and saw him. He seemed down or mad or whatever. He doesn’t even talk. I guess I have nothing to do with it so; I turned on my iPOD and selected some songs.
Now Playing – Friends Forever
Gee. Prince never failed to pop out from my mind. I just kept on talking to myself. When are you coming back? When will I see you again? Should I let go? It’s just so hard to get over knowing that I’ve never fell for anybody. Childish memories can’t be erased from my brain. But if you would think of it, it’s not really that bad to dream of him, right? But we were still kids then, like toddlers. 
No mature minds.
I didn’t notice that I already threw the comb and it hit Earl’s head.
"I-I am sorry earl." I said softly and looked away.
Ugh. It’s the deafening silence.
“It’s alright.”
"Dude, we’re here! SM! Yessss!” butted Myca who really looked so excited about everything inside the mall. Thank God she has beaten around our bush.
“Let’s partyyyyyy,” We all said simultaneously. In fact, that’s our main line whenever we step on the mall’s grounds.
We went to the Event Center and we were able to see Sam Concepcion, who was really hot. We also went to Starbucks and took some coffee with us. Then we walked around and tried some cute stuffed toys at Blue Magic. After that, we ended up watching a horror movie in the cinemas. For your information, I was the one who chose the movie. I love horror movies.
Time Check: 10:00 AM
I was shivering. It was so freaking cold. 
I wasn’t able to bring my lovely sweater since they came too early at my house. 
“Myca, please, share me your sweater.” I almost cried.
“Are you silly? This is my eye protector. Dang this movie is so scary! We should’ve watched the other movie.”
"If you don’t want, then fine."
She’s so selfish. Naku, makokotong talaga yan sakin. :x Since I already talked to Myca, I’ll bug Earl this time. But then, his face was so serious. I admit, sometimes he get too scary. 
His face was so still. Feel ko nga, stone-hearted and bestfriend kong ito pagdating sa horror movies. I felt shy, so I just looked at the screen.
The scene was too violent. 
"E-Earl... "
"Yes? You okay?"
"Uh. Uh. Yes.” I whispered.
"Why? Don’t tell me you feel scared. Are you scared? "
“Of course, I’m not. Can I-”
He suddenly placed his left arm on my shoulder and pushed me towards his chest. I got shocked.
I went downstairs to eat my breakfast and tell mom that I’m going out with my friends.
"Mom, Myca, Earl and I are going to SM to -"
"Right. Here’s the money. Be sure you’ll be back before 12. I want you to enjoy the day, okay?"
“O…kay? Thanks."
It seemed weird. She has a big smile on her face. I’m pretty sure she got good news. I wonder if I would ask.
And so I did, “Mom? What’s with the smiley face? Do you have any suitors?”
"What in the? I’m faithful to your dad, and you know that. It’s just that I-"
“CLARIANE! LET’S GO!”
"Oh, Mom. I have to go."
I went outside of the house and entered the car. I sighed. I don’t know but I feel worried of my mom. I feel like there’s something going wrong.
"Best, is it really windy outside? Here’s the comb. Go comb your hair." Myca said and laughed.
"Shut up. You were too early. Hey, where’s Earl?"
I looked at the front seat and saw him. He seemed down or mad or whatever. He doesn’t even talk. I guess I have nothing to do with it so; I turned on my iPOD and selected some songs.
Now Playing – Friends Forever
Gee. Prince never failed to pop out from my mind. I just kept on talking to myself. When are you coming back? When will I see you again? Should I let go? It’s just so hard to get over knowing that I’ve never fell for anybody. Childish memories can’t be erased from my brain. But if you would think of it, it’s not really that bad to dream of him, right? But we were still kids then, like toddlers. No mature minds.
I didn’t notice that I already threw the comb and it hit Earl’s head.
"I-I am sorry earl." I said softly and looked away.
Ugh. It’s the deafening silence.
“It’s alright.”
"Dude, we’re here! SM! Yessss!” butted Myca who really looked so excited about everything inside the mall. Thank God she has beaten around our bush.
“Let’s partyyyyyy,” We all said simultaneously. In fact, that’s our main line whenever we step on the mall’s grounds.
We went to the Event Center and we were able to see Sam Concepcion, who was really hot. We also went to Starbucks and took some coffee with us. Then we walked around and tried some cute stuffed toys at Blue Magic. After that, we ended up watching a horror movie in the cinemas. For your information, I was the one who chose the movie. I love horror movies.
Time Check: 10:00 AM
I was shivering. It was so freaking cold. I wasn’t able to bring my lovely sweater since they came too early at my house.
“Myca, please, share me your sweater.” I almost cried.
“Are you silly? This is my eye protector. Dang this movie is so scary! We should’ve watched the other movie.”
"If you don’t want, then fine."
She’s so selfish. Naku, makokotong talaga yan sakin. :x Since I already talked to Myca, I’ll bug Earl this time. But then, his face was so serious. I admit, sometimes he get too scary. His face was so still. Feel ko nga, stone-hearted and bestfriend kong ito pagdating sa horror movies. I felt shy, so I just looked at the screen.
The scene was too violent.
"E-Earl... "
"Yes? You okay?"
"Uh. Uh. Yes.” I whispered.
"Why? Don’t tell me you feel scared. Are you scared? "
“Of course, I’m not. Can I-”
He suddenly placed his left arm on my shoulder and pushed me towards his chest. I got shocked.
Last edited by xxBUBBLiExx (2009-12-21 18:54:29)
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- MiNEKOARCH
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- 1969-12-31
Re: Mods, Please move this to non-eng section since it's a taglish story. :) [quote]This is my very first story. Sorry for the childish scenes and all. Two years ago pa 'to e. :swt:[/quote] [u][align=cen
whaaaaaaaaat! kakilig naman tong chappie chaw chaw. first commentor pa ako.
singit mo name ko ah.
first commentor pa ako.
singit mo name ko ah.
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- ---mad4u---
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- 1969-12-31
Re: Mods, Please move this to non-eng section since it's a taglish story. :) [quote]This is my very first story. Sorry for the childish scenes and all. Two years ago pa 'to e. :swt:[/quote] [u][align=cen
waaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!
ayiieee 
ayiieee
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- xxBUBBLiExx
- » FTalkElite
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- 1969-12-31
Re: Mods, Please move this to non-eng section since it's a taglish story. :) [quote]This is my very first story. Sorry for the childish scenes and all. Two years ago pa 'to e. :swt:[/quote] [u][align=cen
waaa.
bukas ko nalang lalagay chapter 2 kasi natatamad na ako. XD
dapat ngayon na kaso naghang pc ko. at hindi ko nasave 
anyway, bukas nlang. XD
tnx for reading..
anyway, bukas nlang. XD
tnx for reading..
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- jhayyuliajay
- » FTalkGeek
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- 1969-12-31
Re: Mods, Please move this to non-eng section since it's a taglish story. :) [quote]This is my very first story. Sorry for the childish scenes and all. Two years ago pa 'to e. :swt:[/quote] [u][align=cen
okay...
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- wakawakafeeling
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- 1969-12-31
Re: Mods, Please move this to non-eng section since it's a taglish story. :) [quote]This is my very first story. Sorry for the childish scenes and all. Two years ago pa 'to e. :swt:[/quote] [u][align=cen
oki!
nice story
kinikilig ako!
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- MiNEKOARCH
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- 1969-12-31
Re: Mods, Please move this to non-eng section since it's a taglish story. :) [quote]This is my very first story. Sorry for the childish scenes and all. Two years ago pa 'to e. :swt:[/quote] [u][align=cen
ok chaw chaw. dont forget huh. hahahaha jk. bilisan mo pag-update 
kundi- im gonna.. errrrrrrr.. just kidding..
dont forget huh. hahahaha jk. bilisan mo pag-update kundi- im gonna.. errrrrrrr.. just kidding..
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- xxBUBBLiExx
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- 1969-12-31
Re: Mods, Please move this to non-eng section since it's a taglish story. :) [quote]This is my very first story. Sorry for the childish scenes and all. Two years ago pa 'to e. :swt:[/quote] [u][align=cen
“Why are-”
“Please Clarz, even just for ten minutes.”
“Okay.” I said softly and looked at the screen.
What happened to him? No, I’m wrong. He isn’t the Earl I’ve known before. Maybe... No way. Are you all thinking what I’m thinking? No, maybe not probably because he always tell me this girl. The girl he likes since we were still in ninth grade.
I wasn’t able to move. Super. Then ang init-init pa niya. Minsan naiisip ko, is this Jacob Black of Breaking Dawn? Just kidding. I’m thinking na baka may fever siya.
I tried to look at him. Ngayon ko lang narealize na, he’s handsome. Here I go again. Just kidding, he’s my bestfriend naman eh. :]
I noticed that ten minutes has passed, yet hindi pa siya bumibitaw. Napatingin naman ako sa watch ko.
OMG. Three minutes before twelve! 8O I would still accompany my mother to the campus. 8O
“Earl. M-maybe you should-”
“Oh crap. I’m sorry.” Then he removed his arm and looked down.
“It’s alright. Anyway, I really have to go. Please, just tell Myca I’m going to school, okay? Bye.” I smiled and immediately left the cinemas.
I went outside of the mall and sumakay na ng jeepney. Nagulat ako, ewan ko ba, ang baho ko eh. I’m sure when I got home, my mom would say, “Clariane, anak. Hindi ka pinanganak para maging trabahador sa poso.” I know, right? It's pretty insulting.
“You just arrived on time,” she said while looking at the clock.
“Yup,” I widened my eyes and looked at her.
“And explain to me why-“
“And yes mom, galing ako ng poso. Mind if we go na?” Inunahan ko na siya, I don’t want to be embarrassed by her, eh.
This is it. Enrolment na. I would be able to see my crushes again, my friends, my fans, my teachers, and my enemies. Oh, I almost forgot. I am Maria Clariane Montolla (pronounced as Montolya). I'm one-fourth british. Since I grew up here in the Philippines, medyo nag-iba na rin yung accent ko.
Mom went to AVR, andito sa Student Center. I decided to go to the "Secret Place" since a lot of seniors were here and I don’t even know most of. My secret place is located at the back of the covered court. The place wasn’t visited that much, since a lot of rumours were told about the place. Anyway, hindi naman ghost ang pakay ko dito eh, I want to visit my hamster friend.
“Hamster ko, how are you na? Junior na ako oh,” I smiled.
“Clariane, is that you? What are you doing here?”
I looked back and saw Ate Danica, the only senior that I am close to.
“Aw, you know this is my favourite place, right? How are you?”
“I’m good. Where's Tita? Let’s go to the Math Park, maraming lamok dito eh.”
“Sure. Mom’s at the AVR kasi eh.”
We talked about a lot of stuffs. She also introduced her boyfriend to me. I’m just like, Dang, he’s so handsome. 8O I can conclude that Ate Danx is really a perfectionist. Her boyfriend is rich, tall, handsome, then a student from UP pa. What more can you ask, right? While Ate Danx is beautiful, a role model at school, she’s kind, and then she’s smart. Isn’t that cool? I guess, perfect couple ang pwedeng itawag sa kanila. Hay, paano kaya pag ako na?
“Oh, hello po, Tita,” She said and stood up.
“Wow, dalaga na ah. How are you, sweetie?
“I’m doing great po,”
“Ah ganun ba. That’s good. Anyway, mauna na kami ha. Paki-kamusta mo nalang ako kay Mare.”
I waved goodbye. Ate Danx smiled and we parted ways na.
I went inside the car then I turned on my iPOD. Isn’t it pretty obvious that I’m a music lover? Nothing, just sharing.
“Clariane, anak, are you hungry?” She turned around to ask me.
“No. Let’s go–” My eyes widened when I saw someone, “MOM LOOK OUT!”
I closed my eyes and ducked, and then I felt like I’ve heard an explosion outside the car.
“Anak, w-wala naman akong nabangga diba?”
I laughed in sarcasm, “Ha. Don’t panic, mom. Calm down, okay?! Just wait here, I’ll check.”
“Go ahead.”
I slowly opened the door, and then I walked around. Mother of biscuits!
“Mom, looks like you’ve hit someone.” I said, terrified.
“No way,” she shook her head, “Anak, what are we supposed to do?”
I can’t think of anything, so I just said, “Help me here, we’ll take him home.”
We don't know what to do. All we know is, we were too terrified of what happened. Turned out, inuwi nalang talaga naming siya. It’s a good thing that Biboy was already sleeping that time, or else he’ll babble about what he saw. He doesn’t like blood, so maybe he’ll just end up throwing up at the corner. We’ve learned our lesson. Next time, mom should hire a professional driver.
Manang brought him to my room, because my room is big and spacious.
“Iha, nilagyan ko n ang sapin yung mga sugat niya ha. Bantayin mo nalang muna siya.”
“Ha? Manang naman eh. Hindi po ba pwedeng ikaw nalang?”
DUH?! I don’t want them to leave me with this unconscious guy. 8O
“Gusto ko man o hindi, hindi pwede. Kailangan ko pa tulungan ang nanay mo.”
Tumagilid naman ang muka ko at sinabing, “Eh. Sige na nga, ingat kayo, Manang.”
Gee. This guy is being too fortunate. Buti pa siya nakahiga sa soft bed ko, samantalang ako nakaupo, nagbabantay sa kanya. 8O
Thirty minutes had passed and I have done nothing but stared at this guy. That’s why I got a hold of it, and thought of opening the computer and play game. But well, I checked my messenger first.
*Offline Messages*
Earl.Jo: Hi Clarz, thanks for the time. And, sorry na rin. (:
Earl.Jo: Anyway, see you at school. :]
I placed my hand on the keyboard and typed:
You’re very welcome. By the way, sorry for what? Sure, see ya.
I looked at my friends’ list. It’s too amazing to look at. I have 50 friends all-in-all, yet there were only three of them who are online right now. Feel ko may toyo tong Y!M ko or talagang three lang talaga ang online. 8O I eventually signed out and played Audition.
It was already 10:30 in the evening, and wala pa sina Manang.
I turned around and faced the guy, “It’s just you and me,” I sighed.
What if kung nagising ‘to? What if he raped me? What will happen? 8O Aw. Please lord, I know you won’t plan to do that to me, right? 8O
The guy whispered something. Pero I wasn’t able to understand him. In the other side, I got shocked, and then I didn’t realize I threw myself on the wall.
A couple of minutes had passed and I am still bored. I just kept on looking at the guy, waiting for him to be awake. He’s cute though, tall, and chinito. I grabbed a fine pen and wrote on his face. I also put rollers on his hair, and then put make up of his face. I treated him like my very own Barbie doll. But then I got tired, so I just slept.
For your information, I slept on my study table.
Are you all thinking what I’m thinking? No, maybe not probably because he always tell me this girl. The girl he likes since we were still in ninth grade.
I wasn’t able to move. Super. Then ang init-init pa niya. Minsan naiisip ko, is this Jacob Black of Breaking Dawn? Just kidding. I’m thinking na baka may fever siya.
I tried to look at him. Ngayon ko lang narealize na, he’s handsome. Here I go again. Just kidding, he’s my bestfriend naman eh. :]
I noticed that ten minutes has passed, yet hindi pa siya bumibitaw. Napatingin naman ako sa watch ko.
OMG. Three minutes before twelve! 8O I would still accompany my mother to the campus. 8O
“Earl. M-maybe you should-”
“Oh crap. I’m sorry.” Then he removed his arm and looked down.
“It’s alright. Anyway, I really have to go. Please, just tell Myca I’m going to school, okay? Bye.” I smiled and immediately left the cinemas.
I went outside of the mall and sumakay na ng jeepney. Nagulat ako, ewan ko ba, ang baho ko eh. I’m sure when I got home, my mom would say, “Clariane, anak. Hindi ka pinanganak para maging trabahador sa poso.” I know, right? It's pretty insulting.
“You just arrived on time,” she said while looking at the clock.
“Yup,” I widened my eyes and looked at her.
“And explain to me why-“
“And yes mom, galing ako ng poso. Mind if we go na?” Inunahan ko na siya, I don’t want to be embarrassed by her, eh.
This is it. Enrolment na. I would be able to see my crushes again, my friends, my fans, my teachers, and my enemies. Oh, I almost forgot. I am Maria Clariane Montolla (pronounced as Montolya). I'm one-fourth british. Since I grew up here in the Philippines, medyo nag-iba na rin yung accent ko.
Mom went to AVR, andito sa Student Center. I decided to go to the "Secret Place" since a lot of seniors were here and I don’t even know most of. My secret place is located at the back of the covered court. The place wasn’t visited that much, since a lot of rumours were told about the place. Anyway, hindi naman ghost ang pakay ko dito eh, I want to visit my hamster friend.
“Hamster ko, how are you na? Junior na ako oh,” I smiled.
“Clariane, is that you? What are you doing here?”
I looked back and saw Ate Danica, the only senior that I am close to.
“Aw, you know this is my favourite place, right? How are you?”
“I’m good. Where's Tita? Let’s go to the Math Park, maraming lamok dito eh.”
“Sure. Mom’s at the AVR kasi eh.”
We talked about a lot of stuffs. She also introduced her boyfriend to me. I’m just like, Dang, he’s so handsome. 8O I can conclude that Ate Danx is really a perfectionist. Her boyfriend is rich, tall, handsome, then a student from UP pa. What more can you ask, right? While Ate Danx is beautiful, a role model at school, she’s kind, and then she’s smart. Isn’t that cool? I guess, perfect couple ang pwedeng itawag sa kanila. Hay, paano kaya pag ako na?
“Oh, hello po, Tita,” She said and stood up.
“Wow, dalaga na ah. How are you, sweetie?
“I’m doing great po,”
“Ah ganun ba. That’s good. Anyway, mauna na kami ha. Paki-kamusta mo nalang ako kay Mare.”
I waved goodbye. Ate Danx smiled and we parted ways na.
I went inside the car then I turned on my iPOD. Isn’t it pretty obvious that I’m a music lover? Nothing, just sharing.
“Clariane, anak, are you hungry?” She turned around to ask me.
“No. Let’s go–” My eyes widened when I saw someone, “MOM LOOK OUT!”
I closed my eyes and ducked, and then I felt like I’ve heard an explosion outside the car.
“Anak, w-wala naman akong nabangga diba?”
I laughed in sarcasm, “Ha. Don’t panic, mom. Calm down, okay?! Just wait here, I’ll check.”
“Go ahead.”
I slowly opened the door, and then I walked around. Mother of biscuits!
“Mom, looks like you’ve hit someone.” I said, terrified.
“No way,” she shook her head, “Anak, what are we supposed to do?”
I can’t think of anything, so I just said, “Help me here, we’ll take him home.”
We don't know what to do. All we know is, we were too terrified of what happened. Turned out, inuwi nalang talaga naming siya. It’s a good thing that Biboy was already sleeping that time, or else he’ll babble about what he saw. He doesn’t like blood, so maybe he’ll just end up throwing up at the corner. We’ve learned our lesson. Next time, mom should hire a professional driver.
Manang brought him to my room, because my room is big and spacious.
“Iha, nilagyan ko n ang sapin yung mga sugat niya ha. Bantayin mo nalang muna siya.”
“Ha? Manang naman eh. Hindi po ba pwedeng ikaw nalang?”
DUH?! I don’t want them to leave me with this unconscious guy. 8O
“Gusto ko man o hindi, hindi pwede. Kailangan ko pa tulungan ang nanay mo.”
Tumagilid naman ang muka ko at sinabing, “Eh. Sige na nga, ingat kayo, Manang.”
Gee. This guy is being too fortunate. Buti pa siya nakahiga sa soft bed ko, samantalang ako nakaupo, nagbabantay sa kanya. 8O
Thirty minutes had passed and I have done nothing but stared at this guy. That’s why I got a hold of it, and thought of opening the computer and play game. But well, I checked my messenger first.
*Offline Messages*
Earl.Jo: Hi Clarz, thanks for the time. And, sorry na rin. (:
Earl.Jo: Anyway, see you at school. :]
I placed my hand on the keyboard and typed:
You’re very welcome. By the way, sorry for what? Sure, see ya.
I looked at my friends’ list. It’s too amazing to look at. I have 50 friends all-in-all, yet there were only three of them who are online right now. Feel ko may toyo tong Y!M ko or talagang three lang talaga ang online. 8O I eventually signed out and played Audition.
It was already 10:30 in the evening, and wala pa sina Manang.
I turned around and faced the guy, “It’s just you and me,” I sighed.
What if kung nagising ‘to? What if he raped me? What will happen? 8O Aw. Please lord, I know you won’t plan to do that to me, right? 8O
The guy whispered something. Pero I wasn’t able to understand him. In the other side, I got shocked, and then I didn’t realize I threw myself on the wall.
A couple of minutes had passed and I am still bored. I just kept on looking at the guy, waiting for him to be awake. He’s cute though, tall, and chinito. I grabbed a fine pen and wrote on his face. I also put rollers on his hair, and then put make up of his face. I treated him like my very own Barbie doll. But then I got tired, so I just slept.
For your information, I slept on my study table.
Last edited by xxBUBBLiExx (2009-12-21 18:55:17)
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- jhayyuliajay
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Re: Mods, Please move this to non-eng section since it's a taglish story. :) [quote]This is my very first story. Sorry for the childish scenes and all. Two years ago pa 'to e. :swt:[/quote] [u][align=cen
ooops...sino ba ung guy...huh...?interesting masyado...d ko ma-take...hehe:eh:
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Re: Mods, Please move this to non-eng section since it's a taglish story. :) [quote]This is my very first story. Sorry for the childish scenes and all. Two years ago pa 'to e. :swt:[/quote] [u][align=cen
amff.! anooo?! hahahah
hmmm si prince yung GUY noh? XD
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- xxBUBBLiExx
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Re: Mods, Please move this to non-eng section since it's a taglish story. :) [quote]This is my very first story. Sorry for the childish scenes and all. Two years ago pa 'to e. :swt:[/quote] [u][align=cen
[b]@ jhayyuliajay [/b]: naks ate inedit pa oh. XD di ko rin alam e.. isip pa ako..
[b]@ --mad4u--[/b]: hmmm ..
i'll update it later.. .gif)
edited.
i'll update it tomorrow. tnx. ^^
[b]@ --mad4u--[/b]: hmmm ..
i'll update it later..
edited.
i'll update it tomorrow. tnx. ^^
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- jhayyuliajay
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Re: Mods, Please move this to non-eng section since it's a taglish story. :) [quote]This is my very first story. Sorry for the childish scenes and all. Two years ago pa 'to e. :swt:[/quote] [u][align=cen
wee...okay...haha...medyo nag-isip kasi ako...tapos binasa ko uli ung story...may possibility nga na si prince ung guy...haha...okay lang...hintayin ko...
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- xxBUBBLiExx
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Re: Mods, Please move this to non-eng section since it's a taglish story. :) [quote]This is my very first story. Sorry for the childish scenes and all. Two years ago pa 'to e. :swt:[/quote] [u][align=cen
[quote=jhayyuliajay]wee...okay...haha...medyo nag-isip kasi ako...tapos binasa ko uli ung story...may possibility nga na si prince ung guy...haha...okay lang...hintayin ko...[/quote]
hula mo lang yun ate.
siguro bukas nalang ulet yung update. T-T
waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa. ala pa kasi ako maisip eeh. 
i promise bukas. siguro, 1 chapter per day. and i'll make sure its mahaba.
thanks for reading ate. ^^
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hula mo lang yun ate.
siguro bukas nalang ulet yung update. T-T
waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa. ala pa kasi ako maisip eeh.
i promise bukas. siguro, 1 chapter per day. and i'll make sure its mahaba.
thanks for reading ate. ^^
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- MiNEKOARCH
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Re: Mods, Please move this to non-eng section since it's a taglish story. :) [quote]This is my very first story. Sorry for the childish scenes and all. Two years ago pa 'to e. :swt:[/quote] [u][align=cen
nga pala chaw chaw. sorry sa late na pagbabasa. kaka-uwi ko lang ng bahay.. 
im so stressed out. damn. nga pala.. natuwa talaga ako sayo.. kala ko you were just kidding na isisingit mo pangalan ko na "daaaaaaannnnnnnnnxxxxxxxxxxx" sa story mo.. loka ka wahahaha.. lolengs ka chaw.. nga pala.. nice story huh. update mo na baliw i cant wait ano!? errr..
@chaw: yung nabanggang guy si PRINCE!! woooopsh! alam ko na yan
im so stressed out. damn. nga pala.. natuwa talaga ako sayo.. kala ko you were just kidding na isisingit mo pangalan ko na "daaaaaaannnnnnnnnxxxxxxxxxxx" sa story mo.. loka ka wahahaha.. lolengs ka chaw.. nga pala.. nice story huh. update mo na baliw i cant wait ano!? errr..
@chaw: yung nabanggang guy si PRINCE!! woooopsh! alam ko na yan
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Re: Mods, Please move this to non-eng section since it's a taglish story. :) [quote]This is my very first story. Sorry for the childish scenes and all. Two years ago pa 'to e. :swt:[/quote] [u][align=cen
[quote=xxBUBBLiExx]@ --mad4u--: hmmm .. [/quote]
nyahahahahha XD
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nyahahahahha XD
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- jhayyuliajay
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Re: Mods, Please move this to non-eng section since it's a taglish story. :) [quote]This is my very first story. Sorry for the childish scenes and all. Two years ago pa 'to e. :swt:[/quote] [u][align=cen
cge!!!haha...update...haha...wala lang talaga ako maisip eh...haha...kaya un...hinulaan ko nalang...haha...tapos karamihan un din ang sabi...naki-join na lang ako...haha:Ddami naman ibang nagbabasa eh...hihi...
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