@Chief: - Tnx 4 granting my request to speak in Tagalog!
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Mgppalam lng aq mgwwork na kc aq weh pro bago ang lht mgbbgay muna aq ng comment sa mga entries.
Entry #1:
[img]http://i293.photobucket.com/albums/mm46/bluberry543/collection/36511415_6a6cfa2517.jpg[/img]
Hnd nmn xa animated pro sna dpt mkkitaan ng quality, depth, etc.
JPG format xa pro sna tinodo mu nah ung quality pra msaya.
Check ur spelling pti nrn ung text.
Ntakpan ng yellow color pencil ung txt mu.
Mas mgnda kng meh borders.
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Entry #2:
[img]http://i286.photobucket.com/albums/ll114/LOUiiZe-27/Siggies/entry.gif[/img]
Nsabayan mu ung flow nya... Ung render...
Manipulating colors to give images depth...
Mgnda xa kng meh depth promise...
Ok ung FX mu bgay sa flow...
At mas lalung bgay kng meh lightsource...
Ung size nya tama lng...
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Entry #3:
[img]http://i307.photobucket.com/albums/nn299/blue-angel17/contest.gif[/img]
Laki ng nwla s quality...
Plain ung background...
Dmi kulang sis...
Dpt ngfocus ka sa image hnd sa animation...
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Entry #4:
[img]http://i32.tinypic.com/a2ggbc.gif[/img]
Nice render, I can see the flow, Uhmm... the colours...
very very plain background, nice poetry, good saturation...
Entry #5:
[img]http://i27.tinypic.com/2vwh5co.gif[/img]
Dmi dn kulang...
Mgnda sna ung flow...
Dming FX bgay jn...
Nice render!
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Entry #6:
[img]http://i26.tinypic.com/2dr5u92.gif[/img]
Ung Again! mu mxadong mblis...
Bgay ung vector GFX na nilagay mu sa likod ng render...
Prng meh pgkhorror ang dting kc ung text mu sk borders...
Plain background...
Dmi dn kulang...
Entry #7:
[img]http://i193.photobucket.com/albums/z142/pj08_cute/entryphia.gif[/img]
Pra sa mga girls attractive xa...
Cguro magaling krn sa flash animation...
Nkkatuwa xa...
Alm q mtgal xa ginawa...
Kw lng bah ngdrawing? Galeng...
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Entry #8:
[img]http://i85.photobucket.com/albums/k49/infernalpunishment/bLeh.jpg[/img]
[img]http://i85.photobucket.com/albums/k49/infernalpunishment/nothing.jpg[/img]
1st Entry... Alm q rush yan kc aq gumawa...
Meh pgkaOP xa...
Mainstream ang dating...
Floral brushes tpos Tech brushes?! Wrong combination ata...
OP xa...
Dun sa pangalawang entry mxadong bright ung render, nbawasan 2loy ng detalye...
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Entry #9:
[img]http://i193.photobucket.com/albums/z142/pj08_cute/my-entry.gif[/img]
Attractive xa... Lalu na sa girls...
Pnahirapan mu srili mu pro u deserve the outcome!
That's it la na aq msabi...
Aq nga hnd q kaya yn eh...
Entry #10:
[img]http://i234.photobucket.com/albums/ee160/bheszt_0929/4gtwg0.gif[/img]
Aun mejo meh quality kht animated...
Tama dn yng gnwa mu sa render ntakpan nya ung borders ngkaroon ng dating...
Mejo kulang ng kunting saturation...
Aun la na aq msabi... Ok xa.
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Entry #11:
[img]http://i32.tinypic.com/w8okt2.jpg[/img]
High quality mgnda! Yn ang cnasb q...
Kht hnd bata ang ngjudge jn panalo k prn... Promise!
Ung grey mu sa background I think mas mgnda xa kng meh gradient...
As in dahan-dahan xa from light grey to dark grey pro pwd nrn...
Gus2 q ung taste mu... As in.
Dpt inusog mu ng unti ung text kc umabot na dun sa paa...
Un lng... Mgnda xa sobrng attractive kht sa malayo...
Kht aq mppncn q tlga xa agad...
Congratz... Lau mrrating mu...
Entry #12:
[img]http://i221.photobucket.com/albums/dd138/samilbzzz/school-2.gif[/img]
Pay attention on ur render, pra xang inipit.
U didn't maintain aspect ratio or u left the constrain proportions unchecked.
Maganda sna render moh.
Sk dpt hnd mu n xa gnwang animated u lost the quality kc.
Look at ur background, where's the flow anyway?!
Try mu pglaruan ung mga adjustment layers.
Ung saturation mu kc.
I suggest u add some borders.
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I'm not a here as a senior member of this group.
I'm here as your friend and your kuya as well.
Goodnight and Goodbye... Tgal pah balik ko bk pgktpos ng work.
Congratz sa top 5! <shake hands>
Thank you.
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Last edited by Intelligence (2008-05-28 10:06:19)